专题18应用文写作之建议信
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透（考点归纳，写作模版，考点练透+真题模拟）
考点归纳
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力，内容通常包括：
1.说明写信目的;
2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;
3.表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
必用短语
1.给某人提建议 _____________________________________
2.向某人征求意见 _____________________________________
3.听从某人的建议 _____________________________________
4.认为……有用 _____________________________________
5.保持身体健康 _______________________________________
6.保持均衡饮食 _______________________________________
7.节食 _____________________________________
8.减肥 _____________________________________
9.增肥 _____________________________________
10.不吃早餐 _____________________________________
11.食品安全 _____________________________________
12.注重食品质量 _____________________________________
13.远离垃圾食品 _____________________________________
14.养成健康的饮食习惯 _____________________________________
15.有害于 _____________________________________
16.有利于 _____________________________________
17.增进健康/增加体力 _____________________________________
18.过着健康的生活 _____________________________________
19.保持乐观的生活态度 _____________________________________
20.导致/引起 _____________________________________
21.遭受粮食短缺_____________________________________
22.发起光盘行动_____________________________________
23.保持对食品安全的危机感_____________________________________
24.打包剩饭菜_____________________________________
必用句式
1.很高兴收到你的来信，征求我对如何保持健康的建议。
___________________________________________________________________
2.为了方便，有些人选择吃快餐而不是均衡的饮食。
___________________________________________________________________
3.只有养成良好的饮食习惯，我们才能享有健康。
___________________________________________________________________
4.是我们远离垃圾食品，过上健康生活的时候了。
___________________________________________________________________
5.当地政府需要加强管理和提高市民关于食品安全的意识。
___________________________________________________________________
6.在餐桌上，等待家里的老人开始用餐是合适的。
___________________________________________________________________
7.我们应该强调节约粮食是很重要的。
___________________________________________________________________
8.小行为有大作用。只有大家共同努力，珍惜每一粒粮食，才能减少粮食浪费。
___________________________________________________________________
建议信模板
Dear ________,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in________.(面临的困难) I’m writing give you some of my suggestions.
Initially, you’d better _______. (建议一)Besides, it would be a great idea to _______, （建议二）because_______.（建议的原因） In addition, if I were you, I would ____. （建议三）I firmly believe that_____.（相信能够克服困难）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Yours,
XX
凤头好句：I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ____(建议的主题). Here are a few suggestions to help you.
建议句型总汇
It’s better to do sth. 做某事比较好 It’s best to do sth. 做某事最好
You’d better (not) do sth. 你最好(别)做某事
You should / could do sth “你应该（可以） 做……”
be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
It’s a good idea to do sth. 做某事是个好主意
It's a good way to do sth. ...是做某事的好方法
You can do sports with your friends aftter class, which is a good way to relax yourself.
suggest v. 建议 （名词：suggestion ）可数名词
Let me give you some suggestions.
suggest sth. 建议、、、
He suggested a trip to the countryside.
suggest doing sth. 建议做某事
He suggested going out for a walk.
suggest that sb should do sth. 建议某人做某事
advise vi./vt. 建议/劝告
1. advise doing sth 建议做某事
2. advise sb to do sth 建议某人做某事
3. advise +that从句，（从句中的谓语动词用“should+动词原形”）
建议...
He advised waiting till the right time.
I advise you to do some sports after class.
She advised that he should sell the house.
advice n. (不可数)建议/劝告
a piece of advice 一条建议 two pieces of advice 两条建议
征求某人的意见ask sb for advice/turn to sb for advice
给某人一些意见give sb some advice / give some advice to sb
采纳某人的意见accept/take one’s advice /follow one's advice
Let me give you some advice.
I hope you can take my advice.
