应用文写作
假定你是李华,目前你校英文报正在进行征文活动,主题是分享一个有趣的故事(a funny story)。你打算给编辑写一篇电子邮件投稿,内容包括:
1. 故事发生的时间、地点和过程;
2. 你对该故事的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段:开篇表明写信目的是投稿,简单提及自己有一个有趣故事想分享,吸引编辑注意。
第二段:详细讲述故事发生的时间、地点和过程。比如时间设定在周末,地点是在公园,过程围绕与朋友放风筝时风筝挂树上,大家尝试各种方法取下风筝,过程中发生了许多有趣的事情,如有人爬树被树枝卡住裤子,有人用长棍却越弄越糟等。
第三段:描述自己对这个故事的感想,如这件事让自己体会到朋友间的团结和面对困难时乐观的重要性,以及它给自己带来的欢乐至今难忘。
语言积累 --短语
be delighted to 很高兴
share with 与…… 分享
take place 发生
have a great time 玩得开心
try one's best 尽力
get stuck 被困住
come up with 想出
in the end 最后
look back on 回顾
bring sb. much joy 给某人带来很多欢乐
佳句
I'm extremely delighted to write to you and submit my story for the "A Funny Story" theme of your school English newspaper.(我非常高兴给您写信,为贵校英文报 “一个有趣的故事” 主题投稿。)
The story took place last weekend in the park when I went flying kites with my friends.(这个故事发生在上周末的公园,当时我和朋友们去放风筝。)
We tried our best to get the kite down from the tree, but all our efforts seemed in vain at first.(我们尽力想把风筝从树上取下来,但起初我们所有的努力似乎都白费了。)
In the end, with everyone's joint efforts, we managed to solve the problem, and the joy on our faces was unforgettable.(最后,在大家的共同努力下,我们成功解决了问题,脸上的喜悦令人难忘。)
Looking back on this experience, it not only brought us much joy but also taught me the importance of teamwork and staying positive in the face of difficulties.(回顾这次经历,它不仅给我们带来了很多欢乐,还教会我团队合作以及在困难面前保持积极的重要性。)
写作示范一
Dear editor,
I'm Li Hua, writing to submit my story for the "A Funny Story" theme.
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the riverside park. We decided to fly a kite. As the kite flew higher, it got caught in a tall tree. Tom tried to climb the tree to get it, but his pants got stuck on a branch. We all burst out laughing. Then we came up with the idea of using a long stick. After several attempts, we finally managed to get the kite down.
This story taught me that even when things go wrong, we can still find joy in the process. I hope you'll like it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear editor,
I'm glad to contribute my story to your newspaper's "A Funny Story" activity.
It happened during the summer vacation at my grandparents' farm. One day, we planned to pick apples. While climbing the ladder, my cousin slipped and fell into a haystack. Covered in hay, he looked so funny that we couldn't stop laughing. We all rushed to help him up. After that, we continued our apple - picking with more care.
This experience always makes me smile. It shows that life's little accidents can bring big laughs. I hope you enjoy it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear editor,
I'm writing to share a funny story with you for the school English newspaper.
Last month, on a sunny day, my classmates and I had a picnic in the forest. We brought sandwiches and drinks. When we were about to eat, a squirrel suddenly jumped out and snatched a sandwich. We chased it around, but it was too fast. Finally, it climbed up a tree and enjoyed the sandwich. We were all amused by its boldness.
This story reminds me that life is full of unexpected fun. I hope you'll find it interesting too.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Two student of our school. I’d like to share a funny story about myself that happened last Monday. After breakfast, I went to school in such a hurry that I accidentally put on two different shoes. When I entered the classroom, my friends found that I was wearing two different shoes and couldn’t help laughing. It was embarrassing at first, but I soon realized the humor in the situation.
I felt a bit silly, but it also taught me to slow down and pay more attention to details. It’s a day I won’t forget, and it’s a great reminder to find humor in small things in our life.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua