应用文写作邮件分享--沪上之行：邂逅传统与现代交织之美 讲义-江苏省泰州市2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

应用文写作
假设你是李华，刚从上海旅游回来。请给你的英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享此次经历，内容包括：
1.旅行经历；
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris, Yours sincerely, Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段：开头先问候 Chris，引出刚结束上海之旅，迫不及待分享。
第二段：详细描述旅行经历，如参观东方明珠、外滩、豫园等景点。
第三段：表达旅行感受，阐述上海之旅带来的收获，期待 Chris 回信。
语言积累
I was deeply impressed by... 我对…… 印象深刻。
offer a panoramic view of 提供…… 的全景
be fascinated by 被…… 迷住
blend of A and B A 和 B 的融合
broaden one's horizons 开阔某人的视野
cultural immersion 文化沉浸
can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
iconic building 标志性建筑
historical architecture 历史建筑
experience the charm of 体验…… 的魅力
佳句积累
Shanghai, a city that never sleeps, seamlessly weaves together the threads of the past and the present, creating a tapestry of culture and innovation that is both captivating and inspiring.（上海，一座不夜城，将过去与现在的脉络无缝交织，织就出一幅既迷人又鼓舞人心的文化与创新画卷。）
The moment I stepped onto the Bund, the symphony of historical architecture and contemporary skyscrapers serenaded my senses, painting a vivid picture of Shanghai's glorious past and its soaring future.（当我踏上外滩的那一刻，历史建筑与现代摩天大楼的交响乐奏响在我的感官中，生动地描绘出上海辉煌的过去和蓬勃的未来。）
Wandering through the ancient alleys of Yu Garden, I was transported back in time, surrounded by the delicate beauty of traditional Chinese architecture and the gentle whispers of centuries - old stories.（漫步在豫园的古巷中，我仿佛穿越时空，被中国传统建筑的精致之美和古老故事的轻声细语所环绕。）
Shanghai Disneyland, a wonderland of joy and magic, not only offered me thrilling rides and spectacular shows but also kindled the childlike wonder within me, making my trip an unforgettable adventure.（上海迪士尼乐园，一个充满欢乐与魔法的仙境，不仅为我提供了刺激的游乐设施和精彩的表演，还点燃了我内心的童真，让我的旅程成为一次难忘的冒险。）
The maglev train, a marvel of modern engineering, whisked me through the cityscape at lightning speed, giving me a taste of Shanghai's cutting - edge technology and its unwavering pursuit of progress.（磁悬浮列车，现代工程的奇迹，以闪电般的速度带我穿梭在城市景观中，让我领略到上海的尖端技术和对进步的不懈追求 。）
写作示范一
Dear Chris,
How's everything going I'm writing to share my recent trip to Shanghai with you.
Upon arriving in Shanghai, I first went to the Oriental Pearl Tower. Standing at the top, I was stunned by the magnificent cityscape. The bustling streets and the glittering lights made the city look like a wonderland. Then I walked along Nanjing Road, where I indulged in shopping and tasted various local snacks. The Yu Garden was another highlight. The delicate rockeries and the clear ponds created a peaceful and elegant atmosphere.
This trip to Shanghai was truly unforgettable. It made me realize the vitality and diversity of this metropolis. I'm eager to hear about your travels too.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Chris,
Hope everything is fine with you. I'm excited to tell you about my wonderful journey in Shanghai.
During my time there, I visited the Bund in the evening. The contrast between the old - style buildings and the modern skyscrapers on the opposite side of the Huangpu River was really striking. I also took a ride on the maglev train, which was an extremely thrilling experience. Besides, I spent a whole day at the Shanghai Disneyland, enjoying the exciting rides and the lovely shows.
This trip not only brought me a lot of fun but also let me see the dynamic development of Shanghai. I sincerely hope you can visit this amazing city someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Chris,
I haven't heard from you for a while. I just got back from Shanghai and want to share my wonderful time there with you.
I started my trip by exploring the Shanghai Museum, where I was able to admire a large collection of precious cultural relics. Then I headed to the Jin Mao Tower. The observation deck on the top gave me a bird's - eye view of the entire city. In addition, I took a stroll in the Xintiandi area, which combined old - fashioned Shikumen houses with modern bars and restaurants.
This trip to Shanghai was a remarkable experience. It deepened my affection for this vibrant city. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Chris,
How is everything going I am writing to share with you my recent travelling experience of visiting Shanghai, a city that truly touched my heart.
I started my journey at the Bund, appreciating the breathtaking views of the modem skyline, with its towering skyscrapers reflected in the Huangpu River. Afterwards, I wandered along Nanjing Road, doing some souvenir shopping and enjoying the delicious local snacks.
The vitality of this modem city has left a deep impression on me. Warmly welcome you to this charming city.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua