【2025届高考】英语作业考试化40分钟组合卷之最新全国各地真题（河北省邯郸市）模拟题 读后续写 16(学生版+教师版)

2025年高考英语作业考试化40分钟组合卷之 读后续写
最新全国各地真题模拟题（河北省邯郸市） 教师版
新变化——2024年高考全国I卷 读后续写
记叙文体裁，侧重于师生、帮助、诚信相关的话题
2024年新课标I卷读后续写通过具体生活情境的构建，不仅强调了个人层面的诚信行为，还展现了面对困境时，主动寻找解决方案并承担后果的责任心，这对于培养学生的社会参与感和道德担当具有深远影响，让学生认识到，每一个微小的诚信行为都是构建和谐社会的基石。该写作任务以“信任”和“守诺”为主线，围绕“我”因支付困难向司机赊账并作出承诺——司机表达信任与理解——“我”和司机兑现承诺来串联故事情节。该故事语言直接且质朴，学生读完后能产生共鸣与反思。此外，该故事有深刻的育人价值，旨在告诉学生陌生人之间也可以相互信任，而遵守诺言更是现代社会必不可少的美好品德。
写作形式更加灵活，内容更加开放，学生有话可写
新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写题选取的语篇讲述了作者在出差途中，与出租车司机协商解决车费支付问题的故事，提示学生循着信任他人与遵守诺言的思路进行续写，引导学生培养诚实守信的美好品德。学生只要抓住两个段首句的暗示和引导作用，结合文章两个关键人物展开话题，属于“问题-解决”型读后续写，也属于助人为乐类读后续写。
教学建议——2024年高考全国I卷 读后续写
注重培养学生会阅读，善于提取要点的能力
续写故事应符合积极的世界观和价值观取向，逻辑合理，情节连费。要阅读语篇，从人与自我、人与社会、人与自然三个主题语境进行分析，把握故事主题，防止主题跑偏和故事情节离奇荒诞。分析故事情节一般从故事六要素着手，即 who, when, where, what, why, how。梳理故事情节发展线和主人公的情感变化和行为动作线，为接下来的续写做好准备。读后续写需要学生在有限的时间内，厘清文章脉络，梳理出故事线和情感线，为接下来的写作找到支撑点和伏笔。所以学生应多利用教材和学生练习中出现的记叙文本，多看原版英语小说，培养读故事的能力。读后多给学生机会去反思和讨论，寻找故事的前因后果，提高学生逻辑分析的能力。
把握短文关键信息重视开头语的提示作用
根据原文的伏笔、情节线索并结合段首句分析，根据段首句的关键信息，提出问题，预设故事情节发展走向。关注段首句和续写部分的衔接，关注3个过度2个衔接和1个结尾。思考故事如何结尾，如何与前文做好首尾呼应，做到连贯并有逻辑性，体现故事主题。段落开头语的前后和上下衔接也很重要，考生需要注意整篇的篇章结构来续写构思，理顺上下文逻辑关系，短文内语句要连贯、有序。注重输入，积累语料。学生只有通过丰富的阅读，潜移默化接触到更多地道语言，才能在高考时用最贴近意义和情境的表达，达到自然流畅描写的境界。在写作实操中使用积累的恰当的词汇，多进行模仿练习。
引导学生读写协同发展，提升综合语言运用能力
试题的阅读部分人物关系明确，逻辑清晰，描写清晰易懂，学生能够迅速通过所给的两段段首句确定续写故事主题，把握续写故事走向。写作难点在于关注续写部分和阅读部分的协同呼应关系，合理设计故事情节，流畅衔接段落，运用自己的语言能力和日常积累，在有限的时间完成高质量的写作内容。教学过程中，教师应该重视故事性阅读，重视优质文本材料的开发和解读，引导学生积累有效多样的语言素材。语言提升可以从场景描写、人物动作描写、情感情绪描写、人物心理活动描写、神态肖像刻画等方方面面分类整理，进行微情节专练，提升语言表达的质量。从语言质量、文章主题、故事衔接、情节创设等方面做到精讲精批，可采用师生互评，生生互评等方式精准分析，有针对性地帮助学生发现问题，提升语言应用能力。
真题例析——2024年高考全国I卷 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. l touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry. ”
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。
【参考范文】
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I explained to him the urgency of catching the bus, emphasizing that otherwise I would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new ticket the next morning. Ultimately, I suggested, “I will return to Vienna in four days. If it’s OK with you, I can pay you then, with an additional 10 euros as a gesture of my gratitude. ” Following an uncomfortable pause, he simply nodded, saying, “I agree to this arrangement and trust you. ” I thanked him with the biggest smile you can imagine, and we exchanged contact information before I got on the bus.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Upon our arrival, we hugged each other like long lost friends. When I gave him the extra ?10 I had promised, he didn’t accept. “Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,” he said with a warm smile. Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a promise to keep in touch. Gunter’s kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come.
【译文】
我跑回冈特身边，告诉了他这个坏消息。我向他解释了上车的紧迫性，并强调否则我将被迫在那里过夜，第二天早上买一张新票。最后，我建议说，“我将在四天后回到维也纳。”如果你可以，我可以付给你，再付10欧元作为我的感谢。”他不舒服地停了一会儿，他只是点点头说：“我同意这个安排，相信你。”我以你能想象到的最大的微笑感谢了他，在我上车之前，我们交换了联系方式。
四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我答应了我，给冈特打了电话。他在四天前送我下车的汽车站接我。一到这里，我们就像失散已久的朋友一样互相拥抱。当我给他我答应过的额外10美元时，他没有接受。“下次你在维也纳的时候给我买杯啤酒，”他热情地微笑着说。然后，我们坚定地握手，并承诺要保持联系。冈特的善良把一个可能是灾难性的夜晚变成了一个我将珍惜多年的难忘故事。
【解析】
段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。
续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友
词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝：reject/refuse ②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb. ③记下，写下：write down/set down
情绪类
①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably ②开心地：happily/joyfully
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. （运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
Gunter’s kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come. （运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
习题精做 河北省邯郸市近年模拟题 读后续写
1．（2024·河北邯郸·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the warm summer sun shone down on us, my dad and I stood in front of our house. “Would you like to go see Rhys and take him for ice cream ” my dad asked. I froze on the spot. I love my younger brother dearly, but it had been well over a year and a half since I had been in public with Rhys. The thought made me feel anxious.
Rhys is 14 and severely cognitively impaired (认知能力受损的). He was diagnosed with a rare genetic mutation (突变) at birth. When I was young, I accompanied my mom or dad to pick him up from his new long-term care home at the end of our busy weekends to spend some time with him, normally at our home.
After picking Rhys up and taking the short car trip, we arrived at the ice cream store. I held onto Rhys in his chair while Dad placed our order. Rhys loves to grab things. He grabbed a woman walking by. I apologized immediately, full of embarrassment.
