读后续写 陌生人的馈赠,开启生活新篇 讲义-安徽省阜阳市太和县2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

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名称 读后续写 陌生人的馈赠,开启生活新篇 讲义-安徽省阜阳市太和县2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a peaceful morning. Adam was on his usual jog at the local park, after which he had to ride his motorcycle home to drop his children - Amanda. 13, and Jared.8-to school. Owing to financial difficulties, he could not afford a car.
After his wife passed away six years ago, Adam was left alone to care for his children. Thankfully, his eldest daughter, Stacey, 22, would help with the breakfast preparation and get the kids ready every morning when he was out jogging.
Adam looked at his watch. He’d have to go home in thirty minutes. He finished another round of the park and was ready to leave when the sight of an elderly lady stopped him in his tracks.
She was struggling up the park stairs, and just as she neared the top, she lost her footing and fell back down, rolling awkwardly.
“Ma’ am!” Adam ran over to the woman quickly. “Are you OK ”
“I’m fine; it was just a little fall,” she replied, but Adam worried she wasn’t fine. He offered to call the ambulance, but she refused.
“Please let me take you to a nearby clinic on my motorcycle,” he said, offering his arm to her, and she agreed.
They began to chat on their way to the clinic, and the woman introduced herself as Alice. She said she had lost her husband, Frank, for a few years. Her husband was in a business that helped families move. After he passed away, his truck was parked in the garage.
Adam knew how it felt to lose a loved one and he opened up to Alice about his wife, too. As they reached the clinic, the doctor there told Alice that she was fine. Then Adam sent the woman home. Alice wanted to thank Adam so she asked for his address. “I just want to send you something for your kids, and thank you,” she said. Adam hesitantly gave her his address and hurried home to his children.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam.
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At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck.
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文章大意
一个宁静的早晨,亚当像往常一样在公园慢跑,之后他要骑摩托车送 13 岁的阿曼达和 8 岁的贾里德上学,因经济困难他买不起汽车。六年前妻子去世后,他独自照顾孩子,22 岁的大女儿斯泰西会在他慢跑时帮忙准备早餐和照顾弟妹。这天慢跑结束时,亚当看到一位老妇人爱丽丝在公园楼梯摔倒,他帮忙带她去诊所,路上两人聊天,亚当倾诉了自己失去妻子的痛苦。到诊所检查后爱丽丝并无大碍,亚当送她回家,爱丽丝要了亚当的地址,想感谢他并送些东西给孩子们。
故事山分析
开端:亚当独自抚养孩子,生活拮据,每天慢跑后骑摩托车送孩子上学。
发展:亚当在公园看到爱丽丝摔倒,带她去诊所,两人交流各自失去亲人的经历。
高潮:爱丽丝要了亚当的地址,预示着后续有事情发生。
结局(待续写):亚当收到爱丽丝的感谢,可能改变他的生活状况,展现人与人之间的温暖与善意。
五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应
亚当经济困难,买不起车:在续写中,爱丽丝可能送他实用的交通工具,比如她丈夫留下的卡车,解决他的出行难题,让他能更方便地照顾孩子和生活。
亚当独自照顾孩子,生活不易:这一背景使他接受爱丽丝的帮助更合理,收到帮助后他的感激之情会更强烈,也会引发他对生活改变的感慨。
爱丽丝提到丈夫的卡车闲置在车库:为后文送卡车给亚当埋下伏笔,续写中卡车会成为改变亚当生活的关键物品,亚当起初可能因觉得贵重而拒绝,但最终在爱丽丝的坚持下接受。
爱丽丝要亚当的地址,想送东西感谢他:暗示会有具体的感谢行动,续写中围绕送来的物品展开故事,比如卡车,描述亚当看到卡车时的惊讶和感动。
亚当和爱丽丝都经历过失去亲人的痛苦:这种相似的经历拉近了两人的距离,在续写中,亚当会因为这份共情更能理解爱丽丝的善意,也更愿意接受她的帮助。
续写要点(两段)
第一段:详细描述斯泰西唤醒亚当后,告知他有一辆卡车停在门口,亚当看到卡车后的惊讶反应,他可能会询问斯泰西情况,然后回忆起爱丽丝,猜测卡车的来源,同时描述孩子们看到卡车时的好奇和兴奋。
第二段:着重描写亚当起初拒绝爱丽丝卡车的心理活动,比如觉得太贵重、无功不受禄等,接着可以写爱丽丝是如何劝说他接受的,通过对话展现爱丽丝的真诚和善良,最后亚当接受卡车,表达他对未来生活的期待和对爱丽丝的感激。
情感线
亚当一直因经济困难独自抚养孩子而承受生活压力,心情压抑。帮助爱丽丝时,他因同病相怜而真诚付出。当得知爱丽丝要地址感谢时,他可能有些期待但又不确定。看到卡车时,他先是震惊,随后是犹豫拒绝时的纠结。在爱丽丝劝说下接受卡车,他的心情转为激动和感激,对未来生活充满希望,深刻感受到陌生人的善意带来的温暖和力量。
故事线
亚当独自抚养孩子,经济困难,每天慢跑后骑摩托车送孩子上学。
亚当在公园帮助摔倒的爱丽丝去诊所,两人交流失去亲人的经历。
爱丽丝要亚当的地址表示感谢。
第二天亚当被斯泰西告知门口有辆卡车,猜测是爱丽丝送来的。
亚当起初拒绝爱丽丝的卡车,后在劝说下接受。
亚当收获帮助,对未来生活充满希望,感受到人间温暖。
主旨升华句
This unexpected encounter and the kind - hearted gift from Alice remind us that in the face of life's hardships, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can be a ray of light, illuminating our path and filling our hearts with hope.(这次意外的相遇以及爱丽丝善良的礼物提醒我们,在面对生活的艰难困苦时,来自陌生人的一个简单善举可以是一束光,照亮我们的道路,让我们心中充满希望。)
Through Adam's experience, we learn that even in the darkest times of loss and financial struggles, the bond of humanity formed through mutual understanding and help can bring about life - changing surprises and warm our souls.(通过亚当的经历,我们了解到,即使在失去亲人和经济困难的最黑暗时刻,通过相互理解和帮助形成的人性纽带可以带来改变生活的惊喜,温暖我们的心灵。)
