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I am in the Navy, and several years ago I moved from Chicago, Illinois, to Meridian, Mississippi. I was at the airport, trying to get my boarding pass and check my bags. Because I was moving, I had almost all of my possessions with me.
When I got to the counter, I found out there was a limit to the number of bags you can check without paying a fee. I had exceeded (超过) this limit by four bags. In order to get both myself and all of my things home, I would have to spend over $100. I didn’t have so much money with me, because I had just paid some of my bills and sent a few larger items home by mail.
The airline employee told me she couldn’t do anything to help me. So I asked her where the nearest ATM was. She told me how to find the ATM and suggested I should go to the Airport Help Point for some help.
There was just one staff member there, to whom I told my trouble. He apologetically told me there was nothing he could do. I started to cry because I didn’t know what was going to happen next.
A fellow military gentleman was there using the amenities (便利设备), and he overheard me tell my story to the staff member. He came over and asked me for the story again. I told him, and we talked for a few minutes. He told me he was a parachuter (伞兵) in the army. And then he told me to go to the ATM to get my money. So I went, but I could only pull out eighty dollars.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
作者是一名海军，从伊利诺伊州芝加哥搬到密西西比州默里迪恩，在机场办理登机手续和托运行李时，发现行李超出免费托运数量限制四个包，需额外支付 100 多美元，但身上钱不够。航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员都表示无法帮忙，作者急得哭了。此时，一位同为军人的男士听到作者的遭遇，让作者去自动取款机取钱，而作者只能取出 80 美元。
二、故事山分析
开端：作者在机场面临行李超重需额外付费但钱不够的困境。
发展：作者先后向航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员求助无果，急得哭了，一位军人男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。
高潮：作者取钱回来发现那位男士帮自己支付了全部费用。
结局（预测）：作者取行李时再次遇到那位男士，两人交流，表达感激与善意。
尾声（预测）：作者感受到军人之间的情谊和社会的温暖，将这份善意铭记于心。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：作者行李超重，钱不够支付额外费用。回应：为男士帮忙支付费用的情节做铺垫，突出男士帮助的必要性。
伏笔 2：航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员都无法帮忙。回应：凸显作者困境的艰难，与男士的帮助形成鲜明对比。
伏笔 3：男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。回应：暗示男士可能会在钱的方面给予帮助，为后续他支付费用埋下伏笔。
伏笔 4：作者只能取出 80 美元。回应：进一步强调费用缺口，体现男士支付全部费用的慷慨。
伏笔 5：男士是军人。回应：可能因为同为军人的身份，男士更愿意伸出援手，也能体现军人之间的特殊情谊。
四、续写要点
第一段：着重描写作者得知男士支付全部费用后的震惊、感动等情绪，以及对男士这一行为的感慨，还可描述周围人的反应。
第二段：细致描绘再次见到男士时的场景，两人的对话，作者如何表达感激，男士又如何回应，传递出温暖与正能量。
五、情感线
作者一开始因行李费用问题陷入焦虑和无助，求助无果后急得哭，处于极度沮丧的状态。当得知男士帮忙支付费用时，转为震惊与感动，内心充满温暖。再次见到男士时，满怀感激，通过交流进一步加深对这份善意的感受，情感从低落转为温暖与积极。
六、故事线
作者在机场面临行李超重付费难题，钱不够。
向航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员求助失败。
军人男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。
作者取钱回来发现男士已支付全部费用。
取行李时再次遇到男士，两人交流。
作者铭记这份善意，感受到温暖。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
In the face of difficulties, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can not only solve a practical problem but also warm the heart and restore our faith in humanity.（在困难面前，陌生人一个简单的善举不仅能解决实际问题，还能温暖人心，重塑我们对人性的信心。）
The bond among military personnel, characterized by mutual understanding and support, transcends individual interests and showcases the true meaning of camaraderie.（军人之间的情谊，以相互理解和支持为特征，超越个人利益，展现了友情的真正含义。）
This experience taught me that kindness is a universal language, and even in the most unexpected places, we can find people willing to lend a helping hand without hesitation.（这次经历让我明白，善良是一种通用语言，即使在最意想不到的地方，我们也能找到毫不犹豫伸出援手的人。）
Sometimes, the most valuable treasures in life are not material possessions but the moments of kindness and compassion we share with others, which can leave a lasting impression on our hearts.（有时候，生活中最宝贵的财富不是物质财富，而是我们与他人分享的善良和同情的时刻，这些时刻能在我们心中留下持久的印象。）
Through this encounter, I realized that a small act of generosity can have a profound impact, spreading warmth and inspiring others to pay it forward in the cycle of kindness.（通过这次相遇，我意识到一个小小的慷慨之举可以产生深远的影响，传播温暖，并激励他人在善良的循环中传递善意。）
八、写作示范一
第一段
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I stood there, frozen in shock for a moment. My eyes widened in disbelief, and my heart was filled with overwhelming gratitude. I couldn't believe that a complete stranger had been so incredibly kind. People around me also showed expressions of surprise and admiration. I asked the staff to tell me where the man was, determined to express my thanks in person.
第二段
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was the kind - hearted man. I rushed towards him and said, “Sir, I can't thank you enough. Your help means the world to me.” He smiled gently and replied, “We're all in the military. We should support each other.” His words were simple yet full of warmth. We chatted for a while, and I learned more about his military life. Before we parted, I promised him that I would pass on his kindness whenever I could.
写作示范二
第一段
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I was speechless for a few seconds, then a lump formed in my throat. Tears of gratitude welled up in my eyes. I was deeply touched by his selfless act. The staff around me were also moved by this unexpected kindness. I kept asking about the man's information, eager to know more about the person who had saved me from such a difficult situation.
第二段
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was him. I walked up to him with a big smile and said, “I really don't know how to repay you.” He patted me on the shoulder and said, “Don't mention it. Just pay it forward.” His words resonated in my heart. We exchanged some contact information, and I knew that this encounter would be a precious memory in my life. From then on, I always remembered his kindness and tried to be as helpful as he was.
九、【参考答案】
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I was so thankful but didn’t know how to find him to say thanks. He had left without giving me his name or contact information like phone number or address, so I couldn’t return him what he had paid. He helped me get home when I was in trouble, leaving me in tears of gratitude. I was wondering what I could do to repay his kindness all the way.
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was the military gentleman who had helped me earlier. He was standing there, checking his own bags with a smile. I quickly walked over to him, my heart pounding with gratitude. “Sir, I just wanted to say thank you again, you really saved my day.” He just chuckled and patted me on the shoulder. “Don’t mention it, kid. We’ve all been in a trouble before. Just pay it forward someday, okay ” I nodded eagerly, feeling a warmth in my chest. He gave me a wink and walked off, leaving me with a renewed sense of hope and the belief that there are always good people in the world.
I am in the Navy, and several years ago I moved from Chicago, Illinois, to Meridian, Mississippi. I was at the airport, trying to get my boarding pass and check my bags. Because I was moving, I had almost all of my possessions with me.
When I got to the counter, I found out there was a limit to the number of bags you can check without paying a fee. I had exceeded (超过) this limit by four bags. In order to get both myself and all of my things home, I would have to spend over $100. I didn’t have so much money with me, because I had just paid some of my bills and sent a few larger items home by mail.
The airline employee told me she couldn’t do anything to help me. So I asked her where the nearest ATM was. She told me how to find the ATM and suggested I should go to the Airport Help Point for some help.
There was just one staff member there, to whom I told my trouble. He apologetically told me there was nothing he could do. I started to cry because I didn’t know what was going to happen next.
A fellow military gentleman was there using the amenities (便利设备), and he overheard me tell my story to the staff member. He came over and asked me for the story again. I told him, and we talked for a few minutes. He told me he was a parachuter (伞兵) in the army. And then he told me to go to the ATM to get my money. So I went, but I could only pull out eighty dollars.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
作者是一名海军，从伊利诺伊州芝加哥搬到密西西比州默里迪恩，在机场办理登机手续和托运行李时，发现行李超出免费托运数量限制四个包，需额外支付 100 多美元，但身上钱不够。航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员都表示无法帮忙，作者急得哭了。此时，一位同为军人的男士听到作者的遭遇，让作者去自动取款机取钱，而作者只能取出 80 美元。
二、故事山分析
开端：作者在机场面临行李超重需额外付费但钱不够的困境。
发展：作者先后向航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员求助无果，急得哭了，一位军人男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。
高潮：作者取钱回来发现那位男士帮自己支付了全部费用。
结局（预测）：作者取行李时再次遇到那位男士，两人交流，表达感激与善意。
尾声（预测）：作者感受到军人之间的情谊和社会的温暖，将这份善意铭记于心。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：作者行李超重，钱不够支付额外费用。回应：为男士帮忙支付费用的情节做铺垫，突出男士帮助的必要性。
伏笔 2：航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员都无法帮忙。回应：凸显作者困境的艰难，与男士的帮助形成鲜明对比。
伏笔 3：男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。回应：暗示男士可能会在钱的方面给予帮助，为后续他支付费用埋下伏笔。