After getting our ice cream, we sat outside. At this point, I was upset and just wanted to go home. Dad could tell that I was upset. He silently understood and let me be. But then I saw a father and a daughter walking along the road toward the ice cream store. The girl’s movements seemed strangely familiar. I noticed she was excited, behaving similarly to Rhys.
Watching those two changed my thinking completely. I realized I wasn’t the only one in this situation: out in public with a family member with special needs. I smiled as I watched the father and the daughter just enjoying their day and not focusing on what others’ thought. They acted just like every other “typical” family. It occurred to me that I shouldn’t let what others think about Rhys ruin our time together. My days of being embarrassed by his actions had to come to an end.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I grabbed some ice cream with a spoon and playfully held it in front of Rhys. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Seeing Rhys’s smiling face, I decided to take Rhys out more often. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在面对有严重认知障碍弟弟时，从焦虑、尴尬到逐渐接受和享受与弟弟共度的时光的心路历程。
【参考范文】
I grabbed some ice cream with a spoon and playfully held it in front of Rhys. His eyes lit up with excitement as he laughed cheerfully and reached out his little hand to grab it. I moved the spoon skillfully, making it a little harder for him to catch, but seeing his eagerness and joy, I couldn’t help but laugh along. The smile on his face was like the warm sunshine on that day, making me feel a deep sense of joy and connection. For the first time in a long time, I didn’t feel embarrassed or anxious anymore.
Seeing Rhys’s smiling face, I decided to take Rhys out more often. From then on, I would actively seek out various opportunities to spend quality time with him outside. Whether it was a visit to the park to enjoy the beautiful scenery, a trip to the zoo to see the lovely animals, or simply taking a leisurely walk around the neighborhood, I wanted to create countless wonderful memories with him. I knew that there might still be numerous challenges ahead, but I was firmly determined to face them with a positive and optimistic attitude. I believed that as long as I had the courage to take the first step, I could bring more happiness and companionship to Rhys’s life.
【译文】
我用勺子拿了一些冰淇淋，开玩笑地拿在里斯面前。他高兴地笑了起来，眼睛兴奋，伸出小手抓住它。我巧妙地移动了勺子，让它更难抓住了，但看到它的渴望和快乐，我忍不住笑了起来。他脸上的微笑就像那天温暖的阳光，让我感到一种深深的喜悦和联系。很长一段时间以来，我第一次不再感到尴尬或焦虑。
看到里斯的笑脸，我决定再多带里斯出去一次。从那时起，我会积极寻找各种机会与他在外面度过美好的时光。无论是去公园欣赏美丽的风景，还是去动物园看可爱的动物，还是只是在附近悠闲地散步，我都想和他一起创造无数美好的回忆。我知道未来可能还有许多挑战，但我决心以积极和乐观的态度面对这些挑战。我相信，只要我有勇气迈出第一步，我就能给里斯的生活带来更多的幸福和陪伴。
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我用勺子挖了一些冰淇淋，开玩笑地把它放在Rhys面前。”以及第二段首句内容“看到Rhys的笑脸，我决定多带他出去玩。”可知，第一段可描写作者用吃冰激凌逗自己的弟弟的场景，而作者也不再因为有个严重认知障碍的弟弟感到尴尬和焦虑。
②由第二段首句内容“看到Rhys的笑脸，我决定多带他出去玩。”可知，第二段可描写通过这件事，作者改变了对待弟弟的态度，开始享受和弟弟一起度过的时光。
2. 续写线索：吃冰激凌逗弟弟——弟弟笑脸让作者感到喜悦——不再感到尴尬——决定以后多和弟弟待在一起——经常带弟弟出去——决心以积极态度面对挑战——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①抓住：grab/grasp/catch
②想要：want/would like
③决心做某事：be determined to/decide to
情绪类
①高兴：joy/delight
②焦虑的：anxious/concerned
【点睛】
【高分句型1】His eyes lit up with excitement as he laughed cheerfully and reached out his little hand to grab it. (运用了as引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】I knew that there might still be numerous challenges ahead, but I was firmly determined to face them with a positive and optimistic attitude. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．（2024·河北邯郸·三模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I’d like to share with you a funny incident that occurred almost 4 years ago.
I was an 8th grader at high school. One day, the teacher gave us a group assignment and we went to some libraries after class to collect data. In the evening, I found that my group members were complaining that they were hungry and needed to have some food.
Together we entered a restaurant nearby. When the waiter approached our table, one of my classmates made an order directly without even looking at the menu. And after we were done with our food, a classmate asked the group leader to pay the bill. The group leader was surprised as he had not offered the meal and said that he did not have the money to pay the bill. I asked the waiter to bring the bill and we were shocked to see the amount. It was much more than we had expected. Though we were a bit worried, we started laughing and enjoying the whole thing. At this moment, a group member suggested we collect all of our money to pay the bill. We searched our wallets, pockets and bags for money. There were so many coins there that we had to count 2-3 times. But unfortunately, the total amount was still not enough to pay the bill.
As the scene unfolded, the atmosphere shifted from casual laughter to a shared sense of responsibility. Realizing the gravity of the situation, I stepped up and decided to explain our situation to the manager, hoping for some understanding or perhaps a way to work out a payment plan. To our relief, the manager kindly listened to our story. Seeing our genuine efforts to resolve the issue, he agreed to let us pay what we had collected and arrange for the rest to be settled later.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We left the restaurant with empty wallets but light hearts.
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This incident served as a reminder for better teamwork in the future.
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【说明】
本文讲述了4年前发生在作者身上的一件趣事。一天，作者和组员们去图书馆收集资料。晚上去餐馆吃饭时一位同学没看菜单直接点了菜，最终账单超过了他们的预期。作者站出来向经理解释他们的情况，希望能得到一些理解，或者找到一种制定付款计划的方法。经过大家的努力，经理同意他们先用筹集的钱支付部分款项，余下部分后期解决。
【参考范文】
We left the restaurant with empty wallets but light hearts. We had learned an important lesson about teamwork and responsibility. We realized that we should have taken the time to discuss our options before making any decisions. However, although we had made a mistake by not planning our expenses, we had shown resilience and unity in the face of adversity. This experience had strengthened our bonds as a team and taught us to be more careful and responsible in the future.
This incident served as a reminder for better teamwork in the future. It not only brought us closer as a group but also taught us valuable lessons about responsibility and teamwork. We understood that clear communication and shared responsibilities were crucial for success. From that day on, we made a conscious effort to be more organized and considerate when working on group projects. Not only did we strengthen our bond as friends but also laid the foundation for our future academic and professional endeavors. We learned that even in the face of adversity, a positive attitude and a willingness to work together can lead to unexpected outcomes.
