2025年高考英语作业考试化40分钟组合卷之 应用文写作
最新全国各地真题模拟题(河北省邯郸市) 教师版
新变化——2024年高考全国I卷 应用文写作
强化关键能力,考查创新思维,落实五育并举
应用文写作涉及美术作品内容的描述以及体验分享需要考生将直观的视觉感受转化为具体、生动的文字描述,要求学生具备较强的形象思维和丰富的词汇量,能够用准确且富有创意的词汇描绘出作品的特征,使读者仿佛亲眼所见;同时,描述美术作品往往需要一定的艺术理论基础,学生需要能够将这些知识融入描述中,使文章更有深度,同时也能反映出个人的艺术鉴赏能力和文化素养。
应用文写作淡化题材和格式,重在应用
从话题来说,本篇应用文写作并非是时尚热点话题,而是与学生生活息息相关的话题,可能对于学生来说给上美术课并不陌生,但是在公园里上美术课还要分享给外国朋友,既符合中学生认知能力,有具有创新性和反押题意识。对于考生来说,需要在有限的时间内写出一篇语言得体、内容适当、词汇高级,句式复杂的佳作实属不易。
教学建议——2024年高考全国I卷 应用文写作
书信体和非书信体相得益彰,相互兼顾
虽然今年高考应用文写作依然是书信格式,但是我们复习重点要全面。除了十大常考书信题型以外,还要复习通知、演讲稿、倡议书、投稿信、英文报道以及宣传稿等新型写作模式。
坚持社会主义核心价值观和五育并举命题理念不放松
高三备考内容侧重于学生的日常生活话题,如班会,主题活动等。当然文化,核心价值观等正确思想导向的话题以及能够促进德智体美劳全面发展生活化素材也需要多复习。增强临时应变的能力。比如今年的应用文写作就就是给老师提出建议,不知道写什么的时候,就可以结合平时生活中的各类话题来构思。平时应加强审题能力、一句多译能力、主题句概括能力等核心素养培养。
真题例析——2024年高考全国I卷 应用文写作
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【试题说明】
本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的克里斯,
我写信是为了和你分享上周五在公园的艺术课。
我们的任务是画一些给我们印象最深刻的东西。受奇妙风景的启发,我决定创作一幅水彩画,画的是公园池塘上的小桥,周围是盛开的花朵。
整个体验都非常令人耳目一新。被大自然包围不仅激发了我的创造力,也让我从学校生活的喧嚣中得到急需的休息。我在画画的时候感到了一种深深的平静感。总而言之,这不仅仅是一门艺术课;这是我真正珍惜的一个与大自然有联系的时刻。
你的,
李华
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定:decide→determine 整个的:entire→whole
提供:offer→provide 总之:in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:
Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句:
Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】
I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
【习题精做 试题说明】
试题来源 写作话题 体裁 难度系数 序号
2024·河北邯郸·三模 以“Wildlife Protection”为主题的摄影展写一份通知 应用文 适中(0.65) 1
2024·河北邯郸·一模 介绍你班上周末组织登山活动 应用文 适中(0.65) 2
2024·河北邯郸·二模 留学生Tom从宿舍搬到独立公寓 应用文 适中(0.65) 3
2023·河北邯郸·三模 以“Success”为主题英语演讲稿 应用文 适中(0.65) 4
2023·河北邯郸·二模 邀请信之介绍梨花节 应用文 适中(0.65) 5
2023·河北邯郸·一模 河北省园博园简介 应用文 适中(0.65) 6
习题精做 河北省邯郸市近年模拟题
1.
(2024·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华,你校英文报Youth拟组织一场以“Wildlife Protection”为主题的摄影展,请你写一份通知,发布在校英文报上,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 作品要求;3. 交稿时间。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
(2024·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华, 你班上周末组织了一次登山活动, 你的英国笔友Darren想了解相关情况。请给他写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 旅行前准备;
2. 活动开展情况。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Darren,
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
3.
