读后续写--特制拐杖，藏着孙子的爱与关怀 讲义 广东省深圳市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Andy and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the house was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Andy and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once an intelligent explorer. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs… How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Andy said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Andy shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Andy’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Berlin thought it was a good idea.
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Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
暑假将至，安迪和柏林满心期待去看望祖父母。出发那天，一家人兴高采烈前往，途中兄弟俩回忆与祖父母相处的欢乐时光。抵达后，看到祖母在等他们，见到孙子，祖父欣喜却无法起身，祖母解释他健康恶化，祖父却固执表示自己可以。大人们聊天时，兄弟俩感到无聊，走进森林。这片森林承载着他们和祖父的许多美好回忆，祖父曾是智慧的探险家，能辨别鸟的出处。如今祖父不能起身，兄弟俩很担忧，想办法让他开心。柏林提议抓鸟，因祖父爱鸟，安迪却因祖父讨厌关鸟而摇头，最后安迪想到用小树做拐杖的主意。
故事山分析
开端：暑假来临，安迪和柏林随家人去看望祖父母，到达后发现祖父健康状况不佳，无法起身。
发展：大人们聊天时，兄弟俩走进森林，回忆起和祖父在森林的欢乐时光，因祖父不能起身而担忧，开始想办法让祖父开心，提出抓鸟又被否定，最终想到做拐杖。
高潮：兄弟俩制作拐杖并将其送给祖父，祖父的反应以及家人的互动将是故事的高潮部分，充满期待。
结局（待续写）：祖父收到拐杖后的后续故事，可能是祖父的身体和精神状态有所改变，或者一家人因此更加珍惜彼此，让故事有一个温暖的收尾。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
祖父健康恶化无法起身，却固执表示自己可以：续写中祖父收到拐杖后，可能会尝试借助拐杖起身，回应他之前的倔强，也展现拐杖对他的帮助。
森林承载着和祖父的美好回忆，祖父曾是智慧探险家：在制作拐杖和送拐杖过程中，兄弟俩会回忆起这些回忆，让情感更加深厚，也能体现森林元素与故事的紧密联系。
祖父爱鸟，兄弟俩想抓鸟又因祖父讨厌关鸟被否定：这一情节凸显祖父对自由的重视，做拐杖也体现了对祖父喜好的尊重，续写中祖父收到拐杖后会因为兄弟俩的用心而感动。
兄弟俩想办法让祖父开心：是整个故事的一个推动点，续写中送拐杖就是他们实现让祖父开心的关键行动，祖父的积极反馈能让兄弟俩的努力得到回应。
祖母在门口迎接，大人们开心聊天：营造了温馨的家庭氛围，续写中送拐杖时家人的互动会延续这种温馨，展现家庭的温暖与亲情的力量。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述兄弟俩制作拐杖的过程，比如如何挑选合适的小树，怎样砍伐、修整，制作过程中遇到的小困难以及如何克服，还可以描述他们的对话和期待祖父收到拐杖的心情。
第二段：着重描写送拐杖时祖父的表情、动作、语言，他的惊喜和感动；家人的反应，如祖母的欣慰、父母的赞扬；以及后续祖父可能的行动，如尝试使用拐杖，最后体现家庭的温暖和亲情的美好。
情感线
起初，兄弟俩去看望祖父母满怀期待与兴奋。看到祖父无法起身，他们的心情转为担忧。在想办法让祖父开心的过程中，从提议抓鸟被否定的失落，到想到做拐杖的兴奋与期待。制作拐杖时，充满认真与专注，期待祖父能喜欢。送拐杖时，紧张又期待，祖父的惊喜与感动让他们感到无比欣慰，一家人的互动让亲情的温暖弥漫，他们更加珍惜彼此。
故事线
暑假到，安迪和柏林随家人去看望祖父母，发现祖父健康恶化无法起身。
大人们聊天时，兄弟俩走进森林，回忆和祖父的欢乐时光，因祖父不能起身而担忧。
兄弟俩想办法让祖父开心，柏林提议抓鸟被安迪否定，安迪想到做拐杖。
兄弟俩开始制作拐杖，挑选小树、砍伐、修整，克服制作过程中的困难。
安迪和柏林将拐杖送给祖父，祖父惊喜感动，家人反应温馨。
祖父可能尝试使用拐杖，一家人更加珍惜彼此，故事以温暖的氛围收尾。
主旨升华句
This simple yet heartfelt gift of the cane not only brought hope and joy to Grandpa but also demonstrated the power of love and thoughtfulness within a family, reminding us that small acts of kindness can have a profound impact.（这根简单却饱含深情的拐杖不仅给祖父带来了希望和喜悦，也展示了家庭中爱与体贴的力量，提醒我们小小的善举能产生深远的影响。）
Through the process of making the cane for Grandpa, Andy and Berlin learned the true meaning of caring for others, and their family bond grew even stronger, highlighting the importance of family values in our lives.（通过为祖父制作拐杖的过程，安迪和柏林学到了关爱他人的真正含义，他们的家庭纽带也更加牢固，凸显了家庭价值观在我们生活中的重要性。）
The gift of the cane symbolized the deep - rooted love and respect the grandsons had for Grandpa, and it became a catalyst for a new chapter of hope and togetherness in their family, showing that love can overcome any obstacle.（拐杖这份礼物象征着孙子们对祖父深深的爱和尊重，它成为了家庭中充满希望与团聚新篇章的催化剂，表明爱可以战胜任何困难。）
This touching moment of presenting the cane to Grandpa not only warmed his heart but also left an indelible mark on the brothers' hearts, teaching them the value of family, empathy, and the beauty of giving, which would stay with them throughout their lives.（给祖父送拐杖的这一感人时刻，不仅温暖了祖父的心，也在兄弟俩心中留下了不可磨灭的印记，教会他们家庭、同理心的价值以及付出的美好，这些将伴随他们一生。）
In the end, the cane became more than just a tool for Grandpa; it was a testament to the unbreakable bond of family and the power of love to heal and inspire, making their family's story a beautiful example of love and care.（最终，拐杖对祖父来说不仅仅是一个工具，它见证了家庭牢不可破的纽带以及爱治愈和鼓舞人心的力量，使他们家庭的故事成为爱与关怀的美好范例。）
