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湖北省部分重点中学 2025 届高三第二次联考英语答案
第二节读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短义。续写的词数应为150左右。
The summer I turned 16, my father gave me his 69 Chevy Malibu convertible (敞篷车). Beautifully repainted cherry red with V-8 engine--it was a gift wasted on me at that age. What did I know about classic cars The important thing was that Hannah and I could drive around Tucson with the top down.
Hannah was my best friend, a year younger but much taller, almost five foot ten. “Hannah's a beautiful girl,” my mother always said. And sure enough, that summer she signed with a modeling agency. She was already doing runway work.
A month after my birthday, Hannah and. I went to the movies. On the way home, we stopped at the McDonald's. drive-through, putting the French fries on the sent between us to share. “Let's ride around a while,” I said. It was a clear night, oven-warm, full moon casting low over the desert. Making a turn too fast, I hit a patch of dirt and the back of the car slid to the other side. I then drove through a neighbor's landscape wall and knocked into a full-grown palm (棕榈树). The front wheels came to rest half way up the tree trunk.
There were French fries on the floor, and the dash (仪表盘). An impossible amount of blood was on Hannah's lace. Some passers-by took us in separate ambulances. In the ER, my parents spoke quietly: “Best plastic surgeon in the city--but it is more likely to be the end of her modeling career...”
We'd been wearing lap belts, but the car didn't have shoulder bands. I'd broken my check bone on the steering wheel; Hannah's forehead had split wide open on the dash. What would I say to her
When her mother, Sharon, came into my hospital room, I started to cry, preparing myself for her anger. She sat beside me and took my hand. “I rear-ended (追尾) my best friend when I was your age,” she said. “I destroyed her car and mine.” “I' m so sorry.” I said, knowing Sharon was trying her best to comfort me and helping me out of my terrible sense of guilt and self-blame.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “What matters most is that you 're both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you.” She said.
Paragraph 2: Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharo1’s forgiveness.
湖北省部分重点中学 2025 届高三第二次联考英语答案
第二节读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短义。续写的词数应为150左右。
The summer(理解为组合连词) I turned 16, my father gave me his 69 Chevy Malibu convertible (敞篷车). Beautifully repainted(非谓语动词做补语) cherry red with V-8 engine--it was a gift wasted(非谓语动词做后置定语) on me at that age. What did I know about classic cars The important thing was that Hannah and I could drive around Tucson with the top down(表从).
Hannah was my best friend, a year younger but much taller, almost five foot ten(描述人物基本信息). “Hannah's a beautiful girl,” my mother always said. And sure enough, that summer she signed with a modeling agency. She was already doing runway work.
A month after my birthday, Hannah and I went to the movies. On the way home, we stopped at the McDonald's. Drive-through, putting the French fries(非谓语动词做伴随动作) on the sent between us to share. “Let's ride around a while,” I said. It was a clear night, oven-warm, full moon casting low over the desert(独立主格). Making a turn too fast(非谓语动词做原因状语), I hit a patch of dirt and the back of the car slid to the other side. I then drove through a neighbor's landscape wall and knocked into a full-grown palm (棕榈树). The front wheels came to rest half way up the tree trunk.
There were French fries on the floor, and the dash (仪表盘). An impossible amount of blood was on Hannah's lace. Some passers-by took us in separate ambulances. In the ER, my parents spoke quietly: “Best plastic surgeon in the city--but it is more likely to be the end of her modeling career...”
We'd been wearing lap belts, but the car didn't have shoulder bands. I'd broken my check bone on the steering wheel; Hannah's forehead had split wide open on the dash. What would I say to her (车祸的结果)
When her mother, Sharon, came into my hospital room, I started to cry, preparing myself for her anger(非谓语动词做伴随动作). She sat beside me and took my hand. “I rear-ended (追尾) my best friend when I was your age(状从),” she said. “I destroyed her car and mine.” “I' m so sorry.” I said, knowing(非谓语动词做伴随动作) Sharon was trying her best to comfort me(宾从) and helping(非谓语动词做伴随动作) me out of my terrible sense of guilt and self-blame.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “What matters most is that you 're both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you.” She said.
Paragraph 2: Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharo1’s forgiveness.
1. 文章分析：读后续写类型及构思分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
读后续写类型 这篇文章属于“情感转折类”读后续写，即通过对冲突的解决，情感逐渐恢复，并呈现出人物的成长和变化。 "I’m so sorry,” I said, knowing Sharon was trying her best to comfort me."
