读后续写 口琴奏响的人生答案，让迷茫消散 讲义-安徽省十校联考2024-2025学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题

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The train station was bustling (喧闹的) as I sat on a cold metal bench, watching the chaos (混乱) unfold around me. Travelers rushed by, each with their own destinations, their own stories. Yet I sat there, still and purposeless. My suitcase rested beside me, but unlike everyone else, I had no destination. I had left my hometown, tired of the never-ending routine, but the escape I had longed for brought no relief. Instead, it left me alone, separated from a world I once believed I understood. The noise, the people, the announcements - all of it seemed distant, as though I were watching life happen from behind a glass wall.
As I stared aimlessly, a wrinkled old man walked past me, pushing an overloaded cart of junk. He paused a few feet away, scanning the area, before sitting down cross-legged on the floor near me. His clothes were muddy, and his hands looked roughened by years of hard work. I watched as he reached into his cart and pulled out a harmonica (口琴), pressing it to his lips. The first note was shaky, but soon a simple, beautiful melody (旋律) filled the air. Strangely, the chaotic station grew quieter, as though his music had worked magic.
At first, I felt confused - why here, and why now But as I watched him play, I noticed something remarkable. His face lit up, not with joy exactly, but with a deep contentment that seemed out of place in his circumstances. People started slowing down to listen. A young girl tugged at her mother's coat, wanting to stay. A businessman, hurriedly checking his phone, paused to drop a coin in the old man’s hat. It struck me how a man with so little could share so much.
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With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment.
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After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase.
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文章大意
“我” 厌倦家乡一成不变的生活，离家来到喧闹的火车站，却因漫无目的而倍感孤独，周围的一切都让 “我” 觉得遥远。此时，一位衣衫褴褛、推着装满杂物手推车的老人在 “我” 附近坐下，拿出口琴吹奏。起初音符不稳，但很快美妙旋律响起，喧闹的车站都安静下来，他脸上带着与处境不符的满足感，引得路人驻足聆听，甚至有人投币。“我” 对老人的满足感到好奇，想一探究竟。
故事山分析
开端：“我” 在火车站，因逃离家乡却无目的而迷茫孤独，周围的喧嚣与 “我” 格格不入。
发展：老人出现，他衣衫破旧，推着杂物车，坐下后吹起口琴，音乐让车站安静，他的满足和路人的反应引起 “我” 的好奇。
高潮：“我” 决定接近老人，探寻他满足的原因，这是故事的关键转折点，推动情节发展。
结局（待续写）：通过 “我” 与老人的对话以及 “我” 之后的感悟和行动，展现从迷茫到找到方向的转变，构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
“我” 的迷茫无目的：为 “我” 向老人寻求答案埋下伏笔，在续写中，“我” 会向老人倾诉自己的困惑，渴望得到指引。
老人的贫穷与满足形成反差：引出 “我” 的好奇，在续写中，老人会解释自己满足的原因，这将触动 “我”，让 “我” 重新审视生活。
路人对老人音乐的反应：暗示老人的行为有感染力，在续写中，“我” 也会被老人的音乐和态度所感染，发生思想转变。
“我” 对周围的疏离感：与之后 “我” 被老人吸引形成对比，在续写中，“我” 会因老人的出现打破这种疏离，重新融入生活。
老人的音乐：是故事的重要元素，在续写中，老人可能会结合音乐阐述自己的生活态度，影响 “我” 的想法。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 “我” 接近老人时的心理活动，紧张、期待又有些忐忑。与老人交流时，详细描述老人的回答，他可能讲述自己虽物质匮乏，但从音乐中找到内心宁静，生活的小确幸让他满足，如能在车站为大家带来片刻宁静就是幸福。
第二段：描绘 “我” 听了老人的话后的内心变化，从迷茫到找到希望。描述 “我” 的行动，如决定重新规划行程，不再盲目逃避，而是带着新的感悟去探索世界，最后表达对未来的期待。
情感线
起初，“我” 因逃离家乡却无方向而孤独迷茫，内心充满对生活的失望和对未知的恐惧。看到老人满足的样子，“我” 好奇又疑惑。接近老人时，“我” 紧张又期待。听老人讲述后，“我” 心中燃起希望，从消极逃避转变为积极面对，对未来充满期待，渴望像老人一样，从平凡生活中找到属于自己的满足，内心变得坚定而充实。
故事线
“我” 厌倦家乡生活，来到火车站，却无目的地，感到孤独迷茫。
衣衫破旧的老人出现，在 “我” 附近坐下吹口琴，音乐让车站安静，他的满足和路人反应引起 “我” 好奇。
“我” 决定接近老人，探寻他满足的原因。
老人向 “我” 解释自己满足的原因，如从音乐和生活小确幸中找到幸福。
“我” 听后受到触动，内心从迷茫转为充满希望。
“我” 决定重新规划行程，积极面对生活，期待未来。
主旨升华句
This encounter taught me that true contentment doesn't lie in material possessions or a fixed destination, but in the simple joys and the ability to find beauty in every moment.（这次相遇教会我，真正的满足不在于物质财富或固定的目的地，而在于简单的快乐和在每一刻发现美的能力。）
The old man's story reminded me that even in the midst of chaos and hardship, a positive attitude can transform our perception of life and bring us inner peace.（老人的故事提醒我，即使在混乱和艰难之中，积极的态度也能改变我们对生活的认知，给我们带来内心的平静。）
