应用文写作
上周末,你从学校乘坐公交车返回家中时遭遇交通拥堵。请你写一篇短文,给学校英文报专栏“Beyond the Classroom”投稿,分享本次经历,内容包括:
1.交通拥堵情况;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Long Ride Home
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写作提纲
第一段:开篇点题,介绍上周末乘坐公交车回家,本以为是一次平常的旅程,却遭遇了交通拥堵。
第二段:详细描述交通拥堵的情况,如车龙排得很长,车辆几乎一动不动,道路上喇叭声此起彼伏,周围的乘客开始变得烦躁不安等。
第三段:阐述自己的感想,如意识到交通拥堵对生活的影响,思考缓解交通拥堵的办法,或者从这次经历中体会到的耐心的重要性。
语言积累
短语:
look forward to(期待)
be stuck in(被困在)
bumper - to - bumper traffic(拥堵的交通)
come to a standstill(停滞不前)
blow one's horn(按喇叭)
be impatient with(对…… 不耐烦)
have a great impact on(对…… 有重大影响)
come up with(想出)
in the long run(从长远来看)
keep calm(保持冷静)
佳句:
Last weekend, I was looking forward to a relaxing ride home on the bus, but it turned out to be a completely different story.(上周末,我期待着坐公交车轻松回家,但结果却完全不同。)
As the bus inched forward, I could see a long line of cars stretching as far as the eye could see, and we seemed to be stuck in a never - ending traffic jam.(公交车缓缓前行,我看到一长串汽车望不到尽头,我们似乎陷入了一场永无止境的交通堵塞。)
The constant honking of horns filled the air, and the passengers on the bus were becoming increasingly impatient with the slow progress.(持续的喇叭声充斥着空气,公交车上的乘客对缓慢的行进越来越不耐烦。)
This experience made me realize how much traffic congestion can disrupt our daily lives and how important it is to find effective solutions.(这次经历让我意识到交通拥堵对我们日常生活的影响有多大,以及找到有效解决方案是多么重要。)
Although it was a frustrating journey, it taught me the value of patience and the need to stay calm in difficult situations.(虽然这是一次令人沮丧的旅程,但它教会了我耐心的价值以及在困难情况下保持冷静的必要性。)
写作示范一
A Long Ride Home
Last weekend, I took a bus home as usual, expecting a smooth journey. However, I was soon caught in a terrible traffic jam.
The bus moved at a snail's pace. The road was filled with cars, buses, and trucks, all bumper - to - bumper. The vehicles hardly budged for a long time. People in the bus were getting impatient, sighing and complaining. Some were checking their watches frequently, worried about being late.
This experience made me realize how much traffic congestion can disrupt our lives. It not only wastes our time but also causes stress. We should all work together to find ways to ease traffic, like using public transport more often. Only in this way can we enjoy a more convenient life.
写作示范二
A Long Ride Home
Last weekend, I hopped on the bus, looking forward to getting home quickly. But before long, the bus came to a standstill.
I was shocked to see a sea of vehicles on the road. Cars were lined up for miles, and the buses were stuck in the middle. The drivers kept blowing their horns, creating a noisy and chaotic atmosphere. Passengers on the bus were restless, some even arguing with the bus driver about the delay.
This long - awaited ride home made me think a lot. Traffic congestion is a big problem that needs our attention. We need to develop better transportation systems and encourage more people to carpool or use bicycles. This way, we can make our roads less crowded and our journeys more pleasant.
写作示范三
A Long Ride Home
Last weekend, I boarded the bus, excited to return home. But my mood quickly changed when we were stuck in traffic.
The traffic was so heavy that the bus could barely move. The cars in front were like a long chain, blocking our way. The minutes turned into hours, and the bus was still in the same place. Passengers were frustrated, some were making phone calls to explain their lateness.
This experience taught me the importance of patience. Traffic jams are inevitable, but how we respond to them matters. We should stay calm and hope for the best. Also, we need to take action to improve the traffic situation, such as promoting green travel. Only then can we avoid such annoying delays in the future.
【答案】
A Long Ride Home
Last weekend, I experienced a frustrating traffic jam on my way home from school.
The bus was moving at a snail’s pace due to the heavy congestion, and it took us more than two hours to cover a distance that would normally take just thirty minutes. The streets were packed with vehicles, and the honking of horns was incessant. I felt exhausted and impatient, realizing how disruptive traffic jams can be to our daily lives.
This experience has taught me the importance of planning ahead and considering alternative routes or transportation methods to avoid such delays in the future.