【译文】
我们离开餐厅时，钱包空着，但心情轻松。我们已经学到了一个关于团队合作和责任的重要教训。我们意识到，在做任何决定之前，我们应该花点时间讨论我们的选择。然而，尽管我们犯了一个错误，没有计划开支，但我们在逆境中表现出了韧性和团结。这一经历加强了我们作为一个团队的联系，并教会了我们在未来要更加谨慎和负责任。
这一事件提醒我们，未来会有更好的团队精神。它不仅让我们作为一个团队更亲密，而且还向我们传授了关于责任和团队合作的宝贵经验。我们明白，明确的沟通和共同的责任是成功的关键。从那天起，我们有意识地努力在进行小组项目时更加有组织和体贴。我们不仅加强了作为朋友的关系，也为我们未来的学术和专业努力奠定了基础。我们了解到，即使面对逆境，积极的态度和合作的意愿也会导致意想不到的结果。
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们离开餐厅时钱包空空，但心情轻松。”可知，第一段可描写作者这次经历后的感悟。
②由第二段首句内容“这一事件提醒我们今后要加强团队合作。”可知，第二段可描写这次经历对作者后期在学习、小组合作方面的影响。
2. 续写线索：反思——收获——团队塑造——对学习的积极影响——直面挫折
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①增强：strengthen/promote
②充当，担任：serve as /act as
③合作：work together /cooperate
情绪类
①积极的：positive/active/vigorous
②考虑周到的：considerate /thoughtful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] However, although we had made a mistake by not planning our expenses, we had shown resilience and unity in the face of adversity. （运用了although引导的让步状语从句）
[高分句型2] Not only did we strengthen our bond as friends but also laid the foundation for our future academic and professional endeavors. （运用了Not only…but also…的倒装句式）
3．（2024·河北邯郸·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I called my husband, Larry, saying that we were going to the opera again.
The joke was, the last time I made him go, he fell asleep. Even I had to admit it was a boring production. But when someone gave us tickets to the all-time favourite Carmen, I really thought he might enjoy it. When he nodded off again, I let him sleep. I only woke him when his snoring became louder than the performance.
Larry and I have always had our basic values in common, but our interests are as far apart as, well, opera and hockey (冰球). I love the arts, and he’s a huge sports fan. His big passion is NHL hockey. He’s shared season tickets with his friends for years. But if he wanted me to go with him, we went.
We attended the games with other couples. The rest of our group were enthusiastic about the games, even the women. They knew all the players and how to pronounce their four-syllable names.
I enjoyed participating in the national anthem; but that was the only thing I enjoyed about our hockey nights. Instead of appreciating the good seats we had, I’d complain, “It’s cold in here!” My husband would offer me his jacket, but I wouldn’t take it. When the game started, my phone would be on my lap. Most of the time, I’d be texting or daydreaming. Sometimes, my texting would be interrupted when the home team scored. I knew they scored because everyone jumped up and exchanged high-fives and fist bumps.
What was so exciting about a group of grown men on ice hitting something with a stick It was beyond me. I started to wonder. Why was I the only one not enjoying myself Would I actually like this sport if I gave it a chance What if I tried to change my attitude As I looked around at thousands of people cheering and getting increasingly excited, I decided to at least give it a try — for my husband’s sake, if not for my own.
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Soon I got to know the team, the rules and the excitement of scoring.
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On my birthday, he suddenly announced, “I’m taking you to the opera. ”
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【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者喜欢看歌剧，而丈夫觉得无聊，他们的兴趣爱好却相距甚远，丈夫喜欢体育，作者喜欢艺术。于是作者主动了解丈夫的喜好，丈夫愿意为了作者去尝试歌剧。
【参考范文】
Soon I got to know the team, the rules and the excitement of scoring. I learnt who the goalkeeper was and who our latest player was. When the other team scored, I would feel disappointed. But when our team won, I jumped up and down and I cheered with the rest of them. I soon learnt all the terms and seeing me getting involved, I was surprised myself! I went to almost every game with him afterwards, expertly discussing all the game’s particulars with my husband. My husband was surprised and pleased.
On my birthday, he suddenly announced, “I’m taking you to the opera. ” That was really a surprise to me. I didn’t go to see the hockey to make him go to the opera. He said that he just wanted to reward me for being a fan of the game. I readily agreed and hugged him warmly. The opera was enjoyable and this time, Larry even stayed awake. I realize that if you know his hobbies, you’ll know his heart. It’s so much more fun having the same things in common with my husband.
【译文】
很快我就了解了球队，规则和进球的兴奋感。我知道了谁是守门员，我们的新球员。当另一支球队得分时，我会感到失望。但当我们的队伍赢了，我跳上跳下，和其他人一起欢呼。我很快就学会了所有的术语，看到我参与进来，我自己也很惊讶！之后，我几乎和他一起去看了每一场比赛，熟练地和我丈夫讨论了比赛的所有细节。我丈夫既惊讶又高兴。
在我生日那天，他突然宣布：“我要带你去看歌剧了。”这真让我吃惊。我去看冰球并不是为了让他去看歌剧。他说他只是想奖励我是这个游戏的粉丝。我欣然同意了，并热情地拥抱了他。歌剧很有趣，这一次，拉里甚至保持了清醒。我知道，如果你知道他的业余爱好，你就会知道他的心。和我丈夫有同样的共同点更有趣。
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“很快我就熟悉了这支球队，熟悉了规则，也熟悉了进球的兴奋”可知，第一段可描写作者了解丈夫喜欢的运动。
②由第二段首句内容“在我生日那天，他突然宣布：‘我要带你去看歌剧。’”可知，第二段可描写丈夫也决定开始了解作者的爱好。
2. 续写线索：熟悉球队——参与其中——丈夫高兴——丈夫提出看歌剧——作者感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
拥抱：hug/embrace
了解：know/learn
想要：want to/would like to
情绪类
失望的：disappointed/upset
高兴的：pleased/delighted
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When the other team scored, I would feel disappointed. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] He said that he just wanted to reward me for being a fan of the game. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
4．（2023·河北邯郸·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Be What’s Missing
Where was that cashier Angry, I glanced at my watch. I barely had enough time to eat my hamburgers and then dash back to the hospital where I worked.
I looked around the nearly empty fast-food restaurant but the cashier was nowhere in sight. A woman whom I guessed to be about my age stood wiping the far end of the counter with a towel. When she thought I wasn’t looking, she looked at me with sad, dark eyes.
I waited, drumming my fingers on the counter. The woman pushed the gray hair from her lined forehead and continued wiping the counter.
I glanced again at my watch. I planned to write a letter about the lack of service in this place. But just as I mentally made up my letter, I had a memory of Rosie, a former coworker of mine. I could hear her sweet voice recommend me, “Be what’s missing. ”
“What do you mean, ‘Be what’s missing’ ” I had asked the first time I heard her use that phrase. “Whenever you find yourself in an unpleasant situation,” she explained, “just think about what is missing. ” Rosie smiled at my blank stare. “It’s really simple when you think about it. If someone is mean, then kindness is missing. If someone is inconsiderate, then thoughtfulness is missing. If someone is hateful, then love is missing. If we will be what’s missing, then we’ll provide whatever the situation needs. ”
And here I was in an unpleasant situation. How was I supposed to “be what’s missing” What was missing was service. But then the woman who had wiped the counter walked slowly toward the cash register. With deliberately paced words, she asked, “May I help you ”
I was not satisfied with her service, and I was so angry that I almost lost my temper. But again I heard Rosie’s voice, “Be what’s missing. ”
I took a deep breath. It was clear that I was in a hurry to be waited on — by someone who was, no doubt, overworked, underappreciated, and underpaid. With Rosie’s words ringing in my head, I gave the woman my order… and smiled. “How are you today ”
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1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
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My greeting seemed to surprise her.
