读后续写--从 “鞋” 运到实力：跨栏少女的逆袭夺冠路 讲义 辽宁省2024-2025学年高三上学期五校联考期末英语试题

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“Number 7, Jenny Walker, takes the lead,” cried the announcer. “Just one more hurdle (栏) and — Jenny Walker from Mount Lawley High School takes first place in the girls’ 100-meter hurdles!” The crowd went wild as Jenny’s teammates whooped, “Good for you, Sweet Spikes (钉鞋)!” Sweet Spikes was Jenny’s nickname.
“County championship, here we come!” shouted Jenny, patting her neon-green track spikes. They were almost worn out, but she didn’t care. They were her lucky shoes and she loved them. “Next Saturday, we’re taking home the gold,” Jenny whispered to her spikes.
“Don’t forget, Sweet Spikes,” chirped Marisol, one of her teammates. “My birthday party is next Friday at Lakeside Park.” “Beep. Party recorded in calendar,” joked Jenny in her best robot voice.
Next weekend couldn’t come soon enough. Jenny brimmed with excitement all week long. At track practice, she leaped over those hurdles faster than ever before. She wore her spikes all day, and everything in her path was a hurdle: flowerpots in her front yard, sidewalk cracks, and even her little dog!
The day of Marisol’s party, Jenny put on her favorite blue shorts, a track T-shirt from her dad, and of course, her lucky spikes. “Perfect.” She smiled at herself in the mirror. In Lakeside Park, music and the smell of grilled food filled the air. But Jenny stopped by the track first, planning to do a couple of sprints (冲刺). “Sweet Spikes!” Two of her teammates rushed over, breathless and barefoot. “You have to try the slide!” Jenny’s eyes glanced across the party area. “Slide What sli—”
Suddenly, she saw it. The BIGGEST inflatable slide (充气滑梯) she’d ever seen. Without thinking twice, Jenny kicked off her spikes and charged toward it. She conquered the slide again and again and again, until it was finally time to go home. As she unwillingly made her way back to the track where she’ d left her spikes, panic set in.
Jenny picked up the pace, her heart pounding louder the closer she got. When she got to the place, her heart stopped, “My lucky spikes are gone!” Jenny’s teammates helped her search the park. No luck. “Farewell, gold,” Jenny murmured.
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The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes.
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“Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!”
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文章大意
文章讲述了来自劳利山高中的Jenny在女子100米跨栏比赛中夺冠，她的钉鞋是她的幸运鞋，被队友们称为“甜心钉鞋”。下周有县锦标赛，Jenny满心期待。同时，队友Marisol邀请她参加下周五在湖边公园举办的生日派对。Jenny整个星期都兴奋不已，训练时跨越栏架的速度更快，甚至把生活中的各种事物都当作栏架练习。派对当天，Jenny穿着喜爱的服装和幸运钉鞋前往，到公园后先去了跑道，准备冲刺练习。这时，她看到了巨大的充气滑梯，不假思索地踢掉钉鞋去玩滑梯。玩尽兴后，她回到放钉鞋的地方，却发现钉鞋不见了，队友们帮忙寻找也一无所获，Jenny觉得与金牌无缘了。
故事山分析
开端：Jenny 在比赛中夺冠，期待县锦标赛，她的钉鞋是幸运鞋，队友邀请她参加生日派对。
发展：Jenny 为比赛积极准备，训练表现出色，对派对也很期待。派对当天，她看到充气滑梯，踢掉钉鞋去玩。
高潮：Jenny 发现钉鞋丢失，队友帮忙寻找无果，这是故事的高潮，充满紧张和失落。
结局（待续写）：Jenny 在县锦标赛的表现，是否能克服没有幸运钉鞋的心理障碍夺冠，以及她对幸运钉鞋的新认知，构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
钉鞋是 Jenny 的幸运鞋，她非常喜爱并依赖它：续写中，她在比赛前会因丢失钉鞋而焦虑，但在比赛过程中逐渐明白实力才是关键，不再过度依赖幸运钉鞋。
Jenny 在训练时表现出色，跨越栏架速度比以往更快：暗示她具备夺冠实力，续写中她会凭借自身实力在比赛中取得好成绩。
Jenny 把生活中的事物当作栏架练习，体现她对跨栏的热爱和专注：在比赛中，这份热爱和专注会帮助她克服困难，专注于比赛。
Jenny 在派对上看到充气滑梯，冲动地踢掉钉鞋去玩：这是钉鞋丢失的原因，续写中她会为自己的冲动行为反思，也会从这次经历中成长。
Jenny 认为丢失钉鞋就与金牌无缘，表现出她对钉鞋的迷信：在比赛后，她会改变这种想法，认识到自身努力和实力的重要性。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描写 Jenny 站在县锦标赛跑道上的心理状态，如失落、焦虑、不自信。可以描述她看到其他选手穿着崭新钉鞋时的对比，以及回忆起幸运钉鞋时的难过。接着，她可能会在队友的鼓励下，慢慢调整心态，决定依靠自己的实力比赛。
第二段：着重描写 Jenny 比赛的过程，她如何跨越一个个栏架，克服心理障碍。当她冲过终点线获得金牌时，她的反应，如激动、喜悦、难以置信。最后，她对这次经历的感悟，不再迷信幸运钉鞋，而是相信自己的努力和实力。
情感线
起初，Jenny 丢失钉鞋后极度失落，认为与金牌无缘，在县锦标赛跑道上充满焦虑和不自信。看到其他选手钉鞋时，她更加难过。在队友鼓励下，她慢慢振作，决定靠实力比赛。比赛中，她专注跨越栏架，克服心理障碍。冲过终点获得金牌时，她激动喜悦，从依赖幸运钉鞋到相信自己实力，完成了心态的转变，收获成长。
故事线
Jenny 在比赛中夺冠，期待县锦标赛，钉鞋是幸运鞋。
队友邀请 Jenny 参加生日派对，她期待派对和比赛。
派对当天，Jenny 看到充气滑梯，踢掉钉鞋去玩，钉鞋丢失。
Jenny 站在县锦标赛跑道上，因丢失钉鞋而失落，在队友鼓励下振作。
Jenny 在比赛中克服心理障碍，跨越栏架，获得金牌。
Jenny 对这次经历有所感悟，不再迷信幸运钉鞋，相信自身实力。
主旨升华句
This experience taught Jenny that true success lies not in lucky charms but in one's own hard work and unwavering determination, reminding us all that we have the power within ourselves to achieve great things.（这次经历让 Jenny 明白，真正的成功不在于幸运符，而在于自己的努力和坚定的决心，提醒我们所有人，我们自身拥有实现伟大成就的力量。）
Through the loss of her lucky spikes and the subsequent victory, Jenny learned that self - confidence and perseverance are the real keys to achieving our goals, regardless of external factors.（通过丢失幸运钉鞋和随后的胜利，Jenny 认识到自信和毅力是实现目标的真正关键，无论外部因素如何。）
