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The Sisters
Lynn sighed as she struggled to remove a spot on her new T-shirt. She was feeling quite annoyed. Her sister, Ava, had completely ruined her nice Saturday morning.
Couldn’t a super-busy teenage girl get some rest from a continuously-working week Okay, maybe Lynn had pushed Ava onto the table, spilling (洒出来) juice all over floor. Maybe her mom had blamed Ava for what happened and didn’t give Ava time to explain. Ava, punished without reason, was in a stormy mood. To take revenge (报复) on Lynn, she “accidentally” spilled a bowl of jelly onto Lynn, ruining Lynn’s new T-shirt. But Lynn was sure Ava got what she deserved. Just last week, Ava had secretly poured sticky glue on Lynn’s seat in class. Lynn couldn’t have been happier to see her sister suffer.
This chain of revenge had been going on between the two girls ever since there had been too much school stress (endless homework, mountainous tests, and many more) in eighth grade. And then their mom was always on her phone and taking business trips, hardly having time to stay with her family.
As Lynn thought about all this, she couldn’t help feeling a bit thoughtful and nostalgic (怀旧的), remembering the time when she and her sister were peaceful, particularly during their childhood game —Conquer the World. It didn’t actually mean to conquer the world; instead, it was their playful challenge to climb a pretty steep and high rock at the back of their house. And when they got to the top, they would have “conquered the world”. The sisters hadn’t actually managed to do that yet. They stopped trying to after a while since it looked a bit stupid for teenagers to climb a rock.
Lynn sighed and gave up trying to clean the jelly on her shirt. Perhaps…it was time to stop having a world war with her sister. She got up and changed into a new shirt.
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Paragraph 1: Lynn knocked on her sister’s door.
Paragraph 2: The rock still seemed pretty high and steep for the sisters.
文章大意
文章讲述了 Lynn 和 Ava 姐妹之间的矛盾。周六早上,Lynn 因 Ava “不小心” 将一碗果冻洒在自己身上,弄脏新 T 恤而生气,回想起此前 Ava 还在自己座位上倒胶水,而自己也有过错,比如曾把 Ava 推倒在桌上导致果汁洒出,妈妈还错怪了 Ava。这种报复循环自八年级学业压力增大,妈妈又总忙于工作无暇陪伴家人时就开始了。Lynn 回忆起小时候她们玩 “征服世界” 的游戏,就是爬上房子后面又高又陡的岩石,虽未成功但很开心,长大后觉得爬岩石很傻就不再尝试。Lynn 最终决定不再纠结,换了新衬衫,准备和妹妹和解。
故事山分析
开端:Lynn 因 Ava 弄脏自己的新 T 恤而生气,回顾两人之间相互报复的过往。
发展:讲述姐妹间矛盾产生的背景,包括学业压力和妈妈的忙碌,以及回忆童年游戏。
高潮:Lynn 决定停止与妹妹的 “战争”,准备去和妹妹和解,这是故事的高潮部分,充满转折和期待。
结局(待续写):姐妹俩和解后的行动,如一起去爬岩石,以及在这个过程中的情感变化和成长,构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
童年的 “征服世界” 游戏:在续写中,姐妹俩会重拾这个游戏,一起去爬岩石,象征着她们关系的修复和对过去美好时光的回归。
Lynn 决定停止与妹妹的矛盾:续写中,她会主动找妹妹沟通,开启和解的第一步,这是后续故事发展的关键。
姐妹俩之前的相互报复行为:与和解后的友好相处形成鲜明对比,体现她们关系的转变。
妈妈的忙碌无暇陪伴家人:在姐妹和解后,可能会促使她们更加珍惜彼此的陪伴,也可能会一起想办法让妈妈多关注家庭。
岩石又高又陡,姐妹俩从未成功登顶:续写中,她们再次挑战岩石时,可能会遇到困难,但最终会克服困难登顶,象征着她们成长和战胜困难的决心。
续写要点(两段)
第一段:描写 Lynn 敲开妹妹房门后的场景,她如何向妹妹道歉,表达自己想要和解的想法。妹妹的反应,可能一开始会有些惊讶、犹豫,后来被姐姐的真诚打动,姐妹俩敞开心扉交流,化解之前的矛盾。
第二段:描述姐妹俩来到岩石前,看到岩石的高陡心中的感受,在攀爬过程中遇到的困难,如体力不支、害怕等。但她们相互鼓励,最终成功登顶,感受 “征服世界” 的喜悦,体会到姐妹间团结的力量,对未来的关系充满信心。
情感线
起初,Lynn 对 Ava 充满愤怒和不满,沉浸在过往的矛盾中。决定和解时,她心中既有期待又有些紧张。敲开妹妹房门后,真诚道歉,妹妹的态度从惊讶、犹豫到接受,两人情感逐渐缓和。一起攀爬岩石时,面对困难她们相互鼓励,从有些害怕到充满勇气,成功登顶后,喜悦和自豪涌上心头,姐妹情更加深厚,对未来充满希望。
故事线
Lynn 因 Ava 弄脏 T 恤生气,回忆姐妹间相互报复的过往。
讲述矛盾产生背景,包括学业压力、妈妈忙碌和童年游戏。
Lynn 决定停止矛盾,准备找妹妹和解。
Lynn 敲开妹妹房门,道歉并和解。
姐妹俩来到岩石前,开始攀爬。
