读后续写--寒夜善举，十年回响 讲义-2025届陕西省榆林市高三上学期第二次模拟检测英语试题
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It was in a small town in England at one cold night. An old farmer was driving his horses to the bam (牲口棚) when he heard a voice saying, “Excuse me, sir. Mny I sleep in your burn tonight ” It was from a young soldier called Jack. Quietly standing there, tired and cold, he was waiting for an answer. But the old larmer said rudely, “No, I don't want anybody like you lo stay in my barn. You had better go away.”
Jack sadly turned away, wondering where he would go next. Suddenly he felt a light ta p on his shoulder. It was the young boy who had been working for the old farmer. The boy said. “I know where you can get help. Just go down this road to the first little cabin you come to. There lives Mrs. Smith, who is very kind and is always willing to help those who need it.”
Oh, what warmth filled Jack's heart, “Thank you very much!” There was at least somebody who cared about him. He quickly reached the cabin and gently knocked on the door. The door opened and the lady inside said, “Good evening. Were you looking for me ”
Jack answered, “Are you Mrs. Smith I was told that you might offer a place to a homeless poor soldier for a night's stay. "She said, “Sure! Do come in! You look as though you are nearly frozen. "Mrs. Smith shared her simple meal with Jack in the warm room. Then with a thankful heart, he went to sleep on a pile of clean hay Mrs. Smith had prepared for him.
The next morning, the kind woman cooked him a warm breakfast. She also gave him a small sum of money to help him travel farther. As he left her house, he thanked her for her kindness, and she prayed for him.
Ten years went by and no one remembered what had happened on that cold windy night except one person.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London.
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears.
文章大意
在英格兰的一个小镇，一个寒冷的夜晚，老农夫拒绝让年轻士兵杰克在他的牲口棚过夜。老农夫的帮工小男孩告诉杰克，沿着路走，第一间小木屋住着善良的史密斯夫人，她总是乐于助人。杰克找到史密斯夫人，她热情地招待了杰克，给他提供食物、住处，还在第二天给了他一些钱助他远行。十年过去了，除了一个人，似乎没人记得那个寒冷多风夜晚发生的事。
故事分析
这是一个关于善良与回报的故事。史密斯夫人的善良在寒冷的夜晚给了杰克温暖和帮助，为故事的发展埋下了温情的基调。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
杰克的感激：杰克对史密斯夫人充满感激，这为十年后他对史密斯夫人的回报埋下伏笔。在续写中，杰克邀请史密斯夫人去伦敦并给予丰厚回报，回应了这份感激。
史密斯夫人的善良：她总是愿意帮助有需要的人，这种善良品质预示着她会得到好的回报。续写中杰克的感恩之举就是对她善良的回应。
无人记得那晚的事：除了一人，暗示这个人就是杰克，并且他会有所行动，在续写中杰克邀请史密斯夫人就是他行动的体现。
杰克的士兵身份：可能暗示他在十年间经历了一些事情，有了能力去回报史密斯夫人，续写中他在伦敦有一定地位，有能力给予回报。
小男孩的指引：小男孩的帮助让杰克找到了史密斯夫人，也间接促成了这段善缘，续写中虽然没有直接提及小男孩，但整个故事的发展是由他的指引开始的。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：史密斯夫人收到去伦敦的信，她带着疑惑前往。在伦敦，她被带到一个豪华的地方，见到了已经有一定成就的杰克。
第二段：杰克向史密斯夫人表达深深的感激，讲述自己十年来的经历和对她的感恩之情。史密斯夫人被感动得热泪盈眶，感慨善良有了美好的回报。
情感线
一开始杰克被老农夫拒绝的沮丧，到得到小男孩帮助和史密斯夫人关怀的温暖与感激。十年后杰克怀着感恩之心邀请史密斯夫人，史密斯夫人从疑惑到感动，情感层层递进，展现了善良与感恩带来的美好情感。
故事线
杰克被老农夫拒绝借宿。
小男孩指引杰克找到史密斯夫人。
史密斯夫人热情帮助杰克。
十年后杰克邀请史密斯夫人去伦敦。
史密斯夫人在伦敦见到杰克。
杰克感恩，史密斯夫人感动。
主旨升华句
Kindness is like a seed, which will surely bloom and bear fruit in the right time. 善良就像一颗种子，在合适的时候一定会开花结果。
A small act of kindness can change someone's life and create a cycle of love and gratitude. 一个小小的善举可以改变一个人的生活，创造爱与感恩的循环。
Gratitude is the most beautiful flower that grows in the garden of a kind - hearted person. 感恩是在善良之人的花园中绽放的最美丽的花朵。
The warmth of kindness can melt the coldest of hearts and light up the darkest of nights. 善良的温暖可以融化最冰冷的心，照亮最黑暗的夜晚。
In the journey of life, kindness and gratitude are the most precious treasures that we should always cherish. 在人生的旅途中，善良和感恩是我们应该永远珍惜的最宝贵的财富。
写作示范一
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London. The letter was written in elegant handwriting, but there was no signature. Wondering what it was about, she decided to go. When she arrived in London, a well - dressed servant took her to a magnificent mansion. Inside, she saw a tall and handsome man who looked familiar. It was Jack! He had become a successful businessman. Jack walked towards her with a big smile and said, “Mrs. Smith, it's been ten years. I've been looking forward to this moment.”
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. Jack then told her how her kindness had changed his life. After leaving her place, he joined the army and with hard work and determination, he achieved great success. He said, “Your help on that cold night gave me hope and strength. I will always be grateful to you.” Mrs. Smith was deeply moved. She realized that a simple act of kindness could bring such wonderful results. “I'm so glad to see you doing well,” she said with a trembling voice. From then on, their friendship deepened, and the story of their kindness and gratitude spread far and wide.
写作示范二
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London. The letter said that all her expenses would be paid and she would be warmly welcomed. She was a bit hesitant at first, but her curiosity got the better of her, so she set off. In London, she was led to a grand hotel. In the luxurious suite, Jack was waiting for her. He had a beard and looked more mature. “Mrs. Smith, you are my savior,” Jack said emotionally.
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. Jack recounted his experiences over the past ten years. He had faced many difficulties, but the memory of her kindness always inspired him. “I made a promise to myself that if I ever had the chance, I would repay you,” he said. Mrs. Smith wiped her tears and said, “I'm just glad I could help. Your success is the best reward for me.” Their meeting was a beautiful reminder of the power of kindness and the magic of gratitude.
参考范文：
One day Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to go to London. With an unwavering belief in the goodness of people, she made her way to London and arrived at the location specified in the letter. To her great astonishment, she heard a familiar voice saying, “How are you doing, Madam ” It was none other than Jack. “I have always remembered your kindness,” he said, his words echoing the bond they shared.“I am now the captain of a large ship, and I wish to repay you. Each year at this time, I will arrange for someone to send you a sum of money as a token of my gratitude.”
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. After expressing her heartfelt gratitude and sincere care for Jack, she returned home. How truly grateful she was! Now, with sufficient funds, she could extend a helping hand to even more people in need. For the remainder of her life,whenever she heard someone sharing their troubles, she would recall the invaluable treasure she gained from helping the young man, which strengthened her resolve to offer assistance.
It was in a small town in England at one cold night. An old farmer was driving his horses to the bam (牲口棚) when he heard a voice saying, “Excuse me, sir. Mny I sleep in your burn tonight ” It was from a young soldier called Jack. Quietly standing there, tired and cold, he was waiting for an answer. But the old larmer said rudely, “No, I don't want anybody like you lo stay in my barn. You had better go away.”
Jack sadly turned away, wondering where he would go next. Suddenly he felt a light ta p on his shoulder. It was the young boy who had been working for the old farmer. The boy said. “I know where you can get help. Just go down this road to the first little cabin you come to. There lives Mrs. Smith, who is very kind and is always willing to help those who need it.”
Oh, what warmth filled Jack's heart, “Thank you very much!” There was at least somebody who cared about him. He quickly reached the cabin and gently knocked on the door. The door opened and the lady inside said, “Good evening. Were you looking for me ”
Jack answered, “Are you Mrs. Smith I was told that you might offer a place to a homeless poor soldier for a night's stay. "She said, “Sure! Do come in! You look as though you are nearly frozen. "Mrs. Smith shared her simple meal with Jack in the warm room. Then with a thankful heart, he went to sleep on a pile of clean hay Mrs. Smith had prepared for him.
The next morning, the kind woman cooked him a warm breakfast. She also gave him a small sum of money to help him travel farther. As he left her house, he thanked her for her kindness, and she prayed for him.
Ten years went by and no one remembered what had happened on that cold windy night except one person.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London.
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears.
