2025届高三英语复习读后续写5 场景描写 导学案
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英语培优5 学案 场景描写+寻找蜥蜴+培优4跟踪训练讲评
一 培优4跟踪训练扩句优化
消除流言
Without thinking twice,I made the decision to slowly approach him and make a sincere apology to him, which gave him an astonishment. 此处要有心理斗争
优化1：Summoning up my courage, I approached him slowly and explained how I started the rumour and apologized sincerely.
With regretful tears streaming down my face,I couldn't imagine how could I deal with it. (Del was sitting alone---)
优化2：The sight of his isolated/ lonely figure tugged at my heartstrings. Ashamed and embarrassed, I took a deep breath, approached him inch by inch and sat beside him. 形容词作状语
Knowing the reason why others stayed away from him Del was a little angry but he also realized his former rude behaviour and forgave me. 要展现！
优化3：Del's eyes widened slightly, and for a moment, he just stared at me, as if trying to process my words. "Thanks, Jamie," he said quietly . "I appreciate you telling me that. I forgive you." 眼睛动作，似乎（as if揣摩别人心里）,语气温和，对话
To make others know the truth, I gathered them in the classroom and acknowledged my mistake.
优化4: I approached the players and asked them to stop for a moment. Everyone, including Del, was surprised. I admitted that it was I who started the rumour. “Del did not beat up anyone.” I said. Upon hearing this, the players were confused for a brief moment but soon figured out what had really happened. “Hey, welcome back.” They waved to Del. Del nodded willingly. Seeing Del playing the game as usual, I felt relieved that I eventually mended a big mistake. “我”告诉大家真相，大家重新接受Del，问题得以解决。（强动词，对话）
I felt a sense of guilt, a wave of depression washed over me.
优化5: Realizing what severe consequences my rumour had brought about, a wave of guilt and regret washed over me.
To improve our relationship, Del also made great efforts that he no longer called me the nickname. 不要写别人的行事目的
Their hateness hatred gave way to guilty after I told them the truth. Then they invited Del to play with them as before. 要展现！
Knowing the truth, a wave of guilty guilt flooded over them and they invited him to play with them. 视角
Hearing what I said, Del said with a smile." I don't know you have treated me as a bad boy. Now the misunderstanding was solved." 要有情绪转变的过程， 对话要口语化。
The weight of uncertainty guilt settled on my shoulders like a heavy blanket.
After getting to understand why I apologized to him, instead of letting the anger getting the best of him, Del just forgave me with a slight smile, which made me relieved.要展现！
I sat beside Del and made a sincere apology to him. 要展现！
丢失的20元钱
Filled with happiness and gratitude. I couldn't wait to rush rushed there in the hope of finding lost money. 情感过于激烈
优化13：I rushed there with a rapturous heart to collect my note.
Through the assistant’s words I got the truth. With a mix of happiness and appreciation in mind, I burst into tears. 展现（要具体）
优化14：The assistant told me that the note was from my roommates, who, after witnessing my despair, would like to offer a helping hand. Greatly moved, I accepted the note . 情感+动作
At that time, I was in hesitation and torn between the desire to take it and to be honest.
优化15：Caught between the urge to grab the note and the commitment to honesty, I found myself in a moment of indecision.
I will never forget what the kind person did for me. A small kind action really makes people in need warm.
优化16：A small act of kindness can make a big difference. The 20 pounds was not a fortune. It's certainly not enough to solve all my problems. But it's a decent amount for me to make ends meet in the following two weeks and it was enough to give me the strength to remain optimistic and keep fighting for my dream. 对谚语展开解释（协同）；对比；具体影响
与善良，助人有关的语言：
Kindness is the language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.
No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.
There's no such thing as a small act of kindness.
Every act of generosity creates a ripple of good with no end. 爱的传递
Every act of kindness creates a ripple of healing with no end. 善行的治愈的力量
Every act of love creates a ripple of light with no end. 爱给人希望
A little kindness goes a long way. 小的善行也影响巨大
It dawned on me that the note wasn't mine when the assistant gave it to me.
优化17：The assistant showed me a brand new note of 20 pounds, which, obviously, was not mine.
It dawned on me that---
I was about to pay for the shopping when it suddenly dawned on me that I'd left my wallet at home.
It finally dawned on him that she’d been joking.
