Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands.写作（含范文）2024-2025学年人教版英语九年级全册

Unit 10 You’re supposed to shake hands.
【写作目标】
能用本单元所学的语言知识，帮助外国客人了解中国的礼仪习俗并提供生活建议。
【基础写作】
假如你是李华，你的笔友Lisa发来一封电子邮件，说她下星期来中国，现在向你询问中国的一些习俗以及在寄宿家庭日常生活中要注意的事项，请你给她回一封100词左右的电子邮件，告诉她相关的情况。
Step 1 分析要点，列提纲
开头问候与确认收到邮件：首先，需要向Lisa表示问候，并确认已经收到了她的邮件。
介绍中国习俗：选择一两个典型的中国习俗进行简要介绍，如餐桌礼仪、见面问候方式等。
寄宿家庭日常注意事项：强调尊重寄宿家庭的生活习惯和隐私。提及参与家庭活动的重要性，以增进了解。
结尾祝福与期待见面：表达对Lisa来访的期待，并祝她在中国度过愉快的时光。
落款：以李华的名义结束邮件。
Step 2 有用表达
短语：
hear the news
come to China soon
Chinese customs
basic manners
enjoy staying in China
shake hands with
feel uncomfortable
smile and say hello
have dinner with
start eating
everyone is at table
eat up food
knock on the door
leave without saying goodbye
tell your host family
have a great time
have a safe trip
look forward to meeting you
句型：
I'm very excited to hear that...
Let me give you some suggestions about ....
You are supposed to...
It's polite to...
I do hope my suggestions can be of some help.
Step 3 连词成句
Dear Lisa,
I'm very excited to hear the news that you'll come to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.These basic manners will help you enjoy staying in China writing purpose in China, you are supposed to shake hands with Chinese people when you meet them for the first time.You shouldn't kiss or hug them because it makes them feel uncomfortable. It's polite to smile and say hello to them. If you have dinner with your Chinese friends, you shouldn't start eating until everyone is at table. It's polite to eat up food in your bowl. When you visit your Chinese friends, you're supposed to knock on the door before entering the house. Don't leave without saying goodbye. When you go out with people, you should tell your host family where you are going, who you are going with and when you will come back. I do hope my suggestions can be of some help and may you have a great timein China. Have a safe trip, and Tlook forward to meeting you soon!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
范文分析
用词：
正式性：
使用了如“suggestions”、“manners”、“supposed to”等较为正式的词汇，使得整篇文章在语气上显得更为庄重和认真。“Dear Lisa”作为开头，以及结尾的“Best wishes. Li Hua”都符合正式书信的格式和用语。
友好性：
使用了“I'm very excited to hear the news”、“I do hope my suggestions can be of some help”等表达，传达了作者对Lisa的友好态度和期待。通过“Have a safe trip”和“look forward to meeting you soon”等句子，进一步体现了作者对Lisa的关心和期待。
详细性：
在给出建议时，作者详细描述了各种情境下的具体行为，如“you are supposed to shake hands with Chinese people when you meet them for the first time”、“you shouldn't start eating until everyone is at table”等，使得建议更加具体和实用。
逻辑
范文在逻辑上呈现出了清晰、连贯和有条理的特点：
开头引入：
作者首先通过“I'm very excited to hear the news that you'll come to China soon”这句话引出了主题，即Lisa即将来中国，并表达了自己的兴奋之情。
接着，作者通过“Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs”这句话自然地过渡到了下文要给出的建议。
主体展开：
作者从见面礼仪、用餐礼仪、拜访礼仪和外出礼仪四个方面给出了具体的建议。
每个方面都通过具体的行为描述来展开，使得建议更加具体和易于理解。
在描述每个建议时，作者都使用了“you are supposed to…”或“you shouldn't…”等句型，使得建议更加明确和具有指导性。
结尾总结：
作者在结尾部分通过“I do hope my suggestions can be of some help”这句话总结了上文给出的建议，并表达了自己的期望。
接着，作者通过“Have a safe trip, and look forward to meeting you soon!”这句话再次表达了对Lisa的关心和期待，同时也为整篇文章画上了一个圆满的句号。