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第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the third week of December, but 1 couldn't even consider Christmas, because this year I didn't know how to celebrate it. A month ago, our doctor informed that my two-year-old son suffered from celiac disease (麸质过敏症). Any exposure to flour, milk, soy, or corn (even a single bite) would cause the little boy to be in a miserable situation for the next week.
Having a child of food sensitivities, I felt awkward buying stuffs not causing allergic (过敏的) reactions for the Christmas cookies. But it wasn't the lack of cookies, parties or stuffing themselves that bothered me- -it was the lack of tradition, which, as a child, I looked forward to. What could 1 give to my children What was Christmas going to look like for our family
I bought lots of stuffs including almond milk (牛奶替代品), allergic-free chocolate chips, potatoes and so on. By the time I got back to my car after shopping, it had started snowing. First heavy snow of the season. These magical holiday bits and pieces felt like they would just float by us this year, maybe forever. I cried my way home.
My three and-a-half-year old daughter was shouting when I walked in the door. “Mama, look at the snow. It's snowing outside and everywhere!” Her excitement spilled over until we had her and her brother dressed warmly and ready to play in snow on the ground. My husband took them out while I made dinner.
Watching them playing with rosy cheeks and runny noses through the kitchen window, I suddenly remembered my creative mum who had recently made mashed (捣碎的) potatoes with almond milk, and I remembered they tasted normal.
注意:
(1)续写的词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ”
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the third week of December, but I couldn't even consider Christmas, because this year I didn't know how to celebrate it(宾从). A month ago, our doctor informed that my two-year-old son suffered from celiac disease (麸质过敏症)(宾从). Any exposure to flour, milk, soy, or corn (even a single bite) would cause the little boy to be in a miserable situation for the next week(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
Having a child of food sensitivities(非谓语动词做原因状语), I felt awkward buying stuffs not causing allergic (过敏的) reactions for the Christmas cookies(非谓语动词做伴随动作). But it wasn't the lack of cookies, parties or stuffing themselves that bothered me(定从)- -it was the lack of tradition, which, as a child, I looked forward to(定从). What could I give to my children What was Christmas going to look like for our family
I bought lots of stuffs including almond milk (牛奶替代品), allergic-free chocolate chips, potatoes and so on. By the time I got back to my car after shopping, it had started snowing. First heavy snow of the season. These magical holiday bits and pieces felt like they would just float by us this year, maybe forever(宾从). I cried my way home.
My three and-a-half-year old daughter was shouting when I walked in the door(状从). “Mama, look at the snow. It's snowing outside and everywhere!” Her excitement spilled over until we had her and her brother dressed warmly and ready to play in snow on the ground(状从). My husband took them out while I made dinner(状从).
Watching them playing with rosy cheeks and runny noses through the kitchen window, I suddenly remembered my creative mum who had recently made mashed (捣碎的) potatoes with almond milk(定从), and I remembered they tasted normal(宾从).
注意:
(1)续写的词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ”
1. 读后续写分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 文章主要描述母亲的内心挣扎与自我觉察。她关注儿子健康和家庭传统之间的平衡。 "I cried my way home." (反映母亲内心的挣扎与无奈)
情感层次 从焦虑到灵感迸发，情感逐渐发生转变，最后带来希望。 "I suddenly remembered my creative mum..." (灵感的觉醒)
关键情节点 母亲发现解决问题的创意瞬间，家庭成员的支持成为转折。 "And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me." (灵感的诞生)
语言特色 使用简洁明了的句式反映母亲的情感波动。 "It was the lack of tradition... that bothered me." (情感转折)
关键词分析 “lack of tradition”代表着失落，“inspiration”代表着新的希望。 "What could I give to my children " (对失落的表达)
心理描写 母亲从担忧到找到解决方法的心理过程。 "I cried my way home." (悲伤与无力)
