读后续写 困境中的双向奔赴：善良从不缺席 讲义-安徽省合肥市肥西县2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom Young was on his way home from a hard day’s work at a construction site, carrying his worn-out hammer which had accompanied him through thick and thin. With each step, his mind was filled with worry as he racked his brain to find money for his seriously ill son, Andrew, who was in great need of heart surgery.
Tom had run out of choices and time. Desperation was beginning to set in, but he refused to let his son suffer helplessly. As he walked, the weight of his troubles pressed heavily on his shoulders. So desperate was he that he even heard a hum in his ears. The next moment the hum was entirely covered by a loud sound.
He turned in shock, and what he saw took his breath away. An expensive luxury car was wrapped around a big tree on the other side of the street, with its front twisted and flames starting to spring up from the car.
Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car. He noticed that although the young lady in the driver’s seat did not seem to have been severely injured - apparently because of the open airbag - she was unconscious. Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense. He realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time.
He grabbed the handle and pulled it, but the door was bent and did not open. He used all his strength and tried again, but in vain. It was a sports car, so it had only two doors, and the other one was blocked by the tree. He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible. He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands, and the flames were getting bigger.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly.
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The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news.
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文章大意
Tom 在建筑工地上辛苦工作一天后回家，满脑子都是为重病儿子凑钱做心脏手术的事。途中，他看到一辆豪车撞到树上起火，车里的年轻女士虽未受重伤，但昏迷不醒。车门因变形打不开，车窗玻璃又太厚，他徒手无法打破，火势却越来越大，情况十分危急。
故事山分析
开端：Tom 结束一天工作回家，满心忧虑为儿子凑手术费，这是他面临的困境，也是故事的背景。
发展：Tom 看到车祸，决定救人，尝试打开车门和打破车窗玻璃，却都遭遇阻碍，火势加剧，救援陷入僵局。
高潮：时间紧迫，Tom 急需找到解决办法救出女孩，这是故事的紧张点，也是续写的关键起始点。
结局（待续写）：通过 Tom 成功救出女孩以及女孩得知 Tom 困境后的回应，展现善良与感恩的主题，构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
Tom 为儿子凑手术费的困境：为后文女孩得知他的困难并提供帮助埋下伏笔，在续写中，女孩会因感恩 Tom 的救命之恩，利用自己的资源帮助他解决经济难题。
豪车撞到树上起火：引出 Tom 的救援行动，在续写中，救援成功后，这起事故会成为女孩了解 Tom 的契机，通过新闻报道等方式得知他的困境。
车门变形打不开，车窗玻璃厚：设置救援困难，在续写中，Tom 会想出办法克服这些困难，成功救出女孩，凸显他的勇敢和智慧。
女孩昏迷：让 Tom 的救援行动更加紧迫，在续写中，女孩苏醒后会对 Tom 充满感激，进而关注他的生活状况。
火势越来越大：增加救援的紧张感，在续写中，Tom 会在火势威胁下成功完成救援，体现他的果断和勇敢，也为女孩的感恩埋下伏笔。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 Tom 在危急时刻的心理活动，他焦急万分，拼命思考解决办法。最终，他想到用自己的锤子打破车窗玻璃，详细描述他用锤子砸玻璃的过程，如他紧握锤子，用尽全身力气，一下又一下地砸向玻璃，玻璃终于出现裂痕，直至破碎，他成功将女孩救出。
第二段：描述女孩从当地新闻得知 Tom 的困境后的反应，她深受感动，决定帮助 Tom。可以写她联系自己的家人或朋友，筹集资金，或者利用自己的社会关系为 Tom 提供帮助。最后，Tom 得到了帮助，儿子顺利进行手术，他对女孩充满感激，两人的故事成为一段佳话。
情感线
起初，Tom 因儿子的病情陷入极度焦虑和绝望，为凑钱而苦恼。看到车祸时，他的担忧转化为救人的急切。救援过程中，他紧张又坚定，一心只想救出女孩。成功救出女孩后，他的心情稍缓。当女孩得知他的困境并提供帮助时，Tom 从绝望中看到希望，心中满是感激。女孩则从被救的感恩，转变为主动帮助恩人的热心，两人的情感在善良与感恩中交织升华。
故事线
Tom 工作一天后回家，为儿子的心脏手术费发愁。
Tom 看到豪车撞树起火，决定救人。
Tom 尝试打开车门和打破车窗玻璃，都未成功，火势加剧。
Tom 用锤子打破车窗玻璃，成功救出女孩。
女孩从当地新闻得知 Tom 的困境。
女孩帮助 Tom，Tom 的儿子顺利进行手术。
主旨升华句
This story shows that in the face of difficulties, our kindness and courage can not only save others but also bring unexpected rewards, and that the bond of gratitude can bridge the gaps between people.（这个故事表明，在困难面前，我们的善良和勇气不仅能拯救他人，还能带来意想不到的回报，感恩的纽带可以弥合人与人之间的差距。）
Through Tom's act of selfless rescue and the girl's return of kindness, we learn that the power of compassion has no limits, and that a simple act of kindness can start a beautiful cycle of giving and receiving.（通过 Tom 的无私救援和女孩的感恩回报，我们了解到，同情的力量是无限的，一个简单的善举可以开启一个美好的给予与接受的循环。）
The encounter between Tom and the girl proves that even in the most desperate situations, hope can emerge from the most unexpected places, and that the kindness in our hearts can be a guiding light for others.（Tom 和女孩的相遇证明，即使在最绝望的情况下，希望也能从最意想不到的地方出现，我们心中的善良可以成为他人的指路明灯。）
This heartwarming story reminds us that helping others is not only about offering a hand in times of need but also about creating a community where love and kindness are passed on from one person to another.（这个温馨的故事提醒我们，帮助他人不仅是在需要时伸出援手，更是营造一个爱与善良在人与人之间传递的社区。）
The journey of Tom and the girl from a life - threatening accident to a heart - warming act of mutual help demonstrates that the true value of life lies in our ability to care for others and make a positive impact on their lives.（Tom 和女孩从一场危及生命的事故到一次暖心的互助行为的历程表明，生命的真正价值在于我们关心他人并对他们的生活产生积极影响的能力。）
写作示范一
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. Suddenly, he remembered the hammer in his hand. Without hesitation, he raised it high and struck the glass with all his might. The first blow made a small crack, and with a few more powerful strikes, the glass finally shattered. He quickly reached inside, unbuckled the girl's seatbelt, and carried her to a safe distance. Just as they got away, the car exploded into a ball of fire.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She immediately called her wealthy father and told him the whole story. Her father was deeply moved by Tom's heroic act. They decided to cover all the medical expenses for Tom's son. When Tom received the news, he was filled with gratitude and relief. His son's life was saved, all thanks to his own kindness and the girl's generosity.
写作示范二
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. He looked around frantically for something to break the glass. Then he spotted a large rock nearby. He rushed to pick it up and ran back to the car. With a loud shout, he smashed the rock against the glass. After several attempts, the glass finally gave way. He pulled the unconscious girl out of the car just as the flames engulfed the entire vehicle.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She used her social media influence to start a fundraising campaign for Tom. Thousands of people were touched by Tom's story and donated money. In a short time, enough money was raised for Andrew's surgery. Tom was overwhelmed with joy and gratitude. He couldn't believe that his act of kindness had brought such a wonderful outcome.
【答案】One possible version:
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. In a moment of clarity, Tom remembered the worn-out hammer in his hand. It had been a reliable companion through countless days of labor, and now it was his only hope. With a determined swing, he smashed the hammer against the window, shattering the glass with a loud crash. Carefully, he reached into the vehicle, avoiding the jagged edges, and unbuckled the unconscious young lady. With all his strength, he pulled her out, dragging her a safe distance from the car just as the flames roared fiercely, engulfing the vehicle in a fiery blaze. Soon, Tom’s heroic deed went viral.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She learned about his struggle to find money for his son’s heart surgery and felt a deep sense of empathy for his situation. Remembering how he had risked his life to save her, she decided to take action. With her family’s connections and resources, she organized a fundraising campaign to help cover the medical expenses for Andrew’s surgery. As word spread about Tom’s story, the community rallied together, contributing whatever they could. Grateful for the support, Tom felt a renewed sense of hope. The girl, now a friend, visited him in the hospital, bringing not just financial help but also encouragement. Their bond grew stronger, united by the challenges they faced and the lives they had touched.