2025届高三英语复习读后续写4 心理描写 导学案
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英语培优4 学案 心理情感描写+培优3跟踪训练讲评
一 培优3跟踪训练扩句优化
To my surprise, they presented me with the new bicycle and the bag as well as showed their gratitude for my good service in rain or shine.
优化1-1：Mr. Gordon led me to the bicycle and said it was a Christmas present for me. He went on to explain that they were grateful that I spared no effort to make sure the papers were delivered regardless of the weather. 间接引语
优化1-2. "This is for you," Mrs. Gordon said. I was dumbstruck. I didn't know what to say. Finally, one of the women led me to the center of the room. "You are the best paperboy we've ever had," she said. "There's never been a day when a paper was missing or late, never a day when it got wet. We've all seen you out there in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart. And so we thought you ought to have a bicycle." 对话
Hardly had I seen that there were my customers and a new bicycle with a bag full of envelopes hanging on the handlebar of it when I entered the room, which was beyond my expectations.
优化2. Hardly had I entered the room when all my subscribers said in one voice, “Surprise!”. Then a new bicycle with a bag full of envelopes hanging on the handlebar came into sight.I was confused. 3. Knowing that there would be few chances to earn money from Mrs. Riley, I disappointedly received the fact that I may fail to own a canary. None cared about her so that Mrs. Riley lay in bed lonely and helplessly.
I spent a sleepless night imagining the room, where she was struggling with the evil of illness.
优化3. Since I could no longer work for Mrs. Riley, I had to go to find another job to earn enough money to buy a canary. But what about Mrs. Riley She was lying in bed with no one to help her. What if her groceries ran out Who would take care of Sam With those thoughts weighed heavily on my mind, I tossed and turned in bed, unable to fall asleep until very late.
4.Quickly,it dawns on me that inside them were not only the things but also the kindness so that a flush of movement swept over me.
优化4. Realizing that what they presented me was not only money but also encouragement and recognition of my job, I was moved to tears.
With patient heart, Mr. Miceli taught me how to ride it.
优化5. Kindness did not just stop there, though. The next day, when I went to collect my papers, Mr. Miceli said, “Bring your bicycle here. I’ll teach you to ride it.”
After a night thinking Early the next morning, with a bag full of groceries I went to Mrs Riley and told her my decision that I was going to continue to work for her without being paid.
Hearing such beautiful words, I couldn't stop jumping up and down and whooping.
优化7. The unexpected generosity overwhelmed me with a mix of gratitude and sadness. Mrs. Riley, despite her state of health, found a way to ensure my well-being. A lump formed in my throat as I realized the depth of her sacrifice.
But with my thinking twice on seconds thoughts I refused her offer without any hesitation since she needed Sam more than me.
Tears of movement gratitude streamed down my cheeks. / I was moved to tears.
A few days later, Mr. Miceli taught me how to ride the bicycle. 不具体
I felt depressed that I couldn't earn money from Mrs. Riley to buy a canary of my own. Then I realized that how lonely and helpless she was, she could only stay in bed. Sadness and concerns surrounded by my mind all over the night,I thought about it until it was too late. There was no doubt that I spent a restless night.
优化11. Worries about finding another job combined with the ache of parting from the elderly woman who had become like family made me wide awake late into night. In the darkness, however, I clung to the hope that somehow things would work out.
二 心理描写
为什么进行心理情感描写？
故事发展双线
内容充实饱满
心理情感描写手段：展现
心理描写对比
Janelle felt worried as she got ready for her first presentation as head of her division. Hopefully, she could prove she deserved the promotion she’d been delighted to get last week. But with five minutes to go, she was filled with fear that she would do something really embarrassing in front of the group. She was almost too scared to enter the conference room as she nervously opened the door. Walking in, she tried to look confident.
