读后续写--离家的浪子,终回亲情的温暖港湾 讲义-河北省沧衡名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题

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名称 读后续写--离家的浪子,终回亲情的温暖港湾 讲义-河北省沧衡名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had run away from home after finishing high school. My parents had insisted I go to college, but I was tired of school. I hated it. I was determined not to go. And, besides, my father was too strict. I had too many chores to do around the farm. I haled the work!
There had been a quarrel between my father and me. I threw some things into a bag and left angrily, as my father shouted after me, “If you leave, don’t come back!” My mother cried openly, and I had seen those tears during a hundred sleepless nights.
Then it was time to write a letter to my father.
Dear Dad,
It’s been more than a year now. I’ve traveled east to west. I’ve had dozens of jobs. None of them amounted to very much. Always the same questions: “How much education have you got ” It seems they always want college men for the good jobs.
Dad, you and Mother were right about everything. I know now that the work on the farm didn’t hurt me, and I’m convinced I need college. I’m also convinced that both of you loved me.
Dad, I’ve learned a lesson. I want to come home. I know you said if I left, I couldn’t come back, but I’m praying you’ll change your mind. I want to come home and be a part of the family again.
Give my love to Mother and the girls.
Love,
Your son
As I folded the letter and put it into an envelope, I felt a refreshing relief. It was as if a heavy load had been lifted from my shoulders. And I had to be on my way home.
I started down the desolate road—the long road home. Fortunately, a car picked me up, and it was good to have someone to talk with. The driver was a salesman and very pleasant.
“Where you going, boy ” he asked good-naturedly.
There was a long silence before I said, “Home.”
“Been away from home long ”
I smiled, a little self-conscious, and said, “One year, one month and two days.”
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising.
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Finally I arrived home when. it was completely dark.
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文章大意
“我” 高中毕业后,因父母坚持让 “我” 上大学,加上觉得父亲过于严厉,农场家务繁重,与父亲发生争吵后离家出走。在外漂泊一年多,“我” 历经艰辛,做过许多工作,却因学历受限难以找到好工作。此时 “我” 意识到父母当初的想法是正确的,于是写信给父亲表达悔意,渴望回家。在回家路上,“我” 搭上一位推销员的车,他询问 “我” 的去向,“我” 告知他自己离家的时长。
故事山分析
开端:“我” 与父亲因上大学和农场劳作的矛盾争吵后离家出走。
发展:“我” 在外漂泊,经历各种工作,因学历不足碰壁,开始反思自己的行为。
高潮:“我” 写信给父亲表达想回家的愿望,踏上归程,这是故事的关键转折点,充满期待和紧张。
结局(待续写):通过司机的讲述以及 “我” 回家后的情景,展现家庭的接纳和 “我” 的成长,构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
父亲的狠话 “如果你离开,就别回来”:在续写中,会成为 “我” 回家的心理障碍,父亲的态度成为悬念,最终父亲可能会放下狠话,接纳 “我”,体现亲情的包容。
母亲的眼泪:暗示母亲对 “我” 的思念和牵挂,续写中,母亲可能会第一时间冲出来迎接 “我”,展现母爱的温暖。
“我” 在外工作因学历受限的遭遇:与回家后决心上大学形成呼应,体现 “我” 的成长和转变。
“我” 写信表达悔意和回家的渴望:是回家的铺垫,续写中,家人可能已经收到信,对 “我” 的归来有心理准备,使故事更连贯。
与司机的对话:续写中,司机讲述的故事可能会进一步触动 “我”,让 “我” 更加珍惜回家的机会,也为故事增添新元素。
续写要点(两段)
第一段:着重描写司机表达支持后讲述的令人惊讶的事情,比如他自己年轻时也有类似离家出走的经历,以及后来回家的故事,通过他的经历让 “我” 更加坚定回家的决心,也从他的故事中获得面对家人的勇气。
第二段:细致描绘 “我” 到家时的场景,如家中的灯光、父母和家人的反应,“我” 看到家人后的心情,以及一家人团聚后的温馨画面,突出亲情的珍贵和回家的温暖。
情感线
起初,“我” 因与父亲的矛盾负气离家,在外漂泊时,经历工作挫折,开始后悔和思念家人,写信时充满愧疚和期待。在与司机交谈中,听到他的故事,内心被触动,坚定回家决心。快到家时,紧张又激动,担心父亲不接纳自己。到家后,看到家人的那一刻,所有的担忧化为喜悦,感受到亲情的温暖,内心充满幸福和对未来的希望,完成从叛逆到成熟、从迷茫到坚定的情感转变。
故事线
“我” 与父亲争吵后离家出走。
“我” 在外漂泊,工作不如意,反思自己。
“我” 写信给父亲表达回家意愿,踏上归程。
司机与 “我” 交谈,讲述他的经历。
“我” 到达家门口,看到家中景象。
家人迎接 “我”,一家人团聚,“我” 感受到亲情温暖。
主旨升华句
This journey of leaving and returning taught me that family is an unbreakable bond, and no matter how far we stray, the love and warmth of home will always welcome us back.(这次离家与归来的经历让我明白,家庭是牢不可破的纽带,无论我们走得多远,家的爱与温暖总会迎接我们归来。)
Through my experiences away from home and the subsequent reunion, I realized that the lessons learned from mistakes and the embrace of family are the most precious gifts in life, shaping us into better individuals.(通过我离家的经历和随后的团聚,我意识到从错误中吸取的教训以及家人的接纳是生命中最珍贵的礼物,将我们塑造成为更好的人。)
My story serves as a reminder that the love of parents is like a lighthouse in the dark, always guiding us back to the right path, even when we make wrong choices and lose our way.(我的故事提醒我们,父母的爱就像黑暗中的灯塔,即使我们做出错误选择迷失方向,也总能指引我们回到正确的道路。)
The reunion with my family after my long - lost journey home not only mended the broken relationship but also made me cherish the importance of communication and understanding within a family.(在漫长的归家之旅后与家人团聚,不仅修复了破裂的关系,还让我更加珍惜家庭中沟通与理解的重要性。)
From the rebellious departure to the remorseful return, I came to understand that home is not just a place but a haven of love and forgiveness, where we can always find refuge and grow into more responsible people.(从叛逆的离开到懊悔的归来,我逐渐明白家不仅仅是一个地方,更是爱与宽恕的港湾,在那里我们总能找到庇护,成长为更有担当的人。)
写作示范一
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. He said that he had once been in the same situation as me. When he was young, he also had a big fight with his father and left home impulsively. After years of struggling outside, he finally plucked up the courage to go back. To his surprise, his father had been waiting for him with open arms. His story made me more determined to face my family. I couldn't wait to get home and see my parents.
Finally I arrived home when it was completely dark. The house was dimly lit. I took a deep breath and knocked on the door. After a while, the door opened, and my mother stood there, her eyes wide with surprise. Then she burst into tears and hugged me tightly. At that moment, my father came out of the room. He looked at me, his eyes filled with love and relief. Without a word, he pulled me into a warm embrace. We were finally reunited, and I knew I was home.
写作示范二
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. He shared how his own son had left home a few years ago, and the pain his family had endured during that time. When his son finally returned, their relationship became stronger than ever. His words gave me hope and comfort. I listened intently, imagining my own reunion with my family.
Finally I arrived home when it was completely dark. As I walked up the driveway, I saw the familiar silhouette of our house. My heart was pounding. I opened the gate and walked towards the door. Just then, the door swung open, and my sisters rushed out, screaming with joy. They surrounded me, jumping and hugging me. My mother appeared behind them, tears streaming down her face. My father stepped forward, his voice a bit hoarse, “Welcome back, son.” I smiled through my tears, feeling the warmth of home wash over me.
【答案】One possible version:
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. “Boy, you have made the right choice to go back home,” he said. “To be frank, my son ran away from home two years ago. I have been missing him every hour and every minute.” Now it’s time for me to comfort him, “Don’t worry. I believe he will come back soon, just like me.” I expressed my thanks for his kindness of having me in his car and I wished his son good luck. After all, we are all good people and good people deserve good fortune.
Finally, I arrived home when it was completely dark. Nervous and uneasy, I approached the door and knocked on it gently. It was my father who opened the door and my sudden appearance made him go wild with joy. “Son, you’ve finally come back. I’ve been waiting for this moment for long,” said my father in a trembling voice. It was at that moment that I realized there is no place like home and that blood is thicker than water.
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