读后续写 森林露营，重拾亲情纽带 讲义- 山东省青岛市即墨区2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题

读后续写 森林露营，重拾亲情纽带 讲义 山东省青岛市即墨区2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
原题
A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy would ask for: a cell phone. I lived on that phone all summer. I always texted my friends, even at night. And I paid no attention to the people and things around myself. Being connected to the Internet was more important than being present.
So, you can imagine my displeasure when the time came for our family vacation that year. It was not the Disneyland trip or beach vacation that I had been hoping for. “This year,” my dad said, “we’ll be doing something special, something I used to do with my dad when I was a kid. We’re going camping in the forest!”
His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh, which was my communication style at that age. But he had made the decision and would not change his mind. I comforted myself by telling myself that it was still a vacation. I remained uninfluenced while they were busy preparing for the vacation.
My mind was on my phone, the texts flying back and forth. I focused on the screen in my hands so much that the first time I looked up was when we drove across a bridge on the trip to our campsite.
I looked out of the window and saw a fast-moving river. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot and smelled of trees. But that didn’t matter to me. The reason why I had looked up was something far more serious and annoying. My phone no longer had service. The signal was weak. During the last hour of the drive, there was no signal at all.
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When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face.
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The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun.
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故事分析
开端
“我” 在暑假得到手机后沉迷其中，对周围事物漠不关心。当得知家庭度假是去森林露营而非期待的迪士尼或海滩时，“我” 满心失望，但父亲坚持决定。
发展
在去露营地的路上，“我” 一心玩手机，直到手机没信号才抬头。车窗外的自然景色没能引起 “我” 的兴趣，此时 “我” 因手机失去联系而烦恼。
高潮（待续写）
到达露营地后，“我” 的负面情绪如何转变，与家人在露营过程中发生了什么，是否能真正感受露营的乐趣。
结局（待续写）
“我” 能否从这次露营中收获成长，重新审视与家人的关系以及对手机的依赖，一家人的关系是否变得更加紧密。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
“我” 沉迷手机：在续写中，露营地没有信号促使 “我” 不得不放下手机，参与到与家人的活动中，从而有机会重新发现生活中的美好，感受亲情。
父亲坚持去露营：在续写中，父亲可以引导 “我” 体验露营的乐趣，帮助 “我” 改变对这次度假的看法，加强父子间的沟通与理解。
露营地无手机信号：成为 “我” 转变的关键因素，在续写中，“我” 逐渐适应没有手机的生活，进而发现自然和家人陪伴的珍贵。
续写要点（两段）
第一段
着重描写到达露营地时 “我” 的沮丧情绪，父亲对 “我” 的安抚，以及 “我” 在父亲引导下开始参与露营活动，初步感受大自然的美好，态度有所转变。
第二段
描述第二天早上被阳光唤醒后的情景，“我” 进一步融入露营生活，与家人互动，深刻体会到亲情的温暖，认识到放下手机后生活中还有很多值得关注的美好，升华主题。
情感线
起初，“我” 对露营满心失望，因手机没信号而烦躁。在父亲引导下参与露营活动时，“我” 的情绪逐渐缓和，开始感受到自然的魅力。第二天与家人愉快相处后，“我” 收获了温暖和喜悦，彻底改变对这次度假的看法，珍惜与家人在一起的时光。
故事线
“我” 一脸不情愿地到达露营地。
父亲安慰 “我” 并引导 “我” 参与露营。
“我” 在参与过程中感受到自然之美，态度开始转变。
第二天早上，“我” 被阳光唤醒。
“我” 与家人一起享受露营时光，关系更加融洽。
“我” 领悟到放下手机，亲情和自然才是更重要的。
主旨升华句
This camping trip taught me that sometimes, disconnecting from technology can bring us closer to our families and the beauty of nature, making us realize what truly matters in life.（这次露营之旅让我明白，有时候，暂时远离科技能让我们更亲近家人，感受大自然的美好，让我们意识到生活中真正重要的东西。）
Through this experience, I learned that instead of being enslaved by our devices, we should embrace the real world around us, where precious moments with loved ones and the wonders of nature await.（通过这次经历，我懂得了与其被电子设备束缚，我们应该拥抱周围的现实世界，那里有与亲人共度的珍贵时光和大自然的奇妙等待着我们。）
It wasn't just a camping trip; it was a journey of self - discovery that made me see that by setting aside our distractions, we can open the door to deeper connections and a more fulfilling life.（这不仅仅是一次露营之旅，更是一次自我发现的旅程，让我明白，抛开干扰，我们就能打开通往更深厚情感联系和更充实生活的大门。）
写作示范一
When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face. I stared at my useless phone in despair, feeling completely cut off from my friends. Dad came over and patted me on the shoulder. “Come on, son. There's so much fun here without that phone.” Reluctantly, I followed him to set up the tent. As I was helping, I noticed the chirping of birds and the gentle rustling of leaves. The fresh air filled my lungs, and I started to feel a bit better. Maybe this camping thing wasn't going to be a total disaster.
The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun. I opened my eyes to see my parents sitting by the fire, making breakfast. The smell of bacon filled the air. I joined them, and we talked and laughed as we ate. We went on a hike later, and I saw beautiful wildflowers and small animals. I realized that being away from my phone allowed me to truly enjoy the company of my family and the beauty of nature. This camping trip was turning out to be the best vacation I'd ever had.
写作示范二
When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face. I was so frustrated that I couldn't use my phone. Dad seemed to understand my mood and said, “Let's forget about the phone for a while and have some real fun.” He showed me how to start a fire and we roasted marshmallows together. As I watched the flames, I gradually forgot about my disappointment. The night sky was full of stars, which I had never noticed before in the city. It was actually quite beautiful.
The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun. I felt refreshed and excited for the day ahead. We went fishing by the river. Dad taught me how to cast the line, and we had a great time competing to see who could catch more fish. Even though I didn't catch many, I enjoyed every moment. This camping trip made me realize that there was a wonderful world outside my phone, and spending time with my family was truly precious.
参考答案
When we finally arrived at the campsite, I stepped out of the car with a long face. My phone showed no signal, and I felt like I was cut off from the world. Dad noticed my disappointment and said, “This is a chance to enjoy nature.” I reluctantly followed them, setting up the tent. As I walked around, I began to notice the beauty of the forest. The tall trees and the sound of birds made me feel a bit better. Maybe this trip wouldn’t be so bad after all.
The next morning I was woken up by soft rays of the sun. I opened my eyes and saw the golden light filtering through the trees. The air was fresh, and I felt a sense of peace. Dad was already up, cooking breakfast. We sat around the fire, sharing stories and laughing. I realized that without my phone, I was more connected to my family and nature. This trip taught me that sometimes, disconnecting can help us reconnect with what truly matters.