专题16应用文写作之邀请信
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透(考点归纳,写作模版,考点练透+真题模拟)
考点归纳
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的信件,包括展览、节日聚会、聚餐、担任比赛的评委或在讲座上发言等。在写作时,语气要热情、真挚,不要强人所难;叙事要清楚、明白。
写作结构
常用表达句型积累
1、表明写信意图,向某人发出邀请
① I am writing to invite you to …/I’m writing to tell you that there will be a...
我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你有一个……
② I am very pleased/more than delighted to invite you to participate in... to be held in...
我很高兴邀请你参加在……举行的……
③ It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in... to be held in... on...
能邀请您参加在……举办的……是我的荣幸。
④ On behalf of..., I am sincerely inviting you to participate in....
我代表……真挚地邀请您参加……。
⑤ It gives me great pleasure to invite you to...
我很荣幸能够邀请您参加.......
2、介绍邀请/活动的具体内容
① Here are arrangements for this activity. / The following are arrangements for this activity. / Arrangements for this activity are as follows.
活动安排如下。
② The following are some details about ..../ Some details about ... are as follows.
这次.......的细节如下。
③ To begin with, we will...Besides, there will be varieties of activities such as..., which will...
首先,我们将……。 此外,将会有很多活动,例如……这将……。
④ This will be followed by...At around ten, we will hold a small party, at which...
随后会有……。 十点左右我们会举行一个小型派对,派对上……。
⑤ The activity is scheduled to last approximately...,from...to...
活动预计持续约……, 从……到…… (时间)。
⑥ As scheduled, the meeting/ lecture/interview will be held from ...to ... this Saturday in/at ....
根据安排,本次会议/讲座/访问将于本周日的几点到几点在.....地方举行。
⑦ I’m sure you will take an interest in the activities. For one thing, ... For another, ...
我相信你一定会对这些活动感兴趣的。一方面,......;另一方面......
⑧ During the ..., we will have ..., which you will be interested in. And then, ...
在这次......中,我们会有......,你会对他们很感兴趣的。然后......
期待对方接受邀请、期待回复并表示感谢
① Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to...
请写信告诉我你是否能来……,好吗
② An early / favorable / timely reply will be highly appreciated.
我会非常感激你的早日/ 肯定/ 及时回复。
③ If you are interested, please let me know and I’ll send you more relevant/ detailed information.
如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我将给你发送更多的相关/ 细节信息。
④ Hopefully, you will accept our invitation. My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
希望你能接受我们的邀请。如果你能来, 我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
⑤ We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
如果你能在你方便时尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
⑥ I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation / join us and I have the confidence that...
我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/ 加入我们,我有信心……
⑦ I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我期待着你尽早的答复。
邀请信模板
Dear _____,
I am Li Hua, president of the Students' Union. I am writing to eagerly invite you to_________(参加活动).
_______(活动) will be held in+地点+ next/this 时间 + on\about 活动主题. There will be various _________(具体活动内容) , such as ……,which will definitely leave a deep impression on you.
I would appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
XX
精彩凤头I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. Knowing that you are interested in classical music, I am writing eagerly to invite you to take part in the music festival to be held in hour school.
常用动词
invite v. invitation n.邀请 be honored to do很荣幸做(it’s one’s honor to do…) be willing to
attend/participate in/join in/take part in/sign up for参加 appreciate感激
常用介词短语
on behalf of代表 around the corner即将到来at your convenience在你方便时
其他常用词
further information更多信息 sincere invitation// sincerely invite诚挚的邀请 participant参加者
活动背景介绍
(1) ....... is coming.(2) ....... is approaching.(3) ....... is around the corner.
... is approaching+and we will hold a/an...
写信目的
(1) (Knowing you are fond of…,)I am writing to invite you to attend...
(2)It’s a pleasure\honor for me to invite you to attend...
(3) I am writing on behalf of all students to invite you to give a lecture on...
时间&地点
活动+will be held+地点状语+时间状语
The activity will be held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Friday.
What you need to keep in mind is that the activity will be held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Friday.
It is in the school hall that the festival/activity will be held.
主要活动:During the …, there will be a lot of activities, such as (including)…
(Activities will cover a lot of ground, including…)
参加对象:全体对象All the teachers and students are welcome to the festival.
个人对象You really do well in…,therefore we hope you can…
总结活动The festival is so meaningful that you will have a good time.
期待回复
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation at your earliest convenience.
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
考点练透
高考模拟
(一)
(2024·重庆·模拟预测)假如你是新华中学的李华,你想邀请外教Jack 参加今年的重庆茶博会,请你写一封邮件,内容如下:
1.告知茶博会时间,地点(2024年5月10—13日,重庆国际会展中心);
2.简要介绍茶博会内容(欣赏茶艺表演,品茶等);
3.推荐出行方式。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:茶博会 China Chongqing Tea Expo 国际会展中心 International Exhibition Center
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2024·广西·一模)假定你是李华,你的同学Chris作为交换生来中国已经一年了,他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢今年春节2月10日他在中国,请你给他写一封邀请函,邀请他去你家欢度春节。内容包括:
1. 表达你诚挚的邀请;
2. 节日简介(庆祝时间、主要活动安排)。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
(2024·安徽·三模)假定你是李华,请给英国留学生Chris写一封邀请信,邀请他为你们“美食文化节”做个小讲座,介绍他家乡的美食文化。内容包括:
1.美食文化节的相关信息;
2.讲座内容。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
(2024·北京朝阳·二模)假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校即将举办以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信,邀请他一起参加。内容包括:
1. 介绍你打算参加的活动;
2. 询问对方意向。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2024·北京东城·二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的好友Jim是北京一所国际学校的篮球队队长,你校计划组织一场校际篮球比赛,请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.发出比赛邀请;
2.提议比赛安排。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(2024·安徽淮北·二模)假定你是李华,你校将举办“校园音乐节”,并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友Hans写封邮件,邀请他在线观看。内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 观看时间;
3. 期待他的参与。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Hans,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(2024·江西·模拟预测)假定你是班长李华,你班将举办班级英语毕业晚会,请你给外教Mr. Jenkins 写一封邮件,邀请他来参加。内容包括:
1. 时间、地点;
2. 晚会内容。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(2024·山西临汾·三模)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校为庆祝第九个“中国航天日”(Space Day of China) 将举办一系列活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件邀请他来参加。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(九)
(2024·北京通州·二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校科技社团将要组织一次以“人工智能(AI)与未来生活”为主题的活动,请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.活动目的和内容。
注意:1.词数 100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
(2024·江西·二模)假定你是李华,你市最大的旅游公司将首次在本周日举办“美食地图”(Mouth-watering Food Map)活动,请你给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 介绍活动创意及目的;
2. 邀请他参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
高考真题
(一)
(2023·全国·高考真题)假定你是高三学生李华,下周六晚上6:00-8:00你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Linda非常喜欢音乐,请你写一封信邀请她参加此次活动。
内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.活动时间和地点;
3.活动内容和意义。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Linda,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2022·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验,内容包括:
1.位置与开放时间; 2.室内设施和功能。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(三)
(2022·全国·高考真题)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
(2010·全国·高考真题)假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题:人与自然;时间:10月15日下午2:00—5:00;地点:501教室;参赛选手:10名学生;联系人:李华(电话44876655)
要求:1. 字数80左右;
2. 可以适当增添细节。
Dear Ms. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(五)
(2020·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(六)
(2015·北京·高考真题)假如你是红星中学高三李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加,邮件的内容包括:
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间,地点,参加者等);
2. 说明你打算参加的原因;
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(2015·全国·高考真题)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1. 栏目介绍。
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约400词汇
4. 交稿日期:6月28日之前
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(2017·全国·高考真题)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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(九)
(2018·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.时间
2.一同过节的家人
3.活动
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(十)
(2017·浙江·高考真题)
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者;
2. 时间、地点;
3. 活动:登山、野餐等。注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________专题16应用文写作之邀请信
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透(考点归纳,写作模版,考点练透+真题模拟)
考点归纳
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的信件,包括展览、节日聚会、聚餐、担任比赛的评委或在讲座上发言等。在写作时,语气要热情、真挚,不要强人所难;叙事要清楚、明白。
写作结构
常用表达句型积累
1、表明写信意图,向某人发出邀请
① I am writing to invite you to …/I’m writing to tell you that there will be a...
我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你有一个……
② I am very pleased/more than delighted to invite you to participate in... to be held in...
我很高兴邀请你参加在……举行的……
③ It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in... to be held in... on...
能邀请您参加在……举办的……是我的荣幸。
④ On behalf of..., I am sincerely inviting you to participate in....
