读后续写--两年流浪，一朝团圆：Spider 的归乡传奇 讲义-宁夏回族自治区2024-2025学年高三上学期第五次月考英语试题
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I was eight years old when my family moved from Towoomba to England in 1950. My mother was suffering from a rare disease and had to take treatment in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father sent his five-year-old red heeler (Australian cattle dog), Spider, who was loved by us all, to his friend Sandy, as Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas. We didn’t know how long my mother’s treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an air letter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father’s face as he read this news. My mother and I tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was.
Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never found. It seemed Spider just kept running and searching for us. My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and my father immediately began his own search for Spider. He repeated calls to the people who had said they had seen his dog, but it turned out to be clueless.
One cold winter’s Saturday morning, eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, 375 kilometers from Toowoomba. An elderly lady living on her own was putting food out “for a very old yellow dog”. This had been going on for a few weeks. Immediately we set off.
Five and a half hours later, we found the old house beside the bush (灌木丛). Sadly, the lady told my father that the dog hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had an upset look in his eyes. He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.___________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Once home we gently cleaned him up.
_____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
1950 年，8 岁的作者一家因母亲要去伦敦治病而搬往英国，出发前将心爱的 5 岁红色澳洲牧牛犬 Spider 托付给父亲的朋友 Sandy。六周后，Sandy 告知 Spider 在他们离开两周后跑丢了，虽经多方寻找仍无果。两年后作者一家回到澳大利亚，父亲继续寻找 Spider。八个月后的一个寒冷周六早晨，父亲接到 375 公里外 Gin Gin 的电话，得知一位独居老妇人连续几周给一只老黄狗喂食。一家人立刻前往，却得知狗已几天没出现。父亲吹起给 Spider 的特殊口哨。
二、故事山分析
开端：作者一家因母亲治病搬往英国，将狗托付给朋友。
发展：狗跑丢，家人和朋友多方寻找无果。
高潮：一家人回到澳大利亚后，父亲接到可能发现狗的线索，前往寻找，却得知狗已几天未出现，父亲吹口哨呼唤。
结局（预测）：狗听到口哨声出现，与家人团聚。
尾声（预测）：家人和狗团聚后，感慨这份跨越时间和距离的深厚情感，体现动物与人之间真挚的羁绊。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：Spider 是家人深爱的狗 。回应：在续写中，家人对 Spider 的深厚情感促使他们坚持不懈地寻找，重逢时也会格外激动。
伏笔 2：Spider 跑丢后多方寻找无果 。回应：与续写中突然出现的狗形成对比，增加故事的戏剧性。
伏笔 3：父亲接到可能发现狗的线索 。回应：是续写中家人前往寻找并可能重逢的关键契机。
伏笔 4：父亲吹起给 Spider 的特殊口哨 。回应：在续写中，这是呼唤狗出现的关键信号，推动故事发展。
伏笔 5：家人对 Spider 的担忧 。回应：在续写中，重逢时家人的担忧转化为喜悦和安心。
四、续写要点
第一段：描述从灌木丛中传来的声音越来越大，接着 Spider 摇摇晃晃地从灌木丛中走出来，它看起来又瘦又疲惫，但听到口哨声后，眼中闪烁着光芒，兴奋地向父亲跑来。父亲激动地蹲下身子，抱住 Spider，眼中满是泪水。
第二段：回到家后，家人温柔地给 Spider 清洗，发现它身上有很多伤痕，大家心疼不已。之后的日子里，Spider 在家人的照顾下逐渐恢复健康，它总是紧紧跟着家人，一家人也更加珍惜这份失而复得的感情。
五、情感线
从家人与 Spider 分离时的不舍，到得知它跑丢后的担忧，寻找无果时的失落，接到线索时的期待，寻找时的紧张，再到重逢时的激动和喜悦，最后是团聚后的温馨和珍惜，情感层层递进，展现出家人与狗之间深厚的情感。
六、故事线
作者一家因母亲治病搬往英国，将 Spider 托付给朋友。
Spider 跑丢，家人和朋友多方寻找无果。
家人回到澳大利亚，父亲继续寻找。
父亲接到可能发现 Spider 的线索，一家人前往寻找。
父亲吹口哨呼唤，Spider 出现，与家人重逢。
家人带 Spider 回家，悉心照顾，它恢复健康，一家人珍惜这份感情。
七、主旨升华句
This heartwarming reunion between the family and Spider taught us that the bond between humans and animals is a powerful force that can overcome time and distance.（家人与 Spider 的暖心重逢让我们明白，人类与动物之间的纽带是一种强大的力量，能够跨越时间和距离。）
Through the long - awaited search and the joyous reunion, we realized that the love we share with our pets is not only a source of comfort but also a reminder of the unbreakable connection that exists between us.（通过漫长的期待寻找和欢乐的重逢，我们意识到，我们与宠物之间的爱不仅是一种安慰，更是我们之间牢不可破联系的象征。）
The story of Spider's journey and return home serves as a beautiful example of the loyalty and perseverance that can exist in the relationship between humans and their animal companions.（Spider 的旅程和回家的故事，是人类与动物伙伴之间忠诚和坚持的美好例证。）
