读后续写--萌兽护林记:沟通让爱与家园双赢 讲义-河南省周口市项城市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题

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名称 读后续写--萌兽护林记:沟通让爱与家园双赢 讲义-河南省周口市项城市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末英语试题
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a green forest, there lived a group of animals. The wise old owl (猫头鹰) Hootie, with his sharp eyes and calm manner, was the keeper of ancient knowledge. The playful rabbit Thumper was always full of energy, wandering around and bringing cheers. The brave deer Bambi, with his strong legs and gentle heart, was fearless in the face of danger. And the curious squirrel Nutty was constantly exploring, his tiny feet always finding something new.
One day, the animals woke up to find that their forest was in danger. A group of humans, armed with tools, had come to cut down the trees and build a new city. The animals were scared and didn’t know what to do. They decided to hold a meeting to come up with a plan.
Hootie, being the wise old owl, suggested that they go and talk to the humans. He said that they should try to reason with them and make them understand that the forest was their home. The other animals were hesitant, but they trusted Hootie and agreed to go with him.
As they neared the humans, Thumper’s heart raced, but he bravely stayed by Hootie’s side. Bambi’s ears moved nervously, yet he stood tall, ready to protect his home. Nutty, sitting on a nearby branch, chattered anxiously. Hootie stepped forward and spoke to the humans, explaining the forest’s significance. The humans paused, but their expressions remained uncertain. Thumper then stepped forward, showing his playful side, trying to soften the humans’ hearts. Bambi rubbed the closest human gently, hoping to convey the peace of the forest. Nutty, gathering his courage, dropped a small nut at the humans’ feet as a sign of friendship. The animals’ combined efforts were a desperate attempt to save their beloved forest.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften.
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The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice.
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一、文章大意
在一片绿色森林里,住着猫头鹰胡蒂、兔子桑珀、鹿斑比和松鼠纳蒂等动物。一天,它们发现一群人类带着工具来砍伐树木,要建造新城市,森林面临危险。动物们害怕又不知所措,便开会商议对策。睿智的胡蒂建议去和人类谈判,让他们明白森林是动物们的家园。其他动物虽犹豫,但信任胡蒂,还是一同前往。靠近人类时,动物们都很紧张,但都勇敢地以自己的方式试图打动人类,如胡蒂解释森林的重要性,桑珀展现俏皮一面,斑比温柔触碰人类,纳蒂扔下坚果示好。
二、故事山分析
开端:森林里的动物们发现人类要来砍伐树木,森林面临危机,动物们决定开会商讨对策。
发展:胡蒂建议与人类谈判,动物们虽紧张但一同前往,各自以不同方式试图打动人类。
高潮:人类的表情开始软化,这是故事的转折点,预示着事情有了转机。
结局(预测):人类被动物们打动,放弃砍伐森林,动物们成功守护家园。
尾声(预测):动物们庆祝胜利,更加珍惜森林,也明白了团结和沟通的重要性。
三、伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1:胡蒂是睿智的,拥有古老知识 。回应:他的建议成为解决问题的关键,最终证明他的决策是正确的,动物们也因此感谢他。
伏笔 2:动物们都很害怕,但决定一起面对 。回应:在与人类沟通的过程中,它们相互陪伴,共同努力,体现了团结的力量,最终成功守护家园。
伏笔 3:动物们以各自独特的方式试图打动人类 。回应:这些举动逐渐让人类的态度发生转变,是人类态度软化的直接原因。
伏笔 4:人类听到动物们的诉求后表情不确定 。回应:为后续人类态度的转变做铺垫,暗示事情还有转机。
伏笔 5:动物们对森林的热爱和对家园的守护决心 。回应:促使它们积极行动,也让人类感受到它们的情感,最终赢得人类的理解。
四、续写要点
第一段:详细描述人类表情软化后的行为和言语,比如他们开始互相交流讨论,表达对动物们的理解,甚至提出一些保护森林的建议。同时,描写动物们看到人类态度转变后的反应,如惊喜、欢呼等。
第二段:描写动物们庆祝胜利的场景,它们可能会举办一场欢乐的聚会。接着强调胡蒂建议的重要性,以及动物们从这次经历中获得的成长,如更加懂得团结和沟通的意义。
五、情感线
起初动物们因森林面临危机而恐惧、焦虑,在与人类沟通时紧张不安,当看到人类表情软化时,感到一丝希望,惊喜逐渐涌上心头。最后人类同意不砍伐森林,动物们极度喜悦,对胡蒂充满感激,同时也因成功守护家园而充满自豪。
六、故事线
动物们发现森林被人类威胁,开会商议对策。
胡蒂提议与人类谈判,动物们一同前往。
动物们以各自方式试图打动人类,人类表情开始软化。
人类被打动,决定不砍伐森林,与动物们达成共识。
动物们庆祝胜利,举办欢乐聚会。
动物们感谢胡蒂,领悟团结和沟通的重要性,更加珍惜森林。
七、主旨升华句(英文)
This experience taught the animals that through unity and communication, even the most formidable challenges can be overcome, and harmony between different species can be achieved.(这次经历让动物们明白,通过团结和沟通,即使是最艰巨的挑战也能被克服,不同物种之间也能实现和谐共处。)
The animals' successful defense of their forest not only safeguarded their home but also demonstrated the power of understanding and cooperation, showing that with a common goal, all beings can work together.(动物们成功保卫森林,不仅守护了家园,还展示了理解与合作的力量,表明只要有共同目标,所有生物都能携手共进。)