动作描写 描述母亲、丈夫与孩子的互动。 "My husband took them out while I made dinner." (家庭互动)
环境描写 雪景的描写营造了节日氛围，暗示问题和解决方案的转折。 "First heavy snow of the season." (环境的变化与情感呼应)
隐含主题 如何在困境中保持家庭的传统与爱，寻找替代方案。 "What could I give to my children " (困境中的爱与关怀)
情感转折 从母亲的无助到灵感的产生，再到家庭支持的力量，情感经历明显的转折。 "I suddenly remembered..." (转折后的希望)
空间转换 从商场到家，再到厨房的转移，展现母亲情感的变化。 "I made dinner." (从外界到家的转变)
时间过渡 从圣诞节的担忧到最终实现创意的时间推移。 "By the time I got back to my car..." (时间推移与情感变化)
2. 故事山模式 (Story Mountain)
思维导图
开端：
圣诞节前的焦虑：母亲担心无法为孩子创造传统的节日。
体现家庭中的困境：儿子的食物过敏带来压力。
关键情节：母亲购物时的忧虑。
上升行动：
雪景的描写：象征着节日气氛，但又增加了不确定性。
女儿的兴奋和丈夫的支持成为母亲灵感的催化剂。
转折点：灵感的迸发：母亲想到用杏仁奶和土豆做创意料理，重新激发了节日的希望。
高潮：母亲通过创意食谱带来了新的解决方案，家庭团聚在一起享受节日。
结尾：家庭团结，情感的转折从无望到充满希望和满足。
3. 续写构思与布局
续写思路 内容概述 承接原文的事项
续写的构思 续写应突出母亲从困境中找到灵感的瞬间，继而实施创意，并最终为家庭带来节日的温暖与传统感。通过温暖的家庭氛围展现母亲的努力与爱的传递。 从“inspiration”开始，明确解决方案的实施过程。
布局 1. 第一段：母亲灵感的突然涌现，描述她如何利用创意为家人准备食物，如何克服困难。
2. 第二段：丈夫和孩子的反应，以及家庭温暖氛围的展现。 保持母亲的情感细腻描写和家庭成员间的互动，确保与原文的情感一致。
提炼框架 - 解决问题的创意来源和过程
- 家庭成员之间的支持与互动
- 温暖的家庭氛围，情感的升华 运用环境描写增强节日氛围，展示母亲和家人的情感交流。
实施方法 描述母亲如何通过自己的智慧解决问题，展现家庭成员如何彼此支持，同时强调节日的意义与家庭的团结。 强调母亲的决心与孩子们的积极反应，保持对细节的关注，增加情感的层次感。
承接事项 - 持续展现母亲的内心挣扎与希望的变化
- 延续“雪景”带来的节日氛围
- 反映家庭成员的互动和支持 保持母亲的情感流转与家庭的温暖氛围，确保情节的逻辑与感情的发展一致。
4. Possible Answers:
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I rushed to the kitchen and began to gather the ingredients. Almond milk, potatoes, and the allergen-free chocolate chips were the key to the solution. I began to experiment with the familiar recipes I had grown up with(定从), adjusting them to fit our new needs(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The process was slow but rewarding, and by the time dinner was ready, I felt a sense of accomplishment. I had made something familiar, something that would bring back the warmth of tradition(定从) despite the changes we had to make(定从). The house was filled with the smell of my creations(环境描写), and for the first time in weeks, I felt a sense of peace.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” He asked, a smile spreading across his face(独立主格). I handed him a cup, watching(非谓语动词做伴随动作) as he took the first sip(状从). “It’s perfect,” he said, and I could see the joy in his eyes. Our children joined us, and we all gathered around the table, enjoying the warmth and comfort of the moment(非谓语动词做伴随动作). It wasn’t the Christmas we had originally planned(定从), but it was our Christmas, filled with love, creativity, and new traditions(非谓语动词做后置定语). And in that moment, I realized that Christmas wasn’t about perfection; it was about making memories together(宾从 递进句式).
5. 推荐的情境下动作、心理、环境描写
情境 动作描写 心理描写 环境描写
动作描写 1. "I rushed to the kitchen..."
2. "I handed him a cup..." 1. "I felt a sense of peace..."
2. "My hands trembled as I worked..." 1. "The house was filled with the smell of my creations..."
2. "The snow outside gently fell, adding to the holiday charm..."
心理描写 1. "I had no idea what I was doing, but I kept going."
2. "I felt the weight of the decision..." 1. "I was filled with doubt but also hope."
2. "It was the first time I truly felt at ease." 1. "The warmth of the fire comforted me."
2. "The smell of snow mixed with the scent of home-cooked meals."
环境描写 1. "The kitchen was bright, with every corner filled with festive supplies."
2. "The snow outside created a soft, magical atmosphere." 1. "The cold winter air contrasted sharply with the warmth of the kitchen."
2. "The night sky was clear, adding to the peaceful atmosphere." 1. "The kitchen light made everything feel cozy and inviting."
2. "Outside, the snowflakes floated in the soft moonlight."
6. 高级词汇替换（续）
单词/短语 替换词 例句
feeling sensation, emotion, sentiment, perception, mood 1. He was overwhelmed by the emotion of the moment.
2. She was in a different mood after the news.
create form, produce, generate, construct, build 1. The artist produced a masterpiece.
2. He constructed a beautiful model of the building.
change alter, transform, modify, shift, evolve 1. The situation shifted dramatically overnight.
2. They decided to alter their plans.
important crucial, essential, significant, vital, paramount 1. It is crucial that we leave now.