考点练透
高考模拟
（一）
（2024·广东江门·二模）假定你是李华，是你们班的英语课代表，班上部分同学向你反馈在听外教 Chris全英授课时存在困难，请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
（二）
（2024·浙江嘉兴·一模）假定你是李华，你校承办的国际夏令营计划开展体育嘉年华活动(SportsCarnival)，现向学生征集趣味运动项目。请你给负责人 David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提议一个项目；
2. 阐述实施方案。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）
（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign)录取了，但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 表示理解；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（四）
（2025·河南安阳·一模）假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下：
1.你对该杂志的看法；
2.提出你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（五）
（2024·江苏徐州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国好友Mike在邮件中提到他最近在学校里时常感到自卑，觉得自己没有其他同学酷，请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和鼓励；
2. 给出建议及理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（六）
（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
要点：1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
（七）
（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Smith准备让学生每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络，你认为这样的做法存在问题。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（八）
（2024·安徽·模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华。你的英国好友Brian给你发邮件，想和你讨论如何处理日常生活中电子垃圾的问题，请你用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的做法。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已经给你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：电子垃圾electronic waste
Dear Brian,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
（九）
（2025·甘肃张掖·模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Tom对体育健身很感兴趣，他来信询问你如何平衡学业和锻炼以保持健康。请你给他写一封回信，谈谈你的做法和建议。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（十）
（2024·福建福州·一模）假定设你是李华，你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信，发表自己的看法。内容包括：
1. 分析原因；
2. 提出解决办法。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（十一）
（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Adele计划拍短视频向她的亲友介绍你们的校园生活，为此征求你的建议，请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐拍摄内容：
2. 陈述推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adele,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（十二）
（2024·山东聊城·二模）假定你是李华，得知你校的新西兰交换生David打算学习中国传统乐器二胡，但又担心会影响自己其他课程的学习。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.给出建议；
3.表达愿望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（十三）
（2024·湖南怀化·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack正在策划一次“了解中国茶文化”活动，他发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复，就活动内容提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（十四）
（2024·广东东莞·三模）假定你是李华，正在参加一个文化交流营（Cultural Exchange Camp），因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧，如室友经常在晚上举办派对。向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰，内容包括：
1. 描述情况；
2. 个人建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Committee Office,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（十五）
（2024·山西运城·二模）假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一种活动形式；
2. 说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
高考真题
（一）
（2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
（2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
（三）
（2023·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（四）
（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
（五）
（2012·四川·高考真题）假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1. 对英语学习的认识；
2. 自己目前的英语水平；
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
Thank you!
Li Hua
（六）
（2013·四川·高考真题）
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. ._________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
（七）
（2010·江苏·高考真题） 假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
自己英语学习的情况 1.英语学习的目的
2.英语学习的方法
3.课外自学的途径
……….
对学校英语教学的建议 （请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teacher and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
（八）
（2015·四川·高考真题）假如你是李夏，你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm.
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（九）
（2018·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua专题18应用文写作之建议信
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透（考点归纳，写作模版，考点练透+真题模拟）
考点归纳
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力，内容通常包括：
1.说明写信目的;
2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;
3.表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
必用短语
1.给某人提建议 _____________________________________
2.向某人征求意见 _____________________________________
3.听从某人的建议 _____________________________________
4.认为……有用 _____________________________________
5.保持身体健康 _______________________________________
6.保持均衡饮食 _______________________________________
7.节食 _____________________________________
8.减肥 _____________________________________
9.增肥 _____________________________________
10.不吃早餐 _____________________________________
11.食品安全 _____________________________________
12.注重食品质量 _____________________________________
13.远离垃圾食品 _____________________________________
14.养成健康的饮食习惯 _____________________________________
15.有害于 _____________________________________
16.有利于 _____________________________________
17.增进健康/增加体力 _____________________________________
18.过着健康的生活 _____________________________________
19.保持乐观的生活态度 _____________________________________
20.导致/引起 _____________________________________
21.遭受粮食短缺_____________________________________
22.发起光盘行动_____________________________________
23.保持对食品安全的危机感_____________________________________
24.打包剩饭菜_____________________________________
答案
1.give sb some advice (on)
2.ask sb for advice
3.follow one’s advice
4.find…helpful/useful/beneficial
5.keep fit / healthy/ in good health
6.keep a balanced diet
7.go / be on a diet
8.lose/take off/reduce weight
9.put on/gain weight
10.skip breakfast
11.food safety /food security
12.attach importance to food quality
13.stay away from junk food
14.develop / form healthy eating habits
15.do harm to /be harmful to
16.benefit /be beneficial to /do good to
17.build up one’s health／strength
18.live /lead a healthy life
19.keep an optimistic attitude towards life
20.lead to /result in / bring about /cause
21.suffer from food shortage
22.launch “Clean Plate Campaign”
23.maintain a sense of crisis about food security
24.pack leftovers
必用句式
1.很高兴收到你的来信，征求我对如何保持健康的建议。
___________________________________________________________________
2.为了方便，有些人选择吃快餐而不是均衡的饮食。
___________________________________________________________________
3.只有养成良好的饮食习惯，我们才能享有健康。
___________________________________________________________________
4.是我们远离垃圾食品，过上健康生活的时候了。
___________________________________________________________________
5.当地政府需要加强管理和提高市民关于食品安全的意识。
___________________________________________________________________
6.在餐桌上，等待家里的老人开始用餐是合适的。
___________________________________________________________________
7.我们应该强调节约粮食是很重要的。
___________________________________________________________________
8.小行为有大作用。只有大家共同努力，珍惜每一粒粮食，才能减少粮食浪费。
___________________________________________________________________
答案
1.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to keep healthy.
