读后续写 雪夜的救命稻草：皮卡司机的援手 讲义-广东省茂名市信宜市2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Angel on a Snowy Night
The wind was blowing hard as I was driving down the twists and turns of the country road. I was desperate to get home before dark, but there seemed no way. The forecast said there was going to be a heavy snow on the way. It was freezing cold outside. The wind was blowing against the windows, letting out buzzing noises. Hair standing on end, I stepped hard on the accelerator, longing to make it to my cozy home earlier.
The car was roaring along the rough road when I suddenly heard a big bang coming from behind. The car somehow slowed down, and I managed to pull it over to the side of the road. I was in a cold sweat from extreme terror, wondering what had just happened. Dragging myself out of the driver’s seat, I shivered with cold. Suddenly, a gust of cold wind cleared my head. Quickly I examined the car. Much to my surprise, no serious damage was done. It was just a flat tire, but the car couldn’t move forward an inch!
It was black dark outside. There was not a single soul around to turn to. A wave of fear instantly washed over me. Worse still, it began to snow at the very moment. Snowflakes were dancing in the air at the mercy of howling wind. How I wished someone could come to my rescue just in time! With nowhere to hide, I had to wait in the darkness, cold and helpless.
I waited and waited, but no car or truck passed by. Swallowed by complete darkness, I almost went mad. “What if no one comes What should I do ”, I mumbled. At this point, I was totally seized by anxiety and fear. My patience was running out when loud noises boomed out from the dark night. There came a Ford pickup（皮卡货车）, with dazzling light cast over the white snow. I sprang to my feet, waving my arms crazily.
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The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money.
文章大意
在一个风雪交加的夜晚，“我” 驾车行驶在乡村蜿蜒的道路上，一心想在天黑前到家。然而，天气预报显示即将有大雪，车外寒风凛冽，吹得车窗嗡嗡作响。行驶途中，车子突然发出巨响，“我” 惊恐地将车停在路边，发现只是轮胎爆了，但在这荒郊野外，周围空无一人，天也黑了，雪还在下，“我” 又冷又无助，只能焦急地等待救援。就在 “我” 几乎绝望时，一辆福特皮卡出现了，“我” 疯狂挥手求救。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 在风雪交加的夜晚开车回家，途中车胎爆了。
发展：天色已晚，周围无人，大雪纷飞，“我” 孤立无援，在恐惧与焦虑中等待救援。
高潮：皮卡出现，“我” 看到了希望。
结局（待续写）：皮卡司机帮助 “我” 换轮胎，“我” 对他的帮助表示感谢并试图给钱，司机拒绝，展现人与人之间的温暖与善良。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
恶劣的天气：为故事营造紧张氛围，在续写中，司机在这样的恶劣天气下帮忙，更能体现他的善良。如 “在这冰天雪地中，他的援手显得格外温暖，让我忘却了寒冷” 。
“我” 极度渴望回家：在续写中，司机的帮助让 “我” 能够继续回家的旅程，回应这一伏笔。如 “多亏了他的帮忙，我终于可以朝着温暖的家继续前行” 。
周围无人可求助：与后续皮卡司机的出现形成对比，突出司机的重要性。如 “在这无人的荒野，他就像从天而降的救星” 。
“我” 的恐惧与焦虑：在续写中，司机的帮助让 “我” 的情绪得以平复，从恐惧转为感激。如 “他的安慰和行动，驱散了我心中的恐惧，取而代之的是满满的感激” 。
皮卡的出现：预示着 “我” 将得到帮助，续写中围绕司机如何帮助 “我” 展开。如 “皮卡的到来，带来了希望的曙光，司机迅速下车开始帮我更换轮胎” 。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述皮卡司机下车后的反应，如询问情况、检查轮胎、着手帮忙换轮胎的过程，以及他的动作、表情和语言，同时描述 “我” 看到他帮忙时的心理变化，从紧张到安心。
第二段：重点描写换好轮胎后，“我” 对司机表示感谢并拿出钱酬谢，司机拒绝的场景，可通过对话展现司机的善良和高尚品格，以及 “我” 的感动，最后表达对这次经历的感悟。
情感线
起初，“我” 在风雪中驾车回家，充满急切与期待。车胎爆后，陷入极度恐惧和焦虑，在黑暗与寒冷中孤立无援，几乎绝望。皮卡出现时，看到了希望，心中燃起一丝曙光。司机帮忙换轮胎时，从紧张不安逐渐转为安心。当司机拒绝收钱时，内心满是感动与敬佩，深刻体会到人性的温暖与善良。
故事线
“我” 在风雪夜驾车回家，车胎爆了。
周围无人，天色已晚，大雪纷飞，“我” 孤立无援。
“我” 在恐惧与焦虑中等待救援，几乎绝望。
皮卡出现，“我” 疯狂挥手求救。
司机下车帮忙换轮胎。
换好轮胎后，“我” 感谢并试图给钱，司机拒绝，“我” 深受感动。
主旨升华句
In the darkest and coldest moments of life, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can be like a warm fire, lighting up our way and melting the ice of despair.（在生命中最黑暗、最寒冷的时刻，来自陌生人的一个简单善举就像一团温暖的火焰，照亮我们的道路，融化绝望的坚冰。）
This encounter on the snowy night taught me that humanity's kindness knows no bounds, and it has the power to transform our most desperate situations into moments of hope and gratitude.（这个雪夜的遭遇让我明白，人性的善良没有界限，它有力量将我们最绝望的处境转化为充满希望和感激的时刻。）
