读后续写--从尴尬逃离到暖心和解 讲义 山东省聊城市多校2024-2025学年高三上学期期末诊断检测英语试题

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For the past ten years,my dad and I have attended the same school--he as an administrator and I as a student.Our relationship,in and out of school,has been a wild,unpredictable ride.
When I was younger,all that my dad said was doctrine(信条)and anything did I,naturally,copied.I was his little shadow,imitating his every move.We played games together,and stayed up late reading bedtime stories.They were some of the best times.I could count on my dad taking me to school,running into him regularly during the day and riding home with him every afternoon.
As the years ticked by,I hit my pre-teen years.Things started to shift .Suddenly,my dad wasn't the cool guy I once thought he was.He wore his socks too high,listened to horrible country music and laughed too loudly in front of my friends.How horrible it was!He became the source of all my teenage embarrassment.However,the disasters that occurred in school were even worse.The worst one happened in seventh grade.Our class was having a New Year party,and there he was,dressed up as Donald Duck.With a guitar in hand,he sang the most ridiculous song.Just kill me!I just wanted the ground to open up and swallow me whole.So I ran away as fast as my legs could carry me.
This struggle continued well into high school.But then,something unexpected happened.It was around the time of my 10th -grade physics project.The assignment was to construct a wooden bridge that had the best strength-to-weight ratio(比率).All the students and physics teachers participated.And guess what My dad,the only administrator,decided to join in.Instantly,that familiar feeling of embarrassment washed over me,and as usual,I fled the scene.
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第一段：But hours later my friends ran up to me,their eyes shining with excitement.That evening.
第二段：I gathered all my courage and walked to dad.
文章大意
过去十年，父亲作为学校管理人员，“我” 作为学生，同在一所学校。小时候，“我” 视父亲为榜样，模仿他的一举一动，那时相处十分美好。但到了青春期，父亲的言行让 “我” 觉得尴尬，他的穿着、爱好以及在学校的表现都成为 “我” 青春期尴尬的来源，比如在七年级新年派对上扮成唐老鸭唱歌。这种尴尬感一直延续到高中，在十年级物理项目时，父亲作为唯一的管理人员参与，“我” 一如既往地逃离了现场。
故事山分析
开端：小时候 “我” 和父亲关系亲密，父亲是 “我” 的偶像。
发展：青春期时，父亲的种种行为让 “我” 感到尴尬，在学校的一些举动更是让 “我” 难堪，这种尴尬感持续到高中。
高潮（待续写）：父亲参加物理项目，“我” 逃离后，朋友带来关于父亲的意外消息，引发 “我” 的心理变化，之后 “我” 鼓起勇气面对父亲。
结局（待续写）：“我” 与父亲解开矛盾，关系得到改善，对父亲有了新的认识。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
小时候与父亲关系亲密：可在续写中回应为 “我” 内心深处对父亲仍有感情，在经历一些事情后，能更容易化解与父亲的矛盾，重拾亲密关系。
青春期对父亲的嫌弃：续写中可体现 “我” 在了解父亲参与物理项目的表现后，意识到自己对父亲的误解，从而改变态度。
父亲在学校的尴尬行为：与父亲在物理项目中的出色表现形成对比，让 “我” 对父亲的看法发生反转。
物理项目父亲参与：成为故事转折的关键，后续围绕父亲在项目中的表现展开，如取得好成绩或有独特创意，让 “我” 对他刮目相看。
“我” 逃离现场：引出后续朋友带来消息，以及 “我” 内心的挣扎和最终鼓起勇气面对父亲的情节。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：朋友兴奋地告诉 “我” 父亲在物理项目中的出色表现，比如他设计的木桥不仅强度高、重量轻，还在展示中有独特创意，获得了大家的称赞。“我” 听后十分震惊，内心开始反思自己对父亲的态度。
第二段：“我” 鼓起勇气走向父亲，向他道歉，表达自己之前对他的误解和不尊重。父亲微笑着原谅了 “我”，他和 “我” 分享了参与项目的初衷，是为了更了解 “我” 的学习生活。通过这次交流，“我” 和父亲的关系得到了极大的改善。
情感线
起初，“我” 因青春期的叛逆和对父亲的不理解，对父亲充满嫌弃和尴尬。当朋友告知父亲在物理项目的出色表现时，“我” 感到震惊和愧疚。在鼓起勇气向父亲道歉并交流后，“我” 对父亲的态度转变为理解和尊重，父女关系从紧张变得亲密，“我” 也收获了成长。
故事线
“我” 逃离物理项目现场后，朋友带来父亲在项目中的消息。
朋友讲述父亲在物理项目中的出色表现，“我” 内心震惊、反思。
“我” 在内心挣扎后，决定鼓起勇气面对父亲。
“我” 向父亲道歉，表达自己的感受。
父亲原谅 “我”，并分享参与项目的初衷。
“我” 和父亲关系改善，“我” 对父亲有了新的认识。
主旨升华句
This experience taught me that true understanding of our parents often comes after we set aside our preconceived notions and take the time to see their efforts and love.（这次经历让我明白，真正理解父母往往是在我们放下先入为主的观念，花时间去看到他们的努力和爱之后。）
Through this incident, I realized that the bond between parents and children may be tested by the misunderstandings of youth, but it can be strengthened by honest communication and mutual respect.（通过这件事，我意识到父母和孩子之间的纽带可能会受到青春误解的考验，但可以通过坦诚的沟通和相互尊重来加强。）
It wasn't until I witnessed my dad's remarkable performance and had that heartfelt conversation with him that I truly understood the depth of his love and the value of his presence in my life.（直到我目睹父亲的出色表现并与他进行了那次真诚的交谈，我才真正理解他爱的深度以及他在我生活中的重要性。）
This encounter served as a turning point in my relationship with my dad, making me see that behind the embarrassing moments lies a father's unwavering dedication to being part of my world.（这次相遇成为我和父亲关系的转折点，让我看到在那些尴尬时刻背后，是父亲对融入我的世界的坚定执着。）
As I looked back on this experience, I learned that growing up means not only physically maturing but also learning to appreciate and cherish the people who have always been there for us, even when we don't notice.（当我回顾这段经历时，我明白了成长不仅意味着身体的成熟，还意味着学会欣赏和珍惜那些一直在我们身边的人，即使我们不曾注意到。）
写作示范一
But hours later my friends ran up to me,their eyes shining with excitement. "Your dad is amazing!" they exclaimed. "His wooden bridge was not only the sturdiest but also the most creative. He even added some small lights to it, making it look like a magical bridge!" I was stunned. I had never expected my dad to be so brilliant. All the while, I had been so focused on my own embarrassment that I had failed to see his talent. That evening, I couldn't stop thinking about what my friends had told me. I realized how wrong I had been.
I gathered all my courage and walked to dad. With my head down, I said, "Dad, I'm so sorry for always being embarrassed by you and running away. I didn't know you were so talented." Dad smiled gently and said, "It's okay, honey. I just wanted to be a part of your school life. " At that moment, all the misunderstandings between us melted away. From then on, I saw my dad in a whole new light.
写作示范二
But hours later my friends ran up to me,their eyes shining with excitement. "You have to see what your dad did!" they shouted. They dragged me to the exhibition area where the physics projects were on display. There, I saw my dad's wooden bridge. It was a masterpiece, with a unique structure that no one else had thought of. It won the first prize! I stood there, dumbfounded. I felt a wave of shame wash over me for all the times I had made fun of him. That evening, I tossed and turned in bed, unable to sleep.
I gathered all my courage and walked to dad. I took a deep breath and said, "Dad, I was wrong. I've been so unfair to you. I should have been proud of you instead of being embarrassed. " Dad put his arm around me and said, "I know you were just going through a tough time. I'm glad you understand now. " From that day forward, our relationship was no longer strained. I finally learned to appreciate my dad for who he truly was.
One possible version:
But hours Later,my friends ran up to me,their eyes shining with excitement.They couldn't wait to tell me how my dad's bridge was the talk of the school.So unique was his design that it had everyone amazed.It not only withstood the weight test effortlessly but also looked incredibly elegant.I was dumbfounded,my initial shock gradually turning into a sense of pride that I couldn't contain.The image of my embarrassing dad started to fade,replaced by one of a creative and capable man.
That evening,I gathered all my courage and walked to dad.Standing before him,I said sincerely,"Dad,I heard about your amazing achievement in the physics project.I'm truly proud of you."His eyes widened in surprise,and then a warm smile spread across his face.He pulled me into a hug,saying,"Son,your words mean everything to me."At that moment,I felt a strong bond rekindling between us.From then on,I began to see my dad in a new light,appreciating his uniqueness and loving him more deeply than ever.