2025届高考英语二轮复习专题17 应用文写作之推荐信(学生版+教师版)

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专题17应用文写作之推荐信
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透(考点归纳,写作模版,考点练透+真题模拟)
考点归纳
推荐信是向他人推荐某人、某事、某地的应用文写作文体,涵盖人文历史、旅游观光和文体娱乐等主题。通常写作结构为:
第一段:说明写信目的:表明推荐内容;
第二段:作出推荐并说明推荐理由;
第三段:表达期待(希望提议被接受),并表示感谢。
必背句式
首段常用语
① Hearing that you are hosting an activity to select "The Most Qualified Student" of this school year, I am writing to recommend my best friend Tom to you.
听说您在正在举办一项选举本学年度“最佳学生”的活动,我写信向您推荐我的好朋友Tom。
② I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Nanjing, and I'd like to offer my recommendation.
我非常高兴获悉您要来南京,我想给您作些推荐。
主体部分常用语
① Firstly, Tom, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well.
首先,Tom是我校最勤奋的学生之一,他不仅学习努力而且举止得体。
② Besides, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
此外,他还因爱好广泛而突出——包括油画和拉小提琴。
③ Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you.
最后,他热心帮助有需要之人,因此我向您推荐他。
结尾常用语
① I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.
我衷心希望您能考考虑我的推荐并做出最后的决定。
② Hoping my recommendations will be of great help to you.
希望我的推荐对您有所帮助。
推荐信模板
Dear ________,
Knowing that 推荐原因, I’m writing to strongly recommend 推荐人/物to you.
The reason why I recommend 推荐人/物 is that推荐理由一. Besides,推荐理由二. I believe 推荐人/物_is your best choice.
I would appreciate it greatly if you could take 推荐人/物into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
XX
考点练透
高考模拟
(一)
(2024·四川巴中·一模)假定你是李华,你校外教Chris想学习中国的水墨画,希望你能给他推荐一位老师。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍老师的情况;
2. 授课时间和地点。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
(二)
(2024·广西·模拟预测)假如你是校学生会的生活部负责人李华,你打算写一篇短文向英文校刊饮食栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一款健康又休闲的课间零食。
内容包括:
1. 零食介绍;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右。
2. 标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A Healthy and Relaxing Snack
Hello, everyone. Today I want to recommend a snack which is not only healthy but relaxing to all of you.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(三)
(2024·河南郑州·三模)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Leta发邮件说她打算来中国旅游,想让你为她推荐一个最值得参观的景点。请给她回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 简要介绍该景点;
2. 说明推荐的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Leta,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
(2024·安徽合肥·三模)假定你是李华,正在你校交流的Lucy将于端午前回国,她请你推荐一个与此节日相关的小礼物给她妹妹。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的礼物;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2024·福建泉州·三模)假定你是李华,你校新开设日常对话和故事读写两门国际汉语线上课程,你的外国朋友David想学习其中一门。请你用英语写封邮件向他推荐一门课程并说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
(六)
(2024·福建厦门·三模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信,告知他计划今年暑假来你的家乡体验美食。请你写一封邮件,向他推荐一款传统名吃。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(七)
(2024·河南·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Tom寒假期间想在中国旅游,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一处旅游目的地;
2.介绍主要景点;
3.温馨提示。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(八)
(2024·湖南长沙·三模)假如你是李华,学校要求外教Jack下期开设一门英语选修课,请你给他写一封邮件推荐一门英语选修课,内容包括:
1.推荐课程;
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(九)
(2024·海南·三模)假定你是李华,你的外国好友(Sally)将于暑假来中国旅游。为了帮助她准备这趟中国之行,请你给她推荐一个视频博客(Vlog):Beautiful Places in China。内容包括:
1.推荐的理由;
2.期待与祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Sally,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
(2024·浙江杭州·一模)假如你是李华,你校的美国交换生Steven给你发了一封邮件,请你为他推荐一门选修课(optional course)。现请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 推荐的课程及理由;3. 你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steven,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(十一)
(2024·辽宁鞍山·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter在上次来信中提到,他的学校开设了三门选修课,分别是中国古代诗歌,中国传统国画以及中国戏曲。他不知道该选哪一门课程,请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 推荐课程(任选一门);
2. 理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十二)
(2024·湖南衡阳·三模)假定你是李华,在你市留学的Joe打算下周末与朋友一同去远足。他写邮件给你,希望你给他推荐一条景色优美的路线。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐的路线;
2. 基本情况介绍;
3. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(十三)
(2024·山东日照·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校外教Ryan拟举办英语读书会(English Reading Bar)活动,想了解哪类图书更能吸引学生,请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐的图书类别;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
(十四)
(2024·河北沧州·二模)假定你是李华,你的外国好友莎莉(Sally)将于暑假来中国旅游。为了帮助她准备这趟中国之行,请你给她推荐一个视频博客(Vlog):Beautiful Places in China。要点包括:
1. 推荐的理由:
2. 发出邀请。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sally,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十五)
(2024·天津宁河·一模)假设你是红星中学学生李津。暑假期间,你市将举行三个以唐诗、书法和戏剧为主题的文化活动。届时,你的英国朋友Jason将到你市旅游。请你为他推荐三个活动之一并发一封e-mail回复。
(1)对Jason来中国表示欢迎。
(2)推荐的活动及理由。
注意:(1)词数不少于100字;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:唐诗(Tangpoems)剪纸(Paper-cutting)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
高考真题
(一)
(2017·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;
(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);
(3)表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
(二)
(2019·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。 参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实、行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By Li Jin
(三)
(2015·上海·高考真题)学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(四)
(2014·浙江·高考真题) 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书, 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Yue专题17应用文写作之推荐信
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透(考点归纳,写作模版,考点练透+真题模拟)
考点归纳
推荐信是向他人推荐某人、某事、某地的应用文写作文体,涵盖人文历史、旅游观光和文体娱乐等主题。通常写作结构为:
第一段:说明写信目的:表明推荐内容;
第二段:作出推荐并说明推荐理由;
第三段:表达期待(希望提议被接受),并表示感谢。
必背句式
首段常用语
① Hearing that you are hosting an activity to select "The Most Qualified Student" of this school year, I am writing to recommend my best friend Tom to you.
听说您在正在举办一项选举本学年度“最佳学生”的活动,我写信向您推荐我的好朋友Tom。
② I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Nanjing, and I'd like to offer my recommendation.
我非常高兴获悉您要来南京,我想给您作些推荐。
主体部分常用语
① Firstly, Tom, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well.
首先,Tom是我校最勤奋的学生之一,他不仅学习努力而且举止得体。
② Besides, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
此外,他还因爱好广泛而突出——包括油画和拉小提琴。
③ Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you.
最后,他热心帮助有需要之人,因此我向您推荐他。
结尾常用语
① I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.
我衷心希望您能考考虑我的推荐并做出最后的决定。
② Hoping my recommendations will be of great help to you.
希望我的推荐对您有所帮助。
推荐信模板
Dear ________,
Knowing that 推荐原因, I’m writing to strongly recommend 推荐人/物to you.
The reason why I recommend 推荐人/物 is that推荐理由一. Besides,推荐理由二. I believe 推荐人/物_is your best choice.
I would appreciate it greatly if you could take 推荐人/物into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
XX
考点练透
高考模拟
(一)
(2024·四川巴中·一模)假定你是李华,你校外教Chris想学习中国的水墨画,希望你能给他推荐一位老师。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍老师的情况;
2. 授课时间和地点。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm writing to recommend a Chinese ink painting teacher to you as you expressed your interest in learning this art form. I wholeheartedly suggest Mr Li, an accomplished and seasoned professional in Chinese ink painting.
With over two decades of experience in teaching, Mr. Li is widely recognized for his engaging and practical teaching style, which has earned him a considerable following. His classes are both informative and entertaining. The classes are held on Saturdays from 10 am to 12 pm at the Chinese Cultural Center, situated at No. 6 Kangning Road.
I hope this recommendation is helpful to you. Please let me know if you have any questions, as I would be happy to assist you further.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于推荐信。学校外教Chris想学习中国的水墨画,希望能给他推荐一位老师,要求考生按照要求给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
熟练的,技艺高超的:accomplished→ skilled
专业的:professional→ specialized
有趣的:engaging → interesting
相当多的:considerable → goodish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I wholeheartedly suggest Mr. Li, an accomplished and seasoned professional in Chinese ink painting.
