读后续写 十五年漫长寻路,只为感恩那抹善意 讲义-河北省沧州市2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题

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名称 读后续写 十五年漫长寻路,只为感恩那抹善意 讲义-河北省沧州市2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day in 2009, Jane and her husband planned to drive from Boise to Jane’s hometown of Salt Lake City to visit her parents. But soon after they started their journey, their car broke down halfway. They didn’t have enough money to fix it. What’s worse, at the repair shop, they were told that it would take several days to repair it because there were no spare parts available. Just as they were wondering what to do, a woman named Alisa, who was at the repair shop, overheard their situation. She decided to help them.
“She offered to take us to Salt Lake City. The only thing she needed to do was go home to take care of her sick brother before leaving. She had to give her brother medicine at night,” Jane recalled, looking grateful.
Later that day, Alisa took the couple to her home. She bought them dinner and let them spend the night at her house. Jane and her husband thanked her for what she had done for them. They also watched Alisa take care of her brother. It was a loving and touching scene. Their admiration for Alisa grew. She told them that she felt like she did just the right thing that anyone would do in that situation.
The next day, early in the morning, Alisa drove them to Salt Lake City. But before they could fully thank her, she said goodbye and drove away. It was a little sad and regretful. After that, Jane and Alisa lost touch. But nearly 15 years later, Jane still thought about everything Alisa had done for them. She wanted to contact Alisa and express how much Alisa’s help had made a difference in her life. However, she couldn’t remember Alisa’s full name and the chance to find her seemed very small.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, Jane had an idea.
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To Jane’s surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone.
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文章大意 2009年,Jane和丈夫从博伊西开车前往Jane位于盐湖城的家乡看望父母,途中汽车抛锚,因缺钱且无零部件,维修需耗时多日。在维修店,Alisa听闻他们的困境,决定帮忙。她先带Jane夫妇回自己家,为他们提供晚餐并留宿,还照顾生病的弟弟。次日清晨,Alisa开车送他们到盐湖城,之后便失去联系。近15年后,Jane仍难忘Alisa的帮助,想联系她表达感激,却因记不清其全名,寻找她的机会渺茫。
故事山分析
开端:Jane 和丈夫开车途中汽车抛锚,陷入困境,在维修店遭遇维修难题和资金短缺。
发展:Alisa 主动帮忙,带他们回家,提供食宿,还照顾生病的弟弟,展现出善良和热心。
高潮:Alisa 送他们到目的地后离开,两人失去联系,多年后 Jane 想寻找 Alisa 表达感激,却面临困难,这是故事的转折点,也是续写的起点。
结局(待续写):通过 Jane 寻找 Alisa 的行动以及后续两人重逢后的交流,展现善良的回报和友情的延续,构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
Alisa 的善良帮助:为后续 Jane 寻找她并表达感激埋下伏笔,在续写中,Jane 的寻找行动是对这份善良的回应,重逢后的交流也将进一步体现善良带来的温暖延续。
失去联系且记不清全名:设置了寻找的困难,在续写中,Jane 将克服这一困难,可能通过回忆细节、借助网络等方式,凸显寻找的不易和 Jane 的决心。
Jane 多年后仍难忘 Alisa 的帮助:表明 Jane 渴望回报的心情,在续写中,会促使 Jane 积极寻找 Alisa,成为故事发展的动力。
Alisa 照顾生病的弟弟:展现她的家庭责任感,在续写中,可能会提及她的弟弟情况,或者她的家庭对她善良行为的影响,丰富人物形象。
汽车维修的困难:引出 Alisa 的帮助,在续写中,这一困境可能会被再次提及,作为两人相识的背景,强调 Alisa 帮助的重要性。
续写要点(两段)
第一段:详细描述 Jane 想到的寻找 Alisa 的办法,比如她在社交媒体上发布当年的经历,描述 Alisa 的特征,向当地的社区论坛求助,联系当年的维修店询问是否有 Alisa 的信息等,突出她寻找的努力和决心。
第二段:着重描写 Alisa 看到故事后的反应,她的惊喜、感动,以及两人通电话或见面后的交流场景,回忆当年的经历,表达彼此的思念和对这份友情的珍视。
情感线
起初,Jane 和丈夫遭遇困境,心情沮丧焦虑。Alisa 的出现让他们感受到温暖和希望,对 Alisa 充满感激。分别后失去联系,Jane 心中一直怀有感恩和思念。多年后寻找 Alisa 时,她满怀期待又有些忐忑。当 Alisa 看到故事并回应时,Jane 的喜悦和激动达到顶点,两人重逢后的交流让这份因善良而产生的情感更加深厚,她们都为这份跨越多年的情谊感到无比珍贵,情感从最初的困境中的温暖,到重逢后的感动与珍惜,不断升华。
故事线
Jane 和丈夫开车途中汽车抛锚,面临维修难题和资金短缺。
Alisa 在维修店听闻他们的困境,决定帮忙,带他们回家并提供食宿。
Alisa 照顾生病的弟弟,展现家庭责任感。
次日 Alisa 送他们到盐湖城后离开,两人失去联系。
近 15 年后 Jane 想寻找 Alisa 表达感激,却记不清全名,面临困难。
Jane 通过各种方式寻找 Alisa,最终两人重逢交流。
主旨升华句
This story proves that a simple act of kindness can have a lasting impact, transcending time and distance, and that the power of human kindness can create beautiful connections that endure.(这个故事证明,一个简单的善举可以产生持久的影响,跨越时间和距离,人类善良的力量可以创造出持久的美好联系。)