姐妹俩克服困难登顶,感受喜悦,关系更加亲密。
主旨升华句
Through their reconciliation and joint effort to conquer the rock, the sisters learned that the power of forgiveness and unity is far greater than any grudge, and that family bonds can overcome all obstacles.(通过和解以及共同努力征服岩石,姐妹俩明白了宽恕与团结的力量远比任何怨恨强大,家庭纽带能克服一切障碍。)
This experience taught the sisters that in the face of difficulties, supporting each other can not only help them achieve their goals but also strengthen their relationship, making their family even more united.(这次经历让姐妹俩明白,面对困难时,相互支持不仅能帮助她们实现目标,还能增进彼此的关系,让家庭更加团结。)
The journey from constant conflict to reconciliation and then to the successful conquest of the rock symbolizes the sisters' growth and their new understanding of the importance of family, showing that love and understanding can always prevail.(从不断冲突到和解,再到成功征服岩石的过程,象征着姐妹俩的成长以及对家庭重要性的新认识,表明爱与理解总能战胜一切。)
By setting aside their differences and working together, the sisters not only conquered the high rock but also the challenges within themselves, realizing that true strength lies in the unity of family.(姐妹俩放下分歧,携手共进,不仅征服了高耸的岩石,还战胜了自身的挑战,意识到真正的力量源于家庭的团结。)
This story of the sisters' reconciliation and their adventure on the rock serves as a powerful reminder that no matter how deep the rift may seem, the love within a family can always bridge the gap and lead to a brighter, more harmonious future.(姐妹俩和解以及在岩石上的冒险故事有力地提醒我们,无论裂痕看似有多深,家庭中的爱总能弥合差距,引领我们走向更光明、更和谐的未来。)
写作示范一
Paragraph 1: Lynn knocked on her sister’s door. Ava opened it slowly, her eyes filled with surprise. Lynn took a deep breath and said, “Ava, I'm really sorry for what I did. I think we should stop this endless revenge. Remember our childhood game I miss those happy days.” Ava was silent for a moment, then her eyes softened. “I'm sorry too, Lynn. I was just so angry.” They hugged each other tightly, and all the grudges seemed to disappear.
Paragraph 2: The rock still seemed pretty high and steep for the sisters. As they started climbing, Lynn's hands slipped once, and she almost fell. But Ava quickly reached out and held her. “Don't worry, I got you,” Ava said. With each other's support, they managed to climb higher and higher. Finally, they reached the top. They looked at the view around them, feeling a great sense of achievement. “We conquered the world!” they shouted together, laughing happily.
写作示范二
Paragraph 1: Lynn knocked on her sister’s door. “Who is it ” came Ava's cold voice. “It's me, Lynn.” Lynn pushed the door open gently. She saw Ava sitting on the bed, looking a bit sad. “Ava, I know we've been acting stupid these days. Let's forget about the past, okay I really want things to be like before.” Ava looked up at her, a hint of doubt in her eyes. Lynn walked closer and took Ava's hand. “Please, Ava.” After a long moment, Ava nodded. “Okay, Lynn.” A smile slowly spread across their faces.
Paragraph 2: The rock still seemed pretty high and steep for the sisters. They stood at the bottom, looking up with determination. As they climbed, the wind blew strongly, making it even harder. But they didn't give up. “Just a little more,” Lynn encouraged Ava. When they finally reached the top, they were out of breath but full of joy. They realized that by working together, they could overcome any difficulty. From then on, their relationship became much closer.