拓展句:I wholeheartedly suggest Mr. Li, who is an accomplished and seasoned professional in Chinese ink painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With over two decades of experience in teaching, Mr. Li is widely recognized for his engaging and practical teaching style, which has earned him a considerable following.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope this recommendation is helpful to you.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
(二)
(2024·广西·模拟预测)假如你是校学生会的生活部负责人李华,你打算写一篇短文向英文校刊饮食栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一款健康又休闲的课间零食。
内容包括:
1. 零食介绍;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右。
2. 标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A Healthy and Relaxing Snack
Hello, everyone. Today I want to recommend a snack which is not only healthy but relaxing to all of you.
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【答案】
A Healthy and Relaxing Snack
Hello, everyone. Today I want to recommend a snack which is not only healthy but relaxing to all of you.
It is not only healthy but also serves as a perfect companion during our busy breaks — fresh fruit slices with a dash of natural yogurt dip.
The fruit slices, be it juicy oranges, crisp apples, or sweet mangoes, are packed with essential vitamins, minerals, and fiber, giving your body a nourishing boost. Yogurt helps rejuvenate your senses and provides the necessary energy to keep you going through the rest of your day.
In conclusion, fresh fruit slices with natural yogurt dip make for an ideal healthy and relaxing snack during our school breaks. Not only do they nourish our bodies, but they also elevate our mood.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向英文校刊饮食栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一款健康又休闲的课间零食。
【详解】1.词汇积累
作为:serve as→work as
重要的:essential→vital
提升:elevate→light up
总之:in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In conclusion, fresh fruit slices with natural yogurt dip make for an ideal healthy and relaxing snack during our school breaks.
拓展句:In conclusion, fresh fruit slices with natural yogurt dip make it an ideal healthy and relaxing snack for us to enjoy during our school breaks.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Yogurt helps rejuvenate your senses and provides the necessary energy to keep you going through the rest of your day.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Not only do they nourish our bodies, but they also elevate our mood. (运用了倒装句)
(三)
(2024·河南郑州·三模)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Leta发邮件说她打算来中国旅游,想让你为她推荐一个最值得参观的景点。请给她回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 简要介绍该景点;
2. 说明推荐的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Leta,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Leta,
Knowing you’re coming to China for a trip, I’d like to give you a warm welcome.
There’re many famous places of interest in China, among which the Palace Museum is most worth visiting. Located in the center of Beijing, it’s the classic example of Chinese palace architecture of the Ming and Qing dynasties. I strongly recommend you have a look at the entire palace area surrounded by tall walls, the great halls and the red and yellow colors representing royal power. It’s really the best place to learn about Chinese culture and history.
Hope you’ll like it!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的新西兰笔友Leta发邮件说她打算来中国旅游,想让你为她推荐一个最值得参观的景点。请给她回复邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出名的:famous→noted
位于:locate→situate
代表:represent→stand for
喜欢:like→be fond of
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Knowing you’re coming to China for a trip, I’d like to give you a warm welcome.
拓展句:When I know you’re coming to China for a trip, I’d like to give you a warm welcome.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There’re many famous places of interest in China, among which the Palace Museum is most worth visiting.(运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I strongly recommend you have a look at the entire palace area surrounded by tall walls, the great halls and the red and yellow colors representing royal power.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
(四)
(2024·安徽合肥·三模)假定你是李华,正在你校交流的Lucy将于端午前回国,她请你推荐一个与此节日相关的小礼物给她妹妹。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的礼物;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I have just received your email about how to select a gift related to the approaching Dragon Boat Festival for your little sister.
In China, one of the typical gifts for the festival is called Xiangbao. It can take on various cute forms, such as hearts and stars. It is very popular among Chinese girls since it can be used to decorate their clothes, schoolbags or fans. The special herbs wrapped in it smell very nice. Best of all, it is said that it can drive away bad luck. Here is an online shop that is known for its fair prices and designs of Xiangbao.
Best wishes!
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写信推荐一个与端午节相关的小礼物给Lucy的妹妹。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有关:related→relevant
各种各样:various→a variety of
挑选:select→pick out
典型:typical→representative
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:In China, one of the typical gifts for the festival is called Xiangbao. It can take on various cute forms, such as hearts and stars.
拓展句:In China, one of the typical gifts for the festival is called Xiangbao, which can take on various cute forms, such as hearts and stars.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have just received your email about how to select a gift related to the approaching Dragon Boat Festival for your little sister. (运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2] It is very popular among Chinese girls since it can be used to decorate their clothes, schoolbags or fans. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
(五)
(2024·福建泉州·三模)假定你是李华,你校新开设日常对话和故事读写两门国际汉语线上课程,你的外国朋友David想学习其中一门。请你用英语写封邮件向他推荐一门课程并说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I heard that you’re interested in taking one of the new Chinese language online courses at my school. I would highly recommend the Daily Conversations course.
