读后续写： Jade弄坏爸爸的珍贵相机，在父亲宽容慰藉，学会责任和家庭真正意义 讲义-2025届山东省烟台市高三上学期期末英语试题
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山东省烟台市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业水平考试英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her. It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel. She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave. “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small. It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day when her father went for his camera because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony.
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed. “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera(状从的省略形式，非谓语动词做伴随动作) that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her(定从). It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments(非谓语动词做目的状语) with her high school classmates(介词短语做状语). Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel(介短状语). She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes(独立主格), Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave(adj短语做补语). “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye(介短状语), she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father(介短定语) on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small(adj做补语). It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family(介词短语做主语，it形式主语). Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth(同位从).
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day (倒装句)when her father went for his camera(定从) because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony(状从).
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief(介短状语，情绪描写), having tried turning it on several times and failed(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
1. 按高考英语读后续写要求分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 Jade的内心挣扎，父亲对相机的情感，母亲的安慰 "Jade held the camera close to her chest" “Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again."
情感层次 从失落、焦虑到决定面对，最终的勇气释放 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes" "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave."
关键情节点 相机损坏，父亲和母亲的反应，Jade的内心挣扎 "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave." "The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father."
语言特色 表达紧张和冲突的词汇，如“resigned look”，“beyond repair” "It’s beyond repair." "Jade remained disturbed for a few days."
关键词分析 “camera”, “repairman”, “beyond repair”, “treasure” "It was beyond repair." "It had been his companion for all events, big and small."
心理描写 Jade的内疚和不安，父亲的失望 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes" "Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly."
动作描写 Jade跑向修理店，修理师的反应，父亲的尝试修理相机 "Jade ran away from the barbecue." "Jade gathered her belongings."
环境描写 海滩聚会和修理店 "Her puzzled classmates called behind her." "Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman."
隐含主题 责任感与勇气面对错误，家庭关系中的信任 "But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it!"
情感转折 Jade决定面对父亲，父亲却反应意外，最后母亲的安慰 "Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage."
空间转换 从海滩到修理店，再到家中 "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave." "The next day, when Jade came home..."
时间过渡 几天的内心挣扎，最后一次决定 "Jade remained disturbed for a few days."
2. 续写思路与布局
续写构思
思路: 续写应关注Jade决定面对父亲的情感转折。她的内疚与父亲的失望形成强烈对比。故事的转折在于Jade最终获得了勇气，尝试向父亲坦白。在处理内心冲突时，父亲的反应也应该有一定的意外感。
布局:
第一段: 通过Jade的内心变化来描写她如何下定决心面对父亲，尝试弥补自己的错误。
第二段: 展示父亲的反应与母亲的宽容，最终父亲可能选择理解和宽容，这为Jade带来一份宽慰。
续写要注意承接原文的事项
承接原文情感: 续写需要从Jade内心的矛盾和不安开始，最终找到勇气面对父亲的失望。
动作的合理性: Jade的行为应符合她的情感变化，首先是内心的挣扎，接着是她的决定与父亲的反应。
巧妙设计续写内容
情感递进: Jade的情感从内疚转为勇气，再到父亲的意外反应，逐步推动情节发展。
冲突和解决: 在冲突中，Jade的内疚和父亲的失望构成了故事的主要冲突点，解决冲突的方式是父亲的理解与母亲的宽慰。
3. Story Mountain 思维导图
续写时的关键点：
原文冲突: Jade的相机损坏，内心的不安，父亲的失望。
情感转折: Jade决定面对父亲，最终解开误会。
解决方案: 父亲对相机的情感虽受影响，但他依旧选择原谅Jade，家庭关系并未破裂。
4. 情绪、动作、环境描写英文例句
情绪描写 动作描写 环境描写
She felt her heart racing with guilt. Jade gathered her belongings hastily. The waves crashed against the shore.
A sense of fear crept over her. Her hands trembled as she reached for the camera. The warm sun made the beach seem inviting.
She was overwhelmed by a feeling of dread. Jade wiped the camera with a towel nervously. The bustling sound of the beach made her feel more alone.
Tears of frustration welled up in her eyes. She turned and ran away from the barbecue. The salty air filled the beach as she left.
Her heart sank at the thought of disappointing her father. She carefully handed the camera to Uncle Lee. The repair shop was quiet, with only the sound of a fan whirring.