2.For convenience, some people choose to have fast food instead of a balanced diet.
3.Only when we form a good eating habit can we enjoy good health.
4.The best way to stay healthy is to take exercise regularly.
5.The local government needs to strengthen the management and raise the awareness of food safety among all the citizens.
6.At the dinner table, it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating.
7.It can’t be stressed enough that saving food is of vital significance.
8.Small act makes a big difference. Only if we make joint efforts and cherish every grain can we cut food waste .
建议信模板
Dear ________,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in________.(面临的困难) I’m writing give you some of my suggestions.
Initially, you’d better _______. (建议一)Besides, it would be a great idea to _______, （建议二）because_______.（建议的原因） In addition, if I were you, I would ____. （建议三）I firmly believe that_____.（相信能够克服困难）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Yours,
XX
凤头好句：I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ____(建议的主题). Here are a few suggestions to help you.
建议句型总汇
It’s better to do sth. 做某事比较好 It’s best to do sth. 做某事最好
You’d better (not) do sth. 你最好(别)做某事
You should / could do sth “你应该（可以） 做……”
be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
It’s a good idea to do sth. 做某事是个好主意
It's a good way to do sth. ...是做某事的好方法
You can do sports with your friends aftter class, which is a good way to relax yourself.
suggest v. 建议 （名词：suggestion ）可数名词
Let me give you some suggestions.
suggest sth. 建议、、、
He suggested a trip to the countryside.
suggest doing sth. 建议做某事
He suggested going out for a walk.
suggest that sb should do sth. 建议某人做某事
advise vi./vt. 建议/劝告
1. advise doing sth 建议做某事
2. advise sb to do sth 建议某人做某事
3. advise +that从句，（从句中的谓语动词用“should+动词原形”）
建议...
He advised waiting till the right time.
I advise you to do some sports after class.
She advised that he should sell the house.
advice n. (不可数)建议/劝告
a piece of advice 一条建议 two pieces of advice 两条建议
征求某人的意见ask sb for advice/turn to sb for advice
给某人一些意见give sb some advice / give some advice to sb
采纳某人的意见accept/take one’s advice /follow one's advice
Let me give you some advice.
I hope you can take my advice.
考点练透
高考模拟
（一）
（2024·广东江门·二模）假定你是李华，是你们班的英语课代表，班上部分同学向你反馈在听外教 Chris全英授课时存在困难，请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing to tell you about some problems that some classmates are facing.
Some of my classmates have difficulty understanding your lessons because you speak English throughout the class. They are not used to this pure English teaching environment and find it hard to catch up with your pace. They suggest that you speak a little slower and explain some difficult words or expressions. Also, it would be great if you could give more examples and visual aids to help us better understand the content.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信，向其说明同学们反馈的Chris全英授课时存在的困难并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难：have difficulty (in) doing→ have trouble (in) doing
建议：suggest→ advise
极棒的：great→ wonderful
有帮助的：be helpful→ be of help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They are not used to this pure English teaching environment and find it hard to catch up with your pace.
拓展句：Since they are not used to this pure English teaching environment, they find it hard to catch up with your pace.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you about some problems that some classmates are facing.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Some of my classmates have difficulty understanding your lessons because you speak English throughout the class.（运用了because引导的状语从句）
（二）
（2024·浙江嘉兴·一模）假定你是李华，你校承办的国际夏令营计划开展体育嘉年华活动(SportsCarnival)，现向学生征集趣味运动项目。请你给负责人 David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提议一个项目；
2. 阐述实施方案。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’d like to propose organizing a water balloon fight during our Sports Carnival. It combines fun with physical activity and is refreshing for the campers to enjoy.