Through this experience, I realized that sometimes, the most valuable lessons come from the most unexpected people, guiding us to rediscover the meaning of life.（通过这次经历，我意识到，有时候，最宝贵的教训来自最意想不到的人，引导我们重新发现生活的意义。）
The old man's music and his contentment were a wake - up call, making me understand that happiness is a choice we make, regardless of our circumstances.（老人的音乐和他的满足感敲响了警钟，让我明白幸福是我们做出的选择，与我们的处境无关。）
Our brief interaction at the train station not only changed my perspective on that day but also became a guiding light for my future journey, teaching me to cherish every moment and find joy in the simplest things.（我们在火车站的短暂交流不仅改变了我当天的看法，也成为我未来旅程的一盏明灯，教会我珍惜每一刻，从最简单的事物中找到快乐。）
写作示范一
With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment. My heart was pounding, and I felt a bit nervous. "Sir," I said softly, "I'm curious. You seem so content, even though you don't have much. How do you manage that " The old man looked up at me with kind eyes and smiled. "Young man," he said, "life is full of simple pleasures. This harmonica brings me joy, and when I can share that joy with others, it makes me feel fulfilled. Material things don't define happiness." His words struck a chord in me.
After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase. I realized that my journey didn't have to be aimless. I decided to set out with a new purpose, to explore the world and find my own simple pleasures. I thanked the old man sincerely and walked towards the ticket counter. Looking back, I saw him playing his harmonica again, still content. I was excited about the new chapter of my life, ready to embrace whatever came my way.
写作示范二
With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment. Standing in front of him, I stammered, "Excuse me, but your happiness really puzzles me. Can you tell me why " The old man put down his harmonica and replied, "Well, every day is a gift. When I play my music here, I see people's faces light up. That's more precious than any money or luxury. Life is what we make of it, and I choose to find beauty in the ordinary." His words were like a warm breeze on a cold day.
After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase. I knew I couldn't keep running away. I made up my mind to go back home and face my life with a new attitude. I would cherish the small things, just like the old man. I waved goodbye to him and left the station with a new sense of purpose. I was eager to start this new journey, filled with the belief that a better life was waiting for me.
【答案】One possible version:
With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment. As I neared, his melody softened, and he looked up with a gentle smile. “Beautiful tune, ” I said, unsure how to begin. He nodded, his hands resting on the harmonica. “Music doesn’t fix everything, but it reminds me there’s still beauty in the world, ” he said. I hesitated, then shared my struggle - the feeling of being lost, the weight of purposelessness. “Life isn’t about having all the answers, ” he added. “It’s about finding meaning, even in the little things. That’s what keeps me going. ”
After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase. The old man’s words stayed with me, urging me to stop running and start creating purpose. Dropping a coin in his hat, I thanked him - not just for the music, but for the wisdom. As I boarded the train, the station no longer felt chaotic but alive with possibilities. This time I was resolved to push forward. The uncertainty ahead no longer frightened me. Instead, it felt like a blank canvas waiting to be painted, a melody waiting to be played.