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Kevin has always adored Halloween. This year, as always, he’d collected everything he needed for his “Halloween masterpiece.” One evening, he took a stroll down the block, noticing how everyone had decorated their houses with glowing pumpkins and ghosts. He was practically glowing with excitement.
But as he walked, something that caught his eye dimmed his smile. One house stood dark and empty. No pumpkins. No cobwebs. Just a bare, lonely porch (门廊). It was Mrs. Kimbly’s house. He told me about it when he got home.
“Mom, Mrs. Kimbly’s house doesn’t have any decorations. I think she needs help.” I told him maybe she didn’t want to decorate this year, but Kevin was certain. “Halloween is supposed to be fun. She shouldn’t have to spend it feeling bad.”
That was my Kevin. His heart was as big as the world. After I said it was okay to check on her, he gathered his decorations, even his favorite carved pumpkin, and went to her house. He decorated her front porch and was super excited until he heard her yell behind him.
“What are you doing here ” she asked.
“I…I just wanted to decorate your house,” he stammered.
“I don’t need any decorations!” she shouted and removed the decorations. “Now go away!”
When Kevin returned home that night, he looked completely defeated. He told me how unhappy Mrs. Kimbly looked. “Maybe she’s really lonely, honey,” I said gently. “Not everyone feels happy during the holidays.”
On Halloween night, he dressed up as a vampire but looked less excited than usual. As we made our way down the street, he couldn’t stop glancing toward Mrs. Kimbly’s house. It was still dark and empty, and I knew he was worried the other kids would see it as a target for tricks.
“Mom, I’m going to stay there,” he said suddenly. “I don’t want anyone to mess with her house.” And that’s just what he did. He took his candy bag and sat down on her porch steps. Whenever kids came up expecting candy, he’d give out some of his own. His candies dwindled quickly, but he stayed put, determined to protect her home.
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out.
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Paragraph 2: “Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered.
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文章大意
凯文一直热爱万圣节，今年他像往常一样准备好一切要打造 “万圣节杰作”。他看到街区大家都精心装饰房屋，却发现金布利夫人的房子漆黑空荡，没有任何装饰。凯文回家后向妈妈表示想帮助金布利夫人装饰房子，妈妈同意后，他带着自己的装饰品，包括最爱的雕刻南瓜去了她家。然而，金布利夫人却冲他大喊，让他离开并拆掉了装饰，凯文十分沮丧。万圣节当晚，凯文扮成吸血鬼出门，却一直担心金布利夫人的房子被其他孩子恶作剧，于是决定留在她家门口守护，还把自己的糖果分给前来要糖的孩子。
故事山分析
开端：凯文热爱万圣节，看到街区的装饰后发现金布利夫人的房子没有装饰，决定帮助她。
发展：凯文去给金布利夫人装饰房子，却遭到她的拒绝和驱赶，凯文心情低落。
高潮：万圣节当晚，凯文守护在金布利夫人的房子前，防止房子被破坏，此时金布利夫人的反应以及事情如何发展成为故事高潮。
结局（待续写）：金布利夫人与凯文之间的互动有新的变化，可能会化解之前的矛盾，两人关系变得融洽，让故事有一个温暖的结局。伏笔以及在续写中的回应
凯文热爱万圣节并精心准备：在后续情节中，凯文对万圣节的热情会影响他守护金布利夫人房子的行为，也可能在与金布利夫人的交流中体现，比如向她介绍万圣节的乐趣。
金布利夫人拒绝凯文的装饰并赶走他：续写中，金布利夫人会对自己之前的行为有所解释或道歉，与凯文的关系发生转变。
妈妈说金布利夫人可能很孤独：这为金布利夫人的行为和后续两人的和解埋下伏笔，金布利夫人可能因为孤独才拒绝装饰，而凯文的守护让她感受到温暖，从而打开心扉。
凯文担心金布利夫人的房子被恶作剧，决定守护：这是故事的关键情节，金布利夫人看到凯文的守护后，会被他的善良打动，做出积极的回应。
凯文把自己的糖果分给要糖的孩子：体现了凯文的善良，金布利夫人可能会因为这一行为对凯文有新的认识，改变对他的态度。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写金布利夫人开门后的场景，她看到凯文后的表情、动作和反应，如惊讶、疑惑；凯文看到她后的表现，是紧张还是坦然；两人之间的对话，金布利夫人询问凯文为什么在这里，凯文真诚地表达自己的想法。
第二段：围绕金布利夫人感谢凯文展开，描述她感谢时的神态、语气；她可能会解释自己之前的行为，比如说明自己孤独的处境，以及凯文的行为如何打动了她；最后两人可能会一起做些什么，如简单装饰房子，或者一起分享剩下的糖果，让故事有一个温馨的收尾。
情感线
起初，凯文对万圣节充满期待，看到金布利夫人房子的状况后，满心热忱想要帮忙。被金布利夫人拒绝驱赶后，他感到沮丧和失落。在万圣节当晚守护房子时，他的心情是担忧和坚定的。当金布利夫人开门出现，他会紧张又期待。听到金布利夫人的感谢，他会感到欣慰和开心，两人关系的转变让他体会到善良的力量，也让他更加珍惜这份人与人之间的温暖。
故事线
凯文热爱万圣节，准备打造 “万圣节杰作”，发现金布利夫人的房子没有装饰，决定帮忙。
凯文去给金布利夫人装饰房子，却被拒绝和驱赶，心情低落。
万圣节当晚，凯文扮成吸血鬼出门，一直担心金布利夫人的房子被恶作剧。
凯文决定留在金布利夫人的房子前守护，还把自己的糖果分给要糖的孩子。
金布利夫人开门出现，与凯文交流，了解他守护的原因。
金布利夫人感谢凯文，解释自己之前的行为，两人关系转变，一起度过一个特别的万圣节。
主旨升华句
Through Kevin's act of kindness, we see that a simple gesture of care can break down the walls of loneliness and transform an unhappy situation into a heartwarming moment of connection.（通过凯文的善举，我们看到一个简单的关怀举动可以打破孤独的壁垒，将不愉快的局面转变为温暖人心的连接时刻。）
