读后续写--当新鞋遇上赤脚老人，善良悄然绽放 讲义-广东省揭阳市普宁市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Frank Daily stared down at the frozen ground. He kicked chunks of snow with his new Nike shoes. He only pretended to listen to the chat of his friends, Norm and Ed, as they all got on the number 10 bus after school.
Frank and his friends sat down at the back of the bus along with several other high school boys, some from other schools. The bus headed west on Blue Mound Road. He still remembered another cold, gray day just a month ago in November when his world crashed down around him, as he read the team list, searching desperately for his name. It wasn’t there.
The bus braked suddenly, and Frank naturally pressed his Nikes against the floor. “It must have been my size,” he thought, “Five-feet-four. Since I’m new at Marquette High, the coach must have taken one look at me and my shoes and decided I was too small to join the basketball team.” He had been a star athlete in all the sports in primary school. Now, it seemed he was a nothing.
The bus stopped at the County Institutions grounds. Frank glanced up at the driver, who had a nickname “Kojak” because of his bald head.
An elderly woman hung onto the handrail and slowly pulled herself onto the bus. As she sank into the seat behind the bus driver, her feet kicked up, and Frank saw that she was barefoot.
As Kojak got the bus back into traffic, he yelled over his shoulder, “Where are your shoes, lady It was below 10 degrees out there.” “I can’t afford shoes,” the woman answered. She pulled her worn-out coat collar around her neck. Some of the boys at the back exchanged glances and laughed.
“I got on the bus just to get my feet warm,” the woman continued. “If you don’t mind, I’ll just ride around with you for a bit.”
Kojak scratched his bald head and shouted, “Now just tell me how come you can’t afford shoes ”
“My husband is badly ill in the hospital, so we only have money for food and necessities,” the woman said in a low voice.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
放学后，Frank 和朋友坐 10 路公交车，他因个头矮小没入选学校篮球队而心情低落。车行驶中，一位老妇人赤脚上车，她称丈夫病重住院，没钱买鞋，上车只为暖脚。车上一些男孩听到后嘲笑她，司机询问原因，老妇人低声解释家里钱仅够买食物和必需品。
二、故事山分析
开端：Frank 因没入选篮球队而心情低落，和朋友一起坐公交车。
发展：公交车上，一位赤脚老妇人上车，她说明因丈夫病重没钱买鞋，只为暖脚，一些男孩嘲笑她。
高潮：Frank 看着自己的新耐克篮球鞋，内心产生挣扎和触动，这是故事的转折点。
结局（预测）：Frank 决定把鞋送给老妇人，老妇人感激，他收获内心的满足。
尾声（预测）：Frank 意识到帮助他人比物质更重要，不再因没入选篮球队而消沉，对生活有新的感悟。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：Frank 穿着新耐克鞋，且因个头小没入选篮球队而心情低落 。回应：新鞋为他送鞋的行为做铺垫，没入选篮球队的失落促使他在帮助他人中找到价值，实现心态转变。
伏笔 2：老妇人赤脚上车并说明没钱买鞋的原因 。回应：直接引发 Frank 的内心触动，是他送鞋行为的直接诱因。
伏笔 3：一些男孩嘲笑老妇人 。回应：与 Frank 的善良行为形成对比，突出 Frank 的高尚品质。
伏笔 4：Frank 关注到自己的鞋和老妇人的脚 。回应：为他送鞋的举动埋下伏笔，体现他内心的变化过程。
伏笔 5：Frank 回忆小学时是体育明星，现在却觉得自己一无是处 。回应：送鞋行为让他重新找回自信和价值感，实现人物的成长。
四、续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Frank 看着自己新鞋时的内心活动，如挣扎、犹豫，思考自己和老妇人的处境，最终决定送鞋。可加入一些细节描写，如他的表情、动作等。
第二段：描写 Frank 送鞋的动作和语言，老妇人的惊讶、感激反应，以及车上其他人的反应。最后表达 Frank 送鞋后的心情和感悟。
五、情感线
Frank 起初因没入选篮球队而沮丧、失落，看到老妇人赤脚时，内心先是惊讶、同情，在决定送鞋时内心挣扎，送鞋后收获满足、自豪，完成从消沉到积极的情感转变。
六、故事线
Frank 因没入选篮球队心情低落，坐公交车。
老妇人赤脚上车，说明没钱买鞋原因，遭一些男孩嘲笑。
Frank 看着自己的新鞋，内心挣扎。
Frank 决定送鞋，走到老妇人面前表达想法。
老妇人惊讶又感激，车上其他人反应各异。
Frank 收获内心满足，对生活有新感悟。
七、主旨升华句
This experience taught Frank that true value lies not in athletic achievements or material possessions, but in the kindness and compassion we show to others.（这次经历让 Frank 明白，真正的价值不在于体育成就或物质财富，而在于我们对他人展现的善良和同情。）
Through his act of giving, Frank learned that a small selfless gesture can bring warmth and hope to those in need, and can also transform one's own perspective on life.（通过他的给予行为，Frank 学到一个小小的无私举动可以给有需要的人带来温暖和希望，也能改变自己对生活的看法。）
Frank's choice to give away his new shoes demonstrated that in the face of others' hardships, our empathy and willingness to help can shine brighter than any disappointment or setback we may face.（Frank 送出新鞋的选择表明，在他人的困境面前，我们的同理心和帮助他人的意愿比我们可能面临的任何失望或挫折都更加闪耀。）