To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, ideally consisting of 5-10 members each. Each team starts with an equal number of water balloons. Players can only throw balloons at opponents within the designated area. Once a player is hit by a water balloon, they must exit the game. The last team with players remaining will be declared the winner.
I believe it will be a highlight of the carnival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就学校国际夏令营计划开展的体育嘉年华活动向负责人David提议一个趣味运动项目，并详细阐述实施方案。
【详解】词汇积累
提议：propose → suggest/recommend
实施：carry out → implement/execute
宣布：declare → announce
组成：consist of→be composed of
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, ideally consisting of 5-10 members each.
拓展句：To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, which ideally consist of 5-10 members each.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, ideally consisting of 5-10 member s each.(运用了不定式作目的状语would like to do sth.表示“想要做某事”的句型)
[高分句型2] Once a player is hit by a water balloon, they must exit the game.(运用了连词once引导的时间状语从句状语)
[高分句型3] I believe it will be a highlight of the carnival!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
（三）
（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign)录取了，但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 表示理解；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
I’m so happy to hear that you’ve been admitted to University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign. Congratulations!
I understand your nervousness about the upcoming college life as it’s a new chapter with many unknowns. But don’t worry too much. Here are some suggestions for you. Try to get familiar with the campus and its facilities before you start. Besides, make a study plan to manage your time well. And don’t hesitate to join various clubs and activities to make new friends.
I am sure you will adapt to your new life soon by following the suggestions above.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的朋友Daniel对未来的大学生活感到紧张这事给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表达祝贺、表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
焦虑：nervousness→anxiety
很多：many→plenty of
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Besides, make a study plan to manage your time well.
拓展句： Besides, it is advisable that you should make a study plan to manage your time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m so happy to hear that you’ve been admitted to University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I understand your nervousness about the upcoming college life as it’s a new chapter with many unknowns. （运用了as引导原因状语从句）
（四）
（2025·河南安阳·一模）假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下：
1.你对该杂志的看法；
2.提出你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, your regular reader. Your magazine is truly wonderful, as it provides various valuable learning materials and interesting articles, and helps me a lot with my English study. For some further improvement, I’d like to share the following suggestions.
Personally, it would get better to cover some extended readings related to our textbooks, which will surely assist us to be better equipped for our English studies. What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently.
I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your magazine will become even more popular.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请考生给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
交流：communicate→interact
建议：suggestion→advice
提高：improvement→promotion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For some further improvement, I’d like to share the following suggestions.
拓展句：For some further improvement, I’d like to share the following suggestions that are of help to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Personally, it would get better to cover some extended readings related to our textbooks, which will surely assist us to be better equipped for our English studies. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently. (运用了what引导主语从句)
（五）
（2024·江苏徐州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国好友Mike在邮件中提到他最近在学校里时常感到自卑，觉得自己没有其他同学酷，请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和鼓励；
2. 给出建议及理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel this way. I understand your feelings.
First of all, you should know that everyone is unique and has their own charm. Don’t compare yourself with others. Focus on your strengths and skills. For example, if you are good at playing basketball, join the basketball team and show your talent. Also, try to make some positive changes in your appearance or behavior that make you feel confident.
I believe you can overcome this feeling.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国好友Mike回一封邮件，就他现在的问题给一些建议。内容包括：表示理解和鼓励以及给出建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先： first of all→ to begin with
应该： should→be supposed to
集中注意力于：focus on→ concentrate on
例如：for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Don’t compare yourself with others.
拓展句： It is advisable that you should not compare yourself with others.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, you should know that everyone is unique and has their own charm. （运用that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Also, try to make some positive changes in your appearance or behavior that make you feel confident.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
（六）
（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
要点：1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles,
How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! Given your enthusiasm for Chinese culture, I suggest the design and decoration of your room embracing Chinese style with elegance.
From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. Additionally, use colors of red, gold and black, associated with Chinese culture, their richness enhancing the warmth of your space. There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space.
Were it possible, you could combine these elements to create a room reflecting your personal taste. I am sure your creation will be a masterpiece, a perfect blend of China and the foreign countries.
Eager to see the fruit of your endeavor!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同龄朋友Charles写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→joyful
热情：enthusiasm→passion
优雅：elegance→grace
此外：additionally→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：How delighted I am to hear about your new removal!
拓展句：How delighted I am when I hear about your new removal!
【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. (运用了not only位于句首的倒装句式和独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
（七）
（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Smith准备让学生每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络，你认为这样的做法存在问题。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1. I really appreciate your planning to have us practice writing weekly. However, it’s unwise to stop us from turning to the Internet.
My reasons are as follows. The Internet is an inseparable part of our life. Firstly, we can have quick access to abundant information, enriching our relevant knowledge. Secondly, online innovative ways of writing are there for our taking. We shouldn’t give up eating for fear of choking. Above all, students can resolve doubts in real time whenever in trouble.
My suggestion is to use it wisely and responsibly. Only in this way can our writing be facilitated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给外教Smith写一封邮件，向他反映每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络的做法的问题，并给出个人的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不明智的：unwise→inadvisable, ill-considered
阻止某人做某事：stop sb from doing→prevent sb from doing, keep sb from doing
放弃：give up→quit, abandon
解决：resolve→work out, solve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to use it wisely and responsibly.
拓展句：I suggest that we should use it wisely and responsibly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, we can have quick access to abundant information, enriching our relevant knowledge. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can our writing be facilitated. (运用了“only+介词短语”置于句首引起的部分倒装)
（八）
（2024·安徽·模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华。你的英国好友Brian给你发邮件，想和你讨论如何处理日常生活中电子垃圾的问题，请你用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的做法。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已经给你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：电子垃圾electronic waste
Dear Brian,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brian,
Thank you for bringing up the important issue of electronic waste in our daily lives. In my opinion, one effective way to handle this problem is by practicing responsible consumption. This includes buying durable products, repairing them when possible, and properly recycling or disposing of them when they reach the end of their lifespan.
Personally, I make an effort to reduce electronic waste by donating or selling my old devices instead of throwing them away, and I always recycle electronic items through designated e-waste recycling programs. Additionally, I encourage my friends and family to do the same, spread ing awareness about the importance of environmental sustainability.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国好友Brian给考生发邮件，想和考生讨论如何处理日常生活中电子垃圾的问题，要求考生按照要求用英语给他写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→ significant
问题：issue→ problem
有效的：effective→ valid
处理：handle→ deal with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In my opinion, one effective way to handle this problem is by practicing responsible consumption.
拓展句：In my opinion, practicing responsible consumption is one effective way to handle this problem.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you for bringing up the important issue of electronic waste in our daily lives.（运用了动名词bringing作宾语）
【高分句型2】In my opinion, one effective way to handle this problem is by practicing responsible consumption.（运用了不定式to handle作定语、动名词practicing作宾语）
（九）
（2025·甘肃张掖·模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Tom对体育健身很感兴趣，他来信询问你如何平衡学业和锻炼以保持健康。请你给他写一封回信，谈谈你的做法和建议。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
It is important for us to balance study and exercise to keep healthy. First of all, I think it is important to manage my time well. I can allocate my time properly and combine work and rest. Secondly, it is important to choose the right kind of exercise, choose some moderate exercise and make you not too tired, such as badminton and walking. Thirdly, when I am tired of learning, I will get up and exercise to provide more energy for my brain.
I hope that my suggestions and experience will be of help to you.
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国朋友Tom对体育健身很感兴趣，他来信询问你如何平衡学业和锻炼以保持健康。要求考生给他写一封回信，谈谈平衡学业和锻炼的做法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
认为：think→figure
选择：choose→select
疲惫的：tired→exhausted
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Secondly, it is important to choose the right kind of exercise, choose some moderate exercise and make you not too tired, such as badminton and walking.
拓展句：Secondly, it is important that we choose the right kind of exercise, choose some moderate exercise and make you not too tired, such as badminton and walking.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thirdly, when I am tired of learning, I will get up and exercise to provide more energy for my brain.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope that my suggestions and experience will be of help to you.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
（十）
（2024·福建福州·一模）假定设你是李华，你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信，发表自己的看法。内容包括：
1. 分析原因；
2. 提出解决办法。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I am writing to share my thoughts on the phenomenon that many of us are hesitant to ask questions and lack of awareness in asking questions during English class.
The reasons are as follows. Some students may be afraid of being judged or criticized for asking questions. Additionally, our education system often emphasizes memorization and test-taking, rather than critical thinking and inquiry.
