湖南省湘乡市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（4）含答案
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Christine was jus ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closed to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .
【参考答案】4.
试题分析：本文叙述了作者的同学Chr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )istine在大家的眼里是非常奇怪的一个人，她穿着奇怪的服装，话语不多，也不在乎别人对她的看法，可就在作者与她进行一次化学的合作项目时，才理解为什么她总是把自己打扮成那个样子。
【小题1】考查短语。句意：除了她是非 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )常的奇怪，我对她了解不多。except for +名词或代词，不跟句子，所以应去掉for，except that+句子。
【小题2】考查固定短语。句意：她的话语不多。这里用来修饰动词用much， many修饰可数名词。
【小题3】考查动词。句意： ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )她穿着黑色的运动鞋。worn是wear的过去分词，它的过去式是wore，这里短文叙述的是过去的事情，所以应该用过去式。
【小题4】考查副词。句意：她穿着黑色的运动鞋及黑色的毛衣，甚至实在夏天。although后跟句子，even是副词，后可跟介词短语。
【小题5】考查形容词。句意：她实际上很招人喜欢的。attractively是副词；attractive是形容词，在这里作表语。
【小题6】考查动词短语。句意：她从不考虑其他的人是怎样看她的。这里是seemed to do似乎做某事。
【小题7】考查名词。句意：像我的其他同 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )学一样我真地不想接近她。classmate 是单数；classmates是复数，因为the rest of+可数名词的复数，故用classmates。
【小题8】考查固定短语。句意：像我的其他同学一样我真地不想接近她。get close to sb接近某人。是固定短语。
【小题9】考查代词。句意：就在我们在一起做 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )化学项目时，我才真正地理解她为什么打扮成那样。这里their他们的；our我们的。形容词性物主代词应该与主语we一致，所以用our。
【小题10】考查动词。句意：就在我们在一起 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )做化学项目时，我才真正地理解她为什么打扮成那样。根据前面的谓语动词was与did 可知这里叙述的是过去的事情，所以应该用过去式began。
考点：短文改错。
点评：文中考查了固定短语，代词、形容词 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )、副词及动词等的用法及意义，需要考生有扎实的基础知识并能正确理解短文的内容，还需要会分析复杂的句子结构进而判断用该词的什么形式。
短文改错 共10小题 每小题1分 满分10分
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Time flies as an arr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ow. I’m already in Grade 3 after I realize it. It is only a little more than seven months before I graduated from our school. At the present, I’m busy review my lessons in order to take the college entrance examinations. I hope attend Beijing University, that is considered to be one of the best. Most of my classmate are studying very hard to realize our dreams. I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very well university.
【参考答案】5.
as –like after—before graduated—graduate
at the present --the 去掉 review—reviewing
hope后加to that—which classmate—classmates
our –their well---good
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd.
I was visiti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly injured and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. I learned that was a student from a famous university in Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or pretending to feed them.
What an shame! Animals ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.
Sincerely Yours
Li Hua
【参考答案】6.Dear Editor,
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【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the students of our class made a bike trip to a small town by the Tai hu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we visit some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for them, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
【参考答案】短文改错
71、earlier改为early 72、visit 改为 visited
73、had ^ picnic 中加 a 74、beautifully改为 beautiful
75、picture 改为 pictures 76、but 改为 and
77、both 改为all 78、them改为 us
79、were 去掉 80、sharing改为share
【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处, 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。?
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The teacher I loved m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ost was my English teacher at senior high. She was one of those strict teacher but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us. Thus we guys all respected for her. She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to write. She always writes helpful suggestions for writing, organizing and presented better work. She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure, that gave us confidence. She always made us to feel happy in his class. She made big difference to our lives. That’s why I teach now.
【参考答案】短文改错
1. teacher改为teachers 2. patiently改为patient 3.去掉for
4. teach改为teaching ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 5. writes改为wrote 6. presented改为presenting
7. that改为which ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 8.去掉to 9. his改为her 10. 添加a
【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) that it is interested to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have a child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.