It dawned on me that what contained in the envelopes was not only money to help me go through the hard time but also their appreciation and recognition of my hard work as well as their encouragement to a little boy to face life bravely.
It dawned on me that the 20 note represented not just a sum of money to ease my frustrating situation, but also a challenge to my moral principles.
二 场景描写
场景描写举例
姐姐的成长
1. With the four of us enveloped in the fragrance of the flowers and the warm sunshine, I knew I had fully accepted Rosa as one of the closest family members and I was willing to share everything with her. 温暖的阳光，花香 —— 其乐融融温暖有爱（环境的象征意义）
Bathed in the warm sunshine and immersed in the fragrance of the colourful flowers, we talked and laughed. What a harmonious family! 画面感
原文：
We arrived at the shop, a wave of colour and sweet washing over me.
Behind her shop was a field dotted with spring flowers. Stepping into the field, I began to pick little flowers. It was like gathering my childhood memories. I remembered how ------
邮差父亲
It wasn't hard for me to imagine Dad sitting at the old table in our basement reading those letters and answering each one. 想像
Flakes were still swirling in the sky but the tender flame in my heart had melted the snow surrounding us. 对比
Silent snowflakes drifting down from the sky, I wondered on the familiar country roads, mourning for the past golden days that would never fade away. 环境与心情
Dancing snow whispered in the air, narrating the tale of a caring Santa Claus and his pleasure.
Wandering along the familiar road and recalling the past golden days, I felt somewhat sorrowful but rather inspired by this tender “adventure”. 场景再现
原文：
As a young boy, I sometimes traveled the country roads with my dad. He was a rural mail carrier and on Saturdays he would ask me to go with him. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: there were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies to enjoy.
水库遇困
With the headwind becoming stronger and the waves crashing more and more heavily, we were getting more and more anxious. 环境的象征意义
With the wind getting more and more violent and our boat drifting helplessly on the rough reservoir, I was getting more and more frightened.
On my way home, the heavy wind had dropped and the warm sunshine flooded in throw the car windows. I was glad that I had got the chance to see father’s mantra in action and become a practitioner of it. 环境的象征意义
原文：
We were about two miles from the marina when we found ourselves fighting a strong headwind that slowed our progress. The waves were kicking up, and suddenly our engine decided to quit.
金丝雀之歌
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage. Mrs. Riley's weak voice echoed in my mind, "You can't work for me anymore." 回忆
Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room, I saw a new bicycle, a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar. 倒装
原文：
The best part, though, is taking care of Sam. Sam is Mrs. Riley’s canary(金丝雀). He’s bright yellow, and he sings all the time.
I went over and stuck my finger in Sam’s cage. He hopped on his swing and chirped hello.
跳绳的救援
The afternoon sunlight lit up his apologetic expression, casting a soft glow on the scene.
The distant chatter of families picnicking and the rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away as everyone held their breath for Katie to forgive the boy.
The distant sounds of families enjoying picnics and the gentle rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away, creating a hushed anticipation as everyone awaited Katie's forgiveness of the boy.
原文：
Katie was happily jumping rope on the grass in front of her house facing the expansive city park just across the road. The neighborhood residents often enjoyed walking around the lake in the park, and on this pleasant day, with the sun casting its warm light, Katie spent the unhurried moments devoted to her jumping routine.
The warmth of the afternoon sun enhanced the joy Katie felt as she skipped along. Suddenly ---
场景描写建议：
拟人，情感谬误
对比
人在环境中的感受，行为
展现（五感，强动词，具体细节等）
比喻
想象或回忆场景（过去，未来）
三 寻找蜥蜴
审题：
Para1："Oh, hello," she said with a smile.
Q1: What did she see Larry.
Q2: Our feelings Amazed/ surprised. （情感描写）
Q3: What happened later We tried to get Larry back into his terrarium. 展现（具体细节）
Q4: The last sentence of para1: We were relieved that Larry was finally secure in his terrarium.
Para 2: " You three make a great search-and-rescue team!" said Mr. Jones.
Q5: Why did he say that He had been watching we worked as a team.
Q6: What happened later We made sure Larry would no longer escape. 故事山
Q7 A proper ending My reflection The strength of cooperation.
语言：
Describe how surprised we were when we found Larry.
"Oh my gosh! It's him! It's Larry!" Imani exclaimed. Following her pointing finger, we were excited to find Larry, peeking out from a vent, as happy as could be.
