4-2-5 2024-2025学年高二选择性必修第一册英语
Unit 2 Using Language（2） 整体掌握 写作学案
人教版英语24字整体教学 学生版
阐述自己观点的议论文
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
阐述自己观点的议论文
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查学生的英语基础，还考查学生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。
评论性文章在行文时一般分为三个段落：
第一部分：引入评论的话题；
第二部分：列举正方观点及理由；列举反方观点及理由；
第三部分：表明自己的观点并发表自己的意见。
(有时候正方的观点和反方的观点各成一段， 这样的话全文可分为四段。)
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
headline n. 标题
driverless adj. 无人驾驶的
oppose vt. 反对
cease v. 停止；终止
claim vt. 宣称；要求
rural adj. 乡村的；农村的
advocate vt. 提倡；支持；拥护
appreciate vt. 欣赏；感激
career n. 职业；事业
prospect n. 可能性；前景
advanced adj. 高级的；先进的
technology n. 技术
development n. 发展
convenience n. 方便；便利
advantage n. 优点
on the one hand．..；on the other hand．一方面……；另一方面……
in the absence of 在缺乏……的情况下
as far as I am concerned 在我看来
from my point of view/from my perspective 从我的角度来看
however/nevertheless 然而，尽管如此
hence/therefore 因此；所以
an increasing number of people越来越多的人
in reaction to the phenomenon针对这一现象
begin to realize...开始意识到……
arouse public concern nationwide引起了全国公众的担忧
along with the development of...随着……的发展
it goes without saying不言而喻
as far as I am concerned就我而言
one of the important disadvantages最重要的缺点之一
to make matters worse更糟糕的是
last but not least最后但同样重要的是
become more and more serious变得越来越严重
on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
give people more pleasure给人们带来更多的快乐
the above mentioned reasons上述原因
through above analyses通过以上分析
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
★精彩开头
1．There is a widespread concern over the issue that...But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
有一个广泛引起担忧的问题……。但众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。
2．Nowadays many people prefer..., because it has a significant role in our daily life.
现如今很多人更喜欢……，因为它在我们生活中扮演了一个重要的角色。
3．Nowadays, there are more and more students becoming short sighted.
现如今，越来越多的学生近视了。
★正文佳句
1．People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.然而在这个问题上人们的观点各不相同。
2. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.总的来说，优点如下。
3. But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有利有弊。消极的一面也是很明显的。
4. We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
我们应该采取一系列的措施来解决这个处境。
★余味结尾
1．Only in this way can we solve this problem.
只有用这种办法，我们才能解决这个问题。
2．It's high time that we did something to improve our environment.
该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。
3. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us.
因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们。
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
1．首段：提出观点或有争议的观点(一般提出两个相对的观点然后客观地对其进行评析)。
2. 中段：展开论述，可用主题句来点明论点，并对论点进行比较和对比、分析和评论。
3. 尾段：对所论述观点进行客观、合理的评论，提出自己的看法、建议；或者也可以将不同观点相互融合，选其可取之处，形成自己独到的观点。
[注意事项]
1．观点鲜明。
2．层次要分明，过渡要自然。
3．通常采用一般现在时。
4．语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
假设你是阳光中学的学生李华， 昨天你们班开了个班会， 同学们就科技发展给人们带来的利弊问题展开了激烈的讨论。要点包括：
1．大约60%的同学认为利大于弊；
2．大约40%的同学认为弊大于利；
3．你的观点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Our class held a class meeting yesterday.
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【谋篇布局】
【遣词造句】
完成句子
1．昨天我们班开了一个班会。
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2．就科技给人们带来的利弊问题不同的人持有不同的观点。
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3．60%的同学认为我们的日常生活离不开科学技术。
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4．地球变“小”了， 我们通过手机可以足不出户看世界美景。
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5．40%的同学认为科技使人们的关系变得疏远。
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6．每天使用电子产品， 人们的身体出现了一系列的问题。
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7．只要我们好好运用科技， 科技会更好地服务于人类。
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句式升级
8．用非谓语动词作状语改写句6
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【完美成篇】
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◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
最近你校进行了“学生参加社区服务”大讨论，学生们对此观点不一，有的支持，有的反对，请谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1．观点；
2．理由；
3．建议。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数80左右。
提示词：社区服务community service；责任responsibility。
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_________________________________________________________________4-2-5 2024-2025学年高二选择性必修第一册英语
Unit 2 Using Language（2） 整体掌握 写作学案
人教版英语24字整体教学 教师版
阐述自己观点的议论文
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
阐述自己观点的议论文
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查学生的英语基础，还考查学生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。
评论性文章在行文时一般分为三个段落：
第一部分：引入评论的话题；
第二部分：列举正方观点及理由；列举反方观点及理由；
第三部分：表明自己的观点并发表自己的意见。
(有时候正方的观点和反方的观点各成一段， 这样的话全文可分为四段。)
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
headline n. 标题
driverless adj. 无人驾驶的
oppose vt. 反对
cease v. 停止；终止
claim vt. 宣称；要求
rural adj. 乡村的；农村的
advocate vt. 提倡；支持；拥护
appreciate vt. 欣赏；感激
career n. 职业；事业
prospect n. 可能性；前景
advanced adj. 高级的；先进的
technology n. 技术
development n. 发展
convenience n. 方便；便利
advantage n. 优点
on the one hand．..；on the other hand．一方面……；另一方面……
in the absence of 在缺乏……的情况下
as far as I am concerned 在我看来
from my point of view/from my perspective 从我的角度来看
however/nevertheless 然而，尽管如此
hence/therefore 因此；所以
an increasing number of people越来越多的人
in reaction to the phenomenon针对这一现象
begin to realize...开始意识到……
arouse public concern nationwide引起了全国公众的担忧
along with the development of...随着……的发展
it goes without saying不言而喻
as far as I am concerned就我而言
one of the important disadvantages最重要的缺点之一
to make matters worse更糟糕的是
last but not least最后但同样重要的是
become more and more serious变得越来越严重
on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
give people more pleasure给人们带来更多的快乐
the above mentioned reasons上述原因
through above analyses通过以上分析
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
★精彩开头
1．There is a widespread concern over the issue that...But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
有一个广泛引起担忧的问题……。但众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。
2．Nowadays many people prefer..., because it has a significant role in our daily life.