In the face of the threat to their home, the animals' combined efforts and heartfelt appeals revealed the deep - seated connection between nature and its inhabitants, and the importance of protecting this bond.(面对家园受到的威胁,动物们共同的努力和诚挚的诉求揭示了自然与其栖息者之间深厚的联系,以及保护这种联系的重要性。)
This encounter between the animals and humans serves as a powerful reminder that every creature has a place in the world, and by respecting and listening to one another, we can create a more harmonious and sustainable environment.(动物与人类的这次相遇有力地提醒我们,每个生物在世界上都有一席之地,通过相互尊重和倾听,我们可以创造一个更和谐、可持续的环境。)
The animals' victory over the human threat to their forest was not just a win for themselves but a lesson in empathy and compromise, teaching us that peaceful coexistence is possible when we value the needs of others.(动物们战胜人类对森林的威胁,不仅是它们自身的胜利,更是关于共情和妥协的一课,教会我们当我们重视他人需求时,和平共处是可能的。)
八、写作示范一
第一段
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften. They started to talk among themselves in hushed tones. One of them stepped forward and said, “We didn't realize how much this forest means to you all.” Another nodded in agreement, adding, “We should find another place for our city.” The animals were filled with joy and relief. Thumper jumped up and down, cheering loudly. Bambi let out a gentle bleat, and Nutty chattered excitedly. Hootie, with a wise smile, knew their efforts had paid off.
第二段
The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice. They decided to hold a grand celebration in the forest. Flowers were gathered, and fruits were shared. Bambi said, “If it weren't for Hootie, we might have lost our home.” Thumper added, “And we all worked together! That's what made it possible.” From that day on, the animals understood the importance of unity and communication. They lived in harmony, always ready to protect their precious forest.
写作示范二
第一段
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften. They put down their tools and started to listen attentively. One human knelt down and gently stroked Bambi, saying, “We were wrong. This forest is a beautiful place, and you all belong here.” The other humans echoed in agreement. Nutty, filled with excitement, ran up and down the tree. Thumper, his eyes shining with happiness, hopped around the humans. The animals couldn't believe their ears. Their hard work and courage had finally paid off.
第二段
The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice. They organized a special party in the forest clearing. Everyone brought something unique. Hootie was given the biggest share of the delicious nuts. Bambi said, “This is a victory for all of us. We must always protect our home together.” The animals nodded in unison. From then on, they became more united, and their forest thrived, a symbol of the harmonious coexistence between nature and its inhabitants.
九、【参考答案】
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften. Their eyes, once hardened with determination, now showed a grace of understanding. The man who was playing with Thumper laughed heartily, reaching out to pet Bambi’s head gently. Another human bent down to pick up the nut Nutty had dropped, examining it with huge interest. They started to whisper among themselves, nodding in acknowledgment. It seemed that the animals’ efforts had finally touched their hearts. In that moment, a wave of relief washed over the animals, and their fear was replaced with a glimmer of hope.
The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice. They all gathered around Hootie, their eyes shining with gratitude. They knew that without Hootie’s guidance, they might have lost their precious forest. With a newfound sense of unity and confidence, they celebrated that night, dancing under the moonlit sky, knowing that their home was safe and that their friendship and teamwork could conquer any future challenges.
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