(2024·河北邯郸·二模)假定你是李华,你班上的留学生Tom想从集体宿舍搬到独立的公寓里 请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 提出相反建议及理由;
3. 表达希望
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.
(2023·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华,准备参加学校组织的英文演讲比赛。请你以“Success”为题,写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1. 你对成功的定义;
2. 举例说明。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Success
Success has long been a heated topic.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.
(2023·河北邯郸·二模)假定你是李华,你的家乡即将举办梨花节(Pear Flower Festival)。 请你给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件,邀请他来参加。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 节日简介;
3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.
(2023·河北邯郸·一模)假定你是李华,一群外国朋友要来参观河北省园博园(Hebei Garden Expo Park),请你为其中的邯郸园(Handan Garden)写一个简介。内容包括:
1. 在园区内的位置;
2. 主要特点及展点。
参考词汇:成语墙(idiom wall)
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2025年高考英语作业考试化40分钟组合卷之 应用文写作
最新全国各地真题模拟题(河北省邯郸市) 教师版
新变化——2024年高考全国I卷 应用文写作
强化关键能力,考查创新思维,落实五育并举
应用文写作涉及美术作品内容的描述以及体验分享需要考生将直观的视觉感受转化为具体、生动的文字描述,要求学生具备较强的形象思维和丰富的词汇量,能够用准确且富有创意的词汇描绘出作品的特征,使读者仿佛亲眼所见;同时,描述美术作品往往需要一定的艺术理论基础,学生需要能够将这些知识融入描述中,使文章更有深度,同时也能反映出个人的艺术鉴赏能力和文化素养。
应用文写作淡化题材和格式,重在应用
从话题来说,本篇应用文写作并非是时尚热点话题,而是与学生生活息息相关的话题,可能对于学生来说给上美术课并不陌生,但是在公园里上美术课还要分享给外国朋友,既符合中学生认知能力,有具有创新性和反押题意识。对于考生来说,需要在有限的时间内写出一篇语言得体、内容适当、词汇高级,句式复杂的佳作实属不易。
教学建议——2024年高考全国I卷 应用文写作
书信体和非书信体相得益彰,相互兼顾
虽然今年高考应用文写作依然是书信格式,但是我们复习重点要全面。除了十大常考书信题型以外,还要复习通知、演讲稿、倡议书、投稿信、英文报道以及宣传稿等新型写作模式。
坚持社会主义核心价值观和五育并举命题理念不放松
高三备考内容侧重于学生的日常生活话题,如班会,主题活动等。当然文化,核心价值观等正确思想导向的话题以及能够促进德智体美劳全面发展生活化素材也需要多复习。增强临时应变的能力。比如今年的应用文写作就就是给老师提出建议,不知道写什么的时候,就可以结合平时生活中的各类话题来构思。平时应加强审题能力、一句多译能力、主题句概括能力等核心素养培养。
真题例析——2024年高考全国I卷 应用文写作
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【试题说明】
本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的克里斯,
我写信是为了和你分享上周五在公园的艺术课。
我们的任务是画一些给我们印象最深刻的东西。受奇妙风景的启发,我决定创作一幅水彩画,画的是公园池塘上的小桥,周围是盛开的花朵。
整个体验都非常令人耳目一新。被大自然包围不仅激发了我的创造力,也让我从学校生活的喧嚣中得到急需的休息。我在画画的时候感到了一种深深的平静感。总而言之,这不仅仅是一门艺术课;这是我真正珍惜的一个与大自然有联系的时刻。
你的,
李华
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定:decide→determine 整个的:entire→whole
提供:offer→provide 总之:in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:
Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句:
Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】
I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
【习题精做 试题说明】
试题来源 写作话题 体裁 难度系数 序号
2024·河北邯郸·三模 以“Wildlife Protection”为主题的摄影展写一份通知 应用文 适中(0.65) 1
2024·河北邯郸·一模 介绍你班上周末组织登山活动 应用文 适中(0.65) 2
2024·河北邯郸·二模 留学生Tom从宿舍搬到独立公寓 应用文 适中(0.65) 3
2023·河北邯郸·三模 以“Success”为主题英语演讲稿 应用文 适中(0.65) 4
2023·河北邯郸·二模 邀请信之介绍梨花节 应用文 适中(0.65) 5
2023·河北邯郸·一模 河北省园博园简介 应用文 适中(0.65) 6
习题精做 河北省邯郸市近年模拟题
1.