This course focuses on practical speaking skills that you can use in various everyday situations. It’s taught by experienced instructors who are passionate about helping students succeed in their language learning journey. Moreover, the course includes interactive activities and real-life dialogues to enhance your learning experience. I believe that by taking this course, you will not only improve your Chinese language skills but also gain valuable insights into Chinese culture and customs.
Let me know if there’s anything else I can assist you with.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校新开设日常对话和故事读写两门国际汉语线上课程,你的外国朋友David想学习其中一门。请你用英语写封邮件向他推荐一门课程并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→be keen on
帮助:help→assist
提高:enhance→promote
获得:gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, the course includes interactive activities and real-life dialogues to enhance your learning experience.
拓展句:Moreover, the course includes interactive activities and real-life dialogues whose aim is to enhance your learning experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I heard that you’re interested in taking one of the new Chinese language online courses at my school.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】This course focuses on practical speaking skills that you can use in various everyday situations.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
(六)
(2024·福建厦门·三模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信,告知他计划今年暑假来你的家乡体验美食。请你写一封邮件,向他推荐一款传统名吃。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit my hometown this summer to try out the local cuisine. I highly recommend you to sample a well-known traditional dish called “Xiaolongbao”, which is a type of steamed bun filled with savory pork and soup broth.
The time-honoured dish originated from my hometown — the Jiangnan region of China, especially Shanghai and Wuxi. It is traditionally steamed in small bamboo baskets, hence the name (xiaolong is literally small steaming basket), and has become famous all over China. You can easily find Xiaolongbao in most restaurants and food stalls here. It’s a must-try dish that you won’t regret.
Looking forward to your visit and trying out some delicious Xiaolongbao together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Peter写信,推荐一款家乡的传统名吃。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
打算做某事:plan to do → intend to do
装满:filled with → stuffed with
源自于:originate from → stem from
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:You can easily find Xiaolongbao in most restaurants and food stalls here. It’s a must-try dish that you won’t regret.
拓展句:You can easily find Xiaolongbao in most restaurants and food stalls here, which is a must-try dish that you won’t regret.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I highly recommend you to sample a well-known traditional dish called “Xiaolongbao”, which is a type of steamed bun filled with savory pork and soup broth.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit my hometown this summer to try out the local cuisine.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
(七)
(2024·河南·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Tom寒假期间想在中国旅游,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一处旅游目的地;
2.介绍主要景点;
3.温馨提示。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to hear that you want to travel in China during the winter vacation. I would like to recommend Sanya to you. It is a beautiful city in Hainan Province, with beautiful beaches, clear blue sky and warm weather. You can enjoy the sunshine, go swimming and try various water sports there. The Yalong Bay is a must-see place, where you can see the beautiful sea view and take a lot of nice pictures.
Remember to bring your sunscreen and hat to protect yourself from the sun. And it’s better to book a hotel in advance to avoid trouble. I hope you have a great time in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生给交换生朋友Tom写封信,就其寒假来中国旅游向其推荐一处旅游目的地。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy/delighted
想要:would like → want
各种各样的:various → a variety of
许多:a lot of→ lots of/a great many
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I would like to recommend Sanya to you. It is a beautiful city in Hainan Province, with beautiful beaches, clear blue sky and warm weather.
拓展句:I would like to recommend Sanya to you, which is a beautiful city in Hainan Province, with beautiful beaches, clear blue sky and warm weather.
【高分句型1】I’m so glad to hear that you want to travel in China during the winter vacation.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The Yalong Bay is a must-see place, where you can see the beautiful sea view and take a lot of nice pictures.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
(八)
(2024·湖南长沙·三模)假如你是李华,学校要求外教Jack下期开设一门英语选修课,请你给他写一封邮件推荐一门英语选修课,内容包括:
1.推荐课程;
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am more than excited to know you are going to offer us an optional course. I think “English Drama” is a good choice.
Through analyzing and performing plays written by famous English playwrights, we would not only enhance our vocabulary and grammar, but also develop our speaking and listening abilities. Furthermore, studying English Drama would allow us to explore and appreciate different cultures and eras, as many plays are set in diverse settings and time periods. As a dynamic and interactive course, it would help us to grow both academically and personally.