Jenny's journey from relying on lucky spikes to trusting her own abilities shows that setbacks can be stepping stones to self - discovery and growth, enabling us to break free from superstitions and embrace our true potential.（Jenny 从依赖幸运钉鞋到相信自己能力的历程表明，挫折可以成为自我发现和成长的垫脚石，使我们能够摆脱迷信，发挥自己的真正潜力。）
The story of Jenny and her lost spikes serves as a powerful reminder that our greatest assets are not material objects but the skills, determination, and resilience we cultivate through our experiences.（Jenny 和她丢失钉鞋的故事有力地提醒我们，我们最宝贵的财富不是物质，而是我们在经历中培养的技能、决心和韧性。）
In the end, Jenny's victory in the county championship without her lucky spikes proved that the strength of the human spirit and the power of self - belief are far more important than any lucky charm, inspiring us to have faith in ourselves and our capabilities.（最后，Jenny 在没有幸运钉鞋的情况下在县锦标赛中获胜，证明了人类精神的力量和自我信念的力量远比任何幸运符重要得多，激励我们相信自己和自己的能力。）
写作示范一
Paragraph 1: The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes. She watched as other runners adjusted their shiny new shoes, a pang of envy hitting her. Memories of her lucky spikes flooded her mind. “I can't do this without them,” she murmured to herself. But then, her best friend came up and put a hand on her shoulder. “Jenny, you're an amazing runner. You don't need those shoes to win. Your speed and skill are what matter.” Jenny took a deep breath, nodded, and stepped onto the starting line, determination replacing her doubt.
Paragraph 2: “Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!” The announcer's voice boomed. Jenny crossed the finish line, her heart pounding. She couldn't believe it. She'd done it! She'd won without her lucky spikes. Her teammates rushed towards her, cheering and hugging her. As she looked down at her plain running shoes, she realized something. It wasn't the spikes that made her a winner. It was her hard work, her passion, and her never - give - up attitude. From that day on, she knew that true luck came from within.
写作示范二
Paragraph 1: The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes. Her hands trembled slightly as she tied the laces of her replacement shoes. She felt like a part of her was missing. The starting gun sounded, and as the other runners shot forward, Jenny hesitated for a split second. But then, she remembered all the hours of training, all the times she'd leaped over hurdles with ease. She gritted her teeth and sprinted forward, her mind focused on the finish line. With each hurdle she cleared, her confidence grew.
Paragraph 2: “Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!” Jenny crossed the finish line in a blur. She collapsed onto the grass, tears streaming down her face. This wasn't just a victory over the other runners; it was a victory over her own fears and superstitions. Her teammates surrounded her, showering her with praise. “I did it!” she cried. “I really did it!” From that moment on, Jenny no longer needed a pair of lucky spikes to feel like a champion. She knew that the real power to succeed was within herself.
One possible version:
The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes. Devastated as she was, she knew she had to compete. As she stepped onto the starting line, Jenny took a deep breath and focused on the race ahead. She could feel the energy and excitement of the crowd around her, with her teammates cheering for her, which gave her a renewed sense of determination. The gunshot sounded through the stadium as the race began, and Jenny’s heart pounded with each stride. She pushed herself harder than ever before, jumping over hurdle after hurdle with precision and speed.
“Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!” The announcer’s voice echoed through the stadium as Jenny crossed the finish line first. The crowd erupted in cheers and applause, and Jenny’s teammates rushed to embrace her, celebrating her incredible victory. “I did it without my lucky spikes!” Jenny exclaimed, tears of joy streaming down her face. “That’s right, girl!” said Marisol, “You proved you are the real deal!” Jenny realized that it wasn’t the shoes that made her fast and strong, but her own determination and hard work. From that day on, she continued to break records and achieve greatness, proving that true success comes from within.