The story of Adam and Alice is a beautiful testament to the power of kindness. It shows that a single act of generosity, like offering a much - needed truck, can not only solve practical problems but also restore faith in the goodness of people.(亚当和爱丽丝的故事是善良力量的美好见证。它表明,一个慷慨的举动,比如赠送一辆急需的卡车,不仅可以解决实际问题,还能恢复对人性美好的信心。)
In the journey of life, we may all face difficulties, but as Adam and Alice's story shows, a helping hand extended by a stranger can be the turning point that transforms our lives and teaches us the true meaning of compassion and hope.(在人生的旅途中,我们都可能面临困难,但正如亚当和爱丽丝的故事所示,陌生人伸出的援助之手可以成为改变我们生活的转折点,教会我们同情和希望的真正含义。)
This heartwarming story serves as a reminder that kindness has no boundaries. It can bridge the gap between strangers, bring joy in the midst of hardship, and create a world where everyone is willing to lend a hand to those in need.(这个温暖人心的故事提醒我们,善良没有界限。它可以弥合陌生人之间的差距,在艰难困苦中带来喜悦,并创造一个每个人都愿意向有需要的人伸出援手的世界。)
写作示范一
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam. “Dad, there’s a huge truck parked outside our house!” she exclaimed, her eyes wide with surprise. Adam rushed out, and there, in front of their modest home, was a well - maintained truck. Memories of his encounter with Alice flooded back. He realized that this must be her way of showing gratitude. The kids, Amanda and Jared, came running out, jumping up and down in excitement, asking countless questions about the truck. Adam was speechless, a mix of shock and disbelief on his face.
At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck. He thought it was too generous a gift, and he felt he didn't deserve it. But when Alice visited later that day, she said, “Adam, you were there for me when I needed help. This truck has been sitting idle, and it can make a real difference in your life. Please accept it.” Her sincere words touched Adam deeply. After a moment of hesitation, he nodded, his eyes filled with gratitude. He knew that this gift would not only solve his transportation problem but also mark the beginning of a new chapter in his life.
写作示范二
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam. “Dad, you won't believe what's outside!” she shouted. Still half - asleep, Adam stumbled out of the house. His eyes widened in shock as he saw the large truck. He remembered his conversation with Alice and understood immediately. The kids were already exploring the truck, climbing in and out, their laughter filling the air. Adam stood there, a hand on his forehead, trying to process what was happening.
At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck. He worried that it was too much, that he couldn't possibly accept such a valuable gift. But Alice was insistent. “I lost my Frank, and I know how tough life can be. This truck can give you a better life. It's not just a truck; it's a symbol of hope,” she said. Adam's heart melted at her words. He finally accepted, feeling a newfound sense of hope and gratitude. From that day on, the truck became a part of their lives, a constant reminder of the kindness of a stranger.
【答案】范文
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam. “Dad! Quick! Something weird is happening outside!” Rubbing his eyes, Adam approached the bedroom window and spotted a moving truck parked near his driveway. When he stepped outside, he was surprised to see Alice beside the truck. “Alice, what is this ” he asked, approaching her. “A little gift from me to thank you for your kindness,” she said, patting the truck.
At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck. But her gift could case his financial worries, so he accepted it. After she left, he and his children began to look through the truck. The children were so excited to have a truck since there was no means of transport except a second-hand motorcycle. They asked their dad to go for a drive. Adam agreed. Along the way, the family laughed to their hearts’ content. It was the first time that Adam had been so happy since her wife’s death. He felt grateful for Alice’s generosity.
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