我代表……真挚地邀请您参加……。
⑤ It gives me great pleasure to invite you to...
我很荣幸能够邀请您参加.......
2、介绍邀请/活动的具体内容
① Here are arrangements for this activity. / The following are arrangements for this activity. / Arrangements for this activity are as follows.
活动安排如下。
② The following are some details about ..../ Some details about ... are as follows.
这次.......的细节如下。
③ To begin with, we will...Besides, there will be varieties of activities such as..., which will...
首先,我们将……。 此外,将会有很多活动,例如……这将……。
④ This will be followed by...At around ten, we will hold a small party, at which...
随后会有……。 十点左右我们会举行一个小型派对,派对上……。
⑤ The activity is scheduled to last approximately...,from...to...
活动预计持续约……, 从……到…… (时间)。
⑥ As scheduled, the meeting/ lecture/interview will be held from ...to ... this Saturday in/at ....
根据安排,本次会议/讲座/访问将于本周日的几点到几点在.....地方举行。
⑦ I’m sure you will take an interest in the activities. For one thing, ... For another, ...
我相信你一定会对这些活动感兴趣的。一方面,......;另一方面......
⑧ During the ..., we will have ..., which you will be interested in. And then, ...
在这次......中,我们会有......,你会对他们很感兴趣的。然后......
期待对方接受邀请、期待回复并表示感谢
① Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to...
请写信告诉我你是否能来……,好吗
② An early / favorable / timely reply will be highly appreciated.
我会非常感激你的早日/ 肯定/ 及时回复。
③ If you are interested, please let me know and I’ll send you more relevant/ detailed information.
如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我将给你发送更多的相关/ 细节信息。
④ Hopefully, you will accept our invitation. My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
希望你能接受我们的邀请。如果你能来, 我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
⑤ We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
如果你能在你方便时尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
⑥ I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation / join us and I have the confidence that...
我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/ 加入我们,我有信心……
⑦ I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我期待着你尽早的答复。
邀请信模板
Dear _____,
I am Li Hua, president of the Students' Union. I am writing to eagerly invite you to_________(参加活动).
_______(活动) will be held in+地点+ next/this 时间 + on\about 活动主题. There will be various _________(具体活动内容) , such as ……,which will definitely leave a deep impression on you.
I would appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
XX
精彩凤头I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. Knowing that you are interested in classical music, I am writing eagerly to invite you to take part in the music festival to be held in hour school.
常用动词
invite v. invitation n.邀请 be honored to do很荣幸做(it’s one’s honor to do…) be willing to
attend/participate in/join in/take part in/sign up for参加 appreciate感激
常用介词短语
on behalf of代表 around the corner即将到来at your convenience在你方便时
其他常用词
further information更多信息 sincere invitation// sincerely invite诚挚的邀请 participant参加者
活动背景介绍
(1) ....... is coming.(2) ....... is approaching.(3) ....... is around the corner.
... is approaching+and we will hold a/an...
写信目的
(1) (Knowing you are fond of…,)I am writing to invite you to attend...
(2)It’s a pleasure\honor for me to invite you to attend...
(3) I am writing on behalf of all students to invite you to give a lecture on...
时间&地点
活动+will be held+地点状语+时间状语
The activity will be held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Friday.
What you need to keep in mind is that the activity will be held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Friday.
It is in the school hall that the festival/activity will be held.
主要活动:During the …, there will be a lot of activities, such as (including)…
(Activities will cover a lot of ground, including…)
参加对象:全体对象All the teachers and students are welcome to the festival.
个人对象You really do well in…,therefore we hope you can…
总结活动The festival is so meaningful that you will have a good time.
期待回复
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation at your earliest convenience.
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
考点练透
高考模拟
(一)
(2024·重庆·模拟预测)假如你是新华中学的李华,你想邀请外教Jack 参加今年的重庆茶博会,请你写一封邮件,内容如下:
1.告知茶博会时间,地点(2024年5月10—13日,重庆国际会展中心);
2.简要介绍茶博会内容(欣赏茶艺表演,品茶等);
3.推荐出行方式。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:茶博会 China Chongqing Tea Expo 国际会展中心 International Exhibition Center
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
How are you doing! I am writing to extend a warm invitation for you to attend the upcoming International Tea Expo, scheduled from May 10th to May 13th in Chongqing.