常见单词的高级替换词：
原词 替换词 场景总结
sadness despair, sorrow, grief, dismay 强调情绪的深度与强烈
guilt remorse, regret 内心的冲突和责任感
courage bravery, resolve 面对挑战与困境时的决心
repair fix, mend, restore 与物品修复相关的情境
5. 高中语法现象分析
常见搭配与语法现象
虚拟语气
例句: "If I had known, I would have told him."
搭配: If + 过去完成时, 主语 + would have + 过去分词
过去完成时
例句: "The camera had been his companion for all events."
搭配: had + 过去分词 用于描述过去某一时间之前的状态
情态动词的否定
例句: "It couldn’t be fixed."
搭配: couldn’t + 动词原形 表示无法发生的可能性
生词短语分析:
词语 词性 近义词 反义词 例句
guilt 名词 remorse, shame innocence "Jade felt deep guilt about ruining the camera."
repair 动词 fix, mend break "Uncle Lee couldn’t repair the camera."
resigned 形容词 accepting, defeated hopeful "He gave her a resigned look."
Possible Answers:
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Hearing this(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Jade gathered up her courage. She had been carrying the weight of her mistake for days, and the guilt weighed heavily on her heart.(情绪描写) Yet, she knew that confronting her father (非谓语动词短语做主语)was the only way to alleviate her own burden(非谓语动词短语做后置定语)(宾从). With trembling hands(介短状语描写神态), she picked up the broken camera and walked into the living room, where her father was sitting(定从). She hesitated for a moment before speaking(情绪；动作描写). "Dad, I need to tell you something important," she said softly, trying to steady her voice(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). The look of confusion on his face only made her feel worse, but she continued, "I was the one who broke your camera(定从)." Her heart pounded as she waited for his response(状从), unsure of what to expect(adj做补语及宾从).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Her heart sank(心情描写) as she realized her father had replaced the camera(宾从). However, instead of anger, he smiled warmly and said, "I know it was an accident(宾从), Jade. I can see how much this has been bothering you(宾从)." He placed the phone gently in her hands, and for the first time in days, Jade felt a wave of relief wash over her. Her father’s forgiveness was more than she had hoped for(比较), and it was clear that their relationship had grown stronger(主从，it形式主语) because of this incident. The burden of guilt that had once consumed her(定从) was now replaced with a sense of peace.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had spent the entire weekend avoiding her father, fearing the worst possible outcome(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The guilt she felt for breaking his beloved camera(定从) had haunted her every moment. As she stood in front of him(状从), she could feel her palms sweating, but she knew she could no longer keep running from the truth(宾从). "Dad, there's something I need to confess(宾从)," she began, her voice barely above a whisper.(独立主格) She then explained how she had accidentally dropped the camera into the seawater(宾从), feeling her heart race as the words left her mouth(状从). Her father’s expression remained unchanged, which made her even more anxious.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. It was not the camera she had feared losing(定从), but she could still feel the sting of her actions. Her father stood by her side, his smile reassuring. "I know it was an accident, Jade, but don't worry," he said, his voice filled with understanding(定独立主格). "This camera meant a lot to me, but family is always more important." Jade’s heart filled with gratitude as she looked at the new phone(状从). She realized that her father’s forgiveness was a gift she would never take for granted(定从), and from that day forward, she promised herself she would be more careful with his belongings(定从).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. The weight of guilt had been too much for her to bear over the past few days. She knew that she had made a mistake(宾从), and now it was time to face the consequences(todo做真正主语). She picked up the broken camera and walked into the living room, where her father was sitting(定从). He looked up at her with a frown(介短状语) as she approached(状从). "Dad, I need to tell you something," she said, her voice shaking with uncertainty(独立主格). The moment she confessed to breaking the camera(the moment链接的状从), her father’s eyes softened. "I’m sorry, Dad. I didn’t mean to hurt you," she added, hoping he would understand(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. She felt a sense of relief, but also a twinge of guilt. Her father had forgiven her, but the weight of her mistake still lingered. "I know you didn’t mean to break the camera, Jade(宾从)," he said kindly. "It’s okay. What matters(主从) is that you’re learning from this mistake(宾从)." Jade smiled as she picked up the phone(状从). She was deeply touched by her father’s words and realized that his love and understanding meant more to her than any object ever could(宾从).
语法加分点分析
虚拟语气
例句: "I would have told him if I had known."
搭配: If + 过去完成时, 主语 + would have + 过去分词
分析: 用来表达后悔与未实现的虚拟情况。
过去完成时
例句: "The camera had been his companion for all events."