Jane's determination to find Alisa after all these years shows that gratitude is a powerful emotion that can drive us to seek out those who have made a difference in our lives, and that true friendship can withstand the test of time.(多年后 Jane 寻找 Alisa 的决心表明,感恩是一种强大的情感,它可以驱使我们寻找那些在我们生活中产生重要影响的人,真正的友谊可以经得起时间的考验。)
The reunion of Jane and Alisa not only rekindles their friendship but also serves as a reminder that the kindness we offer to others can come back to us in unexpected ways, and that every act of kindness is a seed that can grow into a beautiful relationship.(Jane 和 Alisa 的重逢不仅重燃了她们的友谊,也提醒我们,我们给予他人的善意可能会以意想不到的方式回到我们身边,每一个善举都是一颗可以长成美好关系的种子。)
Through this heartwarming story, we learn that in a world full of uncertainties, acts of kindness and the bonds they create are like beacons of hope, guiding us through difficult times and bringing warmth and joy to our lives.(通过这个温馨的故事,我们了解到,在一个充满不确定性的世界里,善举以及它们所建立的联系就像希望的灯塔,指引我们度过艰难时期,给我们的生活带来温暖和喜悦。)
The journey of Jane and Alisa from strangers to friends, and their reunion after years apart, demonstrates that the power of kindness has no limits, and that it can bridge the gaps between people, creating a world filled with love and compassion.(Jane 和 Alisa 从陌生人到朋友的历程,以及她们多年后的重逢,表明善良的力量是无限的,它可以弥合人与人之间的差距,创造一个充满爱和同情的世界。)
写作示范一
Suddenly, Jane had an idea. She decided to share her story on social media, hoping someone might recognize Alisa. She described Alisa's kind actions in detail and included the few details she remembered about her, like the town where she lived and the fact that she had a sick brother. She also reached out to the repair shop where they first met, asking if they had any information about Alisa. Days passed, and there was no response, but Jane didn't give up.
To Jane's surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone. She was so touched to know that Jane had been looking for her all these years. When she called Jane, both of them were filled with excitement and joy. They talked for hours, reminiscing about that eventful day. Alisa was glad her help had meant so much to Jane. They decided to meet soon and promised never to lose touch again.
写作示范二
Suddenly, Jane had an idea. She posted their story on local community forums, hoping to get some leads. She also contacted local newspapers, asking if they could run a story about her search for the kind - hearted Alisa. She even made a video about her experience and uploaded it on video - sharing platforms. Many people were moved by her story and started sharing it, which spread the word far and wide.
To Jane's surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone. Tears filled her eyes as she read about how much her help had meant to Jane. When she called Jane, their voices trembled with emotion. They shared how their lives had changed over the past 15 years. Alisa was amazed by Jane's determination to find her. They made plans to meet in person, looking forward to creating new memories together.
【答案】
Suddenly, Jane had an idea. She could post the story on social media. After all, information on it could spread quickly. Without hesitation, she wrote her story, describing how Alisa helped her and her husband by letting them stay at her house and driving them home the next day. She also mentioned Alisa’s sick brother, who Alisa cared for with love and energy. At the end of the story, she sincerely hoped Alisa could recognize her and contact her. After making sure everything was okay, she clicked and posted it.
To Jane’s surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone. Years after they first met, they reconnected through a video call. Within the first few minutes of chatting, and with tears in her eyes, Jane thanked Alisa again. She said that over the past years, inspired by Alisa’s kindness, she had always tried to be like Alisa and help others. Alisa was surprised and moved to tears. They decided to set a date for a happy reunion.
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