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After dinner, I placed everything in my tray and wiped the table more thoroughly than usual.
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【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在快餐店吃饭时，因为迟迟没有服务员帮忙点单而生气，但是想到了前同事罗西的话他决定对别人友善一些。他认为我们每个人都是一样的，有烦恼会生气，会累也会受伤，因此我们需要更耐心地对待他人。
【参考范文】
My greeting seemed to surprise her. She eyed me for a second before answering. “Not too good. ” “I’m sorry. ” I said. “I hope it gets better starting right now. ” She almost smiled as she looked at me “Thanks. I hope you’re right. ” I thought to myself as I ate my sandwich. We’re all the same, really. We have problems and angers, we get tired and we hurt. We need to be nicer to each other.
After dinner, I placed everything in my tray and wiped the table more thoroughly than usual. The woman was watching me, a big smile on her face. She walked over and took away the things from the table, saying “Thanks. You are so kind. You make my day. ” I said, “If this can make you happy, what I have done is worthwhile. ” I walked out of the restaurant and felt cheerful. “Be what’s missing. ” It worked. I hoped everyone can be friendly to others.
【译文】
我的问候似乎使她很吃惊。她看了我一会儿，然后才回答。“不太好。”抱歉我说的。“我希望现在开始的情况会更好。”她看着我，几乎笑了：“谢谢。我希望你是对的。”我一边吃三明治边想。我们都是一样的，真的。我们有问题和愤怒，我们很累，我们很受伤。我们需要彼此相处。
晚饭后，我把所有的东西都放在托盘里，比平时更彻底地擦着桌子。那个女人正看着我，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。她走过去，把桌子上的东西拿走，说：“谢谢。”你真善良。你是我的一天。”我说，“如果这能让你高兴，我所做的也是值得的。”我走出餐厅，感到很高兴。“是缺少的。”它的工作原理。我希望每个人都能友好地对待我
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我的问候似乎让她大吃一惊。”可知，第一段可描写服务员对作者的回应，作者鼓励安慰服务员和作者吃饭时的心里感悟。
②由第二段首句内容“晚饭后，我把所有东西都放在托盘里，比平时更彻底地擦桌子。”可知，第二段可描写服务员对作者的行为表示感谢，作者觉得自己的所作所为很值得，认为“做缺失的事情”它奏效了。
2. 续写线索：问候让服务员吃惊——服务员呼应作者——作者鼓励安慰服务员——作者吃饭时的心里感悟——饭后作者收拾桌子——服务员感激——作者觉得自己的所作所为很值得——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①微笑：smile / give a smile
②吃、吞咽：eat / swallow
③做、完成：do / complete
情绪类
①愤怒：anger / rage
②高兴的：happy / delighted
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I thought to myself as I ate my sandwich. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. If this can make you happy, what I have done is worthwhile. (运用了If引导的条件状语从句和what引导的主语从句)
5．（2023·河北邯郸·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Christmas was drawing near, and came along with it our favorite moment — the Treasure Hunt.
In the past, my brother Brandon and I had opened all of the packages under the tree. All that was left was an envelope. We knew that envelopes usually contained cards, and if we were lucky, they also contained gift cards or cash.
However, this Christmas my dad looked almost like he’d forgotten about the envelope as he casually handed it to me. I opened it and discovered inside a 3x5 index card (索引卡) with a border of shining surrounding a poem. Of course, I don’t remember the poem by heart, but its rhyming message instructed us to go downstairs. We were excited. Maybe we were getting a pet we had wanted.
What we found downstairs was another envelope, containing another index card with a border of shining surrounding a poem. This poem told us to go to Dad’s car. Was the pet already in the car, ready to go
No! There was just another envelope containing another shining index card. This one told us to go to Mom’s office downtown. Neither of us was old enough to drive. This meant we had to beg our parents to hurry up and get dressed and finish drinking their coffee and get going.
Eventually, we made it to Mom’s office where we found — you guessed it — a poem telling us to go somewhere else. This time it was to the TV station where Dad worked. By now, our curiosity was stretched to the limits of our imaginations.
We soon found out, however, that such a desk at the studio is a lovely place to keep a 3x5 index card with a poem, which confused us more than any other. It told us to go to an unfamiliar address.
The car stopped in front of the unknown house. It felt like the end of the hunt.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
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My dad handed us the final envelope, and the final poem told us to knock on the door.
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Dad was standing behind us by then, and “Merry Christmas,” he said, “The cat’s yours. ”
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【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和哥哥布兰登在寻宝游戏中，最终意外收获到一直想要的可爱的猫作为圣诞礼物的故事。
【参考范文】
My dad handed us the final envelope, and the final poem told us to knock on the door. I could hardly contain my excitement as we stood in front of the unfamiliar house, wondering what awaited us inside. Brandon knocked on the door, and we waited in anticipation for someone to answer. After what seemed like ages, the door slowly opened. A stranger, later known as the keeper, revealed a small cute ten - week - old cat staring up at us with big blue eyes. We both held the breath in surprise and looked up at our dad, who was smiling playfully.
Dad was standing behind us by then, and "Merry Christmas," he said," The cat's yours. " We couldn't believe it. We had been begging our parents for a pet for years, but they had always said no. Now, we had our very own cat, thanks to the Treasure Hunt. We lifted the cat up and hugged him close, feeling grateful and overjoyed. That Treasure Hunt was the best one yet, and it had given us the greatest gift of all. That was the day that cat became part of our family. It was a gift far beyond anything I could have imagined.