My mouth dropped open. My eyes widen with disbelief. I couldn't believe it! Larry was right there, all along!
We all looked at each other, our faces beaming with joy. We had found Larry! We had done it!
Larry, our beloved lizard, was back! He had been hiding in plain sight all along! We all let out a collective sigh of relief, the tension that had been building up for hours finally fading away.
It was as if a weight had been lifted from our shoulders. We had searched high and low, turning the classroom upside down in our determined hunt for Larry. We had even checked the bird cage, the fish tank, and even the teacher's desk drawer, just in case. But all along, he had been right there, watching us, waiting for us to find him.
A proper ending. (My reflection / describe a scene)
We had found Larry, and in the process, we had discovered something even more important: the power of teamwork, the strength of friendship, and the unwavering belief in ourselves. We had faced a challenge, a real-life mystery, and we had overcome it. We had learned that even in the face of adversity, there was always hope, always a solution, and always the power of a team. And as we gathered around Larry's terrarium, singing him a celebratory song(回扣上文), we knew that this was just the beginning of our adventures together. We were a team, and we were ready for anything.
We all gathered around Larry's terrarium, singing a song crafted for his return. Mr. Jones smiled and clapped along, his eyes twinkling with pride. Larry seemed to enjoy the song, too. He stretched out his little legs and blinked his eyes, as if to say, "Thank you for finding me!"
四 培优4跟踪训练 审题 + 扩句 讲评
审题
Passage8 父子和解
主题：家庭亲情
情感：
场景：
审题示范
Paragraph 1: As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.”
Question 1：My thoughts？ The name sounded familiar，but I didn’t give it much thought. / I suspected the old man was Jeff’s father.
Question 2： What did I do then I continued to walk around talking to people. / I tried to see if they had some similarities.
The last sentence of paragraph 1： The graduation ceremony began. The graduates began to step onto the stage.
Paragraph 2: Jeff was the last person to cross the stage.
Question4: How did Jeff walk onto the stage （describe him） His feelings (from my perspective)
Question5: What happened later He was awarded his diploma.
Question6: Did he recognize his father His reaction His father’s reaction He recognized his father. He was surprised and moved.
A proper ending: The father and son made up. (describe the scene)
扩句训练：
Passage 6 消除流言
审主题：人际关系，语言的力量
情感：自责，后悔，尴尬，轻松
场景：操场上孩子们踢足球
审题示范：
At recess the next day, I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Question 1：My feelings. I felt upset and guilty. 展现 describe Del
His shoulders were slumped, his knees drawn up to his chest, and his arms wrapped around them.
I felt a pang极度痛苦 of guilt as I remembered how quickly I had judged him and spread that harmful rumor.具体原因
I hate the nickname “Germy”, but seeing him isolated was also not what I wanted.Guilt pushed me to him.
Question 2：What did I do I apologized to him. His response
Taking a deep breath/ Gathering up my courage, I walked over and sat down beside him. "Hey, Del," I started, “I'm sorry about everything. I shouldn't have spread those rumors without knowing the truth. I know now that you were just worried about your brother and your mom."
I lowered my head, murmuring, “Sorry, Del. It was I who spread the rumor that you hit the little boy.”His eyes widened in surprise, I could feel something in his voice sounded more hurt than angry. But a moment later, he patted my shoulder gently and replied in a soft voice,“It’s okay, Jamie. I guess I wasn’t very nice to you, either..”
I sat next to him and gradually uttered the whole thing about how my hasty assumption turned into such a terrible rumour. “I am sorry. I wish I had never said that!” , I apologized, daring not to look at his eyes. Annoyance and surprise crossed his face. But then he lowered his head and said quietly, “---”
The last sentence of paragraph 1:Del forgave me.
As he spoke, I could see the tension in his shoulders ease slightly, and his eyes softened, the cloud of sadness lifting just a bit.
It was the first time he’d used my real name. I was delighted that I got his forgiveness.
Now that Del had forgiven me, I decided to do more before the recess was over.
Question4: What did I do then I told the guys the truth.
I gathered my courage, walked up into the front and began to call for others’ attention. All the kids stopped kicking the ball and exchanged confused looks with each other. I cleared my throat and explained what actually happened. I felt a sense of relief welling up in my heart and surging through me after my confession.
Question5:Their responses They invited Del to play with them.