Thank you for considering my suggestion. I am looking forward to hearing your thoughts on this potential new course.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jack写一封邮件推荐一门英语选修课。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:excited→thrilled
出名的:famous→renowned
加强:enhance→strengthen
此外:furthermore→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As a dynamic and interactive course, it would help us to grow both academically and personally.
拓展句:It is a dynamic and interactive course, which would help us to grow both academically and personally.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am more than excited to know you are going to offer us an optional course. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Through analyzing and performing plays written by famous English playwrights, we would not only enhance our vocabulary and grammar, but also develop our speaking and listening abilities. (运用了动名词作宾语和过去分词作后置定语)
(九)
(2024·海南·三模)假定你是李华,你的外国好友(Sally)将于暑假来中国旅游。为了帮助她准备这趟中国之行,请你给她推荐一个视频博客(Vlog):Beautiful Places in China。内容包括:
1.推荐的理由;
2.期待与祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Sally,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sally,
Since you have planned to travel around China during the summer vacation, I’d like to introduce a wonderful Vlog to you. I hope that it will help you make better preparations for the trip.
Named Beautiful Places in China, the Vlog has appealed to a lot of foreigners who have been living in China for years. They have not only shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China, but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels. Please see the address attached.
Once you are in China, please contact me. I hope that you can come to visit my hometown, too.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为即将来中国旅游的外国好友Sally推荐一个视频博客,以帮助她准备这趟中国之行。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
打算:plan→ intend
极好的:wonderful→excellent
与……联系:contact→ get in touch with
吸引:appeal to→attract
2. 句式拓展
变为倒装句
原句:They have not only shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China, but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels.
倒装句:Not only have they shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China, but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope that it will help you make better preparations for the trip. (that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Named Beautiful Places in China, the Vlog has appealed to a lot of foreigners who have been living in China for years. (who引导的定语从句)
(十)
(2024·浙江杭州·一模)假如你是李华,你校的美国交换生Steven给你发了一封邮件,请你为他推荐一门选修课(optional course)。现请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 推荐的课程及理由;3. 你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steven,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Steven,
I’ve learned from your last e-mail that you are at a loss which optional course to choose. Mr Bai’s Tang Poems comes first on my recommendation list for the reasons below. First, Tang poetry, a combination of rhyming charm and literary beauty, is the cream of Chinese classical literature, a taste of which will surely spark your interest in learning Chinese. Plus, Mr Bai has a special way to create a relaxed and harmonious class atmosphere. I assure you Tang Poems is your good choice.
Best wishes.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给为交换生Steve推荐一门选修课。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困惑的:at a loss→confused
魅力:charm → glamour
引发:spark→provoke
选择:choice→ option
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Mr Bai’s Tang Poems comes first on my recommendation list for the reasons below.
拓展句: What comes first on my recommendation list is Mr Bai’s Tang Poems for the reasons below.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, Tang poetry, a combination of rhyming charm and literary beauty, is the cream of Chinese classical literature, a taste of which will surely spark your interest in learning Chinese.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’ve learned from your last e-mail that you are at a loss which optional course to choose.(运用了that和which引导的宾语从句)
(十一)
(2024·辽宁鞍山·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter在上次来信中提到,他的学校开设了三门选修课,分别是中国古代诗歌,中国传统国画以及中国戏曲。他不知道该选哪一门课程,请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 推荐课程(任选一门);
2. 理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible Version 1
Dear Peter,
I’m very delighted to learn that you are going to take an optional course about traditional Chinese art and now I’d like to recommend Traditional Chinese Art Appreciation to you.
There are several reasons why I think Traditional Chinese Art Appreciation is a good choice. First of all, ranging from nature to society, Traditional Chinese Art has a wide variety of subjects, helping you have a deeper understanding of ancient life. More importantly, admiring the delicate strokes and unique serenity of Chinese painting contributes to our inner peace and mental health.
Hope my recommendation will be of help. Wish you a great learning experience.
Yours,
Li HuaPossible Version 2
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you and that you are interested in Chinese culture. Now that you ask for my advice, I’ll recommend you to choose the course about Chinese ancient poetry. The reasons are as follows.
