读后续写--一颗坏牙背后的温暖救赎 讲义-广东省深圳市光明区2024-2025学年高二上学期期末教学质量检测英语试题
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I taught English as a Second Language (ESL) at a school. One particular sixth grader, Pablo, was struggling with fluency in reading, so after class I suggested that he get extra practice by reading aloud to his mom while she prepared dinner each evening. This was something I routinely encouraged my struggling students to do. Imagine my surprise when Pablo responded by starting to cry. He said, “My mom can’t cook dinner!” Then he cried harder. Eventually, he calmed down enough to tell me that his mom was only able to “cry in her bed” when he got home every afternoon. He said that he was caring for his six-month-old baby brother by himself from the time he got home each day. His mother, it seemed, had a bad tooth and was in extreme pain. He said that his father didn’t have enough money to get it fixed, and that there was no way for her to go to a dentist. This child’s heart was broken for his mom.
I was speechless! He was still crying when he left me that day, and I promised him I would try to help. I kept asking myself how I could help this student. How could I help his mother when we didn’t even speak the same language
The next day, I sent a note, which a friend helped me translate, to Pablo’s mother asking if she would like me to find someone to help her. The following day, Pablo brought me a note from his mom accepting my offer to help.
Meanwhile, I had been doing some networking among my friends asking if anyone knew a dentist who might do some free work for this lady. At the time, I was not able to pay for the work to be done myself. Several friends suggested a dental office that had recently opened up in the area, thinking that they might be willing to provide the services. I didn’t want to waste a lot of time going to several dentists, so I prayed that this would be the one.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk.
Pablo’s mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time.
文章大意
作者是一名 ESL 教师，发现学生 Pablo 阅读不流利，建议他回家给妈妈大声朗读来练习，Pablo 却哭诉妈妈无法做饭，因为妈妈牙疼难忍，只能卧床哭泣，父亲没钱给妈妈治牙，他还要独自照顾六个月大的弟弟。作者决定帮忙，先给 Pablo 妈妈写纸条询问是否需要帮助，得到同意后，在朋友间打听愿意免费治疗的牙医，最后有朋友推荐了当地一家刚开业的牙科诊所，作者希望这家诊所能提供帮助。
故事山分析
故事围绕着 “帮助” 展开，以 Pablo 家庭的困境为冲突点，作者的行动为故事发展脉络，呈现出人与人之间的关怀与温暖。Pablo 的困境是故事的 “坑”，作者的帮助是填 “坑” 的过程，结局很可能是妈妈的牙得到治疗，困境得到解决，体现人性的美好。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
作者承诺帮忙：作者向 Pablo 承诺会尽力帮助他，这是故事发展的重要推动点。在续写中，作者积极寻找牙医，践行承诺，努力解决问题。
朋友推荐牙科诊所：朋友推荐了当地刚开业的牙科诊所，暗示这家诊所可能会成为解决问题的关键。续写中，作者前往这家诊所沟通，推动故事发展。
Pablo 妈妈接受帮助：妈妈接受了作者的帮助，这为后续的治疗提供了可能。在续写中，妈妈按照约定去见牙医，使故事得以继续。
作者不会说同一种语言：作者和 Pablo 妈妈语言不通，这可能会在帮助过程中产生困难。续写中可以通过翻译或者其他方式解决沟通问题，体现克服困难的过程。
作者无力支付费用：作者自己无法支付治疗费用，所以只能寻求免费治疗的机会。在续写中，这会促使作者努力说服牙医提供免费服务，成为故事的一个小冲突。
续写要点
第一段：作者来到牙科诊所，向接待员说明来意，可能会遇到一些质疑或者需要详细解释情况，最终接待员将情况告知牙医，牙医给出初步回应。
第二段：Pablo 妈妈按约定时间来见牙医，牙医进行检查后确定治疗方案，开始治疗。治疗结束后，妈妈对作者和牙医表达感激，作者也为能帮助到他们感到欣慰。
情感线
故事起始于 Pablo 的悲伤与无助，他为妈妈的痛苦而心碎，作者听闻后充满同情并坚定要帮助他。在寻找帮助的过程中，作者带着焦急与期待。当来到牙科诊所时，作者心怀忐忑，不知能否得到帮助。Pablo 妈妈来治疗时，大家都带着希望，治疗成功后，满是喜悦与感激，作者也收获了助人的满足。
故事线
Pablo 向作者哭诉妈妈的困境。
作者承诺帮助 Pablo 并给其妈妈写纸条，得到同意。
作者在朋友间打听免费治疗的牙医，朋友推荐一家诊所。
作者前往推荐的牙科诊所沟通。
Pablo 妈妈按约定时间来见牙医。
牙医为妈妈治疗，问题得到解决。
主旨升华句
A small act of kindness can light up the darkest corner of someone's life. 一个小小的善举可以照亮一个人生命中最黑暗的角落。
In the face of difficulties, the power of human connection and compassion can overcome all obstacles. 在困难面前，人与人之间的联系和同情心的力量可以克服一切障碍。
Kindness is not measured by the size of the deed but by the depth of the heart. 善良不是由行为的大小来衡量，而是由内心的深度来衡量。
When we reach out a helping hand, we not only change others' lives but also enrich our own souls. 当我们伸出援助之手时，我们不仅改变了别人的生活，也丰富了自己的灵魂。
The true beauty of humanity lies in our willingness to help those in need, no matter how great the challenge. 人性的真正美好在于我们愿意帮助那些有需要的人，无论挑战有多大。
写作示范一
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. I explained the whole situation to the receptionist with great earnestness. She listened attentively, her eyes filled with sympathy. After a while, she went to consult the dentist. When she came back, she told me that the dentist was willing to have a look at Pablo's mother's tooth. I was overjoyed and immediately made an appointment for her.