Janelle drew a deep, shaky breath and gripped her briefcase 身体动作. Just five minutes to go具体细节 before her first presentation as head of her division. I have to prove myself, she thought, 内心独白especially after pushing so hard for this job强动词. When the boss promoted her last week, she had almost floated home强动词. Now, her stomach was in knots and her knees turned to jelly身体动作，身体表现. What if she forgot something or couldn’t answer their questions 内心独白 Janelle’s cheeks burned with awful imaginings 身体表现. At the conference room, she fumbled with 笨拙地去够the door handle强动词. Smile! she ordered herself. Stand up straight and smile! 内心独白
强动词
对话或内心独白
身体感觉、身体语言
面部表情
具体行为、细节
姐姐的成长 情感变化：envy —— love and affection
A wave of colour and smell washed over me.
I used to love picking flowers, but today I was so overcome with tiredness and envy. Why bother to bring them flowers when they were enjoying Rosa at home without me 内心独白
Silently I helped my aunt arrange flowers.
I complained with a huge yawn (哈欠).
I said, guiltily hiding away my envy of Rosa.
Stepping into the field, I began to pick little flowers. （I felt better in the field. ）It was like gathering my childhood memories. I remembered how I’d sit with Dad, making flower chains, crowning (授予) each other with the silliest titles: Queen of Junk Food and King of Mess. My smile grew wider. The shining yellow flowers reminded me of the color in Rosa’s baby room. Was she awake 内心独白I wondered.
心理描写词汇、句型
多个形容词作状语 心理情感+动作
Nervous and scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech.
Depressed and helpless, Eric burst in tears, wondering what to do next.
so...that结果状从(倒装)
I was so nervous that I heard my heart pounding strongly.
So nervous was I that I heard my heart pounding strongly.
使用无灵主语句
情感名词+ 动词：seize(抓住), catch(过去式caught), strike(过去struck), surround(围绕着), take hold of(控制), wash over (让人感到), surge through(涌上), come over(包围／支配), envelop (笼罩), overwhelm (使难以承受)， give way to ， swell with pride / a new understanding of, (one’s face, eyes) light up ,
Courage deserted him．他没有了勇气。 Deserted "舍弃"
Anxiety tore him into pieces．他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。
By now,optimism had given way to doubt．现在，乐观变成了怀疑。
Anger choked my words．我气得说不出话来。 choked "阻塞；抑制"
A flood of horror suddenly swept over him．他突然感到不寒而栗。
Despair seized /haunted him at the thought of his failure in the exam．想到考试的失败，他万念俱灰。
Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech．我惊讶得说不出话来。
Fear rooted her to the ground．恐惧使她站在地上一动不动。 root "固定"
An embarrassed laugh escapes my throat．我不由自主尴尬地笑了一声。
escape "声音（不自觉地）"由．...．发出
Tiredness began to creep over me,like tide. 疲倦像潮水一样向我袭来。
I used to love this, but today I was so overcome with tiredness and envy.
His heart swelled with pride as he watched his daughter collect her prize.
Her face lit up with a glimmer of hope.
使用让步状从(倒装句型）心理情感+动作
Tired as/though he was, David made up his mind to finish the race.
Exhausted and hungry as/though he was, he carried on climbing the mountain.
(5) with 复合结构 心理情感+动作
Hearing that he was admitted into Sun Yat-Sen University, he jumped up with eyes glittering with joy.
Frightened and nervous, Hector knocked on the door, with heart beating wildly.
(6) with+名词 心理情感+动作
With a heavy heart, I traveled back to my hometown on the sad occasion of Dad's death.
She blushed with embarrassment.
He jumped with joy.
分词或分词独立主格结构 心理情感+动作
“Why ”Del asked, looking confused.
Inspired by what just happened, I immediately asked my father to pull alongside.
I am always ready to help those in need, believing what goes around does come around.
We yelled for help at the top of our lungs, a wave of fright washing over us.
“But you and Mum seem so close,” I said, guiltily hiding away my envy of Rosa.
用问句表达内心独白
What if no one came to help us Would our boat be turned over by the waves kicking up 担心，紧张
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them
三 培优3跟踪训练 审题 + 扩句 讲评
审题、内容构建
内容构建很关键，务必用心做到：提问题+简单回答
Passage 6 消除流言
审主题：人际关系，语言的力量
审题示范：
At recess the next day, I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Question 1：My feelings. I felt upset and guilty.
Question 2：What did I do I apologized to him.
The last sentence of paragraph 1:Del forgave me.
Now that Del had forgiven me, I decided to do more before the recess was over.
Question4: What did I do then I told the guys the truth.
Question5:Their responses They invited Del to play with them.
Question6: What happened later Del no longer called me the nickname.
A proper ending: Del and I became good friends. Words have the power to hurt and heal. I will always keep in mind that they can wound and cause pain, but they also have the ability to soothe, comfort, and heal.
Passage7 丢失的20元钱
主题：成长，诚信；助人，我被别人帮助
审题示范
As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it.
Question 1：My thoughts Regretful and upset.
Question 2：Their response They responded that they did find a 20 note and asked me to go to pick it up.
Question 3：What did I do I rushed there hopefully.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: The assistant gave me a brand new 20. I realized it was not mine.
I said, “Oh ... This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.
Question4: My feelings. I was torn between the desire to take it and to be honest.
Question5: What happened later The assistant told me the note was from my roommate. I was moved by their kindness and consideration. I finally accepted their help.
OR: The note belonged to someone else. I did not take the note, but I felt quiet inside because I was honest.
A proper ending: I spent the following two weeks with the recovered 20 pounds. 升华？
OR: I pulled through the following two weeks without the 20 pounds. 升华？
扩句训练：
金丝雀之歌 1. 心理描写：担心、纠结 、展现（内心独白、具体细节）
However, that night I kept thinking about my canary and Mrs. Riley.
Question 1：My thoughts about my canary My thoughts about Mrs. Riley
I could no longer earn money from Mrs. Riley to buy a canary of my own.
She was ill in bed with no one caring about her. She was lonely and helpless.
It wasn’t fair that Riley had to get sick. How would I buy a canary of my own 内心独白
The weight of uncertainty settled on my shoulders like a heavy blanket. 比喻
The thought that I could no longer continue to earn money to buy a canary of my own combined with the worry about Mrs. Riley weighed heavily on my mind.
Question 2：How did I keep thinking Did I fall asleep I thought about it until it was too late. I spent a restless night. 展现：具体表现，强动词
Then I thought about what my mom had said. Mrs. Riley was more alone than I was. At least I had Mom. Mrs. Riley only had Sam. How would she get things from the store without me
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage. Mrs. Riley's weak voice echoed in my mind, "You can't work for me anymore."
Worry haunted me at the thought of the scene of Mrs. Riley lying in bed lonely and helplessly.
haunt（不快的事情）萦绕于脑际，难以忘却 For years she was haunted by guilt.多年来她一直感到愧疚。
All these thoughts haunted me the whole night.
Question 3：My final decision What did I do I decided to continue to work for Mrs. Riley without being paid. I went to Mrs. Riley the next morning and told her my decision. 展现：具体做了什么
The next day I ran upstairs with a bag of groceries. Mrs. Riley was still in bed. I emptied the bag,put the milk in the tiny refrigerator, and then began dusting around (动作链). Sam hopped on his swing as I dusted the top of his cage.
The following day, carrying a bag of groceries, I hurried upstairs. Mrs. Riley remained in bed. After unpacking the bag and placing the milk in the small refrigerator, I went on to dust the room. Meanwhile, Sam cheerfully hopped on his swing, observing my efforts as I carefully dusted the top of his cage.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: Every day I went to Mrs. Riley’s as usual.
And I continued like this for the following days.
After one week, she said, “I've been thinking, girl, since I can't pay you, I'll—I'll give you Sam.”
Question4: My response I was surprised and delighted.
My breath caught in my throat. I couldn't believe it. Sam. All mine.内心独白 Sam looked at me.He chirped, as if to say,"Well "写金丝雀 I considered it. Someday I'd have enough money to buy a canary of my own. 内心独白But Mrs. Riley would never get another one. Plus, if I took Sam, Mrs. Riley would be all alone.
Question5: Did I accept her offer No, because she needed Sam more than me.
Could I take him Sam waited. Mrs. Riley waited. “I can't take Sam," I said. "He belongs to you. And I’ll keep working for you. You don’t have to pay me."
I declined her offer, saying I would earn enough money to buy a canary later on and I would continue to work for her without being paid.
A proper ending: I continued to work for Mrs. Riley. / The canary became the bond between us. /I didn’t earn enough money to buy a canary, but I was happy / pleased / satisfied that Mrs. Riley was no longer lonely because of my help. Roses given, fragrance in hand, which was what I experienced in person.
自行车的故事
The door flew open, and Mr. Gordon dragged me inside.
Question 1: Who else was inside What did I see
All my customers were inside. There was also a new bicycle with a bag full of envelopes hanging on the handlebar of it.
Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room, I saw a new bicycle, a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar.倒装句描写场景
Question2: What did Mr. Gordon and other people say and do
The presented me with the new bicycle and the bag and thanked me for my good service.
“A Christmas present our best paperboy!” Mr. Gordon said. Sensing my confusion, he continued, “We’ve all seen you in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart, so we suppose you ought to have a bicycle.” 对话
Question 3: My reaction Shocked but grateful.
Deeply touched, I felt tears of gratitude filling my eyes.
All I could say was "Thank you." I said it over and over.
The last sentence of para1: I waved them goodbye with the new bicycle and envelopes.
After walking the bicycle home, I opened those envelopes.
Question 4: What was inside the envelopes The fee of the newspapers, some extra money and some notes.
In the envelopes were Christmas cards from every subscriber, along with their subscription fees and tips.
Question5: My feelings: Moved.
The touching messages and thoughtful tips in each envelope truly touched my heart.
Question6: What happened later Mr. Miceli taught me how to ride the bicycle.故事山模型（解决问题）
Kindness did not end there, though. The next day, when I got to Mr. Miceli’s garage, he was waiting outside. “Bring your bike tomorrow morning, and I’ll teach you to ride,” he offered.
A proper ending:
With the new bicycle, I could send newspapers much faster. I was offered another route. I still used Mom’s two-wheeled shopping cart when it rained or snowed. Looking back on it now, I am grateful that the kindness of the Chicago neighbourhood has stuck in my heart and made me what I am today.
When I felt comfortable on a bike, Mr. Miceli asked me to deliver a second route. Delivering both routes on my new bike, I really appreciated the kind Chicagoans’ love and support.
一 培优3跟踪训练扩句优化
To my surprise, they presented me with the new bicycle and the bag as well as showed their gratitude for my good service in rain or shine.
优化1-1：Mr. Gordon led me to the bicycle and said it was a Christmas present for me. He went on to explain that they were grateful that I spared no effort to make sure the papers were delivered regardless of the weather. 间接引语
优化1-2. "This is for you," Mrs. Gordon said. I was dumbstruck. I didn't know what to say. Finally, one of the women led me to the center of the room. "You are the best paperboy we've ever had," she said. "There's never been a day when a paper was missing or late, never a day when it got wet. We've all seen you out there in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart. And so we thought you ought to have a bicycle." 对话
Hardly had I seen that there were my customers and a new bicycle with a bag full of envelopes hanging on the handlebar of it when I entered the room, which was beyond my expectations.
优化2. Hardly had I entered the room when all my subscribers said in one voice, “Surprise!”. Then a new bicycle with a bag full of envelopes hanging on the handlebar came into sight.I was confused. 3. Knowing that there would be few chances to earn money from Mrs. Riley, I disappointedly received the fact that I may fail to own a canary. None cared about her so that Mrs. Riley lay in bed lonely and helplessly.
I spent a sleepless night imagining the room, where she was struggling with the evil of illness.
优化3. Since I could no longer work for Mrs. Riley, I had to go to find another job to earn enough money to buy a canary. But what about Mrs. Riley She was lying in bed with no one to help her. What if her groceries ran out Who would take care of Sam With those thoughts weighed heavily on my mind, I tossed and turned in bed, unable to fall asleep until very late.
4.Quickly,it dawns on me that inside them were not only the things but also the kindness so that a flush of movement swept over me.
优化4. Realizing that what they presented me was not only money but also encouragement and recognition of my job, I was moved to tears.
With patient heart, Mr. Miceli taught me how to ride it.
优化5. Kindness did not just stop there, though. The next day, when I went to collect my papers, Mr. Miceli said, “Bring your bicycle here. I’ll teach you to ride it.”
After a night thinking Early the next morning, with a bag full of groceries I went to Mrs Riley and told her my decision that I was going to continue to work for her without being paid.
Hearing such beautiful words, I couldn't stop jumping up and down and whooping.
优化7. The unexpected generosity overwhelmed me with a mix of gratitude and sadness. Mrs. Riley, despite her state of health, found a way to ensure my well-being. A lump formed in my throat as I realized the depth of her sacrifice.
But with my thinking twice on seconds thoughts I refused her offer without any hesitation since she needed Sam more than me.
Tears of movement gratitude streamed down my cheeks. / I was moved to tears.
A few days later, Mr. Miceli taught me how to ride the bicycle. 不具体
I felt depressed that I couldn't earn money from Mrs. Riley to buy a canary of my own. Then I realized that how lonely and helpless she was, she could only stay in bed. Sadness and concerns surrounded by my mind all over the night,I thought about it until it was too late. There was no doubt that I spent a restless night.
优化11. Worries about finding another job combined with the ache of parting from the elderly woman who had become like family made me wide awake late into night. In the darkness, however, I clung to the hope that somehow things would work out.
二 心理描写
为什么进行心理情感描写？
故事发展双线
内容充实饱满
心理情感描写手段：展现
心理描写对比
Janelle felt worried as she got ready for her first presentation as head of her division. Hopefully, she could prove she deserved the promotion she’d been delighted to get last week. But with five minutes to go, she was filled with fear that she would do something really embarrassing in front of the group. She was almost too scared to enter the conference room as she nervously opened the door. Walking in, she tried to look confident.
Janelle drew a deep, shaky breath and gripped her briefcase 身体动作. Just five minutes to go具体细节 before her first presentation as head of her division. I have to prove myself, she thought, 内心独白especially after pushing so hard for this job强动词. When the boss promoted her last week, she had almost floated home强动词. Now, her stomach was in knots and her knees turned to jelly身体动作，身体表现. What if she forgot something or couldn’t answer their questions 内心独白 Janelle’s cheeks burned with awful imaginings 身体表现. At the conference room, she fumbled with 笨拙地去够the door handle强动词. Smile! she ordered herself. Stand up straight and smile! 内心独白
强动词
对话或内心独白
身体感觉、身体语言
面部表情
具体行为、细节
姐姐的成长 情感变化：envy —— love and affection
A wave of colour and smell washed over me.
I used to love picking flowers, but today I was so overcome with tiredness and envy. Why bother to bring them flowers when they were enjoying Rosa at home without me 内心独白
Silently I helped my aunt arrange flowers.
I complained with a huge yawn (哈欠).
I said, guiltily hiding away my envy of Rosa.
Stepping into the field, I began to pick little flowers. （I felt better in the field. ）It was like gathering my childhood memories. I remembered how I’d sit with Dad, making flower chains, crowning (授予) each other with the silliest titles: Queen of Junk Food and King of Mess. My smile grew wider. The shining yellow flowers reminded me of the color in Rosa’s baby room. Was she awake 内心独白I wondered.
心理描写词汇、句型
多个形容词作状语 心理情感+动作
Nervous and scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech.
Depressed and helpless, Eric burst in tears, wondering what to do next.
so...that结果状从(倒装)
I was so nervous that I heard my heart pounding strongly.
So nervous was I that I heard my heart pounding strongly.
使用无灵主语句
情感名词+ 动词：seize(抓住), catch(过去式caught), strike(过去struck), surround(围绕着), take hold of(控制), wash over (让人感到), surge through(涌上), come over(包围／支配), envelop (笼罩), overwhelm (使难以承受)， give way to ， swell with pride / a new understanding of, (one’s face, eyes) light up ,
Courage deserted him．他没有了勇气。 Deserted "舍弃"
Anxiety tore him into pieces．他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。
By now,optimism had given way to doubt．现在，乐观变成了怀疑。
Anger choked my words．我气得说不出话来。 choked "阻塞；抑制"
A flood of horror suddenly swept over him．他突然感到不寒而栗。
Despair seized /haunted him at the thought of his failure in the exam．想到考试的失败，他万念俱灰。
Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech．我惊讶得说不出话来。
Fear rooted her to the ground．恐惧使她站在地上一动不动。 root "固定"
An embarrassed laugh escapes my throat．我不由自主尴尬地笑了一声。
escape "声音（不自觉地）"由．...．发出
Tiredness began to creep over me,like tide. 疲倦像潮水一样向我袭来。
I used to love this, but today I was so overcome with tiredness and envy.