Our reunion with Spider made us understand that even in the face of seemingly insurmountable odds, the love and hope we hold for our beloved pets can lead to the most wonderful of outcomes.（我们与 Spider 的团聚让我们明白，即使面对看似无法克服的困难，我们对心爱宠物的爱和希望也能带来最美好的结果。）
This remarkable experience with Spider taught us that the love between humans and animals is a precious gift, one that enriches our lives and reminds us of the beauty of unconditional affection.（与 Spider 的这段非凡经历让我们明白，人类与动物之间的爱是一份珍贵的礼物，它丰富了我们的生活，让我们铭记无条件的爱的美好。）
八、写作示范一
第一段
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. It grew louder and louder. To our great surprise, Spider, looking extremely thin and weak, staggered out from the thick bushes. His fur was matted and his body was covered in dirt. But as soon as he heard the familiar whistle, his ears perked up and his eyes lit up with excitement. He barked weakly and rushed towards my father, his tail wagging vigorously. My father, with tears welling up in his eyes, quickly crouched down and opened his arms wide. Spider jumped right into his embrace, nuzzling his face affectionately.
第二段
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We found many scars on his body, which made us heartbroken. Over the next few days, we took good care of him, feeding him nutritious food and giving him warm baths. Gradually, Spider regained his strength and vitality. He became our shadow, following us everywhere in the house. Our home was filled with joy and laughter again, and this precious reunion made us cherish every moment with him even more.
写作示范二
第一段
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Everyone held their breath, waiting anxiously. A few seconds later, a shabby - looking dog limped out. It was Spider! His legs were trembling, and he seemed on the verge of collapse. However, the moment he saw my father, a glimmer of recognition flashed in his eyes. He let out a faint whine and tried his best to run towards us. My father rushed forward, scooping him up into his arms. Spider licked my father's hands, as if to tell him how much he had missed us.
第二段
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We carefully applied medicine to his wounds, and my mother prepared a warm meal for him. Spider ate with gusto, his eyes full of contentment. In the following weeks, with our love and care, he transformed from a weak and battered dog into a lively one again. He played with us in the yard, and his presence brought a sense of completeness to our family. This experience taught us the true meaning of loyalty and the power of love that can endure through hardships.
九、范文
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. My heart leaped into my throat as we all turned towards the noise. Out stumbled Spider, his body battered and his fur matted with dirt and twigs. But his eyes were fixed on my father, filled with a mixture of exhaustion and sheer joy. Father rushed over and scooped him up into his arms, cradling him gently as if he were the most precious thing in the world. Spider's tail managed a feeble wag, and he licked my father's hand weakly. We were all in tears, amazed and overjoyed at this miraculous reunion.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We took our time, carefully washing away the grime of his long journey. As we worked, Spider seemed to relax, as if he knew he was finally safe. We gave him a warm, soft bed and a bowl of fresh water and food. Over the next few days, he slowly regained his strength and his old spirit. He would follow us from room to room, never wanting to be far from our sides. His return was a reminder of the incredible bond we shared, a bond that had withstood time and distance. We knew then that Spider was more than just a pet; he was a beloved member of our family, and we would never let him go again.