【译文】
我爸爸把最后一个信封递给了我们，最后一首诗让我们去敲门。我们站在那所陌生的房子前，想知道里面在等着什么，我几乎无法抑制自己的兴奋。布兰登敲了敲门，我们等着有人回答。似乎过了多久，门才慢慢地打开了。一个陌生人，后来被称为饲养员，展示了一只可爱的10周大的小猫，用蓝色的大眼睛盯着我们。我们都惊讶地屏住呼吸，抬头看着我们的爸爸，他在开玩笑地微笑着。
那时爸爸已经站在我们身后了，“圣诞快乐，”他说，“猫是你的。”我们简直不敢相信。多年来，我们一直在请求父母养一只宠物，但他们总是说不。现在，多亏了这次寻宝活动，我们才有了自己的猫。我们把猫抱起来，紧紧地抱着它，感到又感激又高兴。那次寻宝活动是迄今为止最好的一次，它给了我们最伟大的礼物。就在那一天，那只猫成为了我们家的一员。这是一份远远超出我想象的礼物。
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“爸爸把最后一个信封递给我们，最后一首诗让我们去敲门。”可知，第一段可描写我们去敲门后看的场景经过。
②由第二段首句内容“爸爸站在我们身后，“圣诞快乐，”他说，“猫是你的了。””可知，第二段可描写我们知道猫属于我们后的心情以及感受。
2. 续写线索：我们去敲门——有人来开门——饲养员向我们展示猫——爸爸说猫是我们的礼物——我们抱起猫——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①抑制：contain /restrain/hold-up
②. 揭露，显示：revealed/showed
③. 相信：believe /trust/have faith in
情绪类
①. 感谢：feeling grateful/showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②. 惊讶地：in surprise / in amazement
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I could hardly contain my excitement as we stood in front of the unfamiliar house, wondering what awaited us inside. （运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
[高分句型2]. A stranger, later known as the keeper, revealed a small cute ten - week - old cat staring up at us with big blue eyes. （运用了非谓语动词中的过去分词known as作定语以及现在分词短语staring up at us with big blue eyes作后置定语。）
6．（2023·河北邯郸·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For the most part, Hank, a two-year-old cat, is a homebody- and for good reason. But on November 6th, Bushong, his owner, spotted Hank resting on a branch near the top of a neighbor’s tree.
Bushong believed Hank got frightened by some dogs. The more scared he got, the higher he climbed. “Cats have an amazing ability to climb up trees, but they aren’t that good at climbing down,” said Dan D’Eramo, director of field services for the Humane Rescue Alliance (HRA).
Bushong then asked the HRA to help, but it was no easy task. HRA called the fire department, but it refused to help because of safety concerns. Then Bushong called a construction company to ask about renting scaffolding(脚手架) but was told she would have to book the equipment 48 days in advance. Next she reached out to a local tree company, Casey Trees. But the crew said it wasn’t safe for a person to go up into the tree. Bushong became very sad.
Then neighbors came to help. Ed Baptiste, whose tree Hank had climbed, let Bushong sit in his backyard and called to Hank. Another neighbor donated a can of fish, hoping it might attract the cat to come down. Nearby dog owners took their pets on walks instead of letting them out in their yards to avoid further frightening Hank. Another neighbor suggested Bushong call a local business, which had a tall ladder. Unfortunately, their 42-foot ladder proved too short.
By day five, nothing had worked. That’s when another neighbor suggested creating a pulley(滑轮) system by throwing a sandbag attached to the rope to a branch higher than Hank. It will form a pulley system as the sandbag hangs down by gravity. Then raise a basket with some of the owners’ personal items. The cat may be attracted by the familiar scents and climb into the basket.
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Bushong decided to have a try.
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Carefully, they lowered Hank down.
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【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一只小猫Hank无意中爬上了高高的树上却没有办法下来，猫主人和邻居们共同努力最终帮助小猫安全下树的故事。
【参考范文】
Bushong decided to have a try. She filled a small basket with some of Hank’s favourite things. She called it Hank’s party pack. With the help of volunteers from Casey Trees, they used a special equipment and shot a sandbag attached to a rope high into the tree. They got lucky on the first try. The rope caught a branch directly above Hank. Pulling on the other end of the rope, they positioned Hank’s party pack just beneath him. To their great delight, he jumped in.
Carefully, they lowered Hank down. Once Hank reached the ground, Bushong took Hank into her arms, hugging him hard. Afterward, they went inside and ate, and Hank rested in his favourite chair. Hank’s adventure taught Bushong a lesson about neighbors helping neighbors. “I can’t believe so many people went out of their way to help me with this cat,” she said. “It made me feel good that I live in a neighborhood where people would do whatever they could to get him down. It gave me hope. ”
【译文】
布什决定试一试。她在一个小篮子里装满了一些汉克最喜欢的东西。她称之为汉克的派对包。在凯西树的志愿者的帮助下，他们使用了一种特殊的设备，将一根绳子上的沙袋射向树。他们第一次尝试就很幸运了。绳子夹住了汉克正上方的一根树枝。他们拉着绳子的另一端，把汉克的派对队伍放在他的下面。让他们非常高兴的是，他跳了进去。
他们小心翼翼地把汉克放下来。汉克一走到地上，布什就把汉克抱在怀里，紧紧地抱着他。后来，他们进去吃饭，汉克坐在他最喜欢的椅子上休息。汉克的冒险给了布什一个关于邻居帮助邻居的教训。“我不敢相信这么多人特意帮我养这只猫，”她说。“我住在这样一个社区，人们会竭尽全力地打倒他，这让我感觉很好。它给了我希望。”
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Bushong决定试一试。”以及第二段首句内容“他们小心翼翼地把Hank放下来。”可知，第一段可描写Bushong如何想办法让Hank下树。
②由第二段首句内容“他们小心翼翼地把Hank放下来。”可知，第二段可描写Hank终于获救以及Bushong的感受。
2. 续写线索：无法下树——求救未果——邻居们出主意——邻居建议——方法奏效——成功获救
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①使用：use/employ
②放置：position/place
③到达：reach/land on/arrive at
情绪类
①幸运的：lucky/fortunate
②开心地：to one’s delight/delightedly
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
I can’t believe so many people went out of their way to help me with this cat. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
It made me feel good that I live in a neighborhood where people would do whatever they could to get him down. （运用了that引导的主语从句和where引导的定语从句以及whatever引导的宾语从句）
7．（2023·河北邯郸·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last December, Jamie McCall was on a cross-country drive as she prepared to move from Florida to Michigan before Christmas. She stopped at a hotel for the night in Cleveland, Tennessee, and while she was getting herself a bite to eat, her beloved eat Tucker escaped from her room. “My cat’s an escape artist,” explained McCall. “He sits beside the door and waits for someone to open it, then he runs out. ”
It somehow happened during McCall’s quick mission, and she was shocked to return and find Tucker missing. “I could not find him. I looked everywhere, for hours. ”
When Tucker still hadn’t turned up, McCall had no choice but to continue her journey to Michigan, though it broke her heart to drive on without Tucker. A friend told her to post Tucker online, which she did.
Two days later, Holly Lillard was at work at a drugstore near McCall’s hotel. She went outside to sweep and saw a cat jump out from underneath someone’s car. She called the cat over, and he came, which made Lillard realize that he belonged to someone who was missing him.
Lillard asked around and when no one claimed him, she posted a photo of Tucker to her area’s “Lost and Found Pets” online group, where she was a regular there, not just because she’s an animal lover whose own dogs are also escape artists, but because her aunt and cousin are the page administrators.
Before the day was even over, McCall had found Lillard and her post. “She sent pictures and I knew immediately it was Tucker,” said McCall. There was just one problem: By the time they connected, McCall was already in Michigan.
“I was trying to make arrangements to get him back to me, but I just couldn’t afford it,” said McCall. “I was not financially able to have him shipped back to me or anything like that. ”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lillard, however, had an unexpected solution.