The driver's selfless help in the face of the harsh weather not only fixed my car but also mended my faith in the goodness of people, reminding me to always be ready to lend a hand.（司机在恶劣天气下的无私帮助不仅修好了我的车，还修复了我对人性美好的信念，提醒我要随时准备伸出援手。）
Sometimes, the most unexpected heroes emerge in the most trying times, and their acts of kindness become the most precious memories that warm our hearts forever.（有时候，最意想不到的英雄会在最艰难的时刻出现，他们的善举成为最珍贵的回忆，永远温暖着我们的心。）
Through this experience, I learned that the true value of life lies not in the material gains but in the connections we build with others through kindness and the love that is shared in times of need.（通过这次经历，我明白了生命的真正价值不在于物质收获，而在于我们通过善良与他人建立的联系，以及在需要时分享的爱。）
写作示范一
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver. He was a tall, sturdy man with a friendly smile on his face. “What's wrong ” he asked, his voice warm and comforting. I quickly explained the situation, and without a word, he walked around the car, examining the flat tire. Then, he opened the back of his pickup and took out a jack and a spare tire. He got down on his knees in the snow and started to work. His hands were red from the cold, but he didn't seem to notice. As I watched him, my anxiety gradually faded away, replaced by a sense of relief.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money. “Helping others is what we should do,” he said with a gentle smile. “I'm just glad I could be of some help to you tonight.” His words touched my heart deeply. I thanked him again and watched as he got back into his pickup and drove away. In that moment, I realized that even in the darkest of times, there is always hope and kindness in the world. This experience would stay with me forever, reminding me to be kind to others.
写作示范二
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver. A middle - aged man with a weather - beaten face, he looked around and immediately understood the situation. “Don't worry, I'll get you back on the road in no time,” he assured me. He then rolled up his sleeves and got to work. He expertly removed the flat tire and replaced it with the spare one. All the while, he kept talking to me, trying to calm my nerves. His calm demeanor and efficient actions made me feel much better.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money. “I don't want your money,” he said firmly. “If I were in your situation, I'd hope someone would do the same for me.” His selflessness left me speechless. I watched him drive off, his taillights disappearing into the snow - filled night. This encounter not only saved my night but also taught me a valuable lesson about the power of kindness. It made me realize that a small act of kindness can have a huge impact on someone's life.
【答案】
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver. “What’s up young man!” asked the driver. “I have a flat tire.” I responded. The driver then knelt on his knee and took a close look at the broken tire. “Nothing serious, I’ll help replace the tire.” Hearing his words, I breathed a sigh of relief. A surge of warmth soon flowed through my heart. The driver immediately pulled some tools out of the trunk and set to work. Just within minutes, the spare tire was installed in place. Deeply touched by the driver’s selfless help, I grabbed his arm, trying to cram some cash into his hand.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money. In no time, he stepped onto the pickup and soon disappeared into the dark night, leaving me greatly shocked. An accident turned out to be a blessing when a stranger approached me like an angel. Many years have passed, but the driver’s kind gesture still sticks in my head. It was his generous help that drove away cold, bringing me warmth on that snowy night. Even though I don’t know his name, his act of kindness makes a great difference to me, always inspiring me to reach out to those in need.