I was eight years old when my family moved from Towoomba to England in 1950. My mother was suffering from a rare disease and had to take treatment in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father sent his five-year-old red heeler (Australian cattle dog), Spider, who was loved by us all, to his friend Sandy, as Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas. We didn’t know how long my mother’s treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an air letter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father’s face as he read this news. My mother and I tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was.
Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never found. It seemed Spider just kept running and searching for us. My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and my father immediately began his own search for Spider. He repeated calls to the people who had said they had seen his dog, but it turned out to be clueless.
One cold winter’s Saturday morning, eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, 375 kilometers from Toowoomba. An elderly lady living on her own was putting food out “for a very old yellow dog”. This had been going on for a few weeks. Immediately we set off.
Five and a half hours later, we found the old house beside the bush (灌木丛). Sadly, the lady told my father that the dog hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had an upset look in his eyes. He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.___________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Once home we gently cleaned him up.
_____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
1950 年，8 岁的作者一家因母亲要去伦敦治病而搬往英国，出发前将心爱的 5 岁红色澳洲牧牛犬 Spider 托付给父亲的朋友 Sandy。六周后，Sandy 告知 Spider 在他们离开两周后跑丢了，虽经多方寻找仍无果。两年后作者一家回到澳大利亚，父亲继续寻找 Spider。八个月后的一个寒冷周六早晨，父亲接到 375 公里外 Gin Gin 的电话，得知一位独居老妇人连续几周给一只老黄狗喂食。一家人立刻前往，却得知狗已几天没出现。父亲吹起给 Spider 的特殊口哨。
二、故事山分析
开端：作者一家因母亲治病搬往英国，将狗托付给朋友。
发展：狗跑丢，家人和朋友多方寻找无果。
高潮：一家人回到澳大利亚后，父亲接到可能发现狗的线索，前往寻找，却得知狗已几天未出现，父亲吹口哨呼唤。
结局（预测）：狗听到口哨声出现，与家人团聚。
尾声（预测）：家人和狗团聚后，感慨这份跨越时间和距离的深厚情感，体现动物与人之间真挚的羁绊。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：Spider 是家人深爱的狗 。回应：在续写中，家人对 Spider 的深厚情感促使他们坚持不懈地寻找，重逢时也会格外激动。
伏笔 2：Spider 跑丢后多方寻找无果 。回应：与续写中突然出现的狗形成对比，增加故事的戏剧性。
伏笔 3：父亲接到可能发现狗的线索 。回应：是续写中家人前往寻找并可能重逢的关键契机。
伏笔 4：父亲吹起给 Spider 的特殊口哨 。回应：在续写中，这是呼唤狗出现的关键信号，推动故事发展。
伏笔 5：家人对 Spider 的担忧 。回应：在续写中，重逢时家人的担忧转化为喜悦和安心。
四、续写要点
第一段：描述从灌木丛中传来的声音越来越大，接着 Spider 摇摇晃晃地从灌木丛中走出来，它看起来又瘦又疲惫，但听到口哨声后，眼中闪烁着光芒，兴奋地向父亲跑来。父亲激动地蹲下身子，抱住 Spider，眼中满是泪水。
第二段：回到家后，家人温柔地给 Spider 清洗，发现它身上有很多伤痕，大家心疼不已。之后的日子里，Spider 在家人的照顾下逐渐恢复健康，它总是紧紧跟着家人，一家人也更加珍惜这份失而复得的感情。
五、情感线
从家人与 Spider 分离时的不舍，到得知它跑丢后的担忧，寻找无果时的失落，接到线索时的期待，寻找时的紧张，再到重逢时的激动和喜悦，最后是团聚后的温馨和珍惜，情感层层递进，展现出家人与狗之间深厚的情感。
六、故事线
作者一家因母亲治病搬往英国，将 Spider 托付给朋友。
Spider 跑丢，家人和朋友多方寻找无果。
家人回到澳大利亚，父亲继续寻找。
父亲接到可能发现 Spider 的线索，一家人前往寻找。
父亲吹口哨呼唤，Spider 出现，与家人重逢。
家人带 Spider 回家，悉心照顾，它恢复健康，一家人珍惜这份感情。
七、主旨升华句
This heartwarming reunion between the family and Spider taught us that the bond between humans and animals is a powerful force that can overcome time and distance.（家人与 Spider 的暖心重逢让我们明白，人类与动物之间的纽带是一种强大的力量，能够跨越时间和距离。）
Through the long - awaited search and the joyous reunion, we realized that the love we share with our pets is not only a source of comfort but also a reminder of the unbreakable connection that exists between us.（通过漫长的期待寻找和欢乐的重逢，我们意识到，我们与宠物之间的爱不仅是一种安慰，更是我们之间牢不可破联系的象征。）
The story of Spider's journey and return home serves as a beautiful example of the loyalty and perseverance that can exist in the relationship between humans and their animal companions.（Spider 的旅程和回家的故事，是人类与动物伙伴之间忠诚和坚持的美好例证。）
