02. 祝贺信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
【写作指导+常用句型+常用模版+最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
【写作指导】
祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件，一般用于对方有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩，以及节日寿宴等。祝贺信是人们情感交流的一种方式，写祝贺信可以使亲戚、朋友、同事之间加强联系，增进了解，彼此关心。
祝贺信写作三步走
说明事由并表达自己衷心祝贺→展开评论事件、赞扬收信人→再次表达良好祝愿
在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。
【常用句型】
吸引阅卷人的开头句
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the essay competition of “Foreign Students Telling Chinese Stories” held by our school English newspaper.
我谨为您在我校英语报举办的“外国学生讲故事”作文比赛中获得一等奖表示最诚挚的祝贺。
Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.
我谨为您在我校英语报举办的“外国学生讲故事”作文比赛中获得一等奖表示最诚挚的祝贺。
3. I'm more than delighted to learn/hear of your achievements in the technology innovation contest .. I would like to extend my warmest congratulations to you.
得知你在这次国际创新比赛取得的成就,我非常高兴。我想向你致以最热烈的祝贺。
吸引阅卷人的篇中句
I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I'm not a bit surprised at your remarkable achievement.
我知道你在过去的几年里工作得非常努力，所以我对你的非凡成就一点也不感到惊讶。
It's the great efforts which you have made that result in this excellent achievement. The prize is a reward you deserve.
正是你所做的巨大努力才取得了这个卓越的成就。奖品是你应得的奖励。
I'm sure you will make greater progress and show a better performance in your study and obtain a bright future in your life.
我相信你会有更大的进步和更好的表现，在你的生活中获得光明的未来。
吸引阅卷人的结尾句
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
我祝愿你在未来的几年里取得成功和实现。
May all go wonderfully in your new post!
祝你的新帖子都精彩精彩！
May every happiness be yours!
愿每一个幸福都是你的！
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/ successful career!
祝我的未来和事业更加成功！
May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
愿未来的每一年都能给你带来巨大的幸福和繁荣。
Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
祝你身体健康、幸福、繁荣昌盛！
Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart!
我再次从心底祝贺你！
Please accept my warmest congratulations and the best wishes to you!
请接受我最热烈的祝贺和最美好的祝愿！
【常用模版】
Dear ______,
I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）.Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．（2024·山西运城·三模）假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
1.向他表示祝贺；
2.肯定他的付出。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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2．（2024·湖南·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的祝福；
2. 简要介绍你的礼物；
3. 表达期望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 祝贺；
2. 回顾；
3. 期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 请教学习方法；
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·河南·模拟预测）自“国球进校园”活动开展以来，你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛，你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示诚挚的祝贺；
2.回顾他的努力；
3.向他学习。
注意：
1.词数80左右，邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua01. 祝贺信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
参考答案
【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．Dear Terry,
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition! Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment!
Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again, congratulations!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Terry写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在校成语闯关比赛中获得二等奖，内容包括：向他表示祝贺，肯定他的付出。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary
全身心投入：dedication→commitment
证明：testament→proof
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
拓展句：Not only is this achievement a credit to you but it also is a proud moment for our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. (使用了祈使句、that引导宾语从句)
2．Dear Lucy,
With your birthday approaching, I sincerely wish you a happy birthday!
To convey my sincere wishes, I’ve made some paper cuttings for you. One piece is designed with four Chinese characters that mean “happy birthday”. Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy. There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.
The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物，要求你给她写一封邮件，表达你的祝福，简要介绍你的礼物以及表达期望。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
来临：approach→come near
真诚地：sincerely→heartfelt
代表：stand for→represent
展示：show→display
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
拓展句：The paper cuttings, which I expect to be delivered to you within seven days, are crafted with the hope that they will bring you joy.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.(运用了现在分词作定语，in which引导的定语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖这件事写一封信，表达祝愿，回顾过程并表示期待。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
传达：extend→convey
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
充裕的：abundant→sufficient
致力于：devote oneself to→commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. (运用了not only…but also句型、部分倒装句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
4．Dear Peter,
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success.
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am
Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
快乐的：glad→pleased
获得：obtain→gain
鼓励：encourage→motivate
表达：express→extend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
拓展句：Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
5．Dear James,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.
As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor. You really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their minds to take up playing table tennis.
Best wishes! Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 James写一封邮件，告诉他在学校举办的第一届乒乓球比赛中取得了第三名的好成绩。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere →genuine
比赛：match →competition
压力：stress →pressure
激励：inspire →encourage
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress.
拓展句：As you know, not only can the table tennis build up our body but also it can help relieve our stress.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.（运用了“so…that…”句型，其中that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】
Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor.（运用了现在分词短语作状语，where引导的定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