现如今很多人更喜欢……，因为它在我们生活中扮演了一个重要的角色。
3．Nowadays, there are more and more students becoming short sighted.
现如今，越来越多的学生近视了。
★正文佳句
1．People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.然而在这个问题上人们的观点各不相同。
2. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.总的来说，优点如下。
3. But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有利有弊。消极的一面也是很明显的。
4. We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
我们应该采取一系列的措施来解决这个处境。
★余味结尾
1．Only in this way can we solve this problem.
只有用这种办法，我们才能解决这个问题。
2．It's high time that we did something to improve our environment.
该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。
3. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us.
因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们。
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
1．首段：提出观点或有争议的观点(一般提出两个相对的观点然后客观地对其进行评析)。
2. 中段：展开论述，可用主题句来点明论点，并对论点进行比较和对比、分析和评论。
3. 尾段：对所论述观点进行客观、合理的评论，提出自己的看法、建议；或者也可以将不同观点相互融合，选其可取之处，形成自己独到的观点。
[注意事项]
1．观点鲜明。
2．层次要分明，过渡要自然。
3．通常采用一般现在时。
4．语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
假设你是阳光中学的学生李华， 昨天你们班开了个班会， 同学们就科技发展给人们带来的利弊问题展开了激烈的讨论。要点包括：
1．大约60%的同学认为利大于弊；
2．大约40%的同学认为弊大于利；
3．你的观点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Our class held a class meeting yesterday.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【谋篇布局】
【遣词造句】
完成句子
1．昨天我们班开了一个班会。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
2．就科技给人们带来的利弊问题不同的人持有不同的观点。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
3．60%的同学认为我们的日常生活离不开科学技术。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
4．地球变“小”了， 我们通过手机可以足不出户看世界美景。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
5．40%的同学认为科技使人们的关系变得疏远。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
6．每天使用电子产品， 人们的身体出现了一系列的问题。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
7．只要我们好好运用科技， 科技会更好地服务于人类。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
句式升级
8．用非谓语动词作状语改写句6
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【完美成篇】
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________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【遣词造句】
1．Our class held a class meeting yesterday.
2．Different people hold different views on the advantages and disadvantages brought by science and technology.
3．60% of the students think that our daily life cannot be separated from science and technology.
4．The earth is getting smaller, and we can see the beautiful world without leaving home through our mobile phones.
5．40% of the students think the relationship between people becomes not as close as before because of science and technology.
6．People use electronic products every day, so their bodies have a series of problems.
7．As long as we make good use of science and technology, it will better serve mankind.
8．Using electronic products every day, people's bodies have a series of problems.
【完美成篇】
Our class held a class meeting yesterday. Different people hold different views on the advantages and disadvantages brought by science and technology.
60% of the students think that our daily life cannot be separated from science and technology. For example, the earth is getting smaller, and we can see the beautiful world without leaving home through our mobile phones. But about 40% of the students think the relationship between people becomes not as close as before because of science and technology. And using electronic products every day, people's bodies have a series of problems.
In my opinion, as long as we make good use of science and technology, it will better serve mankind.
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
最近你校进行了“学生参加社区服务”大讨论，学生们对此观点不一，有的支持，有的反对，请谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1．观点；
2．理由；
3．建议。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数80左右。
提示词：社区服务community service；责任responsibility。
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【参考范文】
Recently our school has called on the students to take part in community service.Different people have different opinions about it.I am convinced that it is of great help to the growth of the students.
In the first place, it helps students understand what the needs of our country are.In the second place, it offers students the opportunity to play their own roles in the society.Finally, it enables students to understand what social responsibility is by paying close attention to other people and our society.
Based on the above, I hope more and more students will actively participate in these meaningful activities.
