读后续写--车陷泥沼，爱与团结点亮希望 讲义-河北省张家口市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题

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We were all sitting around enjoying another beautiful day of sunshine and warm weather when my brother, Tim, was struck with an idea. “Why don’t we go for a boat ride this afternoon on Lake Bitabee ” This idea met with general approval from Arlene, his wife, and me. But Dad wanted to spend the afternoon fishing.
After lunch, Arlene and I got into Tim's car and Tim put the boat on the trailer (拖车) and drove off. Dad followed behind in the other car, having decided to fish on Lake Victoria - which lay a few hundred yards from Lake Bitabee.
When we arrived there, Tim, a more-than-capable driver, sent Arlene and I to down the hill to the water's edge in order to guide him as he backed the boat trailer down the incline (斜坡) and around the small bend. “Tell me when the water is halfway up the back tires, ” he told us.
Then the back of the boat trailer edged itself around the bend, and Arlene and I began waving to Tim, pointing him a little to the right to get him lined up properly. Slowly, little by little, Tim backed down the incline to the relatively flat surface next to the water. We watched as the trailer entered the water, frightening fish and bullfrogs away. Deeper and deeper into the swamp (水洼) went the trailer, until - as Tim said - the water was halfway up the back tires. I shouted out for Tim to stop the car.
My brother threw the car into park and jumped out of the driver's seat, eager to launch the boat into the water. Then I saw that the car was in the deep water, clearly stuck in the mud (淤泥) . Then he got back into the car and started the engine. It stuck fast, the tires whirling (旋转) helplessly around in the muddy water. Shutting off the engine, Tim got out of the vehicle, looking anxious and helpless.
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“I'll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him.
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Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse.
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文章大意
在一个阳光明媚、天气温暖的日子，弟弟蒂姆提议下午去比塔比湖划船，这一想法得到阿琳和 “我” 的赞同，父亲则想去钓鱼。午饭后，蒂姆带着阿琳和 “我” 前往湖边，父亲开车前往几百码外的维多利亚湖钓鱼。到达湖边后，蒂姆让阿琳和 “我” 在水边指引他倒车，将船拖车顺着斜坡和弯道放下。当拖车进入水中，水到了后轮胎一半时，“我” 喊蒂姆停车。蒂姆急于将船下水，跳下车后发现车陷入深水泥泞中，重新发动汽车也无济于事，轮胎在泥水中无助旋转，他感到焦虑和无助。
故事山分析
开端：蒂姆提议去划船，众人响应，父亲选择去钓鱼，大家分别前往不同湖泊。
发展：到达湖边，蒂姆倒车放船拖车，阿琳和 “我” 负责指引，车进入水中。
高潮：车陷入泥沼，蒂姆尝试发动汽车但失败，陷入焦虑和无助，这是故事的紧张时刻。
结局（待续写）：通过 “我” 找父亲帮忙，以及父亲后续的行动，解决车被困问题，构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
1.父亲去附近的维多利亚湖钓鱼：在续写中，“我” 可以快速找到父亲求助，父亲能及时赶到现场解决问题。
2.蒂姆是个很有能力的司机：与车陷入泥沼形成对比，后续可能会通过蒂姆和父亲的共同努力，发挥各自优势解决困境，展现能力的另一种体现。
3.蒂姆急于将船下水：导致他没注意到车的危险状况，续写中他可能会为自己的急躁而自责，也会更积极地参与解决问题。
4.车陷入泥沼，轮胎在泥水中无助旋转：预示着解决问题的难度较大，需要借助外部力量，如父亲找来的工具或他人帮助。
5.阿琳和 “我” 在水边指引：在后续解决问题过程中，阿琳和 “我” 可能会继续协助，比如帮忙观察周围情况，提供一些想法。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：“我” 去寻找父亲，描述 “我” 快速跑到维多利亚湖找到父亲的过程，以及向父亲说明情况时的焦急。父亲得知情况后的反应，如立刻放下手中的钓鱼工具，和 “我” 一起赶回被困地点。
第二段：父亲前往附近农舍，描述父亲在农舍借到工具或寻求到帮助的经过，如借到拖车绳或找到有经验的农夫帮忙。大家一起努力，最终将车从泥沼中拉出来，蒂姆和众人的心情变化，从焦虑转为喜悦，结尾可以适当总结这次经历的收获。
情感线
起初，大家对划船充满期待，心情愉悦。车陷入泥沼后，蒂姆从急切变得焦虑无助，阿琳和 “我” 也跟着紧张。“我” 去找父亲时，内心焦急，希望尽快得到帮助。父亲得知情况后，迅速行动，展现出冷静和担当。在解决问题过程中，大家齐心协力，当车被拉出泥沼时，所有人的焦虑转为喜悦，通过这次经历，大家更加团结，也体会到面对困难时相互支持的重要性。
故事线
蒂姆提议划船，大家响应，父亲去钓鱼。
到达湖边，蒂姆倒车放船拖车，阿琳和 “我” 指引。
车陷入泥沼，蒂姆尝试发动失败。
“我” 去找父亲求助，父亲赶来。
父亲去农舍借工具或寻求帮助。
大家一起努力将车拉出泥沼，问题解决。
主旨升华句
This experience taught us that in the face of difficulties, the support and unity of family are the most powerful weapons, enabling us to overcome any obstacle.（这次经历让我们明白，面对困难时，家人的支持和团结是最强大的武器，能让我们克服任何障碍。）