写作示范一
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They immediately set out to find the perfect young tree. After a while of searching, they spotted a straight and sturdy one. With a small saw they found in the shed, they carefully cut it down. Then, they used their pocket knives to peel off the bark and smooth the surface. They worked with great care, chatting excitedly about how Grandpa would react when he saw the cane. “He'll be so happy!” Andy exclaimed, his eyes shining with anticipation. After what seemed like a long time, the cane was finally ready.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. His eyes widened in surprise and then filled with tears of joy. “Oh, my dear boys, this is the most wonderful gift I've ever received!” he said, his voice trembling with emotion. Grandma smiled with approval, and Mum and Dad praised the brothers for their thoughtfulness. Grandpa grasped the cane tightly and, with everyone's support, made an attempt to stand up. Slowly but surely, he managed to rise to his feet. A big smile spread across his face, and the brothers felt a sense of pride and happiness like never before. The family gathered around, sharing hugs and laughter, and the love in the room was palpable.
写作示范二
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They rushed around the forest, their eyes scanning every tree. Finally, they found a young tree with just the right thickness and length. Berlin held the tree firmly while Andy started to saw it. It was tough work, and their hands soon ached, but they didn't give up. Once it was cut, they sat on the ground, patiently removing the branches and making the cane comfortable to hold. They even carved a small heart on it, representing their love for Grandpa. As the sun began to set, they finished their masterpiece and hurried back to the house.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. His face lit up with a huge smile, and he reached out to hug the boys. “You two are so clever and kind - hearted. This cane means the world to me,” he said. Mum took a photo of the heartwarming moment. With the cane in hand, Grandpa walked a few steps, albeit slowly. The whole family cheered for him. It was a moment of pure joy and love, and the brothers knew that their efforts had paid off. From that day on, the cane became a symbol of their love for Grandpa and a reminder of the special bond they shared as a family.
【答案】
Berlin thought it was a good idea. With the tools fetched from the backyard, they returned to the forest to search for an appropriate young tree for a cane. Hardly had they selected one when they got started with their BIG PROJECT. Andy, the elder brother, took on the job of cutting it down, while Berlin, who was younger and more creative, was responsible for decoration. Hard as it might seem to them, they never thought about quitting. After what seemed a long time, an elegant and tough cane appeared. Both of them were more than satisfied with their work and couldn’t wait to rush home.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. The instant he saw it, he knew what it was all about. Deeply touched by the grandsons’ gift, he took it with great excitement and tapped it on the ground several times. Obviously, he attempted to stand up with it. With the encouragement of the two brothers, he struggled to get up, slowly walking towards the forest. A cheerful and joyful expression, which Andy and Berlin had expected of Grandpa, flashed on his face. It was at that moment that they literally felt all the efforts to make the cane were all worth it.
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Andy and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the house was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Andy and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once an intelligent explorer. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs… How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Andy said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Andy shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Andy’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Berlin thought it was a good idea.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
暑假将至，安迪和柏林满心期待去看望祖父母。出发那天，一家人兴高采烈前往，途中兄弟俩回忆与祖父母相处的欢乐时光。抵达后，看到祖母在等他们，见到孙子，祖父欣喜却无法起身，祖母解释他健康恶化，祖父却固执表示自己可以。大人们聊天时，兄弟俩感到无聊，走进森林。这片森林承载着他们和祖父的许多美好回忆，祖父曾是智慧的探险家，能辨别鸟的出处。如今祖父不能起身，兄弟俩很担忧，想办法让他开心。柏林提议抓鸟，因祖父爱鸟，安迪却因祖父讨厌关鸟而摇头，最后安迪想到用小树做拐杖的主意。
故事山分析
开端：暑假来临，安迪和柏林随家人去看望祖父母，到达后发现祖父健康状况不佳，无法起身。
发展：大人们聊天时，兄弟俩走进森林，回忆起和祖父在森林的欢乐时光，因祖父不能起身而担忧，开始想办法让祖父开心，提出抓鸟又被否定，最终想到做拐杖。
高潮：兄弟俩制作拐杖并将其送给祖父，祖父的反应以及家人的互动将是故事的高潮部分，充满期待。
结局（待续写）：祖父收到拐杖后的后续故事，可能是祖父的身体和精神状态有所改变，或者一家人因此更加珍惜彼此，让故事有一个温暖的收尾。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
祖父健康恶化无法起身，却固执表示自己可以：续写中祖父收到拐杖后，可能会尝试借助拐杖起身，回应他之前的倔强，也展现拐杖对他的帮助。
森林承载着和祖父的美好回忆，祖父曾是智慧探险家：在制作拐杖和送拐杖过程中，兄弟俩会回忆起这些回忆，让情感更加深厚，也能体现森林元素与故事的紧密联系。
祖父爱鸟，兄弟俩想抓鸟又因祖父讨厌关鸟被否定：这一情节凸显祖父对自由的重视，做拐杖也体现了对祖父喜好的尊重，续写中祖父收到拐杖后会因为兄弟俩的用心而感动。
兄弟俩想办法让祖父开心：是整个故事的一个推动点，续写中送拐杖就是他们实现让祖父开心的关键行动，祖父的积极反馈能让兄弟俩的努力得到回应。
祖母在门口迎接，大人们开心聊天：营造了温馨的家庭氛围，续写中送拐杖时家人的互动会延续这种温馨，展现家庭的温暖与亲情的力量。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述兄弟俩制作拐杖的过程，比如如何挑选合适的小树，怎样砍伐、修整，制作过程中遇到的小困难以及如何克服，还可以描述他们的对话和期待祖父收到拐杖的心情。
第二段：着重描写送拐杖时祖父的表情、动作、语言，他的惊喜和感动；家人的反应，如祖母的欣慰、父母的赞扬；以及后续祖父可能的行动，如尝试使用拐杖，最后体现家庭的温暖和亲情的美好。
情感线
起初，兄弟俩去看望祖父母满怀期待与兴奋。看到祖父无法起身，他们的心情转为担忧。在想办法让祖父开心的过程中，从提议抓鸟被否定的失落，到想到做拐杖的兴奋与期待。制作拐杖时，充满认真与专注，期待祖父能喜欢。送拐杖时，紧张又期待，祖父的惊喜与感动让他们感到无比欣慰，一家人的互动让亲情的温暖弥漫，他们更加珍惜彼此。
故事线
暑假到，安迪和柏林随家人去看望祖父母，发现祖父健康恶化无法起身。
大人们聊天时，兄弟俩走进森林，回忆和祖父的欢乐时光，因祖父不能起身而担忧。
兄弟俩想办法让祖父开心，柏林提议抓鸟被安迪否定，安迪想到做拐杖。
兄弟俩开始制作拐杖，挑选小树、砍伐、修整，克服制作过程中的困难。
安迪和柏林将拐杖送给祖父，祖父惊喜感动，家人反应温馨。
祖父可能尝试使用拐杖，一家人更加珍惜彼此，故事以温暖的氛围收尾。
主旨升华句
This simple yet heartfelt gift of the cane not only brought hope and joy to Grandpa but also demonstrated the power of love and thoughtfulness within a family, reminding us that small acts of kindness can have a profound impact.（这根简单却饱含深情的拐杖不仅给祖父带来了希望和喜悦，也展示了家庭中爱与体贴的力量，提醒我们小小的善举能产生深远的影响。）
Through the process of making the cane for Grandpa, Andy and Berlin learned the true meaning of caring for others, and their family bond grew even stronger, highlighting the importance of family values in our lives.（通过为祖父制作拐杖的过程，安迪和柏林学到了关爱他人的真正含义，他们的家庭纽带也更加牢固，凸显了家庭价值观在我们生活中的重要性。）
The gift of the cane symbolized the deep - rooted love and respect the grandsons had for Grandpa, and it became a catalyst for a new chapter of hope and togetherness in their family, showing that love can overcome any obstacle.（拐杖这份礼物象征着孙子们对祖父深深的爱和尊重，它成为了家庭中充满希望与团聚新篇章的催化剂，表明爱可以战胜任何困难。）
This touching moment of presenting the cane to Grandpa not only warmed his heart but also left an indelible mark on the brothers' hearts, teaching them the value of family, empathy, and the beauty of giving, which would stay with them throughout their lives.（给祖父送拐杖的这一感人时刻，不仅温暖了祖父的心，也在兄弟俩心中留下了不可磨灭的印记，教会他们家庭、同理心的价值以及付出的美好，这些将伴随他们一生。）
In the end, the cane became more than just a tool for Grandpa; it was a testament to the unbreakable bond of family and the power of love to heal and inspire, making their family's story a beautiful example of love and care.（最终，拐杖对祖父来说不仅仅是一个工具，它见证了家庭牢不可破的纽带以及爱治愈和鼓舞人心的力量，使他们家庭的故事成为爱与关怀的美好范例。）
写作示范一
