读后续写--泳池边的 “逆袭”：破雨局，筹希望 讲义-安徽省芜湖市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试卷

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Every year, our swim team runs the Snack Bar at the pool ground to raise funds for covering the costs of swim competitions and equipment. However, during our first summer meeting last month, Coach Abby informed us that the Snack Bar would be closed for repairs until August.
Upon hearing the news, all the team members were worried that without a Snack Bar, we wouldn't have funds, which meant, our swim team might have to be dismissed.
Supposing the worst, everyone was out of spirit. “Take it easy! I'll figure it out. For now, boys, jump into the pool and get swimming!” said Coach Abby, gently comforting us. But none of us were swimming our best, and even though Coach Abby was smiling as usual, it was evident that she was concerned about the situation.
During the break, I proposed exploring alternative approaches for holding a fundraising event. My teammates erupted into a lively conversation. D. J. suggested a karaoke sing-along, while Tamara offered to bring starfish cookies for sale. Manny brought up the idea of games and prizes, while I thought we could run a drink stand.
After a heated discussion, it was decided that each of us would take turns to host the event throughout the week. Coach Abby heartily approved of our plan. My drink stand was scheduled for the last day of the event.
I was so thrilled about the upcoming event that I began my preparations a day ahead. When I was making the drinks, I noticed a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That's not a rain cloud, is it ” I asked my mom, feeling a bit anxious. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.”
“You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.”
Then came the big day. Coach Abby helped me set up the drink stand and the teammates called out loudly to get everyone together at the pool ground. I hid a big box under the table and nobody knew what was inside. Everything was going smoothly as we wished.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement.
文章大意
每年，“我们” 的游泳队都会在泳池边经营小吃摊，为游泳比赛和设备筹集资金。但上个月，教练艾比告知大家小吃摊因维修将关闭至八月，这让队员们担心游泳队会因资金不足而解散。队员们讨论后决定轮流举办筹款活动，“我” 负责最后一天的饮料摊。活动前一天准备时，“我” 看到乌云，担心下雨会破坏活动。活动当天，一切顺利进行，教练艾比帮忙布置摊位，队友们也积极宣传。
故事山分析
开端：游泳队的小吃摊因维修关闭，面临资金短缺，队员们担心队伍解散。
发展：队员们讨论并决定轮流举办筹款活动，“我” 负责最后一天的饮料摊，活动前 “我” 看到乌云担心下雨。
高潮：活动当天顺利进行，但乌云聚集，面临下雨的危机。
结局（待续写）：解决下雨带来的问题，成功完成筹款，体现团队的智慧和凝聚力，游泳队得以继续发展。
五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应
小吃摊关闭，游泳队面临资金困境：续写中会通过大家举办的筹款活动来解决资金问题，体现队员们的努力和团队精神，比如成功筹到足够资金，让游泳队能继续参加比赛和购置设备。
“我” 看到乌云担心下雨：与续写第一段中乌云聚集相呼应，引发下雨的危机，后续围绕如何应对下雨展开，如转移活动场地或采取防雨措施。
队员们讨论并各自提出筹款活动建议：在续写中，大家的建议都得到实施，且在应对危机时发挥作用，如利用曼尼提出的游戏和奖品，在室内继续进行活动吸引大家参与。
“我” 藏了一个大箱子，没人知道里面是什么：在应对下雨危机时，箱子里的东西发挥关键作用，可能是雨具、备用的娱乐道具等，帮助大家解决困难。
教练艾比鼓励大家并支持活动计划：在危机时刻，教练艾比会继续发挥领导作用，安抚队员情绪，带领大家解决问题，如在下雨时组织大家转移场地，维持活动秩序。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述乌云聚集后下雨的情景，大家的反应，如队员们的焦急、顾客的慌乱；“我” 如何利用藏着的箱子里的东西应对危机，可能是拿出雨具分发给大家，或者是一些室内活动道具，转移活动到室内。
第二段：着重描写教练艾比宣布的内容，可能是成功筹到资金，或者是活动圆满结束，大家的反应，如欢呼雀跃、相互拥抱；最后升华主题，强调团队合作和面对困难不放弃的精神。
情感线
起初，队员们因小吃摊关闭担心游泳队解散，情绪低落。讨论出筹款活动计划后，大家充满期待。“我” 准备饮料摊时看到乌云，开始焦虑。活动当天顺利时大家兴奋，乌云聚集时又转为紧张和担忧。下雨危机时，大家焦急不安。最后教练宣布好消息，大家的情绪从低谷瞬间转为激动和喜悦，深刻感受到团队合作克服困难的力量。
故事线
游泳队小吃摊关闭，面临资金困境，可能解散。
队员们讨论并决定轮流举办筹款活动，“我” 负责饮料摊。
“我” 准备时看到乌云，担心下雨。
活动当天顺利进行，但乌云聚集，开始下雨。
“我” 利用藏着的箱子里的东西应对危机。
教练艾比宣布好消息，活动成功，体现团队精神。
主旨升华句
This experience taught us that when faced with challenges, unity and creativity within a team can turn the most difficult situations around, leading to unexpected success.（这次经历告诉我们，当面临挑战时，团队的团结和创造力可以扭转最困难的局面，带来意想不到的成功。）
Through the process of dealing with the rain - threat and the fundraising difficulties, we learned the true meaning of perseverance and cooperation, which will surely benefit us in all aspects of life.（通过应对下雨威胁和筹款困难的过程，我们学到了坚持和合作的真正含义，这无疑将在生活的各个方面使我们受益。）