Knowing that you are really into Chinese tea culture, I guess the following activities must appeal to you. This year’s expo promises to be the most exciting yet, with a diverse range of activities including tea tastings, cultural performances and educational workshops. You will have the opportunity to participate in exclusive events and get to know other tea lovers.
Since the expo is held at International Exhibition Center, it will be convenient for us to take the subway. May I meet you at the school gate at 10:00 am on May 11 or would you please tell me which time is suitable for you
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是新华中学的李华,你想邀请外教Jack参加今年的重庆茶博会,要求考生写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引:appeal to→fascinate
参加:participate in→take part in
举行:hold→host
回复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to extend a warm invitation for you to attend the upcoming International Tea Expo, scheduled from May 10th to May 13th in Chongqing.
拓展句:I am writing to extend a warm invitation for you to attend the upcoming International Tea Expo, which is scheduled from May 10th to May 13th in Chongqing.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are really into Chinese tea culture, I guess the following activities must appeal to you. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Since the expo is held at International Exhibition Center, it will be convenient for us to take the subway. (运用了Since引导的原因状语从句)
(二)
(2024·广西·一模)假定你是李华,你的同学Chris作为交换生来中国已经一年了,他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢今年春节2月10日他在中国,请你给他写一封邀请函,邀请他去你家欢度春节。内容包括:
1. 表达你诚挚的邀请;
2. 节日简介(庆祝时间、主要活动安排)。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, I’m writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival.
This year, the festival falls on February 10th. Apart from enjoying a feast, we will spend the day visiting relatives and friends, set-ting off fireworks, or watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Generally, children will get lucky money.
We are expecting your arrival. Your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering. If you are available, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的同学Chris作为交换生来中国已经一年了,他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢今年春节2月10日他在中国,请你给他写一封邀请函,邀请他去你家欢度春节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传统的:traditional→conventional
庆祝:celebrate→observe
获得:get→gain
降临、发生:fall→take place
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:We are expecting your arrival. Your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering.
拓展句:We are expecting your arrival, because your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If you are available, please let me know at your earliest convenience.(运用了过if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, I’m writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival.(运用了现在分词作状语)
(三)
(2024·安徽·三模)假定你是李华,请给英国留学生Chris写一封邀请信,邀请他为你们“美食文化节”做个小讲座,介绍他家乡的美食文化。内容包括:
1.美食文化节的相关信息;
2.讲座内容。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
To broaden our students’ horizons, our school will organize a Food and Culture Festival this month, where attendees can not only have a good taste of various delicious foods but also gain a better insight into the culture relevant to them. That’s why I’m writing to you. Representing our school authority, I’d like to invite you to give us a speech on your local cuisine on 25th this month. The speech will begin at 2:30 p.m. Will one hour be enough for you to share those stories and anecdotes related to your local cuisine
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生Chris写一封邀请信,邀请他为你们“美食文化节”做个小讲座,介绍他家乡的美食文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加者:attendee→participant
各种各样的:various→a variety of
获得:gain→obtain
给某人做演讲:give sb. a speech→deliver a speech to sb.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Representing our school authority, I’d like to invite you to give us a speech on your local cuisine on 25th this month.
拓展句:Representing our school authority, I’d like to invite you, who are renowned for your expertise in gastronomy, to give us a speech on your local cuisine on the 25th of this month.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To broaden our students’ horizons, our school will organize a Food and Culture Festival this month, where attendees can not only have a good taste of various delicious foods but also gain a better insight into the culture relevant to them.(运用了where引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】That’s why I’m writing to you.(运用了why引导的表语从句)
(四)
(2024·北京朝阳·二模)假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校即将举办以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信,邀请他一起参加。内容包括:
1. 介绍你打算参加的活动;
2. 询问对方意向。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Jim,
How are you doing Our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of growth, so I am writing to invite you to join me.
Of all the activities, I prefer to participate in the tree planting to experience the sourness and sweetness of growth. Those who sign up for it will work together to plant a tree, digging a hole, building soil berms and watering the sapling. The growth of a tree requires patience and persistence, so do we. When the tree flourishes, we’ll become responsible adults, making contributions to the society.
Are you interested in it I believe it’ll be an unforgettable experience. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信,邀请他一起参加以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→host
参加:participate in→take part in
繁茂:flourishes→thrive
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of growth, so I am writing to invite you to join me.