搭配: had + 过去分词 用来描述过去某一时间之前的状态。
情态动词的否定
例句: "It couldn’t be fixed."
搭配: couldn’t + 动词原形 表示无法发生的可能性。
高级替换词与亮点词汇短语
原词 替换词 联想词 例句
guilt remorse, shame regret, self-blame "Her guilt was overwhelming, but she knew she had to face it."
courage bravery, resolve determination "With a brave heart, Jade approached her father."
forgiveness understanding, pardon mercy, compassion "Her father’s forgiveness was all she needed to heal."
sorrow sadness, grief heartache "Her heart was full of sorrow when she confessed."
peace calm, serenity relief, contentment "The peace she felt after her confession was like a burden lifted."
高中语法与词汇亮点
条件句
例句: "If I had known, I would have been more careful."
搭配: If + 过去完成时, 主语 + would have + 过去分词
分析: 在后悔情境中常用的句型。
复合句
例句: "Jade, feeling guilty, decided to face her father, knowing it was the only way to heal."
搭配: 主句 + 现在分词/过去分词 用于表现原因或背景。
情态动词
例句: "She might have been more careful."
搭配: 情态动词 + have + 过去分词 表达推测与虚拟情境。
官方第二节（满分25分）（One possible version）
Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. Full of apology and regret(adj短语做原因状语), Jade gave an account of the whole story. “Sorry, dad, it’s all my fault. I know the camera means a lot to you(地道表达). I hope to buy a new one for you with all my pocket money.” Turning back to fetch her money(非谓语动词做伴随动作), she was stopped by her mother. “Honey, it’s just a camera. Your honesty matters most to us,” Her mother said smilingly, hugging her tightly(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Relieved(adj做主语补语), Jade responded with gratitude, “Thank you, Mom. Never will I make such a mistake(倒装句加强语气).”
The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. On it was a note(倒装句 加强语气) saying(非谓语动词做后置定语), “Jade, you’ve grown up. We’re proud of your integrity. This phone with a great built-in camera(介短定语) is for you. You can use it to capture memorable moments. Love, Dad & Mum.” Jade picked up the smartphone, tears of happiness streaming down her cheeks(独立主格). She realized her parents’ love and forgiveness were more precious than any possession(宾从). She promised to herself that she would be more responsible and considerate(宾从), cherishing(非谓语动词做伴随动作) the trust her parents had in her(定从).
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her. It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel. She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave. “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small. It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day when her father went for his camera because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony.
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed. “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera(状从的省略形式，非谓语动词做伴随动作) that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her(定从). It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments(非谓语动词做目的状语) with her high school classmates(介词短语做状语). Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel(介短状语). She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes(独立主格), Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave(adj短语做补语). “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye(介短状语), she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father(介短定语) on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small(adj做补语). It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family(介词短语做主语，it形式主语). Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth(同位从).
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day (倒装句)when her father went for his camera(定从) because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony(状从).
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief(介短状语，情绪描写), having tried turning it on several times and failed(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.
The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
1. 按高考英语读后续写要求分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 Jade的内心挣扎，父亲对相机的情感，母亲的安慰 "Jade held the camera close to her chest" “Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again."
情感层次 从失落、焦虑到决定面对，最终的勇气释放 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes" "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave."
关键情节点 相机损坏，父亲和母亲的反应，Jade的内心挣扎 "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave." "The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father."
语言特色 表达紧张和冲突的词汇，如“resigned look”，“beyond repair” "It’s beyond repair." "Jade remained disturbed for a few days."
关键词分析 “camera”, “repairman”, “beyond repair”, “treasure” "It was beyond repair." "It had been his companion for all events, big and small."
心理描写 Jade的内疚和不安，父亲的失望 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes" "Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly."
动作描写 Jade跑向修理店，修理师的反应，父亲的尝试修理相机 "Jade ran away from the barbecue." "Jade gathered her belongings."
环境描写 海滩聚会和修理店 "Her puzzled classmates called behind her." "Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman."
隐含主题 责任感与勇气面对错误，家庭关系中的信任 "But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it!"
情感转折 Jade决定面对父亲，父亲却反应意外，最后母亲的安慰 "Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage."
空间转换 从海滩到修理店，再到家中 "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave." "The next day, when Jade came home..."
时间过渡 几天的内心挣扎，最后一次决定 "Jade remained disturbed for a few days."