This story teaches us that even when faced with rejection, perseverance in doing good can lead to unexpected rewards, as Kevin's determination to protect Mrs. Kimbly's house ultimately melted her heart.（这个故事告诉我们，即使面临拒绝，坚持行善也能带来意想不到的回报，就像凯文守护金布利夫人房子的决心最终融化了她的心。）
Kevin's selfless act on Halloween night not only protected Mrs. Kimbly's house but also became a bridge that linked two hearts, reminding us of the power of kindness to bring people together.（凯文在万圣节当晚的无私行为不仅保护了金布利夫人的房子，还成为连接两颗心的桥梁，提醒我们善良将人们凝聚在一起的力量。）
In the end, the encounter between Kevin and Mrs. Kimbly shows that understanding and empathy can overcome misunderstandings, and that a little love can go a long way in brightening someone's life.（最后，凯文和金布利夫人的相遇表明理解和同理心可以克服误解，一点爱就能在照亮他人生活的道路上走得很远。）
This heartwarming tale serves as a reminder that the true spirit of the holidays lies not in elaborate decorations or treats, but in the kindness and compassion we show to others, just as Kevin did for Mrs. Kimbly.（这个温馨的故事提醒我们，节日的真正精神不在于精心的装饰或美食，而在于我们向他人展示的善良和同情，就像凯文对金布利夫人所做的那样。）
写作示范一
A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out. She stared at Kevin, her eyes wide with surprise. “What are you still doing here, boy ” she asked, her voice a bit softer this time. Kevin stood up, a bit nervous but determined. “I didn't want anyone to play tricks on your house, Mrs. Kimbly. Halloween should be fun for everyone.” Mrs. Kimbly was silent for a moment, looking at the few candies left in Kevin's bag.
“Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered. Her eyes were glistening, and she seemed to be holding back tears. “I've been feeling so alone these days. I didn't mean to be rude to you before. Your kindness really touched me.” Then, she went back inside and brought out some old decorations. “Let's decorate the house together, shall we ” she suggested with a faint smile. Kevin's face lit up, and together they worked to make the porch come alive. As the night went on, their laughter filled the air, making this Halloween a truly special one for both of them.
写作示范二
A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out. She looked at Kevin sitting on the steps, his face a mixture of determination and kindness. “You've been here all this time ” she asked, her tone filled with disbelief. Kevin nodded, his eyes meeting hers. “Yes, ma'am. I just wanted to make sure your house was okay.” Mrs. Kimbly let out a sigh and sat down beside him.
“Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered. “I lost my husband last year, and I just couldn't bring myself to celebrate Halloween. Your thoughtfulness made me realize I'm not alone.” She then pulled out a box of cookies from inside. “I made these earlier. Would you like some ” Kevin grinned and took one. They sat there, sharing cookies and stories. Before long, other neighbors joined them, and the once - dark porch was filled with light and laughter, turning a lonely Halloween into a night of community and warmth.
【答案】 A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out. “Kevin, what are you doing here ” she asked, surprised. Kevin gazed up at her, then down at his almost empty candy bag. “I just didn’t want anyone to mess with your house, Mrs. Kimbly.” he said quietly. Mrs. Kimbly’s face softened. She sat down beside us and took a deep breath. Then she told her story, and Kevin finally knew why she had spent so many years alone. No kids, no grandkids. It didn’t seem worth celebrating anymore. “But you don’t have to be alone,” Kevin smiled. “We are here.” She gave him a small, sad smile, her eyes glistening.
“Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered. “And I’m sorry for removing all the decorations. I shouldn’t have thrown the pumpkin away.” Kevin’s smile was as warm as ever. “It’s okay, Mrs. Kimbly. I have another one at home. I’ll bring it over, and we can carve it together.” Mrs. Kimbly chuckled, and that was a sound I’d never heard from her before. At that point, Kimbly felt emotional thinking what a kind boy Kevin had grown into. He had brought Halloween back to Mrs. Kimbly’s heart through his little acts of kindness.