应用文写作--英语作文 AI 批改，学生的看法与实用建议 讲义-广东省揭阳2024-2025学年高二上学期期末英语试卷
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| 名称 | 应用文写作--英语作文 AI 批改，学生的看法与实用建议 讲义-广东省揭阳2024-2025学年高二上学期期末英语试卷 |  | |
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应用文写作
假定你是甄益忠，揭阳第一中学104届高二级的学生。最近，英语老师Jack Young打算使用“E听说读写”App的AI技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给Jack Young写一封邮件，内容包括：
1、利弊分析；
2、相关建议。
*注意：1.词数不少于80；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
写作提纲
第一段：表明写信目的，对老师打算使用 “E 听说读写” App 的 AI 技术辅助英语作文批改一事发表看法，先表达对老师积极探索新教学方法的认可。
第二段：进行利弊分析，利的方面可提及批改效率高、提供即时反馈、指出语法和拼写错误精准等；弊的方面可阐述缺乏人性化理解、无法准确评判文章思想深度、过度依赖影响自主思考能力等。接着提出相关建议，如建议老师结合 AI 批改和人工批改、利用 AI 提供的反馈引导学生深度思考、设定 AI 批改后的讨论环节等。
第三段：总结观点，再次感谢老师的付出，期待老师的回复，表达对未来英语学习的展望。
语言积累
短语：
express one's opinion（表达某人的观点）
be in favor of（支持，赞成）
make use of（利用）
bring about（带来，造成）
in terms of（在…… 方面）
depend too much on（过度依赖）
provide with（提供）
combine...with...（把…… 和…… 结合）
contribute to（有助于）
look forward to（期待）
佳句：
I'm writing to express my views on your plan to use the AI technology of the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App to assist in English composition correction.（我写信是为了表达我对您打算使用 “E 听说读写” App 的 AI 技术辅助英语作文批改计划的看法。）
Undoubtedly, this new approach brings about a series of benefits. For example, it can correct compositions at a high speed, providing students with instant feedback.（毫无疑问，这种新方法带来了一系列好处。例如，它可以快速批改作文，为学生提供即时反馈。）
However, every coin has two sides. The AI, lacking human - like understanding, may not be able to accurately evaluate the depth of thought in an article.（然而，凡事都有两面性。AI 缺乏人类般的理解能力，可能无法准确评估文章的思想深度。）
I suggest that you combine AI - assisted correction with manual correction, making full use of the advantages of both.（我建议您将 AI 辅助批改与人工批改相结合，充分发挥两者的优势。）
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of some help, and I'm looking forward to your reply.（我衷心希望我的建议能有所帮助，期待您的回复。）
写作示范一
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm extremely glad to hear about your plan to use the AI technology in the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App for English composition correction.
There's no doubt that it has many advantages. Firstly, it can correct our compositions in a flash, saving you a great deal of time. Secondly, the instant feedback it provides helps us understand our mistakes right away. However, it also has drawbacks. It may not understand the unique ideas in our writing due to the lack of human touch, and over - reliance on it may weaken our independent thinking ability.
To make better use of it, I suggest you use AI - assisted correction as a first step and then give us further guidance based on your professional judgment. Also, we could have group discussions about the AI - generated feedback.
Thank you for your hard work. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
写作示范二
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to share my thoughts on your idea of using the AI in the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App for English composition grading.
On the plus side, the high - speed correction by AI can quickly point out common grammar and spelling errors, which is very efficient. It also offers a variety of sentence - improving suggestions. But on the downside, it fails to appreciate the cultural connotations and emotional expressions in our writing.
To solve these problems, I recommend that you go through the AI - corrected compositions again to add a human touch. Moreover, we can have a class activity to analyze the AI - feedback together.
Thanks for your continuous efforts to improve our English learning. I'm eager to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
写作示范三
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm quite excited about your plan to introduce AI - assisted composition correction from the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App.
The benefits are obvious. It can mark a large number of compositions at once, and the detailed reports it gives help us learn from our mistakes. But we may become too dependent on it, and it can't fully understand the creativity in our writing.
I propose that you use the AI - generated results as a reference and then give us personalized comments. Additionally, we can have a competition based on the AI - corrected compositions to stimulate our interest.
Thank you for always trying new ways to help us. I'm looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
参考答案
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to give you my opinions on using the AI technology of the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App to assist in English composition correction.
The use of this AI technology has its pros and cons. On the one hand, it offers remarkable efficiency. It can quickly scan through our compositions, pinpointing grammar and spelling mistakes accurately. The instant feedback helps us improve our writing skills in a short time. Moreover, it provides various sample sentences and phrases, which can enrich our language expressions. On the other hand, the AI lacks the human touch. It may not fully understand the context and the unique ideas we convey in our writing. Sometimes, it may misjudge the logic and coherence of the article.
To make better use of this technology, I suggest that you combine AI - assisted correction with your own professional evaluation. You can use the AI results as a reference and then give us more in - depth and personalized comments. Also, it would be great if we could have a discussion session in class based on the AI - corrected compositions, so that we can learn from each other.
Thank you for your dedication to our English learning. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
假定你是甄益忠，揭阳第一中学104届高二级的学生。最近，英语老师Jack Young打算使用“E听说读写”App的AI技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给Jack Young写一封邮件，内容包括：
1、利弊分析；
2、相关建议。
*注意：1.词数不少于80；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
写作提纲
第一段：表明写信目的，对老师打算使用 “E 听说读写” App 的 AI 技术辅助英语作文批改一事发表看法，先表达对老师积极探索新教学方法的认可。
第二段：进行利弊分析，利的方面可提及批改效率高、提供即时反馈、指出语法和拼写错误精准等；弊的方面可阐述缺乏人性化理解、无法准确评判文章思想深度、过度依赖影响自主思考能力等。接着提出相关建议，如建议老师结合 AI 批改和人工批改、利用 AI 提供的反馈引导学生深度思考、设定 AI 批改后的讨论环节等。
第三段：总结观点，再次感谢老师的付出，期待老师的回复，表达对未来英语学习的展望。
语言积累
短语：
express one's opinion（表达某人的观点）
be in favor of（支持，赞成）
make use of（利用）
bring about（带来，造成）
in terms of（在…… 方面）
depend too much on（过度依赖）
provide with（提供）
combine...with...（把…… 和…… 结合）
contribute to（有助于）
look forward to（期待）
佳句：
I'm writing to express my views on your plan to use the AI technology of the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App to assist in English composition correction.（我写信是为了表达我对您打算使用 “E 听说读写” App 的 AI 技术辅助英语作文批改计划的看法。）
Undoubtedly, this new approach brings about a series of benefits. For example, it can correct compositions at a high speed, providing students with instant feedback.（毫无疑问，这种新方法带来了一系列好处。例如，它可以快速批改作文，为学生提供即时反馈。）
However, every coin has two sides. The AI, lacking human - like understanding, may not be able to accurately evaluate the depth of thought in an article.（然而，凡事都有两面性。AI 缺乏人类般的理解能力，可能无法准确评估文章的思想深度。）
I suggest that you combine AI - assisted correction with manual correction, making full use of the advantages of both.（我建议您将 AI 辅助批改与人工批改相结合，充分发挥两者的优势。）
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of some help, and I'm looking forward to your reply.（我衷心希望我的建议能有所帮助，期待您的回复。）
写作示范一
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm extremely glad to hear about your plan to use the AI technology in the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App for English composition correction.
There's no doubt that it has many advantages. Firstly, it can correct our compositions in a flash, saving you a great deal of time. Secondly, the instant feedback it provides helps us understand our mistakes right away. However, it also has drawbacks. It may not understand the unique ideas in our writing due to the lack of human touch, and over - reliance on it may weaken our independent thinking ability.
To make better use of it, I suggest you use AI - assisted correction as a first step and then give us further guidance based on your professional judgment. Also, we could have group discussions about the AI - generated feedback.
Thank you for your hard work. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
写作示范二
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to share my thoughts on your idea of using the AI in the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App for English composition grading.
On the plus side, the high - speed correction by AI can quickly point out common grammar and spelling errors, which is very efficient. It also offers a variety of sentence - improving suggestions. But on the downside, it fails to appreciate the cultural connotations and emotional expressions in our writing.
To solve these problems, I recommend that you go through the AI - corrected compositions again to add a human touch. Moreover, we can have a class activity to analyze the AI - feedback together.
Thanks for your continuous efforts to improve our English learning. I'm eager to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
写作示范三
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm quite excited about your plan to introduce AI - assisted composition correction from the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App.
The benefits are obvious. It can mark a large number of compositions at once, and the detailed reports it gives help us learn from our mistakes. But we may become too dependent on it, and it can't fully understand the creativity in our writing.
I propose that you use the AI - generated results as a reference and then give us personalized comments. Additionally, we can have a competition based on the AI - corrected compositions to stimulate our interest.
Thank you for always trying new ways to help us. I'm looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong
参考答案
Dear Jack Young，
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to give you my opinions on using the AI technology of the “E Listen, Speak, Read and Write” App to assist in English composition correction.
The use of this AI technology has its pros and cons. On the one hand, it offers remarkable efficiency. It can quickly scan through our compositions, pinpointing grammar and spelling mistakes accurately. The instant feedback helps us improve our writing skills in a short time. Moreover, it provides various sample sentences and phrases, which can enrich our language expressions. On the other hand, the AI lacks the human touch. It may not fully understand the context and the unique ideas we convey in our writing. Sometimes, it may misjudge the logic and coherence of the article.
To make better use of this technology, I suggest that you combine AI - assisted correction with your own professional evaluation. You can use the AI results as a reference and then give us more in - depth and personalized comments. Also, it would be great if we could have a discussion session in class based on the AI - corrected compositions, so that we can learn from each other.
Thank you for your dedication to our English learning. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhen Yizhong