2. 续写思路与布局
续写构思
思路: 续写应关注Jade决定面对父亲的情感转折。她的内疚与父亲的失望形成强烈对比。故事的转折在于Jade最终获得了勇气，尝试向父亲坦白。在处理内心冲突时，父亲的反应也应该有一定的意外感。
布局:
第一段: 通过Jade的内心变化来描写她如何下定决心面对父亲，尝试弥补自己的错误。
第二段: 展示父亲的反应与母亲的宽容，最终父亲可能选择理解和宽容，这为Jade带来一份宽慰。
续写要注意承接原文的事项
承接原文情感: 续写需要从Jade内心的矛盾和不安开始，最终找到勇气面对父亲的失望。
动作的合理性: Jade的行为应符合她的情感变化，首先是内心的挣扎，接着是她的决定与父亲的反应。
巧妙设计续写内容
情感递进: Jade的情感从内疚转为勇气，再到父亲的意外反应，逐步推动情节发展。
冲突和解决: 在冲突中，Jade的内疚和父亲的失望构成了故事的主要冲突点，解决冲突的方式是父亲的理解与母亲的宽慰。
3. Story Mountain 思维导图
续写时的关键点：
原文冲突: Jade的相机损坏，内心的不安，父亲的失望。
情感转折: Jade决定面对父亲，最终解开误会。
解决方案: 父亲对相机的情感虽受影响，但他依旧选择原谅Jade，家庭关系并未破裂。
4. 情绪、动作、环境描写英文例句
情绪描写 动作描写 环境描写
She felt her heart racing with guilt. Jade gathered her belongings hastily. The waves crashed against the shore.
A sense of fear crept over her. Her hands trembled as she reached for the camera. The warm sun made the beach seem inviting.
She was overwhelmed by a feeling of dread. Jade wiped the camera with a towel nervously. The bustling sound of the beach made her feel more alone.
Tears of frustration welled up in her eyes. She turned and ran away from the barbecue. The salty air filled the beach as she left.
Her heart sank at the thought of disappointing her father. She carefully handed the camera to Uncle Lee. The repair shop was quiet, with only the sound of a fan whirring.
常见单词的高级替换词：
原词 替换词 场景总结
sadness despair, sorrow, grief, dismay 强调情绪的深度与强烈
guilt remorse, regret 内心的冲突和责任感
courage bravery, resolve 面对挑战与困境时的决心
repair fix, mend, restore 与物品修复相关的情境
5. 高中语法现象分析
常见搭配与语法现象
虚拟语气
例句: "If I had known, I would have told him."
搭配: If + 过去完成时, 主语 + would have + 过去分词
过去完成时
例句: "The camera had been his companion for all events."
搭配: had + 过去分词 用于描述过去某一时间之前的状态
情态动词的否定
例句: "It couldn’t be fixed."
搭配: couldn’t + 动词原形 表示无法发生的可能性
生词短语分析:
词语 词性 近义词 反义词 例句
guilt 名词 remorse, shame innocence "Jade felt deep guilt about ruining the camera."
repair 动词 fix, mend break "Uncle Lee couldn’t repair the camera."
resigned 形容词 accepting, defeated hopeful "He gave her a resigned look."
Possible Answers:
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Hearing this(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Jade gathered up her courage. She had been carrying the weight of her mistake for days, and the guilt weighed heavily on her heart.(情绪描写) Yet, she knew that confronting her father (非谓语动词短语做主语)was the only way to alleviate her own burden(非谓语动词短语做后置定语)(宾从). With trembling hands(介短状语描写神态), she picked up the broken camera and walked into the living room, where her father was sitting(定从). She hesitated for a moment before speaking(情绪；动作描写). "Dad, I need to tell you something important," she said softly, trying to steady her voice(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). The look of confusion on his face only made her feel worse, but she continued, "I was the one who broke your camera(定从)." Her heart pounded as she waited for his response(状从), unsure of what to expect(adj做补语及宾从).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Her heart sank(心情描写) as she realized her father had replaced the camera(宾从). However, instead of anger, he smiled warmly and said, "I know it was an accident(宾从), Jade. I can see how much this has been bothering you(宾从)." He placed the phone gently in her hands, and for the first time in days, Jade felt a wave of relief wash over her. Her father’s forgiveness was more than she had hoped for(比较), and it was clear that their relationship had grown stronger(主从，it形式主语) because of this incident. The burden of guilt that had once consumed her(定从) was now replaced with a sense of peace.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had spent the entire weekend avoiding her father, fearing the worst possible outcome(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The guilt she felt for breaking his beloved camera(定从) had haunted her every moment. As she stood in front of him(状从), she could feel her palms sweating, but she knew she could no longer keep running from the truth(宾从). "Dad, there's something I need to confess(宾从)," she began, her voice barely above a whisper.(独立主格) She then explained how she had accidentally dropped the camera into the seawater(宾从), feeling her heart race as the words left her mouth(状从). Her father’s expression remained unchanged, which made her even more anxious.