2025届高考英语应用文专题练习:感谢信
一
(全国九省联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考)假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示谢意;
2.回忆难忘的瞬间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
二
(浙江省A9协作体2024学年第一学期高二年级暑假返校考)假设你是李华,假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时收到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意,内容包括:
1.写邮件目的;
2.得到好友的哪些款待;
3.表达谢意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Judy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
三
(河北省保定部分高中2023-2024学年高一下学期3月月考)假定你是李华,你在刚刚结束的校英语作文比赛中荣获一等奖。请给帮助你的外教George写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.告知比赛结果;
2.回顾他的帮助;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2025届高考英语应用文专题练习:感谢信
范文及亮点分析
一
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well! ①Upon returning home, I found myself still immersed in the pleasant moments we shared together. ②Words fail to express my gratitude for your warm hospitality during the vacation, which impressed me with the great beauty and charm of your hometown.
③In my thought linger those cherished moments when I enjoyed the captivating stories about your hometown as we strolled along the shore, the warmth and satisfaction derived from the delicate cuisine you prepared for me. ④I still remember the evenings when we spent together gazing up at the starry sky and talking about our future aspiration. All these memories will remain fresh in my heart.
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点分析
高级结构:①we shared together为定语从句,省略了关系词that/which, 修饰先行moments词。
②which 引导非限制性定语从句
③In my thought linger those cherished moments为完全倒装句,介词短语In my thought位于句首。正常语序为 those cherished moments linger in my thought;
when 引导定语从句,修饰先行词moments; as 引导时间状语从句;derived from the delicate cuisine you prepared for me 为过去分词作后置定语,修饰the warmth and satisfaction,其中you prepared for me为定语从句,修饰先行词the delicate cuisine。
④ when 引导定语从句,修饰先行词 the evenings。
高级词汇: immersed Words fail to express my gratitude for impressed me with linger cherished captivating derived from gazing up future aspiration.
二
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well! ①I am writing to extend my most profound gratitude for the warm hospitality you have given me during my vacation.
②I always remember the time when you showed me around the attractions of your hometown, gave me a deep insight into local customs, and prepared the authentic hometown cuisine by yourself, the flavor of which still lingers in my mind with an endless aftertaste. Plus, you devoted your time to keeping me company and helping me learn more about the local culture and history, ③which strengthened my emotional bond with your hometown.
④It was your warmth and thoughtfulness that brought me a remarkable journey. Words fails to express my thanks. Looking forward to meeting with you again in the near future! (129 words)
亮点分析
高级结构:① you have given me during my vacation为定语从句,修饰先行词 the warm hospitality.
②when引导定语从句,修饰先行词 the time;the flavor of which still lingers in my mind with an endless aftertaste为定语从句,对先行词the authentic hometown cuisine进行补充说明。
③which 引导非限制性定语从句
④It was your warmth and thoughtfulness that brought me a remarkable journey为强调句型。强调主语your warmth and thoughtfulness。
高级词汇: extend my most profound gratitude for
showed me around gave me a deep insight into
lingers in my mind devoted your time to keeping me company
strengthened Thoughtfulness remarkable Words fails to express my thanks
三
Dear George,
I hope this email finds you well! ①I am glad to keep you informed that I have won the first prize in the English composition contest which has just ended in our school.
②I still remember the days when you corrected my grammatical mistakes and instructed me how to organize and develop my argument with great patience. ③It is your professional knowledge and rigorous teaching attitude that benefit me a lot. ④Without your help, I would not have made such great progress.
Words fail to express my gratitude for your help and support. ⑤Your generous assistance has not only improved my writing skills, but also stimulated my enthusiasm and confidence in English learning. (113 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点分析
高级结构:①
主系表结构:“I am glad” 是句子的主干部分,为主系表结构,“I” 是主语,“am” 是系动词,“glad” 作表语,表明主语 “我” 的状态是 “高兴的”。
宾语补足语:“to keep you informed” 是动词不定式短语作宾语补足语,对 “glad” 的内容进行补充说明。“keep sb. informed” 是固定搭配,意思是 “使某人知晓”,“you” 是 “keep” 的宾语,“informed” 是过去分词作宾语补足语,与 “you” 存在逻辑上的被动关系,即 “使你被通知到” 。
宾语从句:“that I have won the first prize in the English composition contest” 是宾语从句,作 “keep you informed” 中 “informed” 的宾语。其中,“I” 是宾语从句的主语,“have won” 是现在完成时的谓语动词,“the first prize” 是宾语,“in the English composition contest” 是地点状语,表明在 “英语作文比赛中” 获奖。
定语从句:“which has just ended in our school” 是定语从句,修饰先行词 “the English composition contest”。“which” 是关系代词,在从句中作主语,“has just ended” 是从句的谓语,“in our school” 是地点状语,说明比赛结束的地点是在 “我们学校” 。
②
主谓语宾结构:“I still remember the days” 是句子的主干,“I” 是主语,“still remember” 是谓语,“the days” 是宾语。
定语从句:“when you corrected my grammatical mistakes and instructed me how to organize and develop my argument with great patience” 是定语从句,修饰先行词 “the days”。其中,“when” 是关系副词,在定语从句中充当时间状语,相当于 “during which”,表示 “在那些日子里”。
从句谓语部分:在定语从句中,“you” 是主语,“corrected” 和 “instructed” 是并列的谓语动词。“corrected my grammatical mistakes” 表示 “纠正我的语法错误” ,“instructed me how to organize and develop my argument” 是 “instruct sb. how to do sth.” 结构,表示 “指导某人如何做某事”,“with great patience” 是方式状语,修饰 “corrected” 和 “instructed”,表明动作是 “非常耐心地” 进行的。
③It is your professional knowledge and rigorous teaching attitude that benefit me a lot.强调句型
④Without your help, I would not have made such great progress.为虚拟语气
⑤ not only..., but also 结构
高级词汇: keep you informed rigorous stimulated enthusiasm