I think creating a more supportive and encouraging learning environment could help boost our confidence in asking questions. Organizing more interactive activities is also of equal significance. I’m confident that we can overcome this challenge under your guidance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给Chris写一封信，发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
害怕：be afraid of→fear
强调：emphasize→stress
重要：significance→importance
克服：overcome→conquer
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m confident that we can overcome this challenge under your guidance.
拓展句：If you could offer some guidance, I’m confident that we can overcome this challenge.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on the phenomenon that many of us are hesitant to ask questions and lack of awareness in asking questions during English class. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] I think creating a more supportive and encouraging learning environment could help boost our confidence in asking questions. (运用了动名词作主语)
（十一）
（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Adele计划拍短视频向她的亲友介绍你们的校园生活，为此征求你的建议，请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐拍摄内容：
2. 陈述推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adele,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Adele,
I’m writing to provide you with some suggestions for filming our campus life. As a foreign teacher, I believe your video will be a great way to introduce our school to your friends.
Firstly, I would recommend that you film some of our classrooms and labs, which will give your viewers a sense of high-quality education we offer here. Secondly, you should capture some of the beautiful landscaping on campus and give your friends a sense of the serene environment we enjoy here. Last but not least, please film some of our students and teachers at work or play to showcase the friendly atmosphere.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Adele写信，就她计划拍短视频的事提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth.
首先：firstly→to begin with
应该：should→be supposed to
展示：showcase→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to provide you with some suggestions for filming our campus life.
拓展句：I’m writing to provide you with some suggestions which are related to filming our campus life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Firstly, I would recommend that you film some of our classrooms and labs, which will give your viewers a sense of high-quality education we offer here.（运用了that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Last but not least, please film some of our students and teachers at work or play to showcase the friendly atmosphere.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）
（十二）
（2024·山东聊城·二模）假定你是李华，得知你校的新西兰交换生David打算学习中国传统乐器二胡，但又担心会影响自己其他课程的学习。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.给出建议；
3.表达愿望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’m thrilled to hear that you want to learn the erhu, a traditional Chinese instrument. I fully support your decision. Learning the erhu not only enriches your cultural experience but also enhances your musical skills.
To balance your time, I suggest you create a schedule that allows adequate practice without compromising your academic work. You could also join a club or find a tutor who can help you learn more effectively.
I hope you enjoy learning the erhu and it brings you closer to Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信，要求考生给新西兰交换生 David 写一封邮件，就他打算学习中国传统乐器二胡表示支持，并给出一些建议，最后表达愿望。
【详解】词汇积累
支持：support → in favor of
建议：suggest→ advise
足够的：adequate→enough
帮助：help→assist
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I fully support your decision.
拓展句：I firmly stand by your decision.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] I’m thrilled to hear that you want to learn the erhu, a traditional Chinese instrument. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] To balance your time, I suggest you create a schedule that allows adequate practice without compromising your academic work. (运用了不定式作目的状语和以schedule 为先行词、关系代词that引导的定语从句)
（十三）
（2024·湖南怀化·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack正在策划一次“了解中国茶文化”活动，他发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复，就活动内容提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack.
Learning that you are planning an activity named “Understanding Chinese Tea Culture”, I’m writing to offer you some advice.
As for the content, I highly recommend a Chinese tea culture exhibition, where varieties of tea from different regions of China can be displayed so that visitors can gain a further insight into the history of Chinese tea culture. It’s necessary to hold a tea art performance, during which visitors can be given an opportunity to experience the tea-making process and taste different types of tea. Thus, they are bound to better understand Chinese tea culture.
I hope these suggestions are helpful. If you prefer to know more, please don’t hesitate to let me know. May your activity be successful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信，要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Jack回复关于“了解中国茶文化”活动的建议。
【详解】词汇积累
建议：advice→ recommendation
举办：hold→ organize
机会：opportunity→ chance
成功的：successful→ fruitful
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I hope these suggestions are helpful.
拓展句：I sincerely hope that these recommendations prove to be beneficial.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Learning that you are planning an activity named “Understanding Chinese Tea Culture”, I’m writing to offer you some advice.（使用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型 2】As for the content, I highly recommend a Chinese tea culture exhibition, where varieties of tea from different regions of China can be displayed so that visitors can gain a further insight into the history of Chinese tea culture.（使用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句、so that连接的目的状语从句）
（十四）
（2024·广东东莞·三模）假定你是李华，正在参加一个文化交流营（Cultural Exchange Camp），因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧，如室友经常在晚上举办派对。向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰，内容包括：
1. 描述情况；
2. 个人建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Committee Office,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Committee Office,
I, Li Hua, am writing due to a challenge I face with my foreign roommate. There are significant lifestyle differences causing some disagreements. Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule.
