高级写作词汇与句式升级专项突破（讲义）2025届高三英语二轮复习

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运用从句，提升表达 【用合适的从句合并下列句子】
1.He is a child. He knows a lot.
________________________________________, he knows a lot.
Child as he is,he knows a lot.
2.He was excited. He could not say a word.
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He was so excited that he could not say a word.
3.They put off the competition. It rained heavily.
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They put off the competition because it rained heavily.
4.The teacher told me a piece of good news. I was admitted into a key college.
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The teacher told me a piece of good news that I was admitted into a key college.
5.The view was really breathtaking. It impressed me most during my trip to Guilin.
___________________________________was that the view was really breathtaking.
What impressed me most during my trip to Guilin was
that the view was really breathtaking.
6.We involved ourselves in the community activities. We gained experience for growth.
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We involved ourselves in the community activities,
through which we gained experience for growth.
二.套用特殊句式，升级表达
1.A disaster was avoided because of their help. (强调原因)
_____________________________________________________________________It was because of their help that a disaster was avoided.
2.I have never seen such a beautiful picture. (部分倒装)
_____________________________________________________________________Never have I seen such a beautiful picture.
3.A beautiful lake lies at the foot of the hill.(全部倒装)
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At the foot of the hill lies a beautiful lake.
4.He set up a charitable organization and donated the money he earned.(用not only...but also...并列)
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He not only set up a charitable organization
but also donated the money he earned.
5.He is very happy to see his friends.(感叹句)
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How happy he is to see his friends!
6.While I was on the street, I came cross a friend of mine.(状语从句的省略)
_____________________________________________________________________On the street, I came across a friend of mine.
7.We can’t visit the museum because it was being repaired.(用with复合结构)
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With the museum being repaired,we can’t visit it .
8.I sat in my room for a few minutes. My eyes were fixed on the ceiling.(用with复合结构)
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I sat in my room for a few minutes, with my eyes fixed on the ceiling.
三 .无灵主语和代词it来打头,增强文章的多变性
Great changes have happened to Tom in the past ten years. (用witness改写)
_____________________________________________________________________The past ten years have witnessed great changes in Tom.
Students didn’t come because of the bad weather. (用prevent改写)
_____________________________________________________________________The bad weather prevented the students from coming.
I thought of a good idea when I read this article. (用occur改写)
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A good idea occurred to me when I read this article.
People believe that he will win the first prize in the contest. (用it is + done改写)
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It is believed that he will win the first prize in the contest.
In January 2017, I started my life in a small city called Mangshi. (用find改写)
_____________________________________________________________________In January 2017, I found myself starting my life in a small city called Mangshi.
She felt a little sad.(用seize, grip或flood over 改写)
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(1)Sadness flooded over her.
(2)Her heart was seized by a touch of sadness.
(3)He was gripped by sadness.
四. 用状语开头，增强文章表现力
Tom, whose nose was red with cold, entered the room.(用with复合结构开头)
_____________________________________________________________________With his nose red with cold, Tom entered the room.
Mr.Green was angry at the girl’s oversleeping and bent down to wake her up.(形容词短语作状语)
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Angry at the girl's oversleeping, Mr. Green bent down to wake her up.
As soon as I heard the news of his winning, I offered my congratulations to him.(用upon doing...)
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Upon hearing the news of his winning, I offered my congratulations to him.
五、通过添加状语来扩展句子
(1)添加非谓语结构
I opened the letter, _________________________________________.
(现在分词作伴随状语)
(1)I opened the letter, reading it carefully.
(2)I opened the letter, glancing through its contents.
I drooped the vase, ______________________________________.
(现在分词作结果状语)
(1)I dropped the vase, breaking/shattering it into pieces.
(2)I dropped the vase, **leaving it in pieces on the floor.
Mike was surprised ___________________________________
(动词不定式作原因状语)
(1)Mike was surprised to see the gift.
(2)Mike was surprised to find the door unlocked.
_________________________________, the lady returned home.
(过去分词作伴随状语)
(1)Followed by her dog, the lady returned home.
(2)Accompanied by her friends, the lady returned home.
(3)Dressed in a beautiful gown, the lady returned home.
We hurried to the station, ____________________________________
(动词不定式作结果状语)
We hurried to the station, only to find the train had left.
Tom worked day and night___________________________________
(动词不定式作目的状语)
(1)Tom worked day and night to finish the project on time.
(2)Tom worked day and night to meet the deadline.
(3)Tom worked day and night to support his family.
________________________________________, the students stopped talking.
(现分作时间状语)
(1)Seeing the teacher approach, the students stopped talking.
(2)Hearing the bell ring, the students stopped talking.
____________________________________, the problems were settled at last.
(过分作原因状语)
Caused by a lack of communication, the problems were settled at last.
或Due to our joint efforts,the problems were settled at last.
_________________________________, the small town looks more beautiful.
(过分作时间状语)
(1)Seen from the top of the hill, the small town looks more beautiful.
(2)Observed at sunset, the small town looks more beautiful.
______________________, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(现在分词作原因状语)
(1)Feeling unwell, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(2)Being sick, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(3)Having a headache, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(2) 添加其他状语
Bob approached us, ____________________________________________
(添加形容词短语)
Bob approached us,,(looking) exceptionally confident and composed.
_________________________________, Jane didn’t dare to move.
(添加形容词短语)
Extremely scared/Absolutely terrified, Jane didn’t dare to move.
The little girl seemed sad and went back home__________________
(添加介词短语)
The little girl seemed sad and went back home without saying a word/in silence
The doctors gave her a general checkup_______________________________________________
(添加目的状语从句)
The doctors gave her a general checkup so that they could monitor her condition.
________________________, our headmaster soon left the meeting room.
(添加独立主格结构)
The meeting being over/With the agenda completed,our headmaster soon left the meeting room.
六：细化动作，构造动作链
●示例:
Lisa朝她父亲走去。 Lisa walked toward her father.
Lisa saw her father in the distance, so she jumped up and made her way through the crowd toward him.
●练一练:
请通过细化动作，构造动作链，使下列句子更生动：
They broke into smiles.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ They noticed the familiar face in the crowd, and their faces gradually relaxed. First, a tiny corner of their lips curled upwards, then their eyes crinkled into crescents, and finally, their whole faces erupted into broad, radiant smiles, lighting up the room with their joy.
他们在人群中注意到了那张熟悉的面孔，脸上的表情渐渐放松下来。先是嘴角微微上扬，随后眼睛弯成了月牙状，最后，整张脸绽放出灿烂的笑容，喜悦之情照亮了整个房间。
Lily looked out of the widow.
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Lily stepped away from her desk, her eyes drawn to the glistening square of glass. She placed her hands gently on the sill, leaning slightly forward as if to get a better view. She gazed out, her brow furrowing slightly.
莉莉望向窗外。莉莉从书桌旁走开，目光被那块闪闪发光的玻璃方块所吸引。她轻轻地将手放在窗台上，身体微微前倾，仿佛想看得更清楚些。她向外凝视着，眉头微微蹙起.
The mother kissed her baby on the cheek.
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The mother gazed down at her baby with a warm smile, gently lifting the tiny hand that was gripping her shirt. She leaned in close, her heart swelling with love, and placed a soft, tender kiss on the baby's rosy cheek. The baby giggled, its eyes sparkling with joy.
母亲面带微笑，温情脉脉地俯视着怀中的婴儿，轻轻抬起婴儿紧抓着她衬衫的小手。她凑近婴儿，心中爱意涌动，在婴儿粉嫩的脸颊上印下一个温柔细腻的吻。婴儿咯咯地笑了起来，眼睛里闪烁着喜悦的光芒.
Jeremy去郊外游玩遇到了一只兔子。请设计一个情节，详细描述他遇到兔子的过程。
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Jeremy was taking a leisurely stroll through the countryside, surrounded by lush green fields and the soft hum of nature. As he wandered along a dirt path lined with wildflowers, something caught his eye—a small, fluffy creature hopping gracefully nearby. Curious, Jeremy approached cautiously and realized it was a rabbit, its soft fur glistening in the sunlight. The rabbit seemed unafraid, stopping occasionally to nibble on tender grass. Jeremy knelt down slowly, extending an open hand, and to his delight, the rabbit came closer, sniffing curiously before hopping away playfully.
杰里米正在乡间悠闲地散步，四周是郁郁葱葱的田野和自然界柔和的嗡嗡声。当他沿着一条野花盛开的小土路漫步时，有什么东西吸引了他的目光——一只小巧、毛茸茸的生物正在附近优雅地跳跃。出于好奇，杰里米小心翼翼地靠近，发现那是一只兔子，它的软毛在阳光下闪闪发光。兔子似乎并不害怕，偶尔会停下来啃食鲜嫩的青草。杰里米缓缓跪下，伸出张开的手，令他高兴的是，兔子靠近了过来，好奇地嗅了嗅，然后顽皮地跳开了。
Nina今天参加了学校举办的舞蹈比赛。请设计一个情节，详细描述Nina参加比赛的过程。
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Nina was buzzing with excitement as she prepared for the school dance competition. Dressed in a shimmering costume that complemented her graceful movements, she took deep breaths to calm her nerves. As she stepped onto the stage, the spotlight illuminated her, and the audience erupted in applause. With music filling the air, Nina began her routine, her movements flowing seamlessly from one step to the next. Her elegance and precision captivated the crowd, and by the end of her performance, the room was filled with thunderous applause and cheers.
尼娜在为学校的舞蹈比赛做准备时兴奋不已。她穿着一件闪闪发光的服装，衬托出她优雅的舞姿，她深吸一口气以平复紧张的情绪。当她踏上舞台时，聚光灯照亮了她，观众爆发出热烈的掌声。随着音乐在空气中回荡，尼娜开始了她的表演，她的动作流畅地从一步过渡到下一步。她的优雅和精准吸引了观众，到表演结束时，整个房间充满了雷鸣般的掌声和欢呼声。
七. 巧用修辞手法
树木在风中低语。（拟人）
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The trees whisper in the wind.
The trees rustle softly, whispering secrets to the wind.
她没有意识到机会正在敲她的门。(拟人)
_____________________________________________________________________ She didn't realize that opportunity was knocking at her door.
运动员像离铉的箭一样向终点线冲去。(比喻)
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(1)The athlete rushed to the finishing line as swiftly as an arrow released from its bowstring.
(2)The athlete surged towards the finish line like an arrow released from its bow.
【常用的比喻搭配】
1.as light as a feather (轻如鸿毛)
2.as strong as a horse (强壮如马)
3.as cool as a cucumber (泰然自若)
4.as fast as lightning (快如闪电)
5.as busy as a bee (忙忙碌碌)
6.as hungry as a wolf (饥肠辘辘)
7.as slowly as a snail(像蜗牛一样慢)
8.as cold as the ice (像冰一样冰冷)
9.like a cat on hot bricks (像热锅上的蚂蚁)
10.like a duck to water (如鱼得水)
11.like an arrow from the string(如离弦之箭)
12.like a bullet (像子弹一样)
八：把静态描写改成动态描写
●示例:
1.I was very terrified at the sight of the fierce wolf. (静态)
At the sight of fierce wolf, I froze with terror. (动态)
2.When the host announced that she won the prize, she was excited. (静态)
When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement. (动态)
3.Upon hearing the bad news, she felt very sad. (静态)
Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.(动态)
●练一练:
Hearing the police’s voice, the suspect was awfully fearful.
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Hearing the police’s voice, the suspect trembled with fear.
Walking into the headmaster’s office, he was terribly nervous.
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Walking into the headmaster’s office, he could feel his lips drying out,prompting him to lick them occasionally,with a pounding heart.
At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog became alert.
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At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog’s ears pricked up and it became alert.
After working a long day, I fell asleep quickly.
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After working a long day, I collapsed into bed and fell asleep quickly.
九．少用笼统词，多用细节词
请用合适的细节词改写下列句子中的黑体部分
All the facts showed that Bob was right.
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All the facts indicated/demonstrated /revealed clearly that Bob was right.
Emily was afraid when she saw that snake.
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Emily was terrified when she saw that snake.
The nice lady entertained all the guests.
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The gracious lady entertained all the guests.
I know the importance of the environmental protection.
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I am well aware of/quite understand/fully realize the importance of the environmental protection.