第一节：短文改错
1.去掉that 2.interested---interesting 3.town---towns
4.particularly---particular 5.which---where 6.were---are
7.with---of 8.teac ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hing---taught 9.with---without 10.him---himself湖南省湘乡市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（3）含答案
短文改错（共10 小题； 每小题1分， 满分10分）
要求： 增加： 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）， 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 Bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours
John
【参考答案】1、
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
【小题10】句意：我相信我们在一起可以玩的高兴。修饰名词fun，用形容词great .
考点：考查短文改
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m very ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) much glad to hear that your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’ health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire, which is dangerous to both your possessions and the safe of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!
短文改错
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went shopping in the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) center of the city yesterday afternoon. It was six o’clock before I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of whom kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tries to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man sitting next to the mother said angrily, “Why don’t you give the child what she wants.” The mother answered quiet, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.
【参考答案】3.
1. before ---- when 2. passenger---- passengers
3. were---- was 4. tries ---- tried
5. make 前加to
6. seating ---- seated 7. she ---- he
8. quiet ---- quietly 9. and ---- but
10.去掉of
【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错（共10个小题，每小题1分，共10分）
请修改下面的短文，文中共有10处语言错误，每行均有一处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We interrupt th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )is program to bring you some special news. This afternoon, a truck run into the back of a school bus that it left Central Junior High School at 3p.m. Badly hurting, ten students and the truck driver were sent to hospital shortly before the accident. Luckily, there was no death. A police came and said that the truck driver and the bus driver weren’t drunk, nor could poor weather used to explain the accident. We are still going into the reasons.
This is the seven tr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )affic accident in the city this month. Please be more carefully in driving. More information about the accident will be reported at the five o’clock news report. Now we return you to the music show.
第一节 短文改错（共10个小题，每小题1分，共10分）
51. run----ran ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 52. that后it去掉 53. hurting-----hurt
54. before--- ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )after 55. A police----The police 56. weather后加be
57. We are----They ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) are 58. seven----seventh 59. carefully----careful
60. at----in
【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Patience is of great ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes pass, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of that experience.
短文改错：
1. waited/\ a→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for 2. pass→passed 3. feet →foot 4. when→than
5. a →the 6. other →another 7. do →did
8. possible →possibly 9. put it in→去掉it 10. lose →losing
【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有1 0处错误，每句中最 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
How’s everything ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )We haven’t seen each other for long. I’m very exciting to receive an e-mail from you. I’m glad you have made so great progress that you can write your e-mail with good Chinese. I read your e-mail to my parent and showed them the photos you’d sent to me. What time flies! Our friendship lasted for several months. We have got to know and learned a lot of from each other. Yes, it’s obviously that the life in Australia is quite different with that in China. I’m looking forward to hear from you soon and I hope you will come to China in the near future.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
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hearing
China in the near future.
Best wishes to you!湖南省湘乡市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（5）含答案
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
第二句 herself 改为 himself
第三句the改为a
第四句say改为said
第五句pass改为passed
第六句anywhere改为somewhere
第七句told前加was
第八句immediate改为immediately
第九句or改为and
第十句from改为in
第十一句hour改为hours
短文改错
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
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【参考答案】2.
1. devote---devotes 2. studies---studied
3. too sleepy---so sleepy 4. In Sunday--- On Sunday
5. had good--- had a good 6. liked it---去掉it
7. fly---flying 8. but---and
9. actively---active 10. why---because
短文改错
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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【2016模拟题】短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
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短文改错
第一句：after 改为for
第二句：included 改为 includes
第三句：properly 改为proper
第四句：others 改为other; article 改为articles
第五句：meet 后加the
第六句：去掉be； serve 改为serving
第七句：However改为Besides
第八句：is改为are
【2016模拟题】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】短文改错：
a改为the 2. had 改为has 3. best 改为most 4. In 改为 On
5. which改为where或前面加on
6. so（a long time） 改为such 7. divided前加being
8. (into the) hole 改为holes 9. them改为it 10.去掉but
【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语
言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错：（共10小题，满分10分）
1. considered-consider 2. an advice-advice
3. experiences-experience 4. what-how
5. they-we 6. Therefore-However
7. passed-passing 8. have-has
9. for-to 10. worth-are worth湖南省湘乡市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（6）含答案
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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短文改错（共10小题；满分10分；改动第11处不计分）
In the past, teachers ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) always kept on to explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and take notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoy different kind of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in. We can go to the library and surf the Internet for variously kinds of information. In my opinion, exploring study does not help us learn much, but also make us to enjoy study and become masters of study.
【参考答案】5.
1 kept on to – kept on 2 our students – we students
3 take notes – took notes 4 raising – raised
5 kind of activities – kinds of activities 6 read that – read what
7 and surf – or surf 8 variously – various
9 not help – not only help 10 to enjoy – enjoy
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文， 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
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9. that – which 10. of去掉
【2016模拟题】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错 （共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ / ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ --- ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错
【小题1】加as 【小题2】which改为 as
【小题3】make改为makes 【小题4】Otherwise改为However
【小题5】seating改为sitting 【小题6】more改为worse
【小题7】by turn改为 in turn 【小题8】加上to
【小题9】actions改为action 【小题10】off 改为down
【2016模拟题】第一节: 短文改错（共 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )10题，每题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错：
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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78. early 后加the 79. 去掉the
80. Otherwise ---However
81. 去掉it 82. become 前加had
83. easily---easy 84. √
85. send 改为sending
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错：
Not having p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )assed the exam, Xiao Ming remained in the classroom after school. When asking ( asked), he told me he didn’t dare to go home because of he was afraid of being scolded or beaten by his dad. Hearing that he said, I felt sorry for him and couldn’t help think (thinking) of the “wolf father”.
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【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出改加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
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【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。
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短文改错
1. sounded—sounds 2. neither---either 3. or后的to删除
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短文改错。
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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10.meet---meeting
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【参考答案】2.
1. With—As 2. rises—rising
3. amount后加of 4. run—running
5. what改为that或which 6. highly—high
7. are—is 8. before—after
9. form后加the或a 10. however—whatever
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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【参考答案】3.
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短文改错。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】：
A Frenchman was once v ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )isiting London. He wished to take a walk to see city. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English. So he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the of the street he was staying. Then he walked on. At last, he got lost. several hours he found a policeman. The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn't know the name of his hotel, he knew the name of the street. He then showed the policeman he copied in his notebook. It read：“One way street”．
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As new students at ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an university in Boston，many of us were unfamiliar with the campus but consequently late for class. One professor, however, was particular intolerant of being late，making clear that no excuse would be acceptable. So when a girl student came in his class one morning late，we expected the worst results. Then the professor demand the reason for her coming late. “I was being waiting online to buy your new book，” she replied very nervously. Looked at the rest of the class, the professor asked, “Well, why were the rest of you late！”
【参考答案】：
As new students at university in Boston，many of us were unfamiliar with the campus consequently late for class. One professor, however, was intolerant of being late，making clear that no excuse would be acceptable. So when a girl student came his class one morning late，we expected the worst . Then the professor the reason for her coming late. “I was being waiting online to buy your new book，” she replied very nervously. at the rest of the class, the professor asked, “Well, why were the rest of you late！”
【2016模拟题】第一节、短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【短文改错参考答案】
When I was 15 years ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) old. I went to Hangzhou with three Americans．I became their guide．First, we went to the West Lake．We wanted to look around the lake by a boat．After buying the tickets，we got into the boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that．we went shopping．The sellers can’t speak English．Though it was very hard，I tried my best Λto listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences．we bought some scarves which are made of silk．Next，we went to a park and took some pictures．When we felt hungrier，we came out of the park and had lunch．After lunch，we visited some buildings and learned more about ancient architecture of China.
