读后续写--当治疗犬遇上患者，爱与希望在病房绽放 讲义-安徽省亳州市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末质量检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I know he has arrived before I ever see him. Heads turn in his direction, and if he stops for just a minute, he draws a crowd. He walks through the halls in a way that shows he is truly confident.
His name is Augie. He is a six-year-old Goldendoodle with a strawberry-blond coat that is made for petting, and his manners are perfect. He is a trained therapy (治疗) dog that visits patients in the hospital where I work as a nurse. I have seen Augie come through the hospital, stopping for anyone who wants to pet him, and I have seen him go into patients’ rooms. But I had never witnessed Augie providing the therapy that he was trained to give until I saw him with Mr. M.
Mr. M had been in ICU for many weeks and suffered from many medical complications. His wife rarely left his side. Family and former co-workers visited. Prior to his retirement, Mr. M had worked as a canine (犬的) police officer and developed strong connections with his four-legged partners. It was a natural transition when, upon retiring from the police force, he became a trainer for the next generation of fearless police dogs. Sadly, he fell ill when attending a training program for police dogs.
Although he was awake, and his beautiful green eyes were open, there was little indication that he was aware of his surroundings. Mrs. M was untroubled by the lack of response and kept talking to him while she exercised his arms, hoping he would make some effort to move them himself. I watched Mrs. M work with her husband’s hands, opening and closing them. She told him gently that he needed to move his hands so he would not lose the use of them, but he did not seem to be able to do it. He moved his eyes to look at her when she spoke to him, but he didn’t move his head toward her voice.
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Then Augie was brought to make a visit.
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Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud!
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文章大意
“我” 是一名护士，在工作的医院里，训练有素的治疗犬 Augie 很受欢迎。它经常在医院穿梭，与想抚摸它的人互动，还会进入患者病房。Mr. M 在 ICU 住了很多周，有多种并发症。他曾是警犬训练员，生病时正在参加警犬培训项目。虽然他醒着，但几乎没有意识，对周围环境反应微弱。他的妻子 Mrs. M 不离不弃，一直陪伴并努力帮他做康复训练，和他说话、活动他的手臂，可他反应不佳。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 在医院工作，介绍治疗犬 Augie 以及患者 Mr. M 的背景，他曾是警犬训练员，如今病重。
发展：Mr. M 在 ICU，意识不清，Mrs. M 一直陪伴并帮他做康复训练，但效果不佳。
高潮：Augie 被带到病房，故事迎来转机。
结局（待续写）：Augie 的出现使 Mr. M 有了积极反应，Mrs. M 十分激动，众人感受到动物治疗的神奇力量和爱的温暖。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
Mr. M 曾是警犬训练员：续写中 Augie 的出现能激发他的熟悉感和反应，比如他可能因为对犬类的特殊情感，在 Augie 靠近时做出不同以往的举动，像手指微微动一下。
Mr. M 虽醒着却意识不清，对周围反应微弱：与后文 Augie 到来后他的积极反应形成对比，突出 Augie 治疗的效果，如之前他几乎不回应，Augie 来了后却能跟着它的动作转动眼睛。
Mrs. M 一直努力陪伴和帮助 Mr. M 做康复训练：当看到 Mr. M 因 Augie 有反应时，Mrs. M 的激动情绪是合理的，也是对她之前付出的回应，她可能会喜极而泣，感谢 Augie 和周围的人。
Augie 是训练有素的治疗犬：续写中它会用专业的治疗方式，如安静地趴在 Mr. M 床边，用头蹭他的手，让他感受到温暖和安慰，从而产生积极反应。
Heads turn in his direction, and if he stops for just a minute, he draws a crowd：暗示了 Augie 的特殊魅力和影响力，在病房里也会展现，它能吸引大家的注意力，包括 Mr. M，让他关注到这个特别的 “伙伴”。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述 Augie 进入病房后的行为，比如它如何慢慢靠近 Mr. M，用怎样的动作和姿态去接触他，像轻嗅、温柔地舔舐他的手；以及 Mr. M 最初的反应，是眼神有了变化，还是身体某个部位有了轻微动作。
第二段：着重刻画 Mrs. M 看到丈夫有反应后的激动表现，如她的语言、动作、表情；再描述病房里其他人的反应，如护士、医生的欣慰；最后可以升华主题，谈谈这次经历对大家的意义。
情感线
Mrs. M 一直处于担忧和期待中，努力帮丈夫康复却收获甚微，心情低落。Augie 到来时，她或许抱着一丝希望。看到丈夫对 Augie 有反应，她先是惊讶，然后转为极度兴奋，喜极而泣。“我” 和病房里其他人一开始是好奇，看到 Mr. M 的变化后，感到惊喜和欣慰，大家都被这份温暖和希望所感染，深刻体会到爱与生命的力量。
故事线
“我” 在医院工作，认识治疗犬 Augie 和病重的 Mr. M。
Mr. M 曾是警犬训练员，如今意识不清，Mrs. M 努力帮他康复。
Augie 被带到 Mr. M 病房。
Augie 用行动与 Mr. M 互动，Mr. M 开始有反应。
Mrs. M 看到丈夫反应后激动不已。
大家感受到动物治疗的神奇和爱的力量，故事得到升华。
主旨升华句
This heartwarming encounter between Augie and Mr. M proves that love, in all its forms, has the power to break through the barriers of illness and bring hope to the darkest of times.（Augie 和 Mr. M 之间这段温暖人心的相遇证明，所有形式的爱都有力量突破疾病的障碍，为最黑暗的时刻带来希望。）
In the world of medicine, where technology and science often take the spotlight, the simple and pure connection between a therapy dog and a patient reminds us of the irreplaceable power of compassion and the human - animal bond.（在医学领域，科技常常备受瞩目，而治疗犬与患者之间这种简单纯粹的联系，让我们想起同情的力量以及人与动物之间的纽带是无可替代的。）