拓展句:Since our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of growth, I am writing to invite you to join me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those who sign up for it will work together to plant a tree, digging a hole, building soil berms and watering the sapling. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] When the tree flourishes, we’ll become responsible adults, making contributions to the society. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
(五)
(2024·北京东城·二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的好友Jim是北京一所国际学校的篮球队队长,你校计划组织一场校际篮球比赛,请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.发出比赛邀请;
2.提议比赛安排。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. As the captain of your basketball team, I’m writing to invite your team to participate in an inter-school basketball match organized by our school, Red Star High.
The match is scheduled to take place on the weekend of the coming month, with the specific date and venue to confirm soon. It would be a fantastic opportunity for both teams to showcase their skills and foster friendship through sports. I’m confident that your team’s participation would add to the excitement and competitiveness of the event.
Looking forward to your positive response and hope to see you on the court soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim写信,邀请他参加学校组织的一场校际篮球比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
极好的:fantastic→excellent
机会:opportunity→chance
培养:foster→develop
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As the captain of your basketball team, I’m writing to invite your team to participate in an inter-school basketball match organized by our school, Red Star High.
拓展句:As the captain of your basketball team, I’m writing to invite your team to participate in an inter-school basketball match which is organized by our school, Red Star High.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The match is scheduled to take place on the weekend of the coming month, with the specific date and venue to confirm soon. (运用了with的复合结构作状语)
【高分句型2】I’m confident that your team’s participation would add to the excitement and competitiveness of the event. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(六)
(2024·安徽淮北·二模)假定你是李华,你校将举办“校园音乐节”,并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友Hans写封邮件,邀请他在线观看。内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 观看时间;
3. 期待他的参与。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Hans,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to inform you of our school’s upcoming “Campus Music Festival”, which will be livest reamed online. Knowing that you’re a big fan of music, I’m writing to invite you to join us online. This festival features performances from both students and professional musicians.
The live stream will take place on Sunday, April 28th, from 6:00 PM to 8:00 PM local time. During this time, you can tune in and enjoy the performances as if you were here with us in person.
We would be delighted if you could join us and share the joy of our music festival. Your participation means a lot to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你校将举办“校园音乐节”,并通过网络进行直播,要求考生给外国笔友Hans写封邮件,邀请他在线观看。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
加入:join→take part in
开始:take place→start
表演:performance→show
高兴的:delighted→glad
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Knowing that you’re a big fan of music, I’m writing to invite you to join us online.
拓展句:Because I know that you’re a big fan of music, I’m writing to invite you to join us online for a unique musical experience.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to inform you of our school’s upcoming “Campus Music Festival”, which will be livest reamed online.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]We would be delighted if you could join us and share the joy of our music festival.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(七)
(2024·江西·模拟预测)假定你是班长李华,你班将举办班级英语毕业晚会,请你给外教Mr. Jenkins 写一封邮件,邀请他来参加。内容包括:
1. 时间、地点;
2. 晚会内容。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version: Dear Mr. Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua, monitor of our class. I am writing to invite you to our English graduation party, aimed at saying goodbye to our high school life and expressing thanks to our teachers, you included, of course. At the party, we'll present flowers to all of our teachers. After that, we'll sing English songs, perform English short plays and other programs. Finally, we'll invite you and our English teacher Miss Yang to make short speeches.
The party is to be held in our classroom from 6:00 to 8:00 next Friday evening. Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在班将举办班级英语毕业晚会,要求考生给外教Mr. Jenkins 写一封邮件,邀请他来参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
此外:besides→what's more
做演讲:make speeches →give speeches
举行:hold→throw
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:At the party, we'll present flowers to all of our teachers. After that, we'll sing English songs, perform English short plays and other programs.
拓展句:At the party, we'll present flowers to all of our teachers, after which we'll sing English songs, perform English short plays and other programs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to invite you to our English graduation party, aimed at saying goodbye to our high school life and expressing thanks to our teachers, you included.(运用了过去分词作定语)
【高分句型2】 The party is to be held in our classroom from 6:00 to 8:00 next Friday evening.(运用了不定式作表语)
(八)
(2024·山西临汾·三模)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校为庆祝第九个“中国航天日”(Space Day of China) 将举办一系列活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件邀请他来参加。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. I’m writing to extend our earnest invitation for your participation in the 9th Space Day celebration in our school.