续写思路构思 续写应该聚焦于情感的恢复与人际关系的修复，通过安慰、宽恕和自我认知的提升展示人物成长。 "What matters most is that you’re both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you.”
布局与框架 1. 情感转折：通过Sharon的宽容，释放主角的自责情感。
2. 成长与反思：主角和Hannah逐步恢复正常生活，领悟重要的人生价值。 "What matters most is that you’re both alive."
承接原文事项 1. 续写需承接主角的内疚和自责情绪。
2. 展现人物的情感逐步变化，尤其是通过Sharon和Hannah的宽恕与支持。 "I’m so sorry," indicating guilt.
整体注意事项 1. 通过对人物情感的细腻描写，提升整篇文章的情感深度。
2. 用宽容和理解的语气带动情节发展，展示主角成长与领悟。 “What matters most is that you're both alive."
巧妙设计续写内容 1. 在Sharon的宽容下，主角逐渐放下内疚。
2. 通过主角的反思，描绘她逐步从事件中走出来，恢复与Hannah的友谊。 "Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon’s forgiveness."
2. 故事山模式分析及衔接
Story Mountain的思维导图
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 主角从内疚与恐惧中挣扎，逐渐被Sharon和Hannah的宽容所解救。 "I’m so sorry," indicating guilt and responsibility.
情感层次 从内疚到悔恼，再到宽恕与释怀，情感逐步得到升华。 "What matters most is that you're both alive."
关键情节点 1. 主角与Hannah的车祸事故。
2. Sharon的宽恕与安慰。 "I rear-ended my best friend when I was your age..."
语言特色 简洁有力，情感真挚，突出人物内心的挣扎与宽容的力量。 "What matters most is that you're both alive."
关键词分析 车祸、内疚、宽恕、责任。 "I’m so sorry."
心理描写 内疚和责任感构成主角的内心世界，并通过Sharon的安慰得到缓解。 "I’m so sorry," indicating guilt.
动作描写 主角哭泣，Sharon安慰，表现情感上的冲突和转折。 "She sat beside me and took my hand."
环境描写 车祸发生后环境变得混乱，医院中的场景更显得紧张与压抑。 "There were French fries on the floor, and the dash."
隐含主题 宽容与自我救赎。 "What matters most is that you're both alive."
情感转折 通过Sharon的宽容，主角从内疚中走出，情感得到修复。 "What matters most is that you're both alive."
空间转换 从车祸现场到医院的环境变化，表现情感的转换。 "In the ER, my parents spoke quietly..."
时间过渡 通过Sharon的宽恕，时间在心情上的过渡逐步过渡到恢复正常生活的状态。 "Hannah and I returned to our normal life..."
