2025年中考英语热门话题写作话题人际沟通
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2025年中考英语热门话题写作话题《人际沟通》
一、考情分析
考查角度及考查频率 与他人交往的经历及个人感受 人际交往中的困难及建议
二、写作指导
五步写作法——审列扩连查
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰：自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对该问题的见解。100词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1）审人称：以第二人称为主
2）审时态：以一般现在时为主
3）审主题：介绍你对减肥的见解
4）审文体：应用文
5）定要点 1：提出没有必要担心并说出理由
6）定要点 2：提出减肥的方式
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段 (Beginning)：引出问题（需要减肥）。（开头已给出。）
中间段 (Body)：与减肥相关的建议。
结尾 (Ending)：提出希望。结尾段提出希望，与首段相互呼应。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：引出问题，表明有建议可提供
[一般句] As you mentioned in the letter, I have some advice for you.
[高分句] I would like to share with you some useful advice according to your problems. (would like to do sth.)
中间段：具体阐述与减肥相关的建议
【建议一】 [一般句] Don’t worry about it too much. Be confident and positive.
[高分句] There is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident and positive. (There is no need to do sth.)
【建议二】 [一般句] Don’t eat high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables.
[高分句] Eat more nutritious food such as fruit and vegetables instead of high-fat food.(such as, instead of)
【建议三】 [一般句] You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly.
高分句 1. (a good idea to do sth.)
2. （the + 比较级 , the+ 比较级）
结尾：提出希望
[一般句] I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
[高分句] I do hope my earnest suggestions can give you a leg-up.
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文]
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.I would like to share with you some useful advice according to your problems.
Firstly , there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident and positive. Inner beauty is more important than appearance. Secondly , keep a healthy diet. Eat more nutritious food such as fruit and vegetables instead of high-fat food. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly , doing proper exercise is necessary. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more regularly you exercise, the healthier and happier you will be.
I do hope my earnest suggestions can give you a leg-up.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五步 查全文 得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
素材积累
人际关系：与某人相处融洽 get on/along well with sb.
与某人保持联系 keep in touch with sb.
乐于助人 be ready to help others
向某人寻求帮助 turn to sb. for help
与某人交流 communicate with sb.
相互学习 learn from each other
名言激励：良言一句三冬暖 , 恶语伤人六月寒。
Good words are warm in winter; bad words hurt in June.
友谊就像阳光，点亮我们的生活。
Friendship is like sunshine that brightens our life.
患难见真情。A friend in need is a friend indeed.
实战演练
假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友 Eric 发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；2. 给出建议；3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右，开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting on with your classmates.___________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
【高分句】
1．Early to bed and early to rise is a good idea to keep you fit and regular exercise also helps a lot.
2．The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be./The more regularly you exercise, the healthier and happier you will be.
【实战演练】
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 人称：以第二人称为主 要点：就如何与新同学相处给出建议
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting on with your classmates.It is understandable for new students to have such problems.
I have some suggestions for you.Firstly, I strongly advise you to keep smiling.It's a way to show you're friendly.What's more, you are supposed to be helpful.Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others.Finally, try to find someone who has the same interest.If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about.Then you will be friends soon.
Above are my suggestions for you.I really hope you will get on well with your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Ming
一、考情分析
考查角度及考查频率 与他人交往的经历及个人感受 人际交往中的困难及建议
二、写作指导
五步写作法——审列扩连查
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰：自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对该问题的见解。100词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1）审人称：以第二人称为主
2）审时态：以一般现在时为主
3）审主题：介绍你对减肥的见解
4）审文体：应用文
5）定要点 1：提出没有必要担心并说出理由
6）定要点 2：提出减肥的方式
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段 (Beginning)：引出问题（需要减肥）。（开头已给出。）
中间段 (Body)：与减肥相关的建议。
结尾 (Ending)：提出希望。结尾段提出希望，与首段相互呼应。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：引出问题，表明有建议可提供
[一般句] As you mentioned in the letter, I have some advice for you.
[高分句] I would like to share with you some useful advice according to your problems. (would like to do sth.)
中间段：具体阐述与减肥相关的建议
【建议一】 [一般句] Don’t worry about it too much. Be confident and positive.
[高分句] There is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident and positive. (There is no need to do sth.)
【建议二】 [一般句] Don’t eat high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables.
[高分句] Eat more nutritious food such as fruit and vegetables instead of high-fat food.(such as, instead of)
【建议三】 [一般句] You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly.
高分句 1. (a good idea to do sth.)
2. （the + 比较级 , the+ 比较级）
结尾：提出希望
[一般句] I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
[高分句] I do hope my earnest suggestions can give you a leg-up.
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文]
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.I would like to share with you some useful advice according to your problems.
Firstly , there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident and positive. Inner beauty is more important than appearance. Secondly , keep a healthy diet. Eat more nutritious food such as fruit and vegetables instead of high-fat food. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly , doing proper exercise is necessary. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more regularly you exercise, the healthier and happier you will be.
I do hope my earnest suggestions can give you a leg-up.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五步 查全文 得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
素材积累
人际关系：与某人相处融洽 get on/along well with sb.
与某人保持联系 keep in touch with sb.
乐于助人 be ready to help others
向某人寻求帮助 turn to sb. for help
与某人交流 communicate with sb.
相互学习 learn from each other
名言激励：良言一句三冬暖 , 恶语伤人六月寒。
Good words are warm in winter; bad words hurt in June.
友谊就像阳光，点亮我们的生活。
Friendship is like sunshine that brightens our life.
患难见真情。A friend in need is a friend indeed.
实战演练
假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友 Eric 发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；2. 给出建议；3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右，开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting on with your classmates.___________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
【高分句】
1．Early to bed and early to rise is a good idea to keep you fit and regular exercise also helps a lot.
2．The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be./The more regularly you exercise, the healthier and happier you will be.
【实战演练】
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 人称：以第二人称为主 要点：就如何与新同学相处给出建议
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting on with your classmates.It is understandable for new students to have such problems.
I have some suggestions for you.Firstly, I strongly advise you to keep smiling.It's a way to show you're friendly.What's more, you are supposed to be helpful.Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others.Finally, try to find someone who has the same interest.If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about.Then you will be friends soon.
Above are my suggestions for you.I really hope you will get on well with your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Ming