To mark the remarkable achievements of China’s aerospace industry and inspire the young to admire science, explore the unknown and embrace innovation, we have planned a series of exciting activities for the occasion, including guest lectures from experts in the field, interactive workshops on space technology, and a model rocket launch in the evening.
We would be honored if you could join us for this special day on 24th, April. Looking forward to your favorable response.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,邀请他参加学校为“中国航天日”(Space Day of China) 举办的一系列活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的:earnest→sincere
参加:participation→involvement
非凡的:remarkable→extraordinary
计划:plan→schedule
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to extend our earnest invitation for your participation in the 9th Space Day celebration in our school.
拓展句:I’m writing to extend our earnest invitation for your participation in the 9th Space Day celebration which will be held in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To mark the remarkable achievements of China’s aerospace industry and inspire the young to admire science, explore the unknown and embrace innovation, we have planned a series of exciting activities for the occasion, including guest lectures from experts in the field, interactive workshops on space technology, and a model rocket launch in the evening. (运用了不定式作目的状语和不定式作宾语补足语)
【高分句型2】We would be honored if you could join us for this special day on 24th, April. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(九)
(2024·北京通州·二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校科技社团将要组织一次以“人工智能(AI)与未来生活”为主题的活动,请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.活动目的和内容。
注意:1.词数 100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going recently Our school’s science and technology club will organize an event with the theme of “AI and Future Life” this Friday in the school hall. Learning that you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it.
The purpose of the event is to stimulate students’ interest in technological. First, we will enjoy a special exhibition about AI. Not only can you witness robots that do housework, but you can also experience self-driving vehicles. What’s more, you can play the board game with Alpha Go, which is a computer program developed by Google. This event can make you realize AI will change people’s future life.
I believe that you will be deeply impressed by it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加“人工智能(AI)与未来生活”为主题的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
爱好者:enthusiast→fan
目的:purpose→goal
激发:stimulate→motivate
欣赏:enjoy→admire
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Learning that you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it.
拓展句:Since you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The purpose of the event is to stimulate students’ interest in technological. (运用了不定式作表语)
(十)
(2024·江西·二模)假定你是李华,你市最大的旅游公司将首次在本周日举办“美食地图”(Mouth-watering Food Map)活动,请你给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 介绍活动创意及目的;
2. 邀请他参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I have some exciting news to share with you. One of the biggest travel agencies in our city is hosting a food competition called Mouth-watering Food Map at the downtown square this Sunday.
The best part of the event is that visitors can try all the food free, which will be made on site by local chefs. The visitors are required to give a score ranging from zero to ten to each dish they have tried. Then the top 10 dishes will be put on the agency’s map as reference for tourists.
I think it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese cuisine. Please let me know if you’re interested in attending.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作。请给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件,介绍你市最大的旅游公司将于本周日首次举办的“美食地图”活动,内容要点如下:1. 介绍活动创意及目的;2. 邀请他参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人兴奋的:exciting→thrilling
举办:host→hold
活动:event→activity
参加:attend→take part (in)
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The visitors are required to give a score ranging from zero to ten to each dish they have tried.
拓展句:It is required that visitors give a score ranging from zero to ten to each dish they have tried.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The best part of the event is that visitors can try all the food free, which will be made on site by local chefs. (运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Please let me know if you’re interested in attending. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
高考真题
(一)
(2023·全国·高考真题)假定你是高三学生李华,下周六晚上6:00-8:00你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Linda非常喜欢音乐,请你写一封信邀请她参加此次活动。
内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.活动时间和地点;
3.活动内容和意义。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Linda,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Linda,
Our school will hold a musical concert next Saturday. Knowing that we have great interest in music, I’m writing this letter to invite you to attend it.
The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6:00 pm to 8:00 pm this Friday, lasting 2 hours. During this concert, not only can we appreciate classical folk songs of China and western countries, but we can also have a chance to listen to the music originally composed by gifted students as well. It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.
I am sure you will enjoy yourself and have fun.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍老师Linda写一封信,邀请她参加下周六晚上6:00-8:00你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend →join in
感兴趣:have great interest in →show great interest in
欣赏:appreciate →enjoy
过得愉快:enjoy yourself →have a good time
2.简单句变为复合句
原句:The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6:00 pm to 8:00 pm this Friday, lasting 2 hours.