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Lillard’s grandfather completed the 600-plus-mile journey with Tucker.
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【说明】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了去年12月，Jamie McCall准备在圣诞节前从佛罗里达州搬到密歇根州，当时她正在进行一次越野驾驶。结果猫Tucker跑丢了，一个朋友让她把Tucker发到网上，她照做了。在药店上班的Holly Lillard发现了这只猫，最终Lillard的祖父带着Tucker回到了主人的身边。
【参考范文】
Lillard, however, had an unexpected solution. Her grandparents, who lived near her in Tennessee, happened to have a home in Michigan, too, and they would be coming up in December. Tucker could catch a ride with them and Lillard’s grandfather would drop him off at McCall’s new place. Thus. McCall was able to be reunited with him. “What are the odds ” Lillard asked, laughing. Excited and overjoyed. McCall of course accepted Lillard’s suggestion with gratitude.
Lillard’s grandfather completed the 600-plus-mile journey with Tucker. Getting together with Tucker. McCall said her joy was beyond description. “He returned to me right before Christmas, and I was having a re-ally hard time then,” she said. “It was a wonderful thing. ” Not only did McCall get Tucker back, Lillard also sent along a handmade Christmas gift for McCall, with some money inside, which moved McCall to tears. There is no doubt that Tucker’s cross-country adventure was the start to a lasting friendship between McCall and Lillard.
【译文】
然而，利拉德有了一个意想不到的解决方案。她的祖父母住在她附近的田纳西州，碰巧在密歇根州也有一个家，他们将在12月出生。塔克可以和他们一起搭车，利拉德的祖父会把他送到麦考尔的新家。因此麦考尔能够与他团聚。“几率是多少？”利拉德笑着问。兴奋和欣喜若狂。麦考尔当然满怀感激地接受了利拉德的建议。
利拉德的祖父和塔克一起完成了600多英里的旅程。和塔克在一起。麦考尔说，她的喜悦简直难以形容。“他在圣诞节前回到我身边，那时我又很了，”她说。“这是一件美妙的事情。”麦考尔不仅把塔克找回来，利拉德还给麦考尔送了一份手工制作的圣诞礼物，里面有一些钱，这让麦考尔流下了眼泪。毫无疑问，塔克的越野冒险是麦考尔和利拉德之间持久友谊的开始。
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，Lillard有一个意想不到的解决办法。”可知，第一段可描写Lillard想到的办法是什么以及祖父答应带猫回到主人身边。
②由第二段首句内容“Lillard的祖父和Tucker一起完成了600多英里的旅程。”可知，第二段可描写McCall再次见到猫的情景。
2. 续写线索：想到办法——让祖父送猫——感谢——回到主人身边——送礼物——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
感动：move / touch
回到：return to/ get back to
完成：complete/ accomplish
情绪类
快乐：overjoyed /happy
感谢：with gratitude /gratefully
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Her grandparents, who lived near her in Tennessee, happened to have a home in Michigan, too, and they would be coming up in December. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only did McCall get Tucker back, Lillard also sent along a handmade Christmas gift for McCall, with some money inside, which moved McCall to tears. (运用了部分倒装)
8．（2022·河北邯郸·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
With the late afternoon sun setting on his farm, Steve finished feeding his horses and decided to go home. His two sons, Danny, 6, and Claus, 3, followed behind.
As they headed for the house, the two boys ran ahead of their father, who stopped to close the gate. Danny paused at an old well. Unknown to him, the board covering the well had grown easily broken over time. When Danny stepped on it, it caved in. Steve had just finished locking the gate when he turned around and saw only his younger son.
“Where’s Danny ” he shouted. “He fell in the hole!” Claus said. Steve quickly realized what had happened. Danny could barely swim! He ran to the well and heard Danny screaming quite way below. Desperately, he jumped in .
Steve hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well. He lifted his head out of the water and grabbed Danny, who was panicked, trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand.
Knowing they could float in the ice-cold water for only a short time, Steve pulled his son up onto his chest and tried all means to stand upright with two legs against the narrow well walls for support. His body was still partly submerged (淹没). “Dad, you can pull us out now,” Danny said.
If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. Looking up to see Claus looking down at them from the top of the well, Steve shouted, “Claus, you’re going to have to be a big boy and save us. You have to go out to the road and get someone to help. OK ” “OK, Daddy. ” Claus yelled and ran to the road.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
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About 15 minutes later, Edmen and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving.
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Forty-some minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet.
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【说明】
本文讲述了一个关于救援的故事。主人公史蒂夫喂完马后，和两个儿子丹尼和克劳斯一起回家。在史蒂夫停下来关门时，丹尼踩在覆盖在井上的木板上，由于木板老化断裂，他掉进了井里。因为丹尼几乎不会游泳，史蒂夫立即跳入井里救他，但因为水太深，两人都站不住，无法逃出。史蒂夫让井口的克劳斯去找人求助，克劳斯答应了，立即跑向马路。
【参考范文】
One possible version:
About 15 minutes later, Edmon and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving. Hearing the accident from Claus, they picked him up and sped to Steve’s house. Upon arrival, Edmon quickly jumped off the truck and grabbed a long thick rope. Then he and Sam rushed to the well. “Steve,” Edmon shouted, “We’re going to send a rope down to you. ” “OK, I’ll send Danny up first. ” Steve shouted back, freezing down there. With the rope tied around, the boy was pulled out first.
Forty-some minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet. Just as his neighbors reached out to grab him, he collapsed to the ground. Struggling to his feet, Steve hugged his neighbors tightly, whispering “You save our lives! Thank you!” For him, words couldn’t express his gratitude for their timely rescue and they were his good neighbors forever. “Daddy!” Danny and Claus cried, rushing to Steve. Steve held them tightly in arms, cherishing them like never before, and tears welled up in the eyes of this tough guy.
