5-5-5 Unit 5 Using Language(2)写作课讲义 写故事
人教版2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第二册
人教版英语24字整体教学 教师版
记叙文之写故事
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
记叙文之写故事
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
写故事即叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
1. without delay/hesitation毫不迟疑/毫不犹豫
2. learn a lot from it从中学到很多东西
3. give us a warm welcome热烈欢迎我们
4. have a good time with us和我们一起玩得很开心
5. participate more actively in helping those in need更积极地参与帮助那些有需要的人
6. rush him to the hospital赶紧送他就医
7. a basic knowledge of first aid基本的急救知识
8. in the case of emergency在这种紧急情况下
9. benefit a great deal from从……中受益良多
10. cause severe injuries to his feet使他的脚受重伤
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
1. That's really an unforgettable experience.
那真是一次难忘的经历。
2. After a while，many people came to help us.
过了一会儿，许多人来帮助我们。
3. Every time I thought of it，I was full of energy.
每当我想到这件事，我就充满了活力。
4. Although it happened three years ago，I never forgot the evening party.
虽然那是三年前发生的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。
5. Hardly had he heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation.
他一听到有人喊救命，就毫不犹豫地跳进了河里。
6. Before the ambulance came，the lady who proved to be a nurse later performed first aid to the kid.
在救护车到来之前，那位后来被证明是护士的女士对这个孩子进行了急救。
7. The story is a good example in which first aid makes a big difference.
这个故事是一个很好的例子，说明急救可以起到很大的作用。
8. From it，we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better prepared for an emergency.
从这件事中，我们知道了解基本的急救技能是必要的，以便我们可以更好地为紧急情况做好准备。
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
1. 开头——交代清楚事件的背景。
2. 主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。
3. 结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。
注意事项：
1. 标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题。
2. 人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称。
3. 时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
假设你和你班同学李华从锅炉房打完开水, 在回寝室的路上, 李华的热水瓶突然破裂, 开水烫伤了李华的脚。你对此进行了必要的急救。请用英语写一篇80词左右的文章, 向学校英文报投稿讲述这件事, 内容包括:
1. 事情发生的经过;
2. 你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步处理等);
3. 对掌握一定急救知识重要性的认识。
参考词汇: 锅炉房boiler house 热水瓶thermos bottle
谋篇布局
遣词造句
1. 我和李华从锅炉房取热水后正在往回走。
Li Hua and I ________________________________________________________________.
2. 突然一声爆炸把我吓了一跳。
Suddenly a sound of explosion ___________.
3. 我尽力保持镇定, 与此同时, 疯狂地搜寻着我从急救课上学到的知识。
I ____________________, and at the same time, I crazily searched for _______________________________ ________________.
4. 那时我意识到关于急救的基本知识能够产生多么大的影响。
I then was aware ____________________________________________________ can make.
【答案】
were on our way back from boiler house after fetching some hot water.
scared me
managed to stay calm；what I had learnt from my first-aid class
what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid
句式升级
5. 用when引导的时间状语从句合并句1和句2。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
6. 用现在分词短语作伴随状语改写句3。
_____________________________________________________________________________________.
7. 用倒装句改写句4。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】
Li Hua and I were on our way back from boiler house after fetching some hot water when suddenly a sound of explosion scared me
I managed to stay calm, crazily searching for what I had learnt from my first-aid class
Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid can make
连句成篇
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【参考范文】
Accidents happened. That day, Li Hua and I were on our way back from boiler house after fetching some hot water when suddenly a sound of explosion scared me. Li Hua’s thermos bottle burst and the spilt boiling water caused severe injuries to his feet. The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen.
I could tell Li Hua was in extreme pain. I managed to stay calm, crazily searching for what I had learnt from my first-aid class. Immediately, I carried him to the water tap nearby and put his feet under the cold running water until the pain lessened. Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further treatment. I was finally relieved.
Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid can make, especially in such a case.
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
能力提升，书面表达
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你与同学参加学校举办的“红十字会急救培训”活动的全过程。
注意：词数80左右。
参考词汇：救护员证书first aider certificate
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【参考范文】
Last week, I took part in the Red Cross first aid training in our school.
At the beginning, we assembled in the school hall to listen to the importance and basic steps of first aid. After a short grouping, we were led to a classroom where a trainer demonstrated the detailed procedure. We watched closely as he showed every move. Then came the test for first aid. Although I was nervous, I managed to carry out all the moves taught.
To my excitement, I was issued a first aider certificate. I thought that I could help more people in need with the knowledge of first aid.