3. 适用情境下的英文例句
动作描写
例句
1. She reached out to comfort her friend, her hands trembling slightly.
2. With a swift motion, he caught the ball just before it hit the ground.
3. She paced back and forth, her nerves getting the best of her.
4. The sound of footsteps echoed down the hall as he approached.
5. He clenched his fists, trying to control his anger.
6. The car screeched to a halt, narrowly avoiding an accident.
7. She glanced at the clock, feeling the weight of time slipping away.
8. He turned away, unable to meet her eyes, feeling ashamed.
心理描写
例句
1. Her mind raced, unable to settle on a single thought.
2. He felt a knot tighten in his stomach as the situation unfolded.
3. She couldn’t shake the feeling that something was terribly wrong.
4. His heart sank as he realized the gravity of the situation.
5. Anxiety gripped her, her palms sweating as she waited for the answer.
6. A sense of dread washed over him as he entered the room.
7. She fought back tears, refusing to let her emotions control her.
8. He was filled with regret, wishing he could turn back time.
环境描写
例句
1. The quiet of the night was broken only by the occasional rustle of leaves.
2. The room was filled with the scent of freshly brewed coffee.
3. The storm raged outside, the wind howling through the trees.
4. The sun set slowly, casting an orange glow over the horizon.
5. The streetlights flickered, casting shadows on the empty road.
6. The air was thick with tension, and the silence felt unbearable.
7. The crowded room buzzed with the low hum of conversation.
8. The forest was eerily quiet, the only sound the crunch of leaves underfoot.
4. 语法分析
语法现象 例句 搭配现象 常见搭配
虚拟语气 "What matters most is that you're both alive." 表达重要性和价值 is that + clause
过去完成时 "I had broken my check bone on the steering wheel." 用于叙述过去的事件，强调先后关系 had + past participle
情态动词 "I’m so sorry," I said, knowing Sharon was trying her best to comfort me. 表达内疚、歉意 trying to, was + doing
Possible Answers
Version 1
Paragraph 1: “What matters most is that you’re both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you,” she said. These words, though simple, carried a profound weight. I had been drowning in guilt ever since the accident, but Sharon’s calm voice seemed to pull me from the depths of my remorse(情绪描写). As I wiped away my tears(状从), a sense of relief began to replace the crushing burden I had been carrying(定从). I realized that forgiveness wasn’t just about forgiving others, but also about forgiving myself(宾从 并列). Hannah’s kind smile reassured me, and I felt a small flicker of hope in my heart. Perhaps, just perhaps, everything would be okay after all.
Paragraph 2:Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon’s forgiveness. We spent hours together, just talking and laughing, as if nothing had ever happened(状从). However, a change had occurred in me. I had learned to let go of my guilt, to stop blaming myself for the accident. The incident became a turning point, and from then on, I approached life with a newfound sense of maturity and responsibility. I knew that no matter what challenges(让步状语从句) I faced in the future(定从), I would be stronger for having gone through this experience(宾从). The bond between Hannah and me was unbreakable, and we would always have each other’s backs, no matter what.
Version 2:
Paragraph 1:“What matters most is that you’re both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you,” she said. Her words echoed in my mind, slowly dissolving the knot in my stomach(心理描写，非谓语动词做伴随动作). I had feared that this accident would drive a wedge between us(宾从), but instead, Sharon’s compassion had done the opposite. I could feel the weight of my guilt slowly lifting(非谓语动词做补语), replaced by an overwhelming sense of gratitude(非谓语动词做后置定语). It was then that(强调句) I realized that true friendship was not just about having fun together, but about(递进句式结构) standing by each other when things went wrong(宾从). I looked at Hannah, and though she was still recovering(状从), I knew she would never hold the accident against me(宾从).
Paragraph 2: Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharo1’s forgiveness.With Sharon’s forgiveness(with复合结构做原因状语), the healing process began. Hannah and I spent the following weeks adjusting to life after the accident. Despite the physical scars, our bond grew even stronger. Every time we laughed together(状从), I felt as though the pain from the accident was fading into the background(表从), replaced by the warmth of friendship(非谓语动词做后置定语). The lessons I had learned from the accident(定从) stayed with me: the importance of forgiveness, the strength of friendship, and the resilience of the human spirit. Our lives returned to normal, but with a deeper understanding of what truly mattered(宾从). We were no longer just friends; we were survivors.
范文 3: 续写内容
Paragraph 1:“What matters most is that you’re both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you,” she said. The words hit me like a ton of bricks, but in the best way possible. I had been so consumed by guilt that I couldn’t see beyond it(目的状从). Sharon’s forgiveness brought a wave of relief that I hadn’t expected(定从). I had spent so many sleepless nights wondering how to make things right(宾从), but now I realized that sometimes, the only thing you can do(定从) is accept responsibility and move forward(宾从). As I looked at Hannah(状从), who was still healing physically(定从), I understood that our friendship was the greatest gift(宾从) I could have ever asked for(定从).
Paragraph 2: Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon’s forgiveness. However, this wasn’t the same life as before. The accident had changed both of us in ways we couldn’t fully express(定从). We were more grateful for each day, more understanding of each other’s flaws(非谓语动词做 伴随动作), and more aware of the fragility of life(adj短语做补语). I knew that this experience had made us stronger(宾从), and it had given me the opportunity to grow. The lessons I learned about forgiveness and self-compassion(定从) would stay with me forever. Our friendship was now a bond forged in the fire of adversity(非谓语动词短语做后置定语), and nothing could ever break it.
官方第二节：
Version 1
“What matters most is that you’re both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you.” she said. Upon hearing the comforting words(一... 就...), I hugged her tightly, tears blurring my eyes(独立主格). A burst of warmth flooded over me, for I was moved by her kindness and forgiveness(状从). I plucked up enough courage to request her to take me to Hannah’s ward. Seeing me getting close to her bed on the wheelchair(非谓语动词做伴随动作) pushed by her mother(非谓语动词短语做后置定语), Hannah asked eagerly, “Are you all right ” Tears of joy and relief poured down our cheeks. I held Hannah’s hands, expressing my sincere apologies and appreciation(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon’s forgiveness. We stayed friends throughout high school and college. Hannah gave up her modeling job and found a better one and we got back to be in the same car together as before. As time went by, Hannah’s scars were so faint that almost no one else would notice them(目的状从). However, I could still see it below her hairline in the sunlight. For me, not only was it a scar(倒装句), but also a sign which holds the essence of grace(定从).
