读后续写--放弃梦想,却在家人的笑中收获幸福 讲义-安徽省黄山市2024-2025学年高中毕业班第一次质量检测(暨高三上学期期末)英语试题

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名称 读后续写--放弃梦想,却在家人的笑中收获幸福 讲义-安徽省黄山市2024-2025学年高中毕业班第一次质量检测(暨高三上学期期末)英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Like many others, I had the burning dream of becoming a sportsman. However, due to my middle-class family background, buying sports equipment was just a luxury I couldn’t afford. But 1 was determined not to give up and continued to pursue my dream.
One day, while I was practicing athletics, a sudden sharp pain shot through my knee. I fell to the ground, clutching my knee tightly. That severe knee injury crushed my dream of becoming a good athlete. The doctor advised me firmly not to play sports anymore. My parents gently comforted me, “We know how much you love sports, but your health comes first”, their eyes filled with worry and concern. I hung my head in despair, tears welling up in my eyes. I knew I had no choice but to sacrifice it for my health. Although I never played sports again, that dream still lingered in my heart like a flickering flame.
Another incident that changed my life was when my father had a severe heart stroke.1 remember that day vividly. I was at home when I heard a strange noise from my father’s room. I rushed in and saw him lying on the bed, struggling to breathe. Without hesitation, I called the ambulance, my hands shaking uncontrollably as I dialed the number. Fortunately, he was safe after getting timely treatment. But when the doctor said to me, “You brought him in time. Otherwise, things would be very different.” Hearing this, I fell into a deep dilemma. Looking at my weak father I thought about my long-cherished dream of going abroad for higher studies. Finally, I gave up my dream and decided to stay with them, feeling a complex mixture of sadness and determination. I knew it was a difficult choice, but I also knew it was the right thing to do.
Moreover, my sister’s troubled marriage had a profound impact on our family. There were constant quarrels in her house and ours, the sound of angry shouts and sobs filling the air, which made my parents mentally disturbed for 5 years. To take care of them, I gave up the opportunity to relocate for higher studies and better job opportunities. I couldn’t abandon my parents in their time of need.
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Luckily, now I can feel a glimmer of happiness after these sacrifices. My family’s journey has witnessed the power of love and sacrifice.
一、文章大意
作者怀揣成为运动员的梦想,但因家庭经济条件无法负担运动装备。在一次练习中,作者膝盖严重受伤,医生禁止其再进行运动,作者无奈放弃梦想。后来,父亲突发严重心脏病,作者及时送医救了父亲,但为照顾家人,放弃了出国深造的梦想。此外,姐姐婚姻问题导致家庭纷争不断,父母精神受扰,作者为照顾父母,又放弃了去外地深造和更好工作的机会。
二、故事山分析
开端:作者有成为运动员的梦想,却因家庭经济和受伤被迫放弃。
发展:父亲心脏病发作,作者放弃出国深造机会照顾家人;姐姐婚姻问题,作者又放弃外地发展机会。
高潮:经历一系列牺牲后,生活出现转机,这是故事的转折点。
结局(预测):作者在家庭中收获温暖和幸福,家人关系更加紧密。
尾声(预测):作者感悟到爱与牺牲的力量,对生活有新的理解和珍惜。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1:作者为家庭多次放弃梦想和机会 。回应:在后续情节中体现这些牺牲带来的积极影响,如家庭关系的升温,家人的感恩。
伏笔 2:作者虽放弃梦想,但梦想仍在心中 。回应:可能会以某种方式重新点燃梦想,或者在家庭中找到新的人生价值,实现梦想的另一种形式。
伏笔 3:家人的困境和作者的照顾 。回应:家人在作者的照顾下逐渐好转,对作者的付出给予回报,如家人的理解和支持。
伏笔 4:家庭的纷争和压力 。回应:后续可能会出现家庭矛盾的解决,关系缓和,突出牺牲带来的积极改变。
伏笔 5:作者艰难的选择 。回应:体现这些选择的意义,如收获亲情、内心的平静,强调牺牲的价值。
四、续写要点
第一段:描述幸福的具体表现,如家人关系的改善,父亲身体逐渐康复,姐姐婚姻问题解决,自己在家庭中感受到的温暖和支持,以及自己内心的满足。
第二段:阐述爱与牺牲如何在家庭中体现,如家人之间相互关爱、支持,为彼此付出,通过具体事例说明这种力量如何让家庭度过难关,最后表达对未来生活的期待和珍惜。
五、情感线
作者一开始因放弃梦想而感到绝望、悲伤,在面对家庭困境时充满无奈和纠结,做出牺牲后,随着家庭情况好转,逐渐感受到幸福和满足,最后对家庭和生活充满感恩与期待。
六、故事线
作者因家庭经济和受伤放弃运动员梦想。
父亲心脏病发作,作者放弃出国深造照顾家人。
姐姐婚姻问题,作者放弃外地发展机会照顾家人。
