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I got off the school bus and ran as fast as I could to the backyard. I dropped my school bag by the door and rushed to see my little horse, Princess Luna. I couldn’t wait to continue training her. We had already built a special connection.
Princess Luna was a small horse that we bought for very little money from a poor situation. She was my first horse to train. When I reached the backyard, my smile turned into a confused face. Princess Luna was nowhere to be seen, but there was a huge, golden palomino horse at the gate. I searched the whole backyard. However, she was not anywhere.
Almost in tears, I ran to find my mom. “Mom ” I asked anxiously. “Where’s Princess Luna, and where did this new horse come from ” “We traded Princess Luna with Tom’ s family. I’ve always wanted a Palomino.” Her answer surprised me and made me very sad.
I begged my mom to bring Princess Luna back, but she didn’t explain anything. She just expected me to accept it. I went back to my room, feeling discouraged. Princess Luna needed me as much as I needed her. How could my parents care little about that
I decided it was time to stand up for what I believed in. I would get Princess Luna back, so I started making a plan. While doing the dishes later, I packed some snacks in my backpack. When I was sure everyone was asleep, I set out to find Princess Luna in the dark.
I walked down the driveway toward Tom’s house, imagining how upset my parents would be when they found out what I was doing. About an hour later, I arrived at Tom’s house and climbed through the open stable door. There, I saw Princess Luna! I rushed to take her out of the stable. “What are you doing here, Lucy ” I turned quickly to face the familiar but shocked voice that surprised me.
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Tom with his little sister stood there, their eyes wide open in shock.
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Five minutes later, my parents arrived.
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文章大意
“我” 放学后满心欢喜跑去后院见小马公主露娜，打算继续训练它，却发现露娜不见，换成了一匹金色的帕洛米诺马。妈妈告知是用露娜和汤姆家交换的，只因她一直想要帕洛米诺马。“我” 苦苦哀求妈妈换回露娜无果，觉得父母不理解 “我” 和露娜的感情。于是，“我” 决心捍卫自己的想法，趁夜晚大家熟睡，带好零食前往汤姆家。在汤姆家马厩找到露娜正要带走时，被汤姆和他妹妹发现。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 放学后去看小马公主露娜，却发现它被交换，得知是妈妈为了帕洛米诺马用露娜和汤姆家交换，“我” 十分难过。
发展：“我” 向妈妈求情无果后，决定自己行动，夜晚前往汤姆家寻找露娜。
高潮：在汤姆家马厩找到露娜准备带走时，被汤姆和他妹妹发现，此时情节紧张，充满悬念。
结局（待续写）：解决 “我” 与汤姆等人的冲突，让父母理解 “我” 对露娜的感情，最终达成一个圆满的结局，可能是换回露娜，也可能是双方达成其他共识。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
“我” 和公主露娜建立了特殊联系：续写中，“我” 会向汤姆和父母强调这种特殊联系，说明露娜对 “我” 的重要性，以此争取带回露娜。
妈妈用露娜交换帕洛米诺马且不解释：在后续情节中，父母会在与 “我” 的沟通中，意识到自己的做法忽略了 “我” 的感受，对交换行为做出解释和反思。
“我” 决定自己行动找回露娜并制定计划：续写中，这个计划会展开，“我” 在面对汤姆和父母时，会基于自己的计划和坚定的决心去争取，不会轻易放弃。
夜晚前往汤姆家，想象父母发现后的反应：当父母到来后，会回应这个伏笔，他们会对 “我” 的行为表示担忧和生气，但也会在沟通中了解 “我” 的内心想法。
在汤姆家马厩被汤姆和妹妹发现：后续会围绕 “我” 如何向他们解释自己的行为展开，汤姆和妹妹的态度会发生转变，从震惊到理解，推动故事发展。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述 “我” 面对汤姆和妹妹的震惊时的反应，如紧张、尴尬，然后向他们解释自己来带走露娜的原因，强调 “我” 和露娜的深厚感情。汤姆和妹妹听了 “我” 的解释后，他们的态度可能会有所变化，可能从一开始的震惊变得有些理解，也可能提出一些疑问或条件。
第二段：着重描写父母到来后的场景，父母可能会先对 “我” 的行为表示生气，但 “我” 会再次向父母表达自己对露娜的感情和不舍。在这个过程中，大家一起沟通，父母可能会理解 “我” 的心情，最后可能会与汤姆家重新协商，达成一个让大家都满意的解决方案，比如换回露娜或者找到其他解决办法，同时 “我” 也会从这次经历中有所成长。
情感线
起初，“我” 发现露娜被换，感到震惊、难过和失望，向妈妈求情时是哀求与无奈。决定自己行动时，内心充满坚定和决心。在汤姆家被发现时，紧张又尴尬。向汤姆和妹妹解释时，急切渴望得到理解。父母到来后，“我” 从害怕被责备到勇敢表达自己的情感，最后在沟通中，大家相互理解，“我” 的心情从焦虑转为欣慰，也更加珍惜与露娜的感情。
故事线
“我” 放学后发现公主露娜被妈妈用帕洛米诺马交换，非常难过。
“我” 向妈妈求情无果，决定自己行动，夜晚前往汤姆家寻找露娜。
在汤姆家马厩找到露娜准备带走时，被汤姆和妹妹发现。
“我” 向汤姆和妹妹解释带走露娜的原因，他们的态度发生变化。
父母到来，“我” 向父母再次表达对露娜的感情，大家一起沟通。
最终达成一个让大家都满意的解决方案，“我” 也从这次经历中成长。
主旨升华句
This experience taught Lucy that standing up for what she believed in and expressing her true feelings could lead to understanding and resolution, emphasizing the power of communication and the value of fighting for what matters.（这次经历让露西明白，坚持自己的信念并表达真实感受能够带来理解和解决办法，强调了沟通的力量以及为重要事物抗争的价值。）
Through this incident, Lucy's parents realized the importance of considering their child's emotions and respecting her special bond with Princess Luna, highlighting the significance of family communication and mutual understanding.（通过这件事，露西的父母意识到考虑孩子情感以及尊重她与公主露娜特殊联系的重要性，突出了家庭沟通和相互理解的意义。）
The encounter at Tom's house not only tested Lucy's courage but also demonstrated the power of empathy, as Tom and his sister gradually understood her feelings and were willing to work towards a solution together.（在汤姆家的遭遇不仅考验了露西的勇气，还展示了同理心的力量，因为汤姆和他妹妹逐渐理解了她的感受，并愿意共同寻求解决方案。）