This encounter on the bus not only changed the old woman's day but also enlightened Frank, showing him that the greatest strength lies in our ability to care for and support those less fortunate.（公交车上的这次相遇不仅改变了老妇人的一天，也启发了 Frank，让他明白最大的力量在于我们关心和支持那些不幸之人的能力。）
Frank's decision to help the old woman with his shoes was a powerful reminder that in a world filled with challenges, acts of kindness can be the light that guides us towards a more meaningful and fulfilling life.（Frank 决定用自己的鞋帮助老妇人，有力地提醒我们，在充满挑战的世界里，善举可以成为引导我们走向更有意义和充实生活的光芒。）
八、写作示范一
第一段
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. His heart pounded, and a wave of mixed emotions washed over him. He thought about his disappointment of not making the basketball team and compared it to the old woman's much greater hardship. The new shoes seemed suddenly less important. After a moment of hesitation, he quickly untied the laces. With a determined look on his face, he stood up and walked towards the old woman. “Here, ma'am,” he said softly, “you need these more than I do.” The old woman looked up at him in disbelief, her eyes wide with surprise.
第二段
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. Before he left, he heard the old woman's choked - up voice saying, “Thank you, young man. You've made a big difference to me today.” The boys at the back of the bus fell silent, looking at Frank with a newfound respect. As Frank stepped off the bus, a warm feeling filled his chest. He realized that helping others could bring more joy than any sports achievement. With a smile on his face, he walked home, his heart lighter than ever.
写作示范二
第一段
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. A sense of guilt welled up inside him as he thought about the old woman's situation. He remembered how excited he was when he first got these shoes, but now, they seemed like a burden. He bit his lip, weighing the pros and cons in his mind. Finally, he made up his mind. He took off his shoes and carried them in his hands. Approaching the old woman, he said, “Please, take these. I hope they fit you.” The old woman's eyes filled with tears, and she reached out to take the shoes with trembling hands.
第二段
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. The bus driver, Kojak, turned around and gave him a thumbs - up, saying, “You're a real gentleman, kid.” The other passengers nodded in agreement. Frank felt a rush of pride. As he walked down the steps, he heard the old woman repeating her thanks. He knew that this simple act of kindness had changed his day and perhaps the old woman's life. With a new spring in his step, he walked into the cold, but his heart was warm with the knowledge that he had done something right.
九、【答案】
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. His feet were warm and cosy. When he glanced at the woman who was dressed in rags, a sense of sorrow swept over him. With a complicated mood, he slipped the shoes off under his seat. When the bus stopped, Frank waited until everyone else had got off. Then he reached under his seat and picked up his basketball shoes. He walked quickly up to the woman and handed them to her, looking down and saying, “Here, lady, you need these more than I do.”
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. He heard the woman exclaim, “Look, they fit me just perfectly!” Then he heard Kojak said, “I’ve never seen anything like that in the 20 years I’ve been driving this bus.” The woman was crying. “Thank you, young man,” she said. He smiled at the woman. “It’s no big deal.” He hurried off after Norm and Ed. It seemed to him that the grayness had lifted. On the way home, hardly could he feel the cold beneath his feet at all.