2. This decision is vital for our future.
bright radiant, shining, glowing, brilliant, dazzling 1. The radiant sun made everything seem golden.
2. Her dazzling smile lit up the room.
7. 高考语法现象分析（续）
语法现象 搭配现象 生词短语 词性 近义词 反义词 例句
定语从句 用于描述人物或事物的特征 make sense 动词短语 comprehend, understand confuse, misunderstand "The explanation that she gave made sense."
被动语态 强调动作的接受者而非执行者 be filled with 动词短语 be packed with, be full of be empty, be void "The room was filled with the smell of cookies."
虚拟条件句 表示与过去事实相反的假设 take action 动词短语 act, react ignore, delay "If I had known earlier, I would have taken action."
短语动词 表示动作的完成、进行或状态变更 pick up 动词短语 gather, collect drop, discard "She picked up her child and hugged him tightly."
现在完成时 表示动作与现在相关，强调结果 have to 动词短语 must, need to not necessary "I have to finish this before tomorrow."
8. 续写语料积累—动作、心理、环境描写推荐英文例句
动作描写
He rushed to the kitchen, eager to help with dinner preparations.
She moved quickly, her hands shaking as she set the table.
The children ran outside, their laughter echoing in the cold air.
My heart raced as I tried to remember all the ingredients.
She reached for the pot, her fingers brushing the warm surface.
He stood by the window, gazing at the snow falling softly outside.
I paced back and forth, unsure of what to do next.
They huddled together on the couch, sharing the warmth of the fire.
心理描写
A sense of calm washed over me as I realized it wasn’t as hard as I thought.
Doubt crept into my mind, but I pushed it aside, determined to make it work.
My heart sank when I thought about how different this Christmas would be.
The excitement bubbled inside me as I saw my family enjoying the festive food.
I felt a surge of gratitude for my family’s support.
The uncertainty lingered, but I refused to let it control me.
As I watched my children, I realized that Christmas was about love, not perfection.
I couldn't help but smile as I saw my husband's surprised reaction.
环境描写
The soft glow of the fireplace made the room feel cozy and inviting.
The air was crisp, with a hint of winter’s chill settling in.
Snowflakes drifted down from the sky, covering the ground in a blanket of white.
The room smelled of cinnamon and freshly baked treats, a comforting scent.
The kitchen was warm, with pots and pans scattered across the counters.
The windows were fogged up from the heat inside, contrasting with the cold outside.
Outside, the world seemed to slow down as the snow fell softly to the ground.
The kitchen was bustling with activity, the sound of chopping and stirring filling the air.
9. 总结：高考续写语料积累
场景 高级词汇替换词 句型与搭配
动作描写 Rush, move quickly, run, reach, stand, pace, pick up, huddle 1. I rushed to the kitchen.
2. He moved quickly, excited to help.
3. The children ran outside, laughing in the snow.
心理描写 Calm, doubt, excitement, gratitude, uncertainty, smile 1. A sense of calm washed over me.
2. Doubt crept in, but I pushed it aside.
环境描写 Glow, crisp, drift, blanket, bustle, fog, contrast, settle 1. The soft glow of the fireplace made everything cozy.
2. The air was crisp, filled with the scent of winter.
10. 高考语法现象与词汇升级
语法现象 例句 高级搭配 生词短语与词汇
倒装句 "Had I known earlier, I would have acted differently." "Not only...but also," "Seldom have I seen..." make it through (成功度过), bring up (提及)
虚拟语气 "If I were you, I would have made a different choice." "If I had known," "If it had not been for..." get along with (相处), go along with (支持)
过去完成时 "She had already left when I arrived." "By the time...had," "Before I knew it..." figure out (弄清楚), pass through (经过)
动词短语 "They picked up the pieces and moved on." "She looked after her family." run into (偶遇), make up for (弥补)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I realized that despite the challenges of my son’s condition, we could still celebrate Christmas in a meaningful way(宾从). I immediately began to think about all the things we could do(定从) to create a joyful and inclusive atmosphere(非谓语动词做目的状语). Instead of focusing on what we couldn’t have(宾从), I decided to embrace the spirit of the holiday by making dishes that everyone could enjoy(定从), regardless of their allergies(介词短语及对原文的衔接). I prepared some delicious almond milk hot chocolate and gluten-free cookies. It was a simple gesture, but it felt like a breakthrough(递进句式). For the first time, I truly felt the warmth of the holiday season.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he asked, his voice full of surprise(独立主格). The children were equally excited, their faces lighting up(独立主格) as they tasted the treats(状从). I smiled, watching their joy spread across the room(非谓语动词做伴随动作 环境描写). It wasn’t the typical Christmas celebration, but it was ours(递进句式). As we gathered around the table(状从), the snow continued to fall gently outside(环境描写), and for a moment, I realized that Christmas wasn’t about perfection. It was about love, family, and the simple joys of togetherness(递进句式).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I remembered the way my mother used to create magic during the holidays(定从), despite the limited resources(介短状语). She would make ordinary moments feel extraordinary. So, I decided to embrace her creativity. I used almond milk to make hot chocolate and filled the house with the sweet aroma of freshly baked gluten-free cookies(对原文的衔接). It wasn’t just about the food; it was about creating an atmosphere(递进句式) where the children could still experience the wonder of Christmas(定从). The season wasn’t lost; it had just taken on a different form(递进句式).