Our journey to save the swim team from disbanding not only secured our future in swimming but also strengthened the bond among us, proving that together, we can overcome any obstacle.（我们拯救游泳队免于解散的历程，不仅确保了我们在游泳方面的未来，还加强了我们之间的联系，证明了只要团结一心，我们就能克服任何障碍。）
In the face of the potential cancellation of the swim team due to lack of funds and the unexpected rain, our unwavering efforts and teamwork showed that hope always exists as long as we stand together.（面对游泳队因资金短缺可能取消以及意外降雨，我们坚定不移的努力和团队合作表明，只要我们团结一致，希望就永远存在。）
This story of our swim team's fundraising adventure is a vivid illustration of how a group of people with a common goal, when confronted with difficulties, can work hand in hand to create a bright future, full of hope and achievements.（我们游泳队这次筹款经历生动地说明了，一群有着共同目标的人，在面对困难时，能够携手合作，创造一个充满希望和成就的光明未来。）
写作示范一
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Before long, raindrops began to patter down. The customers at the pool ground were in a panic, and my teammates looked at me anxiously. I quickly opened the big box under the table. To everyone's surprise, it was filled with colorful umbrellas and raincoats. We handed them out to the customers, and with Coach Abby's help, we managed to move the drink stand and some of the game facilities indoors. The event continued, and people were still enjoying the drinks, snacks, and games.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Guys, we've reached our fundraising goal!” she shouted. Everyone cheered and hugged each other tightly. The rain couldn't dampen our spirits. We realized that with unity and quick thinking, we could overcome any obstacle. This experience not only saved our swim team but also made our bond as a team much stronger. We knew that no matter what challenges lay ahead, we could face them together with courage and determination.
写作示范二
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Soon, a heavy downpour hit. The pool ground turned into a wet mess, and the lively atmosphere was on the verge of collapse. But I didn't panic. I opened the box, which was filled with board games and some indoor decorations. We quickly set up an indoor activity area. My teammates called on the customers to come inside. Although the original plan was disrupted, the new indoor event attracted even more people with its cozy and novel atmosphere.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Thanks to everyone's efforts, we've raised enough money for this season's competitions and equipment!” The whole team erupted into wild cheers. We were overjoyed that our hard work paid off. This rainy - day experience taught us the importance of flexibility and cooperation. It was a memorable moment that would always remind us of the power of a united team in the face of adversity.
参考范文
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Dark clouds loomed overhead, and a gust of wind blew, making the situation look more and more dire. The customers at the pool ground looked around nervously, and my teammates' smiles faded away. Just as the first heavy raindrops splashed down, I opened the mysterious box. Inside were large plastic sheets and some rope. With the help of my teammates, we quickly set up a big makeshift tent over the drink stand. Some of the other team members used the remaining plastic sheets to cover the game areas. The rain was pouring, but our event was still going on under the protection of the tent.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Hey, everyone! Counting all the money we've raised today and in the past few days, we've got enough funds for the swim team this year!” The moment we heard the news, all the worries and fatigue were washed away by joy. We jumped up and down, screaming and hugging each other. This challenging experience taught us that no matter how tough the situation is, as long as we work together and don't give up, we can achieve our goals. From then on, our swim team became even more united and confident, ready to face any future challenges.