Since you are learning Chinese, this course will be more suitable for you. First, you can have a better understanding of the usages of Chinese characters. Moreover, you can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Chinese poetry. By the way, many typical Chinese arts and traditional Chinese festivals are also mentioned in some poems, which will help you gain deeper insights into Chinese culture
I hope you will find my idea useful. Enjoy your study!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Peter推荐一门选修课程,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
选择:choice→option
各种各样的:a variety of→various
帮助某人:help sb.→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First of all, ranging from nature to society, Traditional Chinese Art has a wide variety of subjects, helping you have a deeper understanding of ancient life.
拓展句:First of all, ranging from nature to society, Traditional Chinese Art has a wide variety of subjects, which will help you have a deeper understanding of ancient life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m very delighted to learn that you are going to take an optional course about traditional Chinese art and now I’d like to recommend Traditional Chinese Art Appreciation to you.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】There are several reasons why I think Traditional Chinese Art Appreciation is a good choice. (运用了why引导的定语从句,省略that引导宾语从句)
(十二)
(2024·湖南衡阳·三模)假定你是李华,在你市留学的Joe打算下周末与朋友一同去远足。他写邮件给你,希望你给他推荐一条景色优美的路线。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐的路线;
2. 基本情况介绍;
3. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Joe,
I’m writing to recommend Rabbit Hill, a hiking route, to you and your friends.
Located in the south-east of our city, the hill looks like a lovely rabbit seen from the sky. Surrounding the hill are a greenway and a bike lane, measuring about ten kilometers in length. Walking along the lane, you’ll find lines of plants including bamboos and trees, among which are various flowers blossoming in different seasons, never failing to offer the walkers picturesque scenery.
If you decide to hike there, remember to wear comfortable shoes. Wish you a pleasant walking!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生写封信给留学生Joe,向其推荐一条适合远足的景色优美的路线。
【详解】1.词汇积累
位于:be located in→ lie in
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
提供:offer → provide
决定:decide → make a decision
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Surrounding the hill are a greenway and a bike lane, measuring about ten kilometers in length.
拓展句:Surrounding the hill are a greenway and a bike lane, which measures about ten kilometers in length.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Walking along the lane, you’ll find lines of plants including bamboos and trees, among which are various flowers blossoming in different seasons, never failing to offer the walkers picturesque scenery.(运用了“介词+which”引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you decide to hike there, remember to wear comfortable shoes.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(十三)
(2024·山东日照·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校外教Ryan拟举办英语读书会(English Reading Bar)活动,想了解哪类图书更能吸引学生,请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐的图书类别;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I’m excited to hear about the English Reading Bar initiative. I recommend focusing on young adult fiction.
First of all, young adult literature often tackles themes and issues that are highly relevant to the teenage experience, such as identity, friendship, and coming of age, which can foster deep engagement and discussion. Moreover, the writing style in these books is typically more approachable for English learners, allowing students to focus on comprehension and enjoyment without being overwhelmed by complex language. Last but not least, they offer a wide array of stories with diverse characters and settings, promoting inclusivity and broadening students’ perspectives on different cultures and experiences.
I believe these selections will not only attract students to the bar but also enhance their reading skills and cultural awareness.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给拟举办英语读书会的外教Ryan写一封邮件,向他推荐某一类别的图书,并阐述推荐的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
专注于:focus on→concentrate on
处理:tackle→deal with/cope with
与……相关:be relevant to→be connected with/be associated with
广泛的:a wide array of→a wide range of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I recommend focusing on young adult fiction.
拓展句:I recommend that you should focus on young adult fiction.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, young adult literature often tackles themes and issues that are highly relevant to the teenage experience, such as identity, friendship, and coming of age, which can foster deep engagement and discussion. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Moreover, the writing style in these books is typically more approachable for English learners, allowing students to focus on comprehension and enjoyment without being overwhelmed by complex language. (运用了现在分词短语allowing…作状语和being overwhelmed by complex language作宾语)
(十四)
(2024·河北沧州·二模)假定你是李华,你的外国好友莎莉(Sally)将于暑假来中国旅游。为了帮助她准备这趟中国之行,请你给她推荐一个视频博客(Vlog):Beautiful Places in China。要点包括:
1. 推荐的理由:
2. 发出邀请。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sally,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sally,
Since you have planned to travel around China during the summer vacation, I’d like to introduce a wonderful Vlog to you. I hope that it will help you make better preparations for the trip.
Named Beautiful Places in China, the Vlog has appealed to a lot of foreigners who have been living in China for years. They have not only shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China, but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels. Please see the address attached.