家庭情况好转,作者感受到幸福。
作者感悟到爱与牺牲的力量,家庭关系更紧密。
作者对未来生活充满期待,珍惜家庭。
七、主旨升华句
Through the hardships we've endured, our family has learned that love and sacrifice are the cornerstones of a strong bond, and they can overcome any obstacle.(通过我们所经历的艰难困苦,我们的家庭明白了爱与牺牲是紧密联系的基石,它们能克服任何障碍。)
Our family's journey has taught us that in the face of difficulties, the selfless love and sacrifice among family members can not only bring us through tough times but also create a deeper and more meaningful connection.(我们家庭的经历让我们明白,在困难面前,家庭成员之间无私的爱与牺牲不仅能让我们度过艰难时期,还能创造更深厚、更有意义的联系。)
The sacrifices we made for each other have shown that love is not just a word but an action, a continuous giving that enriches our lives and strengthens the family unit.(我们为彼此做出的牺牲表明,爱不仅仅是一个词,更是一种行动,一种持续的付出,它丰富了我们的生活,巩固了家庭。)
In our family, the power of love and sacrifice has been proven time and time again, reminding us that the most precious things in life are the relationships we nurture and the love we share.(在我们的家庭中,爱与牺牲的力量一次又一次得到证明,提醒我们生命中最珍贵的东西是我们培育的关系和我们分享的爱。)
Our story of sacrifice and love has taught us that true happiness lies not in achieving personal dreams alone, but in the warmth and togetherness of a loving family, where every sacrifice is a testament to our unwavering bond.(我们关于牺牲与爱的故事告诉我们,真正的幸福不在于独自实现个人梦想,而在于充满爱的家庭的温暖和团聚,在那里,每一次牺牲都是我们坚定不移联系的证明。)
八、写作示范一
第一段
Luckily, now I can feel a glimmer of happiness after these sacrifices. My father has fully recovered under my careful care, and his hearty laughter fills our home again. My sister's marriage has also improved. She and her husband have learned to understand each other better, and the quarrels have disappeared. Every day, when we sit around the dinner table, sharing the stories of the day, I feel a deep sense of contentment. I realize that the sacrifices I made are all worth it when I see the smiles on my family members' faces.
第二段
My family’s journey has witnessed the power of love and sacrifice. When my father was ill, my quick action and sacrifice of my study dream saved his life. During my sister's troubled time, my presence brought comfort to her and my parents. These sacrifices have made our family closer. We support each other through thick and thin. Now, we cherish every moment together more than ever. Looking ahead, I believe that with this strong bond of love, our family will face any challenges that come our way with courage and unity.
写作示范二
第一段
Luckily, now I can feel a glimmer of happiness after these sacrifices. My mother often tells me how much she appreciates my decision to stay. She says my presence has been a great comfort to them. My father, who is much healthier now, often takes me for walks, sharing his life wisdom with me. And my sister, with a new - found peace in her marriage, often comes to our house with her family, filling it with laughter. I find that the simple joys of family life are far more precious than any dream I gave up.
第二段
My family’s journey has witnessed the power of love and sacrifice. When my father was in danger, my love for him led me to make that difficult choice. When my sister was in trouble, my sacrifice for her brought stability to her life. These experiences have taught us that love is about putting others first. We've learned to be more understanding and supportive of each other. As we move forward, I'm confident that our family, bound by love and sacrifice, will continue to grow stronger and face whatever life throws at us with open arms.
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