Through the process of rescuing the stuck car, we realized that even the most capable people may encounter setbacks, and it is the joint efforts of everyone that can turn the situation around.（通过解救被困车辆的过程，我们意识到即使是最有能力的人也可能遭遇挫折，正是大家的共同努力才能扭转局面。）
This incident served as a reminder that when unexpected situations occur, remaining calm and taking prompt action, with the help of family, can lead to a successful solution.（这次事件提醒我们，当意外情况发生时，保持冷静并迅速行动，在家人的帮助下，就能成功解决问题。）
Our journey from the excitement of boating to the anxiety of a stuck car and finally to the joy of resolution showed us that life is full of ups and downs, and it is how we face challenges that defines our growth.（我们从划船的兴奋到车被困的焦虑，再到问题解决的喜悦，这一过程表明生活充满起伏，而我们面对挑战的方式决定了我们的成长。）
The successful rescue of the car not only solved a practical problem but also deepened the bond among family members, proving that together, we can overcome any difficulties that come our way.（成功解救车辆不仅解决了实际问题，还加深了家庭成员之间的感情，证明我们齐心协力就能克服任何困难。）
写作示范一
“I'll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him. Without hesitation, I sprinted up the hill towards Lake Victoria where Dad was fishing. My heart was pounding with anxiety, and I was gasping for breath when I finally reached him. “Dad, Tim's car is stuck in the mud!” I exclaimed breathlessly. Dad immediately put down his fishing rod and rushed back with me.
Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse. He explained the situation to the farmer, who was kind - hearted and willing to help. The farmer lent Dad a powerful tow rope. With the rope tied to the car, Dad and Tim worked together to pull the stuck car. Arlene and I cheered them on. After several attempts, the car finally came out of the mud. Everyone was filled with joy, and we learned the importance of family support in difficult times.
写作示范二
“I'll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him. I ran as fast as I could, ignoring the pain in my legs. When I found Dad, his face turned serious as soon as he heard what happened. We hurried back to the lakeside.
Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse. There, he met an old man who had lived by the lake for years. The old man knew the area well and offered to help. He brought some wooden planks and a winch. They placed the planks under the tires and used the winch to pull the car. With the combined efforts of everyone, the car gradually moved out of the mud. Tim's worried expression turned into a big smile. We were all relieved, and this experience made our family closer.
【答案】
“I’ll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him. Tim nodded, his face pale with worry. I quickly ran up the hill, my heart pounding. When I reached Dad, who was just setting up his fishing gear near Lake Victoria, I explained the situation breathlessly. Dad’s face darkened with concern, but he didn’t waste a moment. Grabbing his tools, he followed me back to the stuck car, his stride determined.
Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse. He returned shortly with a sturdy rope and a friendly farmer who agreed to help. Together, they tied the rope to the front of Tim’s car. With the farmer’s truck pulling and Dad guiding, they managed to free the car from the muddy grip of the swamp. Tim sighed with relief as the car finally lurched onto solid ground. We all learned a valuable lesson about the unpredictability of nature and the importance of being prepared.