The moment Mr. M responded to Augie was not just a sign of his physical improvement but also a testament to the profound impact that a loving presence can have on the human spirit, even in the face of great adversity.（Mr. M 对 Augie 做出反应的那一刻，不仅是他身体状况改善的标志，也证明了即使面对巨大的困境，一个充满爱的存在也能对人类精神产生深远的影响。）
Through this experience, we are reminded that hope can come in unexpected forms, and sometimes, the most unlikely heroes, like Augie, can bring about miraculous changes in the lives of those in need.（通过这次经历，我们被提醒，希望可以以意想不到的形式出现，有时，像 Augie 这样最意想不到的 “英雄”，能给有需要的人的生活带来奇迹般的改变。）
The story of Augie and Mr. M serves as a beautiful reminder that in the journey of life, every act of kindness, no matter how small, and every connection, no matter how unconventional, can light up the path to recovery and fill our hearts with warmth and hope.（Augie 和 Mr. M 的故事美好地提醒着我们，在人生的旅途中，每一个善意的举动，无论多么微小，每一种联系，无论多么不同寻常，都能照亮康复之路，让我们的心中充满温暖和希望。）
写作示范一
Then Augie was brought to make a visit. The moment Augie entered the room, his tail wagging gently, he seemed to sense Mr. M's condition. He walked quietly to the bedside, his eyes fixed on Mr. M. With a soft whine, Augie put his front paws on the bed and slowly nuzzled Mr. M's hand. At first, there was no response. But as Augie continued to stay by his side, Mr. M's fingers twitched slightly. Augie's ears perked up, and he licked Mr. M's hand gently, as if encouraging him.
Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud! “Oh, my dear! Look, you're moving!” she exclaimed, her voice filled with a mix of joy and disbelief. She reached out to touch Mr. M's face, tears streaming down her cheeks. I stood there, my eyes filled with tears of happiness too. The other nurses and doctors in the room were also amazed. It was a moment of pure magic, a testament to the power of love and the special bond between humans and animals. From that day on, Augie's visits became a regular part of Mr. M's recovery journey, bringing new hope to us all.
写作示范二
Then Augie was brought to make a visit. As soon as Augie stepped into the room, he trotted directly towards Mr. M's bed. He sat down beside it, looking up at Mr. M with his big, friendly eyes. Augie then laid his head on the edge of the bed, close to Mr. M's arm. After a while, Mr. M's eyes, which had been dull, seemed to brighten a little. He slowly turned his head towards Augie, and his lips moved slightly, as if trying to say something.
Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud! She covered her mouth with her hands, her body shaking with emotion. “It's a miracle! Augie, you did it!” she sobbed. She knelt down beside the bed, hugging Mr. M gently. The atmosphere in the room was filled with warmth and hope. Everyone present was deeply touched by this heartwarming scene. It was clear that Augie's presence had made a huge difference. This experience taught us all that love and care, in any form, can work wonders, especially in the battle against illness.
【答案】One possible version:
Then Augie was brought to make a visit. He walked over to the bed, gently pushing Mr. M’s hand. At first, Mr. M showed no reaction. But then, something mysterious happened—Mr. M’s fingers moved slightly! Mrs. M’s eyes widened in disbelief. She stopped her movements and stared at her husband’s hand, expecting it to move again. Augie, seemingly sensing the change, stayed closer and made a soft noise, as if encouraging Mr. M to respond. Slowly, Mr. M’s hand began to move more purposefully and even managed to reach out his fingers to touch Augie’s fur.
Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud! Her tears were a mixture of joy, relief, and disbelief. For weeks, she had watched helplessly as Mr. M lay in the ICU. But now, with Augie’s gentle presence, there was a ray of hope, a sign that her husband was still there, fighting to come back. In the following days, Augie’s visits became a regular occurrence. Each time he entered the room, Mr. M’s response grew stronger. In the end, Mr. M was well enough to be released from the hospital. Sometimes, the amazing things can happen when we open our hearts to the healing power of animals.