(2024·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华,你校英文报Youth拟组织一场以“Wildlife Protection”为主题的摄影展,请你写一份通知,发布在校英文报上,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 作品要求;3. 交稿时间。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【试题说明】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的通知。题目要求考生为校英文报Youth组织的以“Wildlife Protection”为主题的摄影展写一份通知。
【参考范文】
Notice
In order to enhance students’ consciousness of wildlife protection, our school English newspaper Youth will organize a photography exhibition with the theme of “Wildlife Protection”.
We are now soliciting photography works. The works should be related to wildlife and clearly show the beauty and importance of wildlife. They can be in color or black and white, and the format is not limited. However, they must be original and not processed by any software. The deadline for submitting works is next Friday. Please send your works to the specified email address.
We sincerely hope that every student can actively participate and show their unique perspectives on wildlife protection through their works. Let’s work together to protect these precious lives.
【译文】
通知
为提高学生对野生动物保护的意识,我们学校英文青年报将举办以“野生动物保护”为主题的摄影展。
我们现在正在征集摄影作品。这些作品应该与野生动物有关,并清楚地展示野生动物的美丽和重要性。它们可以是彩色的,也可以是黑白的,而且格式不受限制。但是,它们必须是原始的,不能被任何软件处理。提交作品的截止日期是下周五。请将您的作品发送到指定的电子邮件地址。
我们真诚地希望每一位学生都能积极参与,展示自己对野生动物保护的独特观点。让我们一起努力来保护这些宝贵的生命。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
和……有关:be related to→be associated with 重要性:importance→significance
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely 参加:participate→take part
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:
We are now soliciting photography works. The works should be related to wildlife and clearly show the beauty and importance of wildlife.
拓展句:
We are now soliciting photography works, which should be related to wildlife and clearly show the beauty and importance of wildlife.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
The deadline for submitting works is next Friday. (运用了动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】
We sincerely hope that every student can actively participate and show their unique perspectives on wildlife protection through their works. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2.
(2024·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华, 你班上周末组织了一次登山活动, 你的英国笔友Darren想了解相关情况。请给他写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 旅行前准备;
2. 活动开展情况。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Darren,
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【试题说明】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代替李华给英国笔友Darren写一封邮件,介绍你班上周末组织的一次登山活动。
【参考范文】
Dear Darren,
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates. Aiming to help us students keep healthy, our school organized the mountain-climbing activity on August 1. We made full preparations for the activity. For instance, bring along some food, water and equip ourselves with a camera to record the beautiful scenery.
At 8 am, we reached the foot of the Mountain and began the journey with great excitement. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the beautiful scenery. At around 11 am, we reached the top. We jumped and shouted with joy in the sunshine.
This activity really did good to us, through which we enjoyed nature to the fullest and were able to develop our friendships too.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的达伦,
上个星期天,我和同学们在附近的山上徒步旅行。为了帮助我们的学生保持健康,我们的学校于8月1日组织了这次登山活动。我们为这次活动做了充分的准备。例如,带一些食物,水,装备一个相机来记录美丽的风景。
早上8点,我们到达了山脚下,非常激动地开始了旅程。一路上,我们都在聊天,唱歌,大笑,呼吸着新鲜空气,享受着美丽的风景。在上午11点左右,我们到达了山顶。我们在阳光下高兴地跳着喊叫。
这种活动对我们很有好处,通过它我们充分享受大自然,也能够发展我们的友谊。
你真正的,
李华
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
目的是:aim to do sth. →targeted at doing sth. 例如:for instance→for example
到达:reach→arrived at 对……有好处:do good to→be beneficial to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:
At 8 am, we reached the foot of the Mountain and began the journey with great excitement.
