读后续写 共制酱料,情暖邻里:从一碗汤到真挚情谊 讲义 河南省新乡市2024-2025学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷

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名称 读后续写 共制酱料,情暖邻里:从一碗汤到真挚情谊 讲义 河南省新乡市2024-2025学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Climbing six floors to get home every day is tiring, but it’s also fun. Especially around dinner time, the whole building is filled with the smell of different foods. I particularly love the unique smell of a sauce (酱) from apartment 501.While others might think it’s just a strong, stinky (臭的) smell, it’s very attractive to me.
This smell reminds me of when I first moved to the small town and rented a room of an old woman. Her meals were simple: rice sauce soup, and pickles (咸菜). Sauce soup was the main dish. At first, I didn’t like it, but slowly, I began to love the taste. On cold winter nights, coming home against the wind, I could always smell the sauce soup she was cooking in the kitchen. It was a kind of happiness that was hard to describe.
After I got married, I tried to make the sauce myself, but it never tasted the same, and my family didn’t like it. So, I gave up. The sauce smell from apartment 501 made me think of the old woman, and I started to pay more attention to the lady who lived there. She was in her thirties, with kind eyes. We would nod to each other when we met. One snowy day, we talked about how to store cabbage during winter. I mentioned that my family liked pork and cabbage dumplings, which she had never tried. I immediately gave her a plate of freshly cooked dumplings. She said thanks to me, with a smile.
I began to hope she would give me a bowl of her sauce soup. One day, she knocked on my door with a plate of steamed potato dumplings filled with spicy cabbage. They were delicious, but I felt a bit disappointed. We exchanged food a few more times, but I never got to taste her sauce soup.
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1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501.
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A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again.
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文章大意
作者每天爬六层楼回家,尤其喜欢 501 室独特的酱香味,这香味让作者想起初到小镇时借住的老妇人,老妇人常做酱汤,作者起初不喜欢,后来渐渐爱上,结婚后自己做却总是没有那个味道。作者因此关注 501 室的女士,二人会互相点头致意,还交流过冬储存白菜的方法,作者送女士猪肉白菜饺子,女士回赠加了辣白菜的土豆蒸饺,作者多次与女士交换食物,却始终没尝到她做的酱汤。
故事山分析
开端:作者每天爬楼回家,钟情 501 室的酱香味,回忆借住老妇人处爱上酱汤的经历。
发展:作者结婚后做不出原来味道的酱汤,关注 501 室女士,二人交流并交换食物。
高潮:作者多次与女士交换食物,却没尝到女士做的酱汤。
结局(待续写):围绕女士与酱汤展开,解决作者尝不到酱汤的悬念,展现邻里间情感的进一步发展。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
501 室的酱香味:在续写中,酱香味可能成为邻里关系进一步发展的契机,比如女士因为某些原因向作者解释酱汤的特别之处,或者终于邀请作者品尝。
作者对酱汤的喜爱:续写中,作者会继续展现对酱汤的执着,可能在听到 501 室争吵后,出于关心和对酱汤的好奇而进一步了解情况。
作者与 501 室女士的交流:前面的交流为后续的互动做铺垫,续写中可能会有更深入的交流,如女士向作者倾诉生活烦恼等。
作者和女士互相送食物:这一情节预示着邻里关系的升温,在续写中,可能会因为送食物而化解矛盾或者增进感情。
作者没尝到酱汤:这是一个悬念,在续写中必然会得到解决,可能是女士主动送上酱汤,也可能是在特殊情况下作者终于品尝到。
续写要点(两段)
第一段:听到 501 室争吵后,作者的反应,如担心、好奇,是否去询问情况,女士的状态以及是否提及酱汤相关内容。
第二段:女士再次敲门,可能带来的东西,比如酱汤,或者解释之前争吵的原因,以及对两人关系的影响,体现邻里间的温暖和理解。
情感线
起初,作者对 501 室的酱香味充满喜爱和怀念,对女士怀着期待,渴望品尝她做的酱汤。听到争吵时,作者满心担忧,急切想了解情况。女士再次敲门时,作者的心情从焦虑转为期待,若女士带来酱汤,作者会收获满足与感动,两人的邻里情也会从平淡的交流上升为深厚的理解与关怀,整个情感线在波折中升温。
故事线
501 室的争吵原因及后续发展。
作者对争吵的反应和行动。
女士的内心变化及对作者的态度。
酱汤在故事中的最终呈现。
作者与女士关系的进一步发展。
整个事件对邻里生活氛围的影响。
主旨升华句
In the simple exchanges between neighbors, we can find the true meaning of community and the warmth that binds us together.
The story of the sauce soup and the interactions between neighbors shows that small gestures of kindness can build a bridge of understanding and love.
Through the ups and downs of this neighborhood story, we realize that every connection, no matter how trivial, has the potential to bring light and warmth to our lives.
This tale of a shared building and the people in it serves as a reminder that the beauty of life often lies in the unexpected bonds we form with those around us.
In the world of neighbors, the pursuit of a simple taste leads to a profound understanding of human connection and the power of kindness.
写作示范一
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501. Concerned, I knocked on the door. The lady opened it, looking upset. She told me that she and her husband had a quarrel over making sauce soup. Her husband thought it was too much trouble, but she had been making it for years, just like her mother did. I listened quietly, understanding her feelings. Before I left, I said, "I know how much it means to you."
A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again. This time, she held a bowl of steaming sauce soup. With a big smile, she said, "I made this for you. Thank you for listening to me that day." I was overjoyed. As I took the first sip, the familiar taste filled my mouth. It was not just a bowl of soup, but a symbol of our deepening friendship and the warmth of the neighborhood.
写作示范二
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501. Curiosity got the better of me, and I decided to check it out. When I knocked on the door, the lady seemed embarrassed. She explained that she was trying to make a special batch of sauce for a family gathering, but things weren't going well. I offered to help, and we spent the next hour in her kitchen, chatting and stirring the sauce together.
A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again. In her hands was a plate of dumplings filled with the sauce we made together. She said, "These are made with the sauce we made. It tastes different, but it's special." We shared the dumplings, laughing and talking. The simple act of sharing food and helping each other had turned our acquaintance into a real friendship, making our building feel more like a home.
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范文
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501. I quickly went over to help. Inside her home, I saw sauce blocks wrapped in brown paper on the shelf and realized I might soon taste the new sauce. I accidentally said, “Such good sauce.” The lady stopped crying and looked at me, and her husband seemed surprised too. I changed the subject and praised their cute child, and the lady’s gentle look returned. Two days later, the lady brought me a bowl of sauce, promising to give me more when the new sauce was ready.
A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again. She gave me a larger pot of freshly made sauce and a large bowl of sauce soup. She smiled and said, “I remembered how much you liked the sauce and the soup, so I made extra.” Her kindness touched me deeply. We stood in the doorway, chatting about our favorite recipes and family traditions. As I sat down to enjoy the soup that evening, I thought about the connections we made through food and how they brought us closer together. It felt like a new friendship was starting.
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