Version 2
“What matters most is that you’re both alive. Hannah and I will forgive you.” she said. Overwhelmed by the sense of self-accusation and regret(非谓语动词短语做原因状语), I choked with tremendous guilt, “If only I had been more cautious(虚拟语气)! I couldn’t forgive myself for the harm caused to Hannah.” Aware of my desperation(adj短语做原因状语), Sharon took me in her arms, patting me on the back(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). I gathered enough courage to request her to take me to Hannah’s ward. Seeing(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) me getting close to her bed on the wheelchair pushed by her mother(非谓语动词短语做后置定语), Hannah squeezed out her voice with her eyes flooded with worry(with复合结构做状语), “Are you all right ” Tears of joy and relief poured down our cheeks.
Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon’s forgiveness. Owing to the plastic surgeon(介词短语做原因状语), Hannah’s wound healed well, leaving only a faint scar(非谓语动词短语做结果状语) that was barely noticeable(定从). With guilt and regret (with复合结构做状语)serving as the reminder of my actions(非谓语动词短语做后置定语), I swore to be more cautious and responsible in the future. We devoted countless hours to engaging in heartfelt conversations, sharing laughter, and offering mutual support. Our friendship deepened in the fires of hardship and forgiveness. What remained vividly in my mind(主从) was her her eyes with love and kindness(介词短语做后置定语), driving me to withstand my temptation to resent someone for a perceived wrong(非谓语动词短语做补语或后置定语).
亮点语法分析与加分点
语法加分点 例句 搭配/近义词替换
虚拟语气 "What matters most is that you’re both alive." What matters most is that + clause
情态动词 "I could feel the weight of my guilt slowly lifting..." could, would
过去完成时 "I had spent so many sleepless nights wondering how to make things right." had + past participle
条件句 "If I had known this earlier, I would have acted differently." If + past perfect, would have + past participle
反身代词 "I had learned to let go of my guilt, to stop blaming myself." myself, yourself
非谓语动词 "To forgive myself was the hardest part of the healing process." To + verb (infinitive)
亮点词汇与短语分析
情绪描写 例句
内疚 "I had been drowning in guilt..."
宽恕 "Sharon’s forgiveness brought a wave of relief..."
释怀 "I realized that forgiveness wasn’t just about forgiving others, but also about forgiving myself."
动作描写 例句
擦去泪水 "As I wiped away my tears..."
握手安慰 "She sat beside me and took my hand."
愣住 "I looked at Hannah, and though she was still recovering..."
环境描写 例句
温暖的夜晚 "It was a clear night, oven-warm, full moon casting low over the desert."
医院环境 "In the ER, my parents spoke quietly..."
读后续写积累语料（词汇和短语）
动词短语 例句
drown in guilt "He drowned in guilt after the accident."
wipe away tears "She wiped away the tears, trying to regain composure."
take someone's hand "He reached out to take her hand, offering comfort."
名词短语 例句
sense of relief "A sense of relief washed over me as the burden was lifted."
deep bond "Their deep bond was forged through years of friendship."
情感动词 例句
forgive oneself "Sometimes, forgiving oneself is the hardest part of healing."
feel guilty "She couldn't shake off the feeling of guilt."
词汇升级与替换选项
常见词汇 替换词汇 例句
forgive pardon, absolve, excuse "He was absolved of the guilt by his friend."
alive living, breathing, surviving "I’m glad you’re surviving the ordeal."
guilt remorse, contrition, self-blame "She couldn’t shake off the remorse she felt."
friendship companionship, fellowship, bond "Their fellowship grew even stronger after the incident."
forgive oneself absolve oneself, pardon oneself "He found it hard to absolve himself for the accident."
语法和词汇简要分析
语法亮点：
虚拟语气: 用于表达希望或假设情况，如“What matters most is that you’re both alive.”
过去完成时: 用于描述过去的动作或情况，强调发生顺序，“I had spent so many sleepless nights wondering how to make things right.”
条件句: 用于表达假设条件，如"If I had known this earlier, I would have acted differently."
亮点词汇：
drowning in guilt: 强烈的情感表达，强调内疚感。
sense of relief: 释然感，常用在情感变化的转折处。
这些语法和词汇的运用使文章的情感更加丰富，增加了叙述的深度和真实感。