I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles.
If you could take my opinion into account, I would be grateful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
明显的：significant→obvious
具体来说：specifically→to be specific
建议：suggest→advise
考虑：take into account→take into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule.
拓展句：Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, which disrupts my sleep and daily schedule.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles. (运用了动名词作宾语)
（十五）
（2024·山西运城·二模）假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一种活动形式；
2. 说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear you plan to organize an activity with the theme of environmental protection. And I’m willing to offer my advice.
I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. Biking is familiar to a majority of people, so the race will definitely attract many participants, contributing to spreading the awareness of environmental protection. Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice.
I hope my idea is helpful and that your event will be a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面属于应用文，新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，要求考生回复一封邮件，向他推荐一种活动形式并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
①环保：environmental protection → environmental conservation
②鼓励：encourage → inspire/motivate
③绿色出行：green travel → eco-friendly transportation/sustainable commuting
④意识：awareness → consciousness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And I’m willing to offer my advice.
拓展句：And I’m willing to offer my advice which I hope can be of assistance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice.(such...that引导的结果状语从句)
高考真题
（一）
（2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
（二）
（2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
（三）
（2023·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
（四）
（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
（五）
（2012·四川·高考真题）假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1. 对英语学习的认识；
2. 自己目前的英语水平；
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
Thank you!
Li Hua
【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给英语老师Ms Li写一封信，介绍自己的英语学习情况，并提出教学建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
掌握：master→ grasp
记住：learn by heart→ bear in mind
机会：chance→ opportunity
给，提供：give→ offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.
拓展句：Another suggestion is that you can give us more chances to practice speaking.
【点睛】[高分句型1]My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.(运用了that连接的表语从句和时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.(运用了that连接的宾语从句和疑问词+不定式作宾语)
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（2013·四川·高考真题）
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. ._________________________________
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【答案】It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As is known to us, good learning habits contribute to improving learning efficiency. That is to say, without good learning habits, the efficiency cannot be guaranteed. Therefore, in order to establish a good learning habit, such as reviewing what we have studied regularly, we should revise the course we have learned and try hard to recite something important. Only by doing this can we learn all the courses well and achieve better grades. However, one of my problems lies in that I cannot stick to reviewing the knowledge regularly, so I ought to make a proper schedule and persist in it.
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】本文探讨学习习惯与学习效率之间的关系，对于学生来说比较熟悉的，但是在写作的过程注意一下几点：①文章的时态，本文应以一般现在时为主或者表示建议的情态动词为主；②注意要点写全，不能写漏其中一点并且注意要点之间的承接；③注意要点的条理性。因此考生应努力把自己掌握的较为复杂的句型和高级表达法运用到写作中去，以增加亮点。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As is known to us, good learning habits contribute to improving learning efficiency. 运用了定语从句；Therefore, in order to establish a good learning habit, such as reviewing what we have studied regularly, we should revise the course we have learned and try hard to recite something important.运用了宾语从句； Only by doing this can we learn all the courses well and achieve better grades. 运用了倒装句；However, one of my problems lies in that I cannot stick to reviewing the knowledge regularly, so I ought to make a proper schedule and persist in it.使用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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（2010·江苏·高考真题） 假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
自己英语学习的情况 1.英语学习的目的
2.英语学习的方法
3.课外自学的途径
……….
对学校英语教学的建议 （请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teacher and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】Dear teacher and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.
I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally, it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ go in for
重要的：important→ significant
此外：besides→what's more
更好地掌握：have a better grasp of→have a better knowledge of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Naturally, it’s very important for me to learn English well.
拓展句：Naturally, learning English well is very important for me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building.（运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. （运用了what引导的宾语从句）
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（2015·四川·高考真题）假如你是李夏，你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm.
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【答案】Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin every day. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for your early reply!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Xia
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给希望提高普通话水平的美国留学生Sharon回信，跟她沟通学习汉语的方法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
此外：in addition→what’s more
非常重要的：very important→of great importance
帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.
拓展句：Besides, I recommend that you also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think I’m fit for it. (由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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（2018·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。
使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。