Much to my surprise, the players waved to Del, inviting him to join us. Del replied, “Del nodded willingly, a look of joy spreading across his face. Soon the air was filled with laughter and talks.
Whispers of astonishment spread and finally one player shouted, “Alright, Del, do you want to join my team ”
Question6: What happened later Del no longer called me the nickname.
A proper ending:
A smile broke through Del’s gloomy face. “Yes, and I want Jamie on it, too!” He glanced at me shyly, and I could tell his using my real name was his way of making an apology.
Del and I became good friends. Words have the power to hurt and heal. I will always keep in mind that they can wound and cause pain, but they also have the ability to soothe, comfort, and heal.
Reflecting on this experience, I realized how damaging rumors can be and how important to seek the truth and understand someone's circumstances before passing judgment.
Only at that moment did I realize that rumor spread easily, but it hurt someone deeply.
Passage7 丢失的20元钱
主题：成长，诚信；助人，我被别人帮助
情感：绝望，自责，纠结，宁静平和 / 感恩
审题示范
As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it.
Question 1：My thoughts Regretful and upset.
Least expecting a reply from them, I logged off with enormous disheartenment/frustration and continuous self-blame. How I wished I was careful enough so that the note would not slip out without my notice.
Question 2：Their response They responded that they did find a 20 note and asked me to go to pick it up.
I must have sounded over-worried in the post as I was soon flooded with abundant kind reviews. All, acquaintances or strangers, were trying to offer some comfort, advice or even money. I was touched beyond words. Suddenly, one review caught my eye, saying that my note had been found.
However, five minutes later, an alert from Facebook broke off my negative thoughts. “Yes, we indeed found a 20-dollar note. Please come by as soon as possible!” The above words from the coffee shop instantly fueled me with energy.
Question 3：What did I do I rushed there hopefully.
I rushed to the coffee shop in no time, unable to believe my good luck.
Without hesitation, I trotted小跑 back with a rapturous狂喜的 heart.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: The assistant gave me a brand new 20. I realized it was not mine.
Upon my arrival, the shop assistant handed me a brand new 20-pound note, at which I felt a bit surprised.
Hardly had I entered the shop when a sweet-looking assistant handed me a shiny 20-dollar note and asked tentatively试探性地, “Sir, is it yours ”
I said, “Oh ... This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.
Question4: My feelings. I was torn between the desire to take it and to be honest.
No sooner had I blurted out脱口而出 these words than a pain of regret surged through my whole body. If only I said yes, my two weeks of serious situation would be enormously relieved by this flawless lie. After all, the whole world knew I had lost 20 dollars, right here in the coffee shop! However, my inner conscience triumphed over my evil thoughts.内心独白
Question5: What happened later The assistant told me the note was from my roommate. I was moved by their kindness and consideration. I finally accepted their help.
Beaming a most radiant 灿烂的smile, the assistant explained gently that this note was from my most kind-hearted roommates, who, after witnessing my despair, would like to extend a helping hand. Hearing this, I felt a surge of warmth swelled up in my heart and my eyes was wet with grateful eyes.
Unexpectedly, the assistant took out another note, which apparently was still not my lost note. “Actually, we’ve received several more notes from customers.” the assistant explained, spreading even more notes on the desk. I shook my head.
OR: The note belonged to someone else. I did not take the note, but I felt quiet inside because I was honest.
Deep inside, I knew someone, who might be trapped in a bigger economic dilemma than me, might need this money more. So I refused the note and left the shop with my former self-blame and regret replaced by calm and peace, which I knew was due to my insistence on honesty.
A proper ending: I spent the following two weeks with the recovered 20 pounds. 升华？
OR: I pulled through the following two weeks without the 20 pounds. 升华？
The 20 pounds not only alleviated / relieved my financial strain/stress but also served as a beacon 灯塔of hope and support, rescuing me from the depths of adversity and uncertainty.
Yes, life might be hard for me in a new city. But with the unreserved毫无保留的 generosity and unwavering 坚定的support from my roommate, I knew I could pull through any difficulty and rise to any challenge. Indeed, life is not a bed of roses, but love from my roommates make the world go around. Plus, I am bound to pay forward their kindness by helping more needy people like me.
Despite the fact that I might suffer a tight budget in the following weeks, I felt the warmth out of the kindness.Never before had I believed so firmly that kindness was a ray of light, brightening up the day in the darkest time.