【译文】
大约15分钟后，埃德蒙和他们的邻居萨姆在开车经过史蒂夫的农场时，他们注意到克劳斯独自一人在路边挥手。听到克劳斯的事故，他们接他，加速到史蒂夫家。到达后，埃德蒙迅速跳下卡车，抓起一根又长又厚的绳子。然后他和萨姆冲到井边。“史蒂夫，”埃德蒙喊道，“我们要送一根绳子给你。”“好吧，我先派丹尼上去。”史蒂夫大声回答，僵在那里。周围绑着绳子，男孩先被拉了出来。
在他跳进井里救儿子40几分钟后，史蒂夫走了出来，又冷又湿。就在他的邻居伸手去抓住他时，他倒在地。史蒂夫挣扎着站起来，紧紧地拥抱着他的邻居，低声说：“你救了我们的命！”谢谢你！”对他来说，言语无法表达他对他们及时救援的感激之情，他们永远是他的好邻居。“爸爸！”丹尼和克劳斯哭了起来，冲向史蒂夫跟前。史蒂夫紧紧地抱着他们，前所未有地珍惜他们，这个硬汉的眼睛里涌出了泪水。
【解析】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大约15分钟后，他们的邻居埃德蒙和萨姆开车经过史蒂夫的农场时，他们注意到克劳斯独自一人在路边挥手。”可知，第一段可描写埃德蒙和萨姆是如何对史蒂夫和丹尼进行救援的。
②由第二段首句内容“史蒂夫跳进井里救儿子四十多分钟后，他出来了，浑身又冷又湿。”可知，第二段可描写史蒂夫获救后与儿子的交流和对邻居的感激。
2. 续写线索：展开救援——丹尼获救——继续救援——史蒂夫获救——感激邻居——更加珍惜家人
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①. 一到，在到达时：upon arrival/as soon as sb. arrive (arrives/arrived)
②. 抓住，抓起：grab/catch hold of
③. 拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①. 感激：gratitude/appreciation
②. 珍爱某人：cherish sb. /love sb. dearly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. With the rope tied around, the boy was pulled out first. （运用了with的复合结构在句中作状语）
[高分句型2]. Just as his neighbors reached out to grab him, he collapsed to the ground. （运用了由as引导的时间状语从句）2025年高考英语作业考试化40分钟组合卷之 读后续写
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. l touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry. ”
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（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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1．（2024·河北邯郸·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the warm summer sun shone down on us, my dad and I stood in front of our house. “Would you like to go see Rhys and take him for ice cream ” my dad asked. I froze on the spot. I love my younger brother dearly, but it had been well over a year and a half since I had been in public with Rhys. The thought made me feel anxious.
Rhys is 14 and severely cognitively impaired (认知能力受损的). He was diagnosed with a rare genetic mutation (突变) at birth. When I was young, I accompanied my mom or dad to pick him up from his new long-term care home at the end of our busy weekends to spend some time with him, normally at our home.
After picking Rhys up and taking the short car trip, we arrived at the ice cream store. I held onto Rhys in his chair while Dad placed our order. Rhys loves to grab things. He grabbed a woman walking by. I apologized immediately, full of embarrassment.
After getting our ice cream, we sat outside. At this point, I was upset and just wanted to go home. Dad could tell that I was upset. He silently understood and let me be. But then I saw a father and a daughter walking along the road toward the ice cream store. The girl’s movements seemed strangely familiar. I noticed she was excited, behaving similarly to Rhys.
Watching those two changed my thinking completely. I realized I wasn’t the only one in this situation: out in public with a family member with special needs. I smiled as I watched the father and the daughter just enjoying their day and not focusing on what others’ thought. They acted just like every other “typical” family. It occurred to me that I shouldn’t let what others think about Rhys ruin our time together. My days of being embarrassed by his actions had to come to an end.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I grabbed some ice cream with a spoon and playfully held it in front of Rhys. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Seeing Rhys’s smiling face, I decided to take Rhys out more often. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·河北邯郸·三模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I’d like to share with you a funny incident that occurred almost 4 years ago.
I was an 8th grader at high school. One day, the teacher gave us a group assignment and we went to some libraries after class to collect data. In the evening, I found that my group members were complaining that they were hungry and needed to have some food.
Together we entered a restaurant nearby. When the waiter approached our table, one of my classmates made an order directly without even looking at the menu. And after we were done with our food, a classmate asked the group leader to pay the bill. The group leader was surprised as he had not offered the meal and said that he did not have the money to pay the bill. I asked the waiter to bring the bill and we were shocked to see the amount. It was much more than we had expected. Though we were a bit worried, we started laughing and enjoying the whole thing. At this moment, a group member suggested we collect all of our money to pay the bill. We searched our wallets, pockets and bags for money. There were so many coins there that we had to count 2-3 times. But unfortunately, the total amount was still not enough to pay the bill.
As the scene unfolded, the atmosphere shifted from casual laughter to a shared sense of responsibility. Realizing the gravity of the situation, I stepped up and decided to explain our situation to the manager, hoping for some understanding or perhaps a way to work out a payment plan. To our relief, the manager kindly listened to our story. Seeing our genuine efforts to resolve the issue, he agreed to let us pay what we had collected and arrange for the rest to be settled later.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We left the restaurant with empty wallets but light hearts.
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This incident served as a reminder for better teamwork in the future.
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3．（2024·河北邯郸·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I called my husband, Larry, saying that we were going to the opera again.
The joke was, the last time I made him go, he fell asleep. Even I had to admit it was a boring production. But when someone gave us tickets to the all-time favourite Carmen, I really thought he might enjoy it. When he nodded off again, I let him sleep. I only woke him when his snoring became louder than the performance.
Larry and I have always had our basic values in common, but our interests are as far apart as, well, opera and hockey (冰球). I love the arts, and he’s a huge sports fan. His big passion is NHL hockey. He’s shared season tickets with his friends for years. But if he wanted me to go with him, we went.
We attended the games with other couples. The rest of our group were enthusiastic about the games, even the women. They knew all the players and how to pronounce their four-syllable names.
I enjoyed participating in the national anthem; but that was the only thing I enjoyed about our hockey nights. Instead of appreciating the good seats we had, I’d complain, “It’s cold in here!” My husband would offer me his jacket, but I wouldn’t take it. When the game started, my phone would be on my lap. Most of the time, I’d be texting or daydreaming. Sometimes, my texting would be interrupted when the home team scored. I knew they scored because everyone jumped up and exchanged high-fives and fist bumps.
What was so exciting about a group of grown men on ice hitting something with a stick It was beyond me. I started to wonder. Why was I the only one not enjoying myself Would I actually like this sport if I gave it a chance What if I tried to change my attitude As I looked around at thousands of people cheering and getting increasingly excited, I decided to at least give it a try — for my husband’s sake, if not for my own.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Soon I got to know the team, the rules and the excitement of scoring.
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On my birthday, he suddenly announced, “I’m taking you to the opera. ”
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4．（2023·河北邯郸·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Be What’s Missing
Where was that cashier Angry, I glanced at my watch. I barely had enough time to eat my hamburgers and then dash back to the hospital where I worked.
I looked around the nearly empty fast-food restaurant but the cashier was nowhere in sight. A woman whom I guessed to be about my age stood wiping the far end of the counter with a towel. When she thought I wasn’t looking, she looked at me with sad, dark eyes.
I waited, drumming my fingers on the counter. The woman pushed the gray hair from her lined forehead and continued wiping the counter.