This adventure of Lucy's taught everyone involved that true value lies not in material possessions like a particular horse breed but in the deep - seated emotions and connections we form with others, whether they are animals or humans.（露西的这次冒险让所有相关的人都明白，真正的价值不在于像特定马种这样的物质财富，而在于我们与他人，无论是动物还是人类，所建立的深厚情感和联系。）
In the end, the resolution of this conflict brought Lucy closer to her family and friends, showing that conflicts can be opportunities for growth and for strengthening relationships when approached with honesty and open - mindedness.（最终，这场冲突的解决让露西与家人和朋友的关系更加亲密，表明当以诚实和开放的心态处理冲突时，冲突可以成为成长和加强关系的机会。）
写作示范一
Tom with his little sister stood there, their eyes wide open in shock. I stammered, trying to find the right words. “I... I had to come for Princess Luna. She's not just a horse to me. We've been training together, and she needs me.” Tom frowned, looking confused. “But my parents traded with yours. It's a done deal.” His sister, on the other hand, seemed more understanding. “I can see how much you care about her,” she said softly. I took a deep breath and told them about all the time I'd spent with Princess Luna, the special bond we shared. Slowly, Tom's expression softened.
Five minutes later, my parents arrived. My dad looked angry at first, but my mom's eyes were filled with worry. “Lucy, what were you thinking ” my dad scolded. I gathered my courage and said, “I know I shouldn't have run away, but Princess Luna means the world to me. You didn't understand our connection.” My mom stepped forward and said, “We're sorry, honey. We didn't realize how much she meant to you.” Then, my parents talked with Tom's family. In the end, we worked out a new deal, and Princess Luna came back home with me. From that day on, my parents always considered my feelings when making decisions.
写作示范二
Tom with his little sister stood there, their eyes wide open in shock. I froze for a moment, then quickly said, “Please, Tom. Princess Luna is like a part of me. I can't lose her.” Tom's sister piped up, “I think I get it. Remember how attached I was to my old teddy bear ” Tom nodded slightly. I continued, pouring out my heart about the training, the rides, and the countless moments we'd shared. Tom scratched his head and said, “I still don't know if this is okay, but I can see how much you love her.”
Five minutes later, my parents arrived. They rushed in, looking frantic. “Lucy, you scared us to death!” my mom cried. I hung my head, feeling guilty but still determined. “I'm sorry, but I had to get Princess Luna back.” My dad looked at me sternly and said, “Running away isn't the answer.” I took a deep breath and explained my feelings again. My parents listened quietly. After a long talk with Tom's family, they decided to reverse the trade. I hugged Princess Luna tightly, and from that day, I knew that communication and standing up for what I loved were the keys to solving problems.
【答案】
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Tom with his little sister stood there, their eyes wide open in shock. “I-I came to get Princess Luna back,” I stammered, feeling the guilt surging in my heart but determined not to back down. Tom’s face softened as he glanced at his sister, who was clutching her teddy bear tightly. “Lucy, we really like Princess Luna too, but we didn’t know she meant so much to you,” Tom said gently. His little sister nodded in agreement, her eyes filled with understanding. “Can we help you find a way to keep her ” Tom’s offer gave me a glimmer of hope. Maybe there was a solution that wouldn’t break anyone’s heart.
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Five minutes later, my parents arrived, their faces a mixture of anger and worry. “Lucy, what have you done ” my mom demanded. Before I could respond, Tom stepped forward and explained the situation, emphasizing how much Princess Luna meant to both of us. My dad sighed deeply, looking thoughtful. “We didn’t realize the bond you two had,” he admitted. “Maybe we rushed into things.” My mom nodded reluctantly, her expression softening. “We’ll talk about it and find a way to make it work for everyone.” The tension in the air seemed to dissolve, replaced by a sense of relief and the beginning of a solution.