Frank Daily stared down at the frozen ground. He kicked chunks of snow with his new Nike shoes. He only pretended to listen to the chat of his friends, Norm and Ed, as they all got on the number 10 bus after school.
Frank and his friends sat down at the back of the bus along with several other high school boys, some from other schools. The bus headed west on Blue Mound Road. He still remembered another cold, gray day just a month ago in November when his world crashed down around him, as he read the team list, searching desperately for his name. It wasn’t there.
The bus braked suddenly, and Frank naturally pressed his Nikes against the floor. “It must have been my size,” he thought, “Five-feet-four. Since I’m new at Marquette High, the coach must have taken one look at me and my shoes and decided I was too small to join the basketball team.” He had been a star athlete in all the sports in primary school. Now, it seemed he was a nothing.
The bus stopped at the County Institutions grounds. Frank glanced up at the driver, who had a nickname “Kojak” because of his bald head.
An elderly woman hung onto the handrail and slowly pulled herself onto the bus. As she sank into the seat behind the bus driver, her feet kicked up, and Frank saw that she was barefoot.
As Kojak got the bus back into traffic, he yelled over his shoulder, “Where are your shoes, lady It was below 10 degrees out there.” “I can’t afford shoes,” the woman answered. She pulled her worn-out coat collar around her neck. Some of the boys at the back exchanged glances and laughed.
“I got on the bus just to get my feet warm,” the woman continued. “If you don’t mind, I’ll just ride around with you for a bit.”
Kojak scratched his bald head and shouted, “Now just tell me how come you can’t afford shoes ”
“My husband is badly ill in the hospital, so we only have money for food and necessities,” the woman said in a low voice.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
放学后，Frank 和朋友坐 10 路公交车，他因个头矮小没入选学校篮球队而心情低落。车行驶中，一位老妇人赤脚上车，她称丈夫病重住院，没钱买鞋，上车只为暖脚。车上一些男孩听到后嘲笑她，司机询问原因，老妇人低声解释家里钱仅够买食物和必需品。
二、故事山分析
开端：Frank 因没入选篮球队而心情低落，和朋友一起坐公交车。
发展：公交车上，一位赤脚老妇人上车，她说明因丈夫病重没钱买鞋，只为暖脚，一些男孩嘲笑她。
高潮：Frank 看着自己的新耐克篮球鞋，内心产生挣扎和触动，这是故事的转折点。
结局（预测）：Frank 决定把鞋送给老妇人，老妇人感激，他收获内心的满足。
尾声（预测）：Frank 意识到帮助他人比物质更重要，不再因没入选篮球队而消沉，对生活有新的感悟。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：Frank 穿着新耐克鞋，且因个头小没入选篮球队而心情低落 。回应：新鞋为他送鞋的行为做铺垫，没入选篮球队的失落促使他在帮助他人中找到价值，实现心态转变。
伏笔 2：老妇人赤脚上车并说明没钱买鞋的原因 。回应：直接引发 Frank 的内心触动，是他送鞋行为的直接诱因。
伏笔 3：一些男孩嘲笑老妇人 。回应：与 Frank 的善良行为形成对比，突出 Frank 的高尚品质。
伏笔 4：Frank 关注到自己的鞋和老妇人的脚 。回应：为他送鞋的举动埋下伏笔，体现他内心的变化过程。
伏笔 5：Frank 回忆小学时是体育明星，现在却觉得自己一无是处 。回应：送鞋行为让他重新找回自信和价值感，实现人物的成长。
四、续写要点
第一段：着重描写 Frank 看着自己新鞋时的内心活动，如挣扎、犹豫，思考自己和老妇人的处境，最终决定送鞋。可加入一些细节描写，如他的表情、动作等。
第二段：描写 Frank 送鞋的动作和语言，老妇人的惊讶、感激反应，以及车上其他人的反应。最后表达 Frank 送鞋后的心情和感悟。
五、情感线
Frank 起初因没入选篮球队而沮丧、失落，看到老妇人赤脚时，内心先是惊讶、同情，在决定送鞋时内心挣扎，送鞋后收获满足、自豪，完成从消沉到积极的情感转变。
六、故事线
Frank 因没入选篮球队心情低落，坐公交车。
老妇人赤脚上车，说明没钱买鞋原因，遭一些男孩嘲笑。
Frank 看着自己的新鞋，内心挣扎。
Frank 决定送鞋，走到老妇人面前表达想法。
老妇人惊讶又感激，车上其他人反应各异。
Frank 收获内心满足，对生活有新感悟。
七、主旨升华句
This experience taught Frank that true value lies not in athletic achievements or material possessions, but in the kindness and compassion we show to others.（这次经历让 Frank 明白，真正的价值不在于体育成就或物质财富，而在于我们对他人展现的善良和同情。）
Through his act of giving, Frank learned that a small selfless gesture can bring warmth and hope to those in need, and can also transform one's own perspective on life.（通过他的给予行为，Frank 学到一个小小的无私举动可以给有需要的人带来温暖和希望，也能改变自己对生活的看法。）
Frank's choice to give away his new shoes demonstrated that in the face of others' hardships, our empathy and willingness to help can shine brighter than any disappointment or setback we may face.（Frank 送出新鞋的选择表明，在他人的困境面前，我们的同理心和帮助他人的意愿比我们可能面临的任何失望或挫折都更加闪耀。）