Our reunion with Spider made us understand that even in the face of seemingly insurmountable odds, the love and hope we hold for our beloved pets can lead to the most wonderful of outcomes.（我们与 Spider 的团聚让我们明白，即使面对看似无法克服的困难，我们对心爱宠物的爱和希望也能带来最美好的结果。）
This remarkable experience with Spider taught us that the love between humans and animals is a precious gift, one that enriches our lives and reminds us of the beauty of unconditional affection.（与 Spider 的这段非凡经历让我们明白，人类与动物之间的爱是一份珍贵的礼物，它丰富了我们的生活，让我们铭记无条件的爱的美好。）
八、写作示范一
第一段
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. It grew louder and louder. To our great surprise, Spider, looking extremely thin and weak, staggered out from the thick bushes. His fur was matted and his body was covered in dirt. But as soon as he heard the familiar whistle, his ears perked up and his eyes lit up with excitement. He barked weakly and rushed towards my father, his tail wagging vigorously. My father, with tears welling up in his eyes, quickly crouched down and opened his arms wide. Spider jumped right into his embrace, nuzzling his face affectionately.
第二段
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We found many scars on his body, which made us heartbroken. Over the next few days, we took good care of him, feeding him nutritious food and giving him warm baths. Gradually, Spider regained his strength and vitality. He became our shadow, following us everywhere in the house. Our home was filled with joy and laughter again, and this precious reunion made us cherish every moment with him even more.
写作示范二
第一段
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Everyone held their breath, waiting anxiously. A few seconds later, a shabby - looking dog limped out. It was Spider! His legs were trembling, and he seemed on the verge of collapse. However, the moment he saw my father, a glimmer of recognition flashed in his eyes. He let out a faint whine and tried his best to run towards us. My father rushed forward, scooping him up into his arms. Spider licked my father's hands, as if to tell him how much he had missed us.
第二段
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We carefully applied medicine to his wounds, and my mother prepared a warm meal for him. Spider ate with gusto, his eyes full of contentment. In the following weeks, with our love and care, he transformed from a weak and battered dog into a lively one again. He played with us in the yard, and his presence brought a sense of completeness to our family. This experience taught us the true meaning of loyalty and the power of love that can endure through hardships.
九、范文
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. My heart leaped into my throat as we all turned towards the noise. Out stumbled Spider, his body battered and his fur matted with dirt and twigs. But his eyes were fixed on my father, filled with a mixture of exhaustion and sheer joy. Father rushed over and scooped him up into his arms, cradling him gently as if he were the most precious thing in the world. Spider's tail managed a feeble wag, and he licked my father's hand weakly. We were all in tears, amazed and overjoyed at this miraculous reunion.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We took our time, carefully washing away the grime of his long journey. As we worked, Spider seemed to relax, as if he knew he was finally safe. We gave him a warm, soft bed and a bowl of fresh water and food. Over the next few days, he slowly regained his strength and his old spirit. He would follow us from room to room, never wanting to be far from our sides. His return was a reminder of the incredible bond we shared, a bond that had withstood time and distance. We knew then that Spider was more than just a pet; he was a beloved member of our family, and we would never let him go again.