I glanced again at my watch. I planned to write a letter about the lack of service in this place. But just as I mentally made up my letter, I had a memory of Rosie, a former coworker of mine. I could hear her sweet voice recommend me, “Be what’s missing. ”
“What do you mean, ‘Be what’s missing’ ” I had asked the first time I heard her use that phrase. “Whenever you find yourself in an unpleasant situation,” she explained, “just think about what is missing. ” Rosie smiled at my blank stare. “It’s really simple when you think about it. If someone is mean, then kindness is missing. If someone is inconsiderate, then thoughtfulness is missing. If someone is hateful, then love is missing. If we will be what’s missing, then we’ll provide whatever the situation needs. ”
And here I was in an unpleasant situation. How was I supposed to “be what’s missing” What was missing was service. But then the woman who had wiped the counter walked slowly toward the cash register. With deliberately paced words, she asked, “May I help you ”
I was not satisfied with her service, and I was so angry that I almost lost my temper. But again I heard Rosie’s voice, “Be what’s missing. ”
I took a deep breath. It was clear that I was in a hurry to be waited on — by someone who was, no doubt, overworked, underappreciated, and underpaid. With Rosie’s words ringing in my head, I gave the woman my order… and smiled. “How are you today ”
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My greeting seemed to surprise her.
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After dinner, I placed everything in my tray and wiped the table more thoroughly than usual.
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5．（2023·河北邯郸·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Christmas was drawing near, and came along with it our favorite moment — the Treasure Hunt.
In the past, my brother Brandon and I had opened all of the packages under the tree. All that was left was an envelope. We knew that envelopes usually contained cards, and if we were lucky, they also contained gift cards or cash.
However, this Christmas my dad looked almost like he’d forgotten about the envelope as he casually handed it to me. I opened it and discovered inside a 3x5 index card (索引卡) with a border of shining surrounding a poem. Of course, I don’t remember the poem by heart, but its rhyming message instructed us to go downstairs. We were excited. Maybe we were getting a pet we had wanted.
What we found downstairs was another envelope, containing another index card with a border of shining surrounding a poem. This poem told us to go to Dad’s car. Was the pet already in the car, ready to go
No! There was just another envelope containing another shining index card. This one told us to go to Mom’s office downtown. Neither of us was old enough to drive. This meant we had to beg our parents to hurry up and get dressed and finish drinking their coffee and get going.
Eventually, we made it to Mom’s office where we found — you guessed it — a poem telling us to go somewhere else. This time it was to the TV station where Dad worked. By now, our curiosity was stretched to the limits of our imaginations.
We soon found out, however, that such a desk at the studio is a lovely place to keep a 3x5 index card with a poem, which confused us more than any other. It told us to go to an unfamiliar address.
The car stopped in front of the unknown house. It felt like the end of the hunt.
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My dad handed us the final envelope, and the final poem told us to knock on the door.
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Dad was standing behind us by then, and “Merry Christmas,” he said, “The cat’s yours. ”
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6．（2023·河北邯郸·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For the most part, Hank, a two-year-old cat, is a homebody- and for good reason. But on November 6th, Bushong, his owner, spotted Hank resting on a branch near the top of a neighbor’s tree.
Bushong believed Hank got frightened by some dogs. The more scared he got, the higher he climbed. “Cats have an amazing ability to climb up trees, but they aren’t that good at climbing down,” said Dan D’Eramo, director of field services for the Humane Rescue Alliance (HRA).
Bushong then asked the HRA to help, but it was no easy task. HRA called the fire department, but it refused to help because of safety concerns. Then Bushong called a construction company to ask about renting scaffolding(脚手架) but was told she would have to book the equipment 48 days in advance. Next she reached out to a local tree company, Casey Trees. But the crew said it wasn’t safe for a person to go up into the tree. Bushong became very sad.
Then neighbors came to help. Ed Baptiste, whose tree Hank had climbed, let Bushong sit in his backyard and called to Hank. Another neighbor donated a can of fish, hoping it might attract the cat to come down. Nearby dog owners took their pets on walks instead of letting them out in their yards to avoid further frightening Hank. Another neighbor suggested Bushong call a local business, which had a tall ladder. Unfortunately, their 42-foot ladder proved too short.
By day five, nothing had worked. That’s when another neighbor suggested creating a pulley(滑轮) system by throwing a sandbag attached to the rope to a branch higher than Hank. It will form a pulley system as the sandbag hangs down by gravity. Then raise a basket with some of the owners’ personal items. The cat may be attracted by the familiar scents and climb into the basket.
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Bushong decided to have a try.
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Carefully, they lowered Hank down.
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7．（2023·河北邯郸·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last December, Jamie McCall was on a cross-country drive as she prepared to move from Florida to Michigan before Christmas. She stopped at a hotel for the night in Cleveland, Tennessee, and while she was getting herself a bite to eat, her beloved eat Tucker escaped from her room. “My cat’s an escape artist,” explained McCall. “He sits beside the door and waits for someone to open it, then he runs out. ”
It somehow happened during McCall’s quick mission, and she was shocked to return and find Tucker missing. “I could not find him. I looked everywhere, for hours. ”
When Tucker still hadn’t turned up, McCall had no choice but to continue her journey to Michigan, though it broke her heart to drive on without Tucker. A friend told her to post Tucker online, which she did.
Two days later, Holly Lillard was at work at a drugstore near McCall’s hotel. She went outside to sweep and saw a cat jump out from underneath someone’s car. She called the cat over, and he came, which made Lillard realize that he belonged to someone who was missing him.
Lillard asked around and when no one claimed him, she posted a photo of Tucker to her area’s “Lost and Found Pets” online group, where she was a regular there, not just because she’s an animal lover whose own dogs are also escape artists, but because her aunt and cousin are the page administrators.
Before the day was even over, McCall had found Lillard and her post. “She sent pictures and I knew immediately it was Tucker,” said McCall. There was just one problem: By the time they connected, McCall was already in Michigan.
“I was trying to make arrangements to get him back to me, but I just couldn’t afford it,” said McCall. “I was not financially able to have him shipped back to me or anything like that. ”
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Lillard, however, had an unexpected solution.
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Lillard’s grandfather completed the 600-plus-mile journey with Tucker.
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8．（2022·河北邯郸·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
With the late afternoon sun setting on his farm, Steve finished feeding his horses and decided to go home. His two sons, Danny, 6, and Claus, 3, followed behind.
As they headed for the house, the two boys ran ahead of their father, who stopped to close the gate. Danny paused at an old well. Unknown to him, the board covering the well had grown easily broken over time. When Danny stepped on it, it caved in. Steve had just finished locking the gate when he turned around and saw only his younger son.
“Where’s Danny ” he shouted. “He fell in the hole!” Claus said. Steve quickly realized what had happened. Danny could barely swim! He ran to the well and heard Danny screaming quite way below. Desperately, he jumped in .
Steve hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well. He lifted his head out of the water and grabbed Danny, who was panicked, trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand.
Knowing they could float in the ice-cold water for only a short time, Steve pulled his son up onto his chest and tried all means to stand upright with two legs against the narrow well walls for support. His body was still partly submerged (淹没). “Dad, you can pull us out now,” Danny said.
If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. Looking up to see Claus looking down at them from the top of the well, Steve shouted, “Claus, you’re going to have to be a big boy and save us. You have to go out to the road and get someone to help. OK ” “OK, Daddy. ” Claus yelled and ran to the road.
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About 15 minutes later, Edmen and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving.
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Forty-some minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet.
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