Pablo's mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist examined her tooth carefully and then said that it was a complex case but he was confident he could fix it. With the help of a translator, the dentist explained the treatment plan to her. During the treatment, Pablo's mother was a bit nervous, but the dentist's gentle manner soon put her at ease. After the treatment, she smiled brightly and expressed her sincere gratitude to the dentist and me. I was so glad that I could make a difference in their lives.
写作示范二
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. I poured out the story of Pablo's family, hoping to touch their hearts. The receptionist seemed hesitant at first, but when I mentioned the poor child's situation, she softened. She said she would talk to the dentist right away. After a long wait, the dentist came out and agreed to offer free treatment, saying that he was moved by the story.
Pablo's mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist greeted her warmly and started the examination. It turned out that the tooth problem was indeed serious. But with professional skills and patience, the dentist managed to fix it. Pablo's mother couldn't stop thanking us. Looking at her relieved face, I knew that all my efforts were worth it.
参考答案
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. After explaining the situation and showing them Pablo’s mother’s note, I anxiously awaited their response. To my relief, they agreed to help without charging any fees. Overjoyed, I quickly contacted Pablo's mother to inform her of the good news. She was so grateful that she couldn’t stop thanking me through her tears.
Pablo’s mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist examined her tooth and successfully treated it, alleviating her pain. As a token of appreciation, she prepared some delicious homemade cookies for me. When I shared the good news with Pablo, he was over the moon and hugged me tightly, expressing his gratitude in his broken English. Seeing their happiness, I felt a sense of fulfillment and pride in being able to make a difference in their lives.
I taught English as a Second Language (ESL) at a school. One particular sixth grader, Pablo, was struggling with fluency in reading, so after class I suggested that he get extra practice by reading aloud to his mom while she prepared dinner each evening. This was something I routinely encouraged my struggling students to do. Imagine my surprise when Pablo responded by starting to cry. He said, “My mom can’t cook dinner!” Then he cried harder. Eventually, he calmed down enough to tell me that his mom was only able to “cry in her bed” when he got home every afternoon. He said that he was caring for his six-month-old baby brother by himself from the time he got home each day. His mother, it seemed, had a bad tooth and was in extreme pain. He said that his father didn’t have enough money to get it fixed, and that there was no way for her to go to a dentist. This child’s heart was broken for his mom.
I was speechless! He was still crying when he left me that day, and I promised him I would try to help. I kept asking myself how I could help this student. How could I help his mother when we didn’t even speak the same language
The next day, I sent a note, which a friend helped me translate, to Pablo’s mother asking if she would like me to find someone to help her. The following day, Pablo brought me a note from his mom accepting my offer to help.
Meanwhile, I had been doing some networking among my friends asking if anyone knew a dentist who might do some free work for this lady. At the time, I was not able to pay for the work to be done myself. Several friends suggested a dental office that had recently opened up in the area, thinking that they might be willing to provide the services. I didn’t want to waste a lot of time going to several dentists, so I prayed that this would be the one.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk.
Pablo’s mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time.