Walking out of the coffee shop, I felt my previous desperation, disheartenment and self-blame were gone, which were replaced by a sheer sense of calm and inner peace. I knew, they were rewarded by my invaluable virtue-honesty and integrity.
一 培优4跟踪训练扩句优化
消除流言
Without thinking twice,I made the decision to slowly approach him and make a sincere apology to him, which gave him an astonishment. 此处要有心理斗争
优化1：Summoning up my courage, I approached him slowly and explained how I started the rumour and apologized sincerely.
With regretful tears streaming down my face,I couldn't imagine how could I deal with it. (Del was sitting alone---)
优化2：The sight of his isolated/ lonely figure tugged at my heartstrings. Ashamed and embarrassed, I took a deep breath, approached him inch by inch and sat beside him. 形容词作状语
Knowing the reason why others stayed away from him Del was a little angry but he also realized his former rude behaviour and forgave me. 要展现！
优化3：Del's eyes widened slightly, and for a moment, he just stared at me, as if trying to process my words. "Thanks, Jamie," he said quietly . "I appreciate you telling me that. I forgive you." 眼睛动作，似乎（as if揣摩别人心里）,语气温和，对话
To make others know the truth, I gathered them in the classroom and acknowledged my mistake.
优化4: I approached the players and asked them to stop for a moment. Everyone, including Del, was surprised. I admitted that it was I who started the rumour. “Del did not beat up anyone.” I said. Upon hearing this, the players were confused for a brief moment but soon figured out what had really happened. “Hey, welcome back.” They waved to Del. Del nodded willingly. Seeing Del playing the game as usual, I felt relieved that I eventually mended a big mistake. “我”告诉大家真相，大家重新接受Del，问题得以解决。（强动词，对话）
I felt a sense of guilt, a wave of depression washed over me.
优化5: Realizing what severe consequences my rumour had brought about, a wave of guilt and regret washed over me.
To improve our relationship, Del also made great efforts that he no longer called me the nickname. 不要写别人的行事目的
Their hateness hatred gave way to guilty after I told them the truth. Then they invited Del to play with them as before. 要展现！
Knowing the truth, a wave of guilty guilt flooded over them and they invited him to play with them. 视角
Hearing what I said, Del said with a smile." I don't know you have treated me as a bad boy. Now the misunderstanding was solved." 要有情绪转变的过程， 对话要口语化。
The weight of uncertainty guilt settled on my shoulders like a heavy blanket.
After getting to understand why I apologized to him, instead of letting the anger getting the best of him, Del just forgave me with a slight smile, which made me relieved.要展现！
I sat beside Del and made a sincere apology to him. 要展现！
丢失的20元钱
Filled with happiness and gratitude. I couldn't wait to rush rushed there in the hope of finding lost money. 情感过于激烈
优化13：I rushed there with a rapturous heart to collect my note.
Through the assistant’s words I got the truth. With a mix of happiness and appreciation in mind, I burst into tears. 展现（要具体）
优化14：The assistant told me that the note was from my roommates, who, after witnessing my despair, would like to offer a helping hand. Greatly moved, I accepted the note . 情感+动作
At that time, I was in hesitation and torn between the desire to take it and to be honest.
优化15：Caught between the urge to grab the note and the commitment to honesty, I found myself in a moment of indecision.
I will never forget what the kind person did for me. A small kind action really makes people in need warm.
优化16：A small act of kindness can make a big difference. The 20 pounds was not a fortune. It's certainly not enough to solve all my problems. But it's a decent amount for me to make ends meet in the following two weeks and it was enough to give me the strength to remain optimistic and keep fighting for my dream. 对谚语展开解释（协同）；对比；具体影响
与善良，助人有关的语言：
Kindness is the language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.
No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.
There's no such thing as a small act of kindness.
Every act of generosity creates a ripple of good with no end. 爱的传递
Every act of kindness creates a ripple of healing with no end. 善行的治愈的力量
Every act of love creates a ripple of light with no end. 爱给人希望
A little kindness goes a long way. 小的善行也影响巨大
It dawned on me that the note wasn't mine when the assistant gave it to me.
优化17：The assistant showed me a brand new note of 20 pounds, which, obviously, was not mine.
It dawned on me that---
I was about to pay for the shopping when it suddenly dawned on me that I'd left my wallet at home.
It finally dawned on him that she’d been joking.
It dawned on me that what contained in the envelopes was not only money to help me go through the hard time but also their appreciation and recognition of my hard work as well as their encouragement to a little boy to face life bravely.
It dawned on me that the 20 note represented not just a sum of money to ease my frustrating situation, but also a challenge to my moral principles.
二 场景描写
场景描写举例
姐姐的成长
1. With the four of us enveloped in the fragrance of the flowers and the warm sunshine, I knew I had fully accepted Rosa as one of the closest family members and I was willing to share everything with her. 温暖的阳光，花香 —— 其乐融融温暖有爱（环境的象征意义）
Bathed in the warm sunshine and immersed in the fragrance of the colourful flowers, we talked and laughed. What a harmonious family! 画面感
原文：
We arrived at the shop, a wave of colour and sweet washing over me.
Behind her shop was a field dotted with spring flowers. Stepping into the field, I began to pick little flowers. It was like gathering my childhood memories. I remembered how ------
邮差父亲
It wasn't hard for me to imagine Dad sitting at the old table in our basement reading those letters and answering each one. 想像
Flakes were still swirling in the sky but the tender flame in my heart had melted the snow surrounding us. 对比
Silent snowflakes drifting down from the sky, I wondered on the familiar country roads, mourning for the past golden days that would never fade away. 环境与心情
Dancing snow whispered in the air, narrating the tale of a caring Santa Claus and his pleasure.
Wandering along the familiar road and recalling the past golden days, I felt somewhat sorrowful but rather inspired by this tender “adventure”. 场景再现
原文：
As a young boy, I sometimes traveled the country roads with my dad. He was a rural mail carrier and on Saturdays he would ask me to go with him. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: there were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies to enjoy.
水库遇困
With the headwind becoming stronger and the waves crashing more and more heavily, we were getting more and more anxious. 环境的象征意义
With the wind getting more and more violent and our boat drifting helplessly on the rough reservoir, I was getting more and more frightened.
On my way home, the heavy wind had dropped and the warm sunshine flooded in throw the car windows. I was glad that I had got the chance to see father’s mantra in action and become a practitioner of it. 环境的象征意义
原文：
We were about two miles from the marina when we found ourselves fighting a strong headwind that slowed our progress. The waves were kicking up, and suddenly our engine decided to quit.
金丝雀之歌
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage. Mrs. Riley's weak voice echoed in my mind, "You can't work for me anymore." 回忆
Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room, I saw a new bicycle, a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar. 倒装
原文：
The best part, though, is taking care of Sam. Sam is Mrs. Riley’s canary(金丝雀). He’s bright yellow, and he sings all the time.
I went over and stuck my finger in Sam’s cage. He hopped on his swing and chirped hello.
跳绳的救援
The afternoon sunlight lit up his apologetic expression, casting a soft glow on the scene.
The distant chatter of families picnicking and the rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away as everyone held their breath for Katie to forgive the boy.
The distant sounds of families enjoying picnics and the gentle rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away, creating a hushed anticipation as everyone awaited Katie's forgiveness of the boy.
原文：
Katie was happily jumping rope on the grass in front of her house facing the expansive city park just across the road. The neighborhood residents often enjoyed walking around the lake in the park, and on this pleasant day, with the sun casting its warm light, Katie spent the unhurried moments devoted to her jumping routine.
The warmth of the afternoon sun enhanced the joy Katie felt as she skipped along. Suddenly ---
场景描写建议：
拟人，情感谬误
对比
人在环境中的感受，行为
展现（五感，强动词，具体细节等）
比喻
想象或回忆场景（过去，未来）
三 寻找蜥蜴
审题：
Para1："Oh, hello," she said with a smile.
Q1: What did she see Larry.
Q2: Our feelings Amazed/ surprised. （情感描写）
Q3: What happened later We tried to get Larry back into his terrarium. 展现（具体细节）
Q4: The last sentence of para1: We were relieved that Larry was finally secure in his terrarium.
Para 2: " You three make a great search-and-rescue team!" said Mr. Jones.
Q5: Why did he say that He had been watching we worked as a team.
Q6: What happened later We made sure Larry would no longer escape. 故事山
Q7 A proper ending My reflection The strength of cooperation.
语言：
Describe how surprised we were when we found Larry.
"Oh my gosh! It's him! It's Larry!" Imani exclaimed. Following her pointing finger, we were excited to find Larry, peeking out from a vent, as happy as could be.
My mouth dropped open. My eyes widen with disbelief. I couldn't believe it! Larry was right there, all along!
We all looked at each other, our faces beaming with joy. We had found Larry! We had done it!
Larry, our beloved lizard, was back! He had been hiding in plain sight all along! We all let out a collective sigh of relief, the tension that had been building up for hours finally fading away.
It was as if a weight had been lifted from our shoulders. We had searched high and low, turning the classroom upside down in our determined hunt for Larry. We had even checked the bird cage, the fish tank, and even the teacher's desk drawer, just in case. But all along, he had been right there, watching us, waiting for us to find him.
A proper ending. (My reflection / describe a scene)
We had found Larry, and in the process, we had discovered something even more important: the power of teamwork, the strength of friendship, and the unwavering belief in ourselves. We had faced a challenge, a real-life mystery, and we had overcome it. We had learned that even in the face of adversity, there was always hope, always a solution, and always the power of a team. And as we gathered around Larry's terrarium, singing him a celebratory song(回扣上文), we knew that this was just the beginning of our adventures together. We were a team, and we were ready for anything.
We all gathered around Larry's terrarium, singing a song crafted for his return. Mr. Jones smiled and clapped along, his eyes twinkling with pride. Larry seemed to enjoy the song, too. He stretched out his little legs and blinked his eyes, as if to say, "Thank you for finding me!"
四 培优4跟踪训练 审题 + 扩句 讲评
审题
Passage8 父子和解
主题：家庭亲情
情感：
场景：
审题示范
Paragraph 1: As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.”
Question 1：My thoughts？ The name sounded familiar，but I didn’t give it much thought. / I suspected the old man was Jeff’s father.
Question 2： What did I do then I continued to walk around talking to people. / I tried to see if they had some similarities.
The last sentence of paragraph 1： The graduation ceremony began. The graduates began to step onto the stage.
Paragraph 2: Jeff was the last person to cross the stage.
Question4: How did Jeff walk onto the stage （describe him） His feelings (from my perspective)
Question5: What happened later He was awarded his diploma.
Question6: Did he recognize his father His reaction His father’s reaction He recognized his father. He was surprised and moved.
A proper ending: The father and son made up. (describe the scene)
扩句训练：
Passage 6 消除流言
审主题：人际关系，语言的力量
情感：自责，后悔，尴尬，轻松
场景：操场上孩子们踢足球
审题示范：
At recess the next day, I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Question 1：My feelings. I felt upset and guilty. 展现 describe Del
His shoulders were slumped, his knees drawn up to his chest, and his arms wrapped around them.
I felt a pang极度痛苦 of guilt as I remembered how quickly I had judged him and spread that harmful rumor.具体原因
I hate the nickname “Germy”, but seeing him isolated was also not what I wanted.Guilt pushed me to him.
Question 2：What did I do I apologized to him. His response
Taking a deep breath/ Gathering up my courage, I walked over and sat down beside him. "Hey, Del," I started, “I'm sorry about everything. I shouldn't have spread those rumors without knowing the truth. I know now that you were just worried about your brother and your mom."
I lowered my head, murmuring, “Sorry, Del. It was I who spread the rumor that you hit the little boy.”His eyes widened in surprise, I could feel something in his voice sounded more hurt than angry. But a moment later, he patted my shoulder gently and replied in a soft voice,“It’s okay, Jamie. I guess I wasn’t very nice to you, either..”
I sat next to him and gradually uttered the whole thing about how my hasty assumption turned into such a terrible rumour. “I am sorry. I wish I had never said that!” , I apologized, daring not to look at his eyes. Annoyance and surprise crossed his face. But then he lowered his head and said quietly, “---”
The last sentence of paragraph 1:Del forgave me.
As he spoke, I could see the tension in his shoulders ease slightly, and his eyes softened, the cloud of sadness lifting just a bit.
It was the first time he’d used my real name. I was delighted that I got his forgiveness.
Now that Del had forgiven me, I decided to do more before the recess was over.
Question4: What did I do then I told the guys the truth.
I gathered my courage, walked up into the front and began to call for others’ attention. All the kids stopped kicking the ball and exchanged confused looks with each other. I cleared my throat and explained what actually happened. I felt a sense