文章大意
在英格兰的一个小镇，一个寒冷的夜晚，老农夫拒绝让年轻士兵杰克在他的牲口棚过夜。老农夫的帮工小男孩告诉杰克，沿着路走，第一间小木屋住着善良的史密斯夫人，她总是乐于助人。杰克找到史密斯夫人，她热情地招待了杰克，给他提供食物、住处，还在第二天给了他一些钱助他远行。十年过去了，除了一个人，似乎没人记得那个寒冷多风夜晚发生的事。
故事分析
这是一个关于善良与回报的故事。史密斯夫人的善良在寒冷的夜晚给了杰克温暖和帮助，为故事的发展埋下了温情的基调。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
杰克的感激：杰克对史密斯夫人充满感激，这为十年后他对史密斯夫人的回报埋下伏笔。在续写中，杰克邀请史密斯夫人去伦敦并给予丰厚回报，回应了这份感激。
史密斯夫人的善良：她总是愿意帮助有需要的人，这种善良品质预示着她会得到好的回报。续写中杰克的感恩之举就是对她善良的回应。
无人记得那晚的事：除了一人，暗示这个人就是杰克，并且他会有所行动，在续写中杰克邀请史密斯夫人就是他行动的体现。
杰克的士兵身份：可能暗示他在十年间经历了一些事情，有了能力去回报史密斯夫人，续写中他在伦敦有一定地位，有能力给予回报。
小男孩的指引：小男孩的帮助让杰克找到了史密斯夫人，也间接促成了这段善缘，续写中虽然没有直接提及小男孩，但整个故事的发展是由他的指引开始的。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：史密斯夫人收到去伦敦的信，她带着疑惑前往。在伦敦，她被带到一个豪华的地方，见到了已经有一定成就的杰克。
第二段：杰克向史密斯夫人表达深深的感激，讲述自己十年来的经历和对她的感恩之情。史密斯夫人被感动得热泪盈眶，感慨善良有了美好的回报。
情感线
一开始杰克被老农夫拒绝的沮丧，到得到小男孩帮助和史密斯夫人关怀的温暖与感激。十年后杰克怀着感恩之心邀请史密斯夫人，史密斯夫人从疑惑到感动，情感层层递进，展现了善良与感恩带来的美好情感。
故事线
杰克被老农夫拒绝借宿。
小男孩指引杰克找到史密斯夫人。
史密斯夫人热情帮助杰克。
十年后杰克邀请史密斯夫人去伦敦。
史密斯夫人在伦敦见到杰克。
杰克感恩，史密斯夫人感动。
主旨升华句
Kindness is like a seed, which will surely bloom and bear fruit in the right time. 善良就像一颗种子，在合适的时候一定会开花结果。
A small act of kindness can change someone's life and create a cycle of love and gratitude. 一个小小的善举可以改变一个人的生活，创造爱与感恩的循环。
Gratitude is the most beautiful flower that grows in the garden of a kind - hearted person. 感恩是在善良之人的花园中绽放的最美丽的花朵。
The warmth of kindness can melt the coldest of hearts and light up the darkest of nights. 善良的温暖可以融化最冰冷的心，照亮最黑暗的夜晚。
In the journey of life, kindness and gratitude are the most precious treasures that we should always cherish. 在人生的旅途中，善良和感恩是我们应该永远珍惜的最宝贵的财富。
写作示范一
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London. The letter was written in elegant handwriting, but there was no signature. Wondering what it was about, she decided to go. When she arrived in London, a well - dressed servant took her to a magnificent mansion. Inside, she saw a tall and handsome man who looked familiar. It was Jack! He had become a successful businessman. Jack walked towards her with a big smile and said, “Mrs. Smith, it's been ten years. I've been looking forward to this moment.”
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. Jack then told her how her kindness had changed his life. After leaving her place, he joined the army and with hard work and determination, he achieved great success. He said, “Your help on that cold night gave me hope and strength. I will always be grateful to you.” Mrs. Smith was deeply moved. She realized that a simple act of kindness could bring such wonderful results. “I'm so glad to see you doing well,” she said with a trembling voice. From then on, their friendship deepened, and the story of their kindness and gratitude spread far and wide.
写作示范二
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London. The letter said that all her expenses would be paid and she would be warmly welcomed. She was a bit hesitant at first, but her curiosity got the better of her, so she set off. In London, she was led to a grand hotel. In the luxurious suite, Jack was waiting for her. He had a beard and looked more mature. “Mrs. Smith, you are my savior,” Jack said emotionally.
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. Jack recounted his experiences over the past ten years. He had faced many difficulties, but the memory of her kindness always inspired him. “I made a promise to myself that if I ever had the chance, I would repay you,” he said. Mrs. Smith wiped her tears and said, “I'm just glad I could help. Your success is the best reward for me.” Their meeting was a beautiful reminder of the power of kindness and the magic of gratitude.
参考范文：
One day Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to go to London. With an unwavering belief in the goodness of people, she made her way to London and arrived at the location specified in the letter. To her great astonishment, she heard a familiar voice saying, “How are you doing, Madam ” It was none other than Jack. “I have always remembered your kindness,” he said, his words echoing the bond they shared.“I am now the captain of a large ship, and I wish to repay you. Each year at this time, I will arrange for someone to send you a sum of money as a token of my gratitude.”
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. After expressing her heartfelt gratitude and sincere care for Jack, she returned home. How truly grateful she was! Now, with sufficient funds, she could extend a helping hand to even more people in need. For the remainder of her life,whenever she heard someone sharing their troubles, she would recall the invaluable treasure she gained from helping the young man, which strengthened her resolve to offer assistance.