拓展句:The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6:00 pm to 8:00 pm this Friday, which will last 2 hours.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that we have great interest in music, I’m writing this letter to invite you to attend it. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] During this concert, not only can we appreciate classical folk songs of China and western countries, but we can also have a chance to listen to the music originally composed by gifted students as well..(运用了not only ……but also句型、部分倒装结构和过去分词作后置定语)
(二)
(2022·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验,内容包括:
1.位置与开放时间; 2.室内设施和功能。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成:consist of→ be made up of
位于:be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接: be linked to →be connected to
预定:reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
拓展句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.(of which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.(过去分词作状语)
(三)
(2022·全国·高考真题)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend→participate in
建立:establish→set up
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)
(四)
(2010·全国·高考真题)假设你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题:人与自然;时间:10月15日下午2:00—5:00;地点:501教室;参赛选手:10名学生;联系人:李华(电话44876655)
要求:1. 字数80左右;
2. 可以适当增添细节。
Dear Ms. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
With the purpose of arousing the students’ interest in English and enriching the school life, the English Speech Contest is to be held in Classroom 501 in our school on October 15. It will start at 2:00 p.m. and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给外籍教师Smith写信,邀请她做英语演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标:purpose→aim
发表演讲:deliver one’s speech=make one’s speech
开始:start→begin
回应:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It will start at 2:00 p.m. and last for about three hours.
拓展句:It will start at 2:00 p.m. and last for about three hours, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.(if引导条件状语从句)
(五)
(2020·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear George,
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.
The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.
Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. . I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。
第2步:根据写作要求, 确定关键词(组) :Chinese speech contest(中文演讲比赛);be scheduled(安排);be bound to(必然);gain a better understanding of(更好地了解)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句;I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
(六)
(2015·北京·高考真题)假如你是红星中学高三李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加,邮件的内容包括:
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间,地点,参加者等);
2. 说明你打算参加的原因;
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th. It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jim写信,邀请他一起参加龙舟训练营。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要做某事:want to do sth.→would like to do sth.
提供某人某物:offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.
机会:chance→opportunity
对……感兴趣:be interested in→take an interest in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:This camp will open on July 20th. It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.
拓展句:This camp will open on July 20th, which offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I wonder if you’d like to go with me.(运用了if引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
(七)
(2015·全国·高考真题)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1. 栏目介绍。
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约400词汇
4. 交稿日期:6月28日之前
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,参加学校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登的美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尤其:especially→particularly
相关的:relevant→related
只要:so long as→provided that
有趣的:interesting→entertaining
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.
拓展句:It carries articles that are written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. (由how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. (由so long as引导的条件状语从句)
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(2017·全国·高考真题)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Dear Henry,
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition,which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week.As is well-known to us all,Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it,so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China.During the activity,I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture.
Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me?I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】首先审题,这篇文章要求假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。
其次选用正确的人称和时态,用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子,使用正确的连词,连句成段。具体来说,写这篇文章时,要注意文中给出的细节都要包括,不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如:使用了定语从句I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition,which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week.和宾语从句As is well-known to us all,Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it,so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.
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(2018·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.时间
2.一同过节的家人
3.活动
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Hall,
I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇书信类作文。要求给外教Mr. Hall写封信,邀请他到你家过春节。
【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:
1. 介绍同学们的听说训练情况;
2. 希望提供更有效的学习方法;
3. 询问对方的意向。
第二步:列提纲
celebrate the Spring Festival, have a big dinner,make dumplings,able to come,pick up
第三步:连词成句1. I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January19.
2. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner.
3. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala onTV.
4. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
表因果关系:so
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. 本句是典型的书信开头句,表达写信的目的。
[高分句型2]It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there.本句是so连接的并列句。
[高分句型3]If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.if在本句引导条件状语从句。
(十)
(2017·浙江·高考真题)
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者;
2. 时间、地点;
3. 活动:登山、野餐等。注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don’t have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It’s just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。
【详解】本应用文贴近学生实际生活,虽然是命题作文,但还是保持一定的开放程度,形式是邮件,符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求,本文要涵盖以下三点内容,1. 参加者;2. 时间、地点;3. 活动:登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇,紧扣提示,准确全面地表达所要求的内容,在合适的地方拓展细节,使行文连贯。作为邀请信,要求语言得体,邀请的语气诚恳,有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅。
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I’m very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。I’m very honored to...非常荣幸做某事
【高分句型2】
I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句,take…into consideration顾及;考虑到……