His heart swelled with pride as he watched his daughter collect her prize.
Her face lit up with a glimmer of hope.
使用让步状从(倒装句型）心理情感+动作
Tired as/though he was, David made up his mind to finish the race.
Exhausted and hungry as/though he was, he carried on climbing the mountain.
(5) with 复合结构 心理情感+动作
Hearing that he was admitted into Sun Yat-Sen University, he jumped up with eyes glittering with joy.
Frightened and nervous, Hector knocked on the door, with heart beating wildly.
(6) with+名词 心理情感+动作
With a heavy heart, I traveled back to my hometown on the sad occasion of Dad's death.
She blushed with embarrassment.
He jumped with joy.
分词或分词独立主格结构 心理情感+动作
“Why ”Del asked, looking confused.
Inspired by what just happened, I immediately asked my father to pull alongside.
I am always ready to help those in need, believing what goes around does come around.
We yelled for help at the top of our lungs, a wave of fright washing over us.
“But you and Mum seem so close,” I said, guiltily hiding away my envy of Rosa.
用问句表达内心独白
What if no one came to help us Would our boat be turned over by the waves kicking up 担心，紧张
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them
三 培优3跟踪训练 审题 + 扩句 讲评
审题、内容构建
内容构建很关键，务必用心做到：提问题+简单回答
Passage 6 消除流言
审主题：人际关系，语言的力量
审题示范：
At recess the next day, I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Question 1：My feelings. I felt upset and guilty.
Question 2：What did I do I apologized to him.
The last sentence of paragraph 1:Del forgave me.
Now that Del had forgiven me, I decided to do more before the recess was over.
Question4: What did I do then I told the guys the truth.
Question5:Their responses They invited Del to play with them.
Question6: What happened later Del no longer called me the nickname.
A proper ending: Del and I became good friends. Words have the power to hurt and heal. I will always keep in mind that they can wound and cause pain, but they also have the ability to soothe, comfort, and heal.
Passage7 丢失的20元钱
主题：成长，诚信；助人，我被别人帮助
审题示范
As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it.
Question 1：My thoughts Regretful and upset.
Question 2：Their response They responded that they did find a 20 note and asked me to go to pick it up.
Question 3：What did I do I rushed there hopefully.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: The assistant gave me a brand new 20. I realized it was not mine.
I said, “Oh ... This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.
Question4: My feelings. I was torn between the desire to take it and to be honest.
Question5: What happened later The assistant told me the note was from my roommate. I was moved by their kindness and consideration. I finally accepted their help.
OR: The note belonged to someone else. I did not take the note, but I felt quiet inside because I was honest.
A proper ending: I spent the following two weeks with the recovered 20 pounds. 升华？
OR: I pulled through the following two weeks without the 20 pounds. 升华？
扩句训练：
金丝雀之歌 1. 心理描写：担心、纠结 、展现（内心独白、具体细节）
However, that night I kept thinking about my canary and Mrs. Riley.
Question 1：My thoughts about my canary My thoughts about Mrs. Riley
I could no longer earn money from Mrs. Riley to buy a canary of my own.
She was ill in bed with no one caring about her. She was lonely and helpless.
It wasn’t fair that Riley had to get sick. How would I buy a canary of my own 内心独白
The weight of uncertainty settled on my shoulders like a heavy blanket. 比喻
The thought that I could no longer continue to earn money to buy a canary of my own combined with the worry about Mrs. Riley weighed heavily on my mind.
Question 2：How did I keep thinking Did I fall asleep I thought about it until it was too late. I spent a restless night. 展现：具体表现，强动词
Then I thought about what my mom had said. Mrs. Riley was more alone than I was. At least I had Mom. Mrs. Riley only had Sam. How would she get things from the store without me
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage. Mrs. Riley's weak voice echoed in my mind, "You can't work for me anymore."