能力提升，书面表达
生活中常有意外事故发生。假设你和你班同学李明从锅炉房打完开水，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对此实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括：
1. 描述事故发生的经过；
2. 你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院作进一步的处理)；
3. 简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
参考词汇：锅炉房boiler house 热水瓶 thermos bottle
Accidents always happen suddenly.
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【参考范文】
Accidents always happen suddenly.One day，Li Ming and I were on our way back after fetching some boiling water from the boiler house when Li Ming's thermos bottle burst and the boiling water caused severe injuries to his feet.The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen.
Immediately，I carried him to the water tap nearby and put his feet under the cold running water until the pain lessened.Afterwards，I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further treatment.
Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid can make，especially in such a case.5-5-5 Unit 5 Using Language(2)写故事 写作课讲义
人教版2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第二册
人教版英语24字整体教学 学生版
记叙文之写故事
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
记叙文之写故事
◆ 通技法——学会写作规范
写故事即叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。
◆ 通词汇——学会亮点词汇
1. without delay/hesitation毫不迟疑/毫不犹豫
2. learn a lot from it从中学到很多东西
3. give us a warm welcome热烈欢迎我们
4. have a good time with us和我们一起玩得很开心
5. participate more actively in helping those in need更积极地参与帮助那些有需要的人
6. rush him to the hospital赶紧送他就医
7. a basic knowledge of first aid基本的急救知识
8. in the case of emergency在这种紧急情况下
9. benefit a great deal from从……中受益良多
10. cause severe injuries to his feet使他的脚受重伤
◆ 通句型——学会黄金句型
1. That's really an unforgettable experience.
那真是一次难忘的经历。
2. After a while，many people came to help us.
过了一会儿，许多人来帮助我们。
3. Every time I thought of it，I was full of energy.
每当我想到这件事，我就充满了活力。
4. Although it happened three years ago，I never forgot the evening party.
虽然那是三年前发生的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。
5. Hardly had he heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation.
他一听到有人喊救命，就毫不犹豫地跳进了河里。
6. Before the ambulance came，the lady who proved to be a nurse later performed first aid to the kid.
在救护车到来之前，那位后来被证明是护士的女士对这个孩子进行了急救。
7. The story is a good example in which first aid makes a big difference.
这个故事是一个很好的例子，说明急救可以起到很大的作用。
8. From it，we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better prepared for an emergency.
从这件事中，我们知道了解基本的急救技能是必要的，以便我们可以更好地为紧急情况做好准备。
◆ 通框架——减少低级失误
1. 开头——交代清楚事件的背景。
2. 主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。
3. 结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。
注意事项：
1. 标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题。
2. 人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称。
3. 时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。
◆ 通典例——学会赏读范文
假设你和你班同学李华从锅炉房打完开水, 在回寝室的路上, 李华的热水瓶突然破裂, 开水烫伤了李华的脚。你对此进行了必要的急救。请用英语写一篇80词左右的文章, 向学校英文报投稿讲述这件事, 内容包括:
1. 事情发生的经过;
2. 你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步处理等);
3. 对掌握一定急救知识重要性的认识。
参考词汇: 锅炉房boiler house 热水瓶thermos bottle
谋篇布局
遣词造句
1. 我和李华从锅炉房取热水后正在往回走。
Li Hua and I ________________________________________________________________.
2. 突然一声爆炸把我吓了一跳。
Suddenly a sound of explosion ___________.
3. 我尽力保持镇定, 与此同时, 疯狂地搜寻着我从急救课上学到的知识。
I ____________________, and at the same time, I crazily searched for _______________________________ ________________.
4. 那时我意识到关于急救的基本知识能够产生多么大的影响。
I then was aware ____________________________________________________ can make.
句式升级
5. 用when引导的时间状语从句合并句1和句2。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
6. 用现在分词短语作伴随状语改写句3。
_____________________________________________________________________________________.
7. 用倒装句改写句4。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
连句成篇
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
◆ 创新文——创作自己文章
能力提升，书面表达
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你与同学参加学校举办的“红十字会急救培训”活动的全过程。
注意：词数80左右。
参考词汇：救护员证书first aider certificate
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
能力提升，书面表达
生活中常有意外事故发生。假设你和你班同学李明从锅炉房打完开水，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对此实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括：
1. 描述事故发生的经过；
2. 你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院作进一步的处理)；
3. 简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
参考词汇：锅炉房boiler house 热水瓶 thermos bottle
Accidents always happen suddenly.
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