拓展句:
At 8 am, we reached the foot of the Mountain,after which we began the journey with great excitement.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Aiming to help us students keep healthy, our school organized the mountain-climbing activity on August 1. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
This activity really did good to us, through which we enjoyed nature to the fullest and were able to develop our friendships too. (运用了介词+关系代词引导非限制性定语从句)
3.
(2024·河北邯郸·二模)假定你是李华,你班上的留学生Tom想从集体宿舍搬到独立的公寓里 请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 提出相反建议及理由;
3. 表达希望
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【试题说明】
本文是应用文。假定你是李华,你班上的留学生Tom想从集体宿舍搬到独立的公寓里 请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1. 表示理解;2. 提出相反建议及理由;3. 表达希望
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I fully understand your desire to move from the dormitory to a separate apartment and I respect your personal decision.
But I think living in a dormitory is more beneficial to you. First of all, you can establish a closer friendship with your roommates, which will make your stay in China comfortable. Secondly, living in a dormitory can help you learn Chinese, and it also contributes to your in-depth understanding of Chinese culture. I hope you will consider my suggestion.
I sincerely hope that you will make an appropriate choice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的汤姆,
我完全理解你想从宿舍搬到一个单独的公寓,我尊重你个人的决定。
但我认为住在宿舍对你更有益。首先,你可以和室友建立更亲密的友谊,让你在中国过得更舒适。其次,住在宿舍可以帮助你学习中文,也有助于你深入了解中国文化。我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。
我真诚地希望你能做出适当的选择。
你的,
李华
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
有好处的:beneficial→of benefit 首先:First of all→At first
有助于:contribute to →conduce to 考虑:consider→take. . . into consideration
2. 句式拓展
改为倒装句
原句:Secondly, living in a dormitory can help you learn Chinese, and it also contributes to your in-depth understanding of Chinese culture.
拓展句: Secondly, not only can living in a dormitory help you learn Chinese, but also it contributes to your in-depth understanding of Chinese culture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
But I think living in a dormitory is more beneficial to you. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
First of all, you can establish a closer friendship with your roommates, which will make your stay in China comfortable. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.
(2023·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华,准备参加学校组织的英文演讲比赛。请你以“Success”为题,写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1. 你对成功的定义;
2. 举例说明。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Success
Success has long been a heated topic.
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【试题说明】
本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生写一篇以“Success”为主题的短文参加英语演讲比赛。
【参考范文】
Success
Success has long been a heated topic. When people talk about success, they usually think of the reputation and great fortune naturally. However, I think the definition of success is not just like the traditional idea.
For us students in the school, it seems nowadays the society is telling us to learn hard so as to make a lot of money and then become the successful person. But I have seen and heard many people are rich but not happy. Apparently, the measure of success should lie in the positive attitude to life and the happiness one owns.
That’s exactly my definition of success: If a person lives a happy life, then he enjoys success.
【译文】
成功
成功长期以来一直是一个热门的话题。当人们谈论成功时,他们通常会很自然地想到声誉和巨额财富。然而,我认为成功的定义并不仅仅是传统的理念。
对我们这些学校的学生来说,现在的社会似乎在告诉我们要努力学习,以便赚很多钱,然后成为成功的人。但我看到和听到,很多人都很富有,但并不快乐。显然,成功的标准应该在于对生活的积极态度和幸福的自己。
这正是我对成功的定义:如果一个人过着幸福的生活,那么他就会享受成功。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
讨论:talk about→discuss 然而:however→nevertheless
如今:nowadays→at present 在于:lie in→depend on
2. 句式拓展
变换句型
原句:
But I have seen and heard many people are rich but not happy.