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he exclaimed, seeing the joy in the children’s eyes(非谓语动词做伴随动作). As we sat around the table(状从), the kids eagerly devoured their cookies, laughing and chatting excitedly(非谓语动词做伴随动作). For the first time in weeks, I felt a sense of peace(情绪描写). Christmas had arrived, not in the way I had expected(定从), but in a way(递进句式) that was even more meaningful(定从). It wasn’t about the traditions I had known(定从); it was about creating new ones that would last a lifetime(定从)(递进句式).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I suddenly realized that I didn’t need to replicate the Christmases of my childhood to create something special(宾从). Instead, I could create new traditions that fit our current situation(定从). I began making dishes that were both safe for my son and still festive(定从). I prepared almond milk hot chocolate and gluten-free cookies(对原文的衔接), which were simple yet meaningful(定从). As I watched my children eagerly waiting to try these new treats(状从), I felt a sense of accomplishment(情绪描写). This Christmas might not have been the same as before, but it was filled with love and creativity(递进句式).
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he said, smiling at the unexpected surprise(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The kids were thrilled(情绪描写), and we spent the evening savoring the treats together, laughing and playing games(动作串). It was a different kind of Christmas, one that focused more on the spirit of the holiday than on perfection(定从). The snow continued to fall outside(环境描写), but inside, our home was filled with warmth(对比写法). For the first time in weeks, I felt like we were exactly where we were meant to be(宾从).
语法加分点分析与搭配
加分点 句子例子 搭配与近义词替换
现在完成时 "I have made almond milk hot chocolate." have created, have prepared
虚拟语气 "If we had done this earlier, we would have enjoyed the treats sooner." If I had known (假设过去)
非谓语动词 "To create a festive atmosphere, I made cookies." To prepare, To bring about
定语从句 "The cookies that we baked were gluten-free." which, that (非限制性)
反义词 "It wasn't about perfection, but about love." instead of, not only... but also
情绪与动作描写亮点词汇
类型 亮点词汇/短语 例句
情绪描写 amazed, thrilled, excitement, warmth, peace "He was amazed at it."
"For the first time, I felt a sense of peace."
动作描写 rushed, created, prepared, sat down, tasted "I rushed to the kitchen."
"We all sat down around the table."
环境描写 glow, snow, warmth, magical, festive "The snow continued to fall gently."
"The warmth of the room filled my heart."
读后续写语料积累
高级替换选项与例句
词汇/短语 替换词 例句
delicious tasty, scrumptious, flavorful "The cookies were scrumptious, and everyone enjoyed them."
amazed astonished, surprised, stunned "He was astonished by how well everything turned out."
celebrate enjoy, commemorate, observe "We could still celebrate the holiday with our own traditions."
官方One possible version:
And that’s when a sudden inspiration came to me. Why not try to make the same for my family Perhaps I could also make some hot chocolate using alternatives(非谓语动词做伴随动作) not causing allergic reactions for them to drink(非谓语动词做后置定语)(对原文的对应). Actions speak louder than words! Firstly I made the mashed potatoes with almond milk(对原文的对应) as my beloved mum did(状从). Perfect! Then I poured almond milk in a pan and slowly melted chocolate chips into it. The result was better than expected: They dissolved like butter. “Ha!” I yelled. My first victory. Wild with joy(adj做状语), I raised my chocolate spoon and cried out, “Hot chocolate! Who wants hot chocolate ”
My husband was amased at it, “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” Yes, dear. It's safe." He laughed and started pouring while I began pulling off coats and hats for children(状从). My husband enjoyed every mouthful of the hot chocolate and gave me the thumbs up. That's when I realized my daughter and son were running merrily in the dining room(表从), stopping(非谓语动词做伴随动作) to take a bite of what I had cooked(宾从). My husband and our little children were drinking hot chocolate together in a toast to the first heavy snow and the approaching Christmas(介短方式状语). There it was. I had thought it was completely impossible(宾从), but here, I was witnessing our first holiday tradition, everyone participating in his or her own way(独立主格). And it was beautiful.