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They immediately set out to find the perfect young tree. After a while of searching, they spotted a straight and sturdy one. With a small saw they found in the shed, they carefully cut it down. Then, they used their pocket knives to peel off the bark and smooth the surface. They worked with great care, chatting excitedly about how Grandpa would react when he saw the cane. “He'll be so happy!” Andy exclaimed, his eyes shining with anticipation. After what seemed like a long time, the cane was finally ready.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. His eyes widened in surprise and then filled with tears of joy. “Oh, my dear boys, this is the most wonderful gift I've ever received!” he said, his voice trembling with emotion. Grandma smiled with approval, and Mum and Dad praised the brothers for their thoughtfulness. Grandpa grasped the cane tightly and, with everyone's support, made an attempt to stand up. Slowly but surely, he managed to rise to his feet. A big smile spread across his face, and the brothers felt a sense of pride and happiness like never before. The family gathered around, sharing hugs and laughter, and the love in the room was palpable.
写作示范二
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They rushed around the forest, their eyes scanning every tree. Finally, they found a young tree with just the right thickness and length. Berlin held the tree firmly while Andy started to saw it. It was tough work, and their hands soon ached, but they didn't give up. Once it was cut, they sat on the ground, patiently removing the branches and making the cane comfortable to hold. They even carved a small heart on it, representing their love for Grandpa. As the sun began to set, they finished their masterpiece and hurried back to the house.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. His face lit up with a huge smile, and he reached out to hug the boys. “You two are so clever and kind - hearted. This cane means the world to me,” he said. Mum took a photo of the heartwarming moment. With the cane in hand, Grandpa walked a few steps, albeit slowly. The whole family cheered for him. It was a moment of pure joy and love, and the brothers knew that their efforts had paid off. From that day on, the cane became a symbol of their love for Grandpa and a reminder of the special bond they shared as a family.
【答案】
Berlin thought it was a good idea. With the tools fetched from the backyard, they returned to the forest to search for an appropriate young tree for a cane. Hardly had they selected one when they got started with their BIG PROJECT. Andy, the elder brother, took on the job of cutting it down, while Berlin, who was younger and more creative, was responsible for decoration. Hard as it might seem to them, they never thought about quitting. After what seemed a long time, an elegant and tough cane appeared. Both of them were more than satisfied with their work and couldn’t wait to rush home.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. The instant he saw it, he knew what it was all about. Deeply touched by the grandsons’ gift, he took it with great excitement and tapped it on the ground several times. Obviously, he attempted to stand up with it. With the encouragement of the two brothers, he struggled to get up, slowly walking towards the forest. A cheerful and joyful expression, which Andy and Berlin had expected of Grandpa, flashed on his face. It was at that moment that they literally felt all the efforts to make the cane were all worth it.
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