文章大意
作者是一名 ESL 教师，发现学生 Pablo 阅读不流利，建议他回家给妈妈大声朗读来练习，Pablo 却哭诉妈妈无法做饭，因为妈妈牙疼难忍，只能卧床哭泣，父亲没钱给妈妈治牙，他还要独自照顾六个月大的弟弟。作者决定帮忙，先给 Pablo 妈妈写纸条询问是否需要帮助，得到同意后，在朋友间打听愿意免费治疗的牙医，最后有朋友推荐了当地一家刚开业的牙科诊所，作者希望这家诊所能提供帮助。
故事山分析
故事围绕着 “帮助” 展开，以 Pablo 家庭的困境为冲突点，作者的行动为故事发展脉络，呈现出人与人之间的关怀与温暖。Pablo 的困境是故事的 “坑”，作者的帮助是填 “坑” 的过程，结局很可能是妈妈的牙得到治疗，困境得到解决，体现人性的美好。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
作者承诺帮忙：作者向 Pablo 承诺会尽力帮助他，这是故事发展的重要推动点。在续写中，作者积极寻找牙医，践行承诺，努力解决问题。
朋友推荐牙科诊所：朋友推荐了当地刚开业的牙科诊所，暗示这家诊所可能会成为解决问题的关键。续写中，作者前往这家诊所沟通，推动故事发展。
Pablo 妈妈接受帮助：妈妈接受了作者的帮助，这为后续的治疗提供了可能。在续写中，妈妈按照约定去见牙医，使故事得以继续。
作者不会说同一种语言：作者和 Pablo 妈妈语言不通，这可能会在帮助过程中产生困难。续写中可以通过翻译或者其他方式解决沟通问题，体现克服困难的过程。
作者无力支付费用：作者自己无法支付治疗费用，所以只能寻求免费治疗的机会。在续写中，这会促使作者努力说服牙医提供免费服务，成为故事的一个小冲突。
续写要点
第一段：作者来到牙科诊所，向接待员说明来意，可能会遇到一些质疑或者需要详细解释情况，最终接待员将情况告知牙医，牙医给出初步回应。
第二段：Pablo 妈妈按约定时间来见牙医，牙医进行检查后确定治疗方案，开始治疗。治疗结束后，妈妈对作者和牙医表达感激，作者也为能帮助到他们感到欣慰。
情感线
故事起始于 Pablo 的悲伤与无助，他为妈妈的痛苦而心碎，作者听闻后充满同情并坚定要帮助他。在寻找帮助的过程中，作者带着焦急与期待。当来到牙科诊所时，作者心怀忐忑，不知能否得到帮助。Pablo 妈妈来治疗时，大家都带着希望，治疗成功后，满是喜悦与感激，作者也收获了助人的满足。
故事线
Pablo 向作者哭诉妈妈的困境。
作者承诺帮助 Pablo 并给其妈妈写纸条，得到同意。
作者在朋友间打听免费治疗的牙医，朋友推荐一家诊所。
作者前往推荐的牙科诊所沟通。
Pablo 妈妈按约定时间来见牙医。
牙医为妈妈治疗，问题得到解决。
主旨升华句
A small act of kindness can light up the darkest corner of someone's life. 一个小小的善举可以照亮一个人生命中最黑暗的角落。
In the face of difficulties, the power of human connection and compassion can overcome all obstacles. 在困难面前，人与人之间的联系和同情心的力量可以克服一切障碍。
Kindness is not measured by the size of the deed but by the depth of the heart. 善良不是由行为的大小来衡量，而是由内心的深度来衡量。
When we reach out a helping hand, we not only change others' lives but also enrich our own souls. 当我们伸出援助之手时，我们不仅改变了别人的生活，也丰富了自己的灵魂。
The true beauty of humanity lies in our willingness to help those in need, no matter how great the challenge. 人性的真正美好在于我们愿意帮助那些有需要的人，无论挑战有多大。
写作示范一
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. I explained the whole situation to the receptionist with great earnestness. She listened attentively, her eyes filled with sympathy. After a while, she went to consult the dentist. When she came back, she told me that the dentist was willing to have a look at Pablo's mother's tooth. I was overjoyed and immediately made an appointment for her.
Pablo's mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist examined her tooth carefully and then said that it was a complex case but he was confident he could fix it. With the help of a translator, the dentist explained the treatment plan to her. During the treatment, Pablo's mother was a bit nervous, but the dentist's gentle manner soon put her at ease. After the treatment, she smiled brightly and expressed her sincere gratitude to the dentist and me. I was so glad that I could make a difference in their lives.
写作示范二
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. I poured out the story of Pablo's family, hoping to touch their hearts. The receptionist seemed hesitant at first, but when I mentioned the poor child's situation, she softened. She said she would talk to the dentist right away. After a long wait, the dentist came out and agreed to offer free treatment, saying that he was moved by the story.
Pablo's mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist greeted her warmly and started the examination. It turned out that the tooth problem was indeed serious. But with professional skills and patience, the dentist managed to fix it. Pablo's mother couldn't stop thanking us. Looking at her relieved face, I knew that all my efforts were worth it.
参考答案
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. After explaining the situation and showing them Pablo’s mother’s note, I anxiously awaited their response. To my relief, they agreed to help without charging any fees. Overjoyed, I quickly contacted Pablo's mother to inform her of the good news. She was so grateful that she couldn’t stop thanking me through her tears.
Pablo’s mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist examined her tooth and successfully treated it, alleviating her pain. As a token of appreciation, she prepared some delicious homemade cookies for me. When I shared the good news with Pablo, he was over the moon and hugged me tightly, expressing his gratitude in his broken English. Seeing their happiness, I felt a sense of fulfillment and pride in being able to make a difference in their lives.