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. It was not the camera she had feared losing(定从), but she could still feel the sting of her actions. Her father stood by her side, his smile reassuring. "I know it was an accident, Jade, but don't worry," he said, his voice filled with understanding(定独立主格). "This camera meant a lot to me, but family is always more important." Jade’s heart filled with gratitude as she looked at the new phone(状从). She realized that her father’s forgiveness was a gift she would never take for granted(定从), and from that day forward, she promised herself she would be more careful with his belongings(定从).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. The weight of guilt had been too much for her to bear over the past few days. She knew that she had made a mistake(宾从), and now it was time to face the consequences(todo做真正主语). She picked up the broken camera and walked into the living room, where her father was sitting(定从). He looked up at her with a frown(介短状语) as she approached(状从). "Dad, I need to tell you something," she said, her voice shaking with uncertainty(独立主格). The moment she confessed to breaking the camera(the moment链接的状从), her father’s eyes softened. "I’m sorry, Dad. I didn’t mean to hurt you," she added, hoping he would understand(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. She felt a sense of relief, but also a twinge of guilt. Her father had forgiven her, but the weight of her mistake still lingered. "I know you didn’t mean to break the camera, Jade(宾从)," he said kindly. "It’s okay. What matters(主从) is that you’re learning from this mistake(宾从)." Jade smiled as she picked up the phone(状从). She was deeply touched by her father’s words and realized that his love and understanding meant more to her than any object ever could(宾从).
语法加分点分析
虚拟语气
例句: "I would have told him if I had known."
搭配: If + 过去完成时, 主语 + would have + 过去分词
分析: 用来表达后悔与未实现的虚拟情况。
过去完成时
例句: "The camera had been his companion for all events."
搭配: had + 过去分词 用来描述过去某一时间之前的状态。
情态动词的否定
例句: "It couldn’t be fixed."
搭配: couldn’t + 动词原形 表示无法发生的可能性。
高级替换词与亮点词汇短语
原词 替换词 联想词 例句
guilt remorse, shame regret, self-blame "Her guilt was overwhelming, but she knew she had to face it."
courage bravery, resolve determination "With a brave heart, Jade approached her father."
forgiveness understanding, pardon mercy, compassion "Her father’s forgiveness was all she needed to heal."
sorrow sadness, grief heartache "Her heart was full of sorrow when she confessed."
peace calm, serenity relief, contentment "The peace she felt after her confession was like a burden lifted."
高中语法与词汇亮点
条件句
例句: "If I had known, I would have been more careful."
搭配: If + 过去完成时, 主语 + would have + 过去分词
分析: 在后悔情境中常用的句型。
复合句
例句: "Jade, feeling guilty, decided to face her father, knowing it was the only way to heal."
搭配: 主句 + 现在分词/过去分词 用于表现原因或背景。
情态动词
例句: "She might have been more careful."
搭配: 情态动词 + have + 过去分词 表达推测与虚拟情境。
官方第二节（满分25分）（One possible version）
Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. Full of apology and regret(adj短语做原因状语), Jade gave an account of the whole story. “Sorry, dad, it’s all my fault. I know the camera means a lot to you(地道表达). I hope to buy a new one for you with all my pocket money.” Turning back to fetch her money(非谓语动词做伴随动作), she was stopped by her mother. “Honey, it’s just a camera. Your honesty matters most to us,” Her mother said smilingly, hugging her tightly(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Relieved(adj做主语补语), Jade responded with gratitude, “Thank you, Mom. Never will I make such a mistake(倒装句加强语气).”
The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. On it was a note(倒装句 加强语气) saying(非谓语动词做后置定语), “Jade, you’ve grown up. We’re proud of your integrity. This phone with a great built-in camera(介短定语) is for you. You can use it to capture memorable moments. Love, Dad & Mum.” Jade picked up the smartphone, tears of happiness streaming down her cheeks(独立主格). She realized her parents’ love and forgiveness were more precious than any possession(宾从). She promised to herself that she would be more responsible and considerate(宾从), cherishing(非谓语动词做伴随动作) the trust her parents had in her(定从).
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