拓展句:
I have seen and heard many people, who felt lost and did not know what they should fight for, are rich but not happy.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】
For us students in the school, it seems nowadays the society is telling us to learn hard so as to make a lot of money and then become the successful person. (运用了不定式作宾语补足语,不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型 2】
If a person lives a happy life, then he enjoys success. (运用了if引导状语从句)
5.
(2023·河北邯郸·二模)假定你是李华,你的家乡即将举办梨花节(Pear Flower Festival)。 请你给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件,邀请他来参加。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 节日简介;
3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【试题说明】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件,邀请他来参加即将举办的梨花节(Pear Flower Festival),内容包括写信目的,节日介绍和表达期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I am writing to invite you to attend the Pear Flower Festival of my hometown.
The festival will be held from April5 to 20 at the central square of the Qianmu Pear Garden. During the festival, you will have an opportunity to enjoy the breathtaking sea of pear flowers. You can also enjoy live performances by many famous bands. What’s more, you can taste varieties of delicious local snacks. I’m sure that you will have a great time here.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的杰克,
我写信邀请你参加我家乡的梨树节。
艺术节将于4月5日至20日在前木梨树中心广场举行。在节日期间,你将有机会欣赏梨树的海。你还可以欣赏许多著名乐队的现场表演。更重要的是,你还可以品尝到各种美味的当地小吃。我相信你在这里会玩得很开心的。
我期待着你的到来。
你的,
李华
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
机会:opportunity →chance 著名的:famous →well-known
此外:what’s more →besides 各种各样的:varieties of →all kinds of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to invite you to attend the Pear Flower Festival of my hometown.
拓展句:I am writing to invite you to attend the Pear Flower Festival of my hometown, which I think you are fond of.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
During the festival, you will have an opportunity to enjoy the breathtaking sea of pear flowers. (运用了不定式短语作定语)
【高分句型2】
I’m sure that you will have a great time here. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
6.
(2023·河北邯郸·一模)假定你是李华,一群外国朋友要来参观河北省园博园(Hebei Garden Expo Park),请你为其中的邯郸园(Handan Garden)写一个简介。内容包括:
1. 在园区内的位置;
2. 主要特点及展点。
参考词汇:成语墙(idiom wall)
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
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【试题说明】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“一群外国朋友要来参观河北省园博园”一事,为其中的邯郸园(Handan Garden)写一个简介。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
Welcome to Handan Garden of Hebei Garden Expo Park. Handan Garden is located in the northwest of the Expo Garden. It is a park characterized by culture and history with sculptures, antique buildings and pictures to show the historical origin of Handan for 8,000 years. The most remarkable in Handan Garden is the idiom wall, which displays hundreds of idioms from ancient Handan, where visitors often spend a long time admiring and interpreting them. Tourists can also admire the beautiful modern Handan and the good prospects for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的朋友们,
欢迎光临河北花园世博园的邯郸花园。邯郸花园位于世博园的西北部。这是一个以文化和历史为特色的公园,有雕塑、古董建筑和图片,展示了邯郸在8000年来的历史起源。在邯郸花园中最引人注目的是成语墙,它展示了数百个来自古老邯郸的习语,游客经常花很长时间欣赏和解释它们。游客还可以欣赏美丽的现代邯郸和未来的美好前景。
你的,
李华
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
位于:be located in → be situated in 展示:show → represent
引人注目的:remarkable → eye-catching 欣赏:admire → appreciate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:
It is a park characterized by culture and history with sculptures, antique buildings and pictures to show the historical origin of Handan for 8,000 years.
拓展句:
It is a park which is characterized by culture and history with sculptures, antique buildings and pictures to show the historical origin of Handan for 8,000 years.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
It is a park characterized by culture and history with sculptures, antique buildings and pictures to show the historical origin of Handan for 8,000 years. (运用了过去分短语作后置定语)
【高分句型2】
The most remarkable in Handan Garden is the idiom wall, which displays hundreds of idioms from ancient Handan, where visitors often spend a longtime admiring and interpreting them. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句)