Once you are in China, please contact me. I hope that you can come to visit my hometown, too.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为即将来中国旅游的外国好友Sally推荐一个视频博客,以帮助她准备这趟中国之行。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
打算:plan→ intend
极好的:wonderful→excellent
与……联系:contact→ get in touch with
吸引:appeal to→attract
2. 句式拓展
变为倒装句
原句:They have not only shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China, but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels.
倒装句:Not only have they shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China, but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope that it will help you make better preparations for the trip. (that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Named Beautiful Places in China, the Vlog has appealed to a lot of foreigners who have been living in China for years. (过去分词作定语以及who引导的定语从句)
(十五)
(2024·天津宁河·一模)假设你是红星中学学生李津。暑假期间,你市将举行三个以唐诗、书法和戏剧为主题的文化活动。届时,你的英国朋友Jason将到你市旅游。请你为他推荐三个活动之一并发一封e-mail回复。
(1)对Jason来中国表示欢迎。
(2)推荐的活动及理由。
注意:(1)词数不少于100字;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:唐诗(Tangpoems)剪纸(Paper-cutting)
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【答案】Dear Jason,
Welcome to China!
I’m glad that you’ll spend your summer holiday here in Tianjin. There will be three activities themed Tang poems, paper cutting and calligraphy on display. And of the three, I recommend paper cutting to you.
The first reason is that you are intrigued in traditional Chinese culture, and paper cutting is a symbol of it. By taking part in the activity, you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture. What’s more, paper cutting is an art form that features lively colors and shapes. Experts is scheduled to illustrate how to make figures out of paper and you can master the handcraft on spot. What matters most is that you can make friends with people who share the same interest in the activity.
Hope my recommendation can be of some help for you to have a good holiday in Tianjin.
Yours
Lijin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jason写封e-mail,为他推荐以唐诗、书法和戏剧为主题的文化活动之一。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
专家:expert→specialist
重要:matter→count
参加:take part in→participate in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There will be three activities themed Tang poems, paper cutting and calligraphy on display.
拓展句:There will be three activities whose themes are Tang poems, paper cutting and calligraphy on display.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The first reason is that you are intrigued in traditional Chinese culture, and paper cutting is a symbol of it. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】What matters most is that you can make friends with people who share the same interest in the activity. (运用了what引导的主语从句,that引导的表语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句)
高考真题
(一)
(2017·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;
(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);
(3)表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell you something you are interested in. Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been successfully held on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry.
In your letter, you mentioned that you were eager to know about Chinese culture. I think the best way to learn about it is to read some relevant books. I’d like to recommend a book to you. The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. The poems in the book reflect the Chinese history and culture,many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese. And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.
I think the book is a good choice for you. I believe you will understand the poems easily and efficiently. Wish you to enjoy the book and have a better understanding of China.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Chris写一封信,向他介绍“中国诗词大会”的相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引:appeal→attract
说:speak/state→mention
被命名为:named→entitled
推荐:introduce→recommend
2.句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句:The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.
拓展句:The book which entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been successfully held on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In your letter, you mentioned that you were eager to know about Chinese culture. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(二)
(2019·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。 参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实、行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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By Li Jin
【答案】March 22, 2019
Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books.
The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.
This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.
I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you'll like it !Enjoy reading !
By Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇英语征文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇英语征文;假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;(2)推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称,时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:introduce a book to you(给你推荐一本书),belong to(属于),author(作者)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books…in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials;不定式I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.;宾语从句I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.;强调句I do hope you'll like it!全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
(三)
(2015·上海·高考真题)学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
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【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent is that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Pan Yang
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐三幅图中的其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
快乐:pleasure→joy
最终:ultimately→finally
在某人看来:as far as sb. be concerned→in my opinion
总之:to sum up→in a word
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read.
拓展句:In the picture, three students who are sitting at the table are discussing heatedly what they have just read.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句,that引导的主语从句,which引导的限制性定语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
(四)
(2014·浙江·高考真题) 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书, 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
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Yours sincerely
Li Yue
【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic literary works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校图书馆需要购置的新书提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买:buy→purchase
建议:suggestion→advice
有趣的:interesting→amusing
推荐:recommend→propose
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.
拓展句:It is in a simple and interesting way that popular science books explain basic principles of nature .
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.(由that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]What we need most are popular science books.(由what引导的主语从句)