Worry haunted me at the thought of the scene of Mrs. Riley lying in bed lonely and helplessly.
haunt（不快的事情）萦绕于脑际，难以忘却 For years she was haunted by guilt.多年来她一直感到愧疚。
All these thoughts haunted me the whole night.
Question 3：My final decision What did I do I decided to continue to work for Mrs. Riley without being paid. I went to Mrs. Riley the next morning and told her my decision. 展现：具体做了什么
The next day I ran upstairs with a bag of groceries. Mrs. Riley was still in bed. I emptied the bag,put the milk in the tiny refrigerator, and then began dusting around (动作链). Sam hopped on his swing as I dusted the top of his cage.
The following day, carrying a bag of groceries, I hurried upstairs. Mrs. Riley remained in bed. After unpacking the bag and placing the milk in the small refrigerator, I went on to dust the room. Meanwhile, Sam cheerfully hopped on his swing, observing my efforts as I carefully dusted the top of his cage.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: Every day I went to Mrs. Riley’s as usual.
And I continued like this for the following days.
After one week, she said, “I've been thinking, girl, since I can't pay you, I'll—I'll give you Sam.”
Question4: My response I was surprised and delighted.
My breath caught in my throat. I couldn't believe it. Sam. All mine.内心独白 Sam looked at me.He chirped, as if to say,"Well "写金丝雀 I considered it. Someday I'd have enough money to buy a canary of my own. 内心独白But Mrs. Riley would never get another one. Plus, if I took Sam, Mrs. Riley would be all alone.
Question5: Did I accept her offer No, because she needed Sam more than me.
Could I take him Sam waited. Mrs. Riley waited. “I can't take Sam," I said. "He belongs to you. And I’ll keep working for you. You don’t have to pay me."
I declined her offer, saying I would earn enough money to buy a canary later on and I would continue to work for her without being paid.
A proper ending: I continued to work for Mrs. Riley. / The canary became the bond between us. /I didn’t earn enough money to buy a canary, but I was happy / pleased / satisfied that Mrs. Riley was no longer lonely because of my help. Roses given, fragrance in hand, which was what I experienced in person.
自行车的故事
The door flew open, and Mr. Gordon dragged me inside.
Question 1: Who else was inside What did I see
All my customers were inside. There was also a new bicycle with a bag full of envelopes hanging on the handlebar of it.
Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room, I saw a new bicycle, a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar.倒装句描写场景
Question2: What did Mr. Gordon and other people say and do
The presented me with the new bicycle and the bag and thanked me for my good service.
“A Christmas present our best paperboy!” Mr. Gordon said. Sensing my confusion, he continued, “We’ve all seen you in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart, so we suppose you ought to have a bicycle.” 对话
Question 3: My reaction Shocked but grateful.
Deeply touched, I felt tears of gratitude filling my eyes.
All I could say was "Thank you." I said it over and over.
The last sentence of para1: I waved them goodbye with the new bicycle and envelopes.
After walking the bicycle home, I opened those envelopes.
Question 4: What was inside the envelopes The fee of the newspapers, some extra money and some notes.
In the envelopes were Christmas cards from every subscriber, along with their subscription fees and tips.
Question5: My feelings: Moved.
The touching messages and thoughtful tips in each envelope truly touched my heart.
Question6: What happened later Mr. Miceli taught me how to ride the bicycle.故事山模型（解决问题）
Kindness did not end there, though. The next day, when I got to Mr. Miceli’s garage, he was waiting outside. “Bring your bike tomorrow morning, and I’ll teach you to ride,” he offered.
A proper ending:
With the new bicycle, I could send newspapers much faster. I was offered another route. I still used Mom’s two-wheeled shopping cart when it rained or snowed. Looking back on it now, I am grateful that the kindness of the Chicago neighbourhood has stuck in my heart and made me what I am today.
When I felt comfortable on a bike, Mr. Miceli asked me to deliver a second route. Delivering both routes on my new bike, I really appreciated the kind Chicagoans’ love and support.