伏笔 4：作者只能取出 80 美元。回应：进一步强调费用缺口，体现男士支付全部费用的慷慨。
伏笔 5：男士是军人。回应：可能因为同为军人的身份，男士更愿意伸出援手，也能体现军人之间的特殊情谊。
四、续写要点
第一段：着重描写作者得知男士支付全部费用后的震惊、感动等情绪，以及对男士这一行为的感慨，还可描述周围人的反应。
第二段：细致描绘再次见到男士时的场景，两人的对话，作者如何表达感激，男士又如何回应，传递出温暖与正能量。
五、情感线
作者一开始因行李费用问题陷入焦虑和无助，求助无果后急得哭，处于极度沮丧的状态。当得知男士帮忙支付费用时，转为震惊与感动，内心充满温暖。再次见到男士时，满怀感激，通过交流进一步加深对这份善意的感受，情感从低落转为温暖与积极。
六、故事线
作者在机场面临行李超重付费难题，钱不够。
向航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员求助失败。
军人男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。
作者取钱回来发现男士已支付全部费用。
取行李时再次遇到男士，两人交流。
作者铭记这份善意，感受到温暖。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
In the face of difficulties, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can not only solve a practical problem but also warm the heart and restore our faith in humanity.（在困难面前，陌生人一个简单的善举不仅能解决实际问题，还能温暖人心，重塑我们对人性的信心。）
The bond among military personnel, characterized by mutual understanding and support, transcends individual interests and showcases the true meaning of camaraderie.（军人之间的情谊，以相互理解和支持为特征，超越个人利益，展现了友情的真正含义。）
This experience taught me that kindness is a universal language, and even in the most unexpected places, we can find people willing to lend a helping hand without hesitation.（这次经历让我明白，善良是一种通用语言，即使在最意想不到的地方，我们也能找到毫不犹豫伸出援手的人。）
Sometimes, the most valuable treasures in life are not material possessions but the moments of kindness and compassion we share with others, which can leave a lasting impression on our hearts.（有时候，生活中最宝贵的财富不是物质财富，而是我们与他人分享的善良和同情的时刻，这些时刻能在我们心中留下持久的印象。）
Through this encounter, I realized that a small act of generosity can have a profound impact, spreading warmth and inspiring others to pay it forward in the cycle of kindness.（通过这次相遇，我意识到一个小小的慷慨之举可以产生深远的影响，传播温暖，并激励他人在善良的循环中传递善意。）
八、写作示范一
第一段
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I stood there, frozen in shock for a moment. My eyes widened in disbelief, and my heart was filled with overwhelming gratitude. I couldn't believe that a complete stranger had been so incredibly kind. People around me also showed expressions of surprise and admiration. I asked the staff to tell me where the man was, determined to express my thanks in person.
第二段
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was the kind - hearted man. I rushed towards him and said, “Sir, I can't thank you enough. Your help means the world to me.” He smiled gently and replied, “We're all in the military. We should support each other.” His words were simple yet full of warmth. We chatted for a while, and I learned more about his military life. Before we parted, I promised him that I would pass on his kindness whenever I could.
写作示范二
第一段
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I was speechless for a few seconds, then a lump formed in my throat. Tears of gratitude welled up in my eyes. I was deeply touched by his selfless act. The staff around me were also moved by this unexpected kindness. I kept asking about the man's information, eager to know more about the person who had saved me from such a difficult situation.
第二段
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was him. I walked up to him with a big smile and said, “I really don't know how to repay you.” He patted me on the shoulder and said, “Don't mention it. Just pay it forward.” His words resonated in my heart. We exchanged some contact information, and I knew that this encounter would be a precious memory in my life. From then on, I always remembered his kindness and tried to be as helpful as he was.
九、【参考答案】
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I was so thankful but didn’t know how to find him to say thanks. He had left without giving me his name or contact information like phone number or address, so I couldn’t return him what he had paid. He helped me get home when I was in trouble, leaving me in tears of gratitude. I was wondering what I could do to repay his kindness all the way.
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was the military gentleman who had helped me earlier. He was standing there, checking his own bags with a smile. I quickly walked over to him, my heart pounding with gratitude. “Sir, I just wanted to say thank you again, you really saved my day.” He just chuckled and patted me on the shoulder. “Don’t mention it, kid. We’ve all been in a trouble before. Just pay it forward someday, okay ” I nodded eagerly, feeling a warmth in my chest. He gave me a wink and walked off, leaving me with a renewed sense of hope and the belief that there are always good people in the world.