This encounter on the bus not only changed the old woman's day but also enlightened Frank, showing him that the greatest strength lies in our ability to care for and support those less fortunate.（公交车上的这次相遇不仅改变了老妇人的一天，也启发了 Frank，让他明白最大的力量在于我们关心和支持那些不幸之人的能力。）
Frank's decision to help the old woman with his shoes was a powerful reminder that in a world filled with challenges, acts of kindness can be the light that guides us towards a more meaningful and fulfilling life.（Frank 决定用自己的鞋帮助老妇人，有力地提醒我们，在充满挑战的世界里，善举可以成为引导我们走向更有意义和充实生活的光芒。）
八、写作示范一
第一段
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. His heart pounded, and a wave of mixed emotions washed over him. He thought about his disappointment of not making the basketball team and compared it to the old woman's much greater hardship. The new shoes seemed suddenly less important. After a moment of hesitation, he quickly untied the laces. With a determined look on his face, he stood up and walked towards the old woman. “Here, ma'am,” he said softly, “you need these more than I do.” The old woman looked up at him in disbelief, her eyes wide with surprise.
第二段
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. Before he left, he heard the old woman's choked - up voice saying, “Thank you, young man. You've made a big difference to me today.” The boys at the back of the bus fell silent, looking at Frank with a newfound respect. As Frank stepped off the bus, a warm feeling filled his chest. He realized that helping others could bring more joy than any sports achievement. With a smile on his face, he walked home, his heart lighter than ever.
写作示范二
第一段
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. A sense of guilt welled up inside him as he thought about the old woman's situation. He remembered how excited he was when he first got these shoes, but now, they seemed like a burden. He bit his lip, weighing the pros and cons in his mind. Finally, he made up his mind. He took off his shoes and carried them in his hands. Approaching the old woman, he said, “Please, take these. I hope they fit you.” The old woman's eyes filled with tears, and she reached out to take the shoes with trembling hands.
第二段
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. The bus driver, Kojak, turned around and gave him a thumbs - up, saying, “You're a real gentleman, kid.” The other passengers nodded in agreement. Frank felt a rush of pride. As he walked down the steps, he heard the old woman repeating her thanks. He knew that this simple act of kindness had changed his day and perhaps the old woman's life. With a new spring in his step, he walked into the cold, but his heart was warm with the knowledge that he had done something right.
九、【答案】
Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. His feet were warm and cosy. When he glanced at the woman who was dressed in rags, a sense of sorrow swept over him. With a complicated mood, he slipped the shoes off under his seat. When the bus stopped, Frank waited until everyone else had got off. Then he reached under his seat and picked up his basketball shoes. He walked quickly up to the woman and handed them to her, looking down and saying, “Here, lady, you need these more than I do.”
Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. He heard the woman exclaim, “Look, they fit me just perfectly!” Then he heard Kojak said, “I’ve never seen anything like that in the 20 years I’ve been driving this bus.” The woman was crying. “Thank you, young man,” she said. He smiled at the woman. “It’s no big deal.” He hurried off after Norm and Ed. It seemed to him that the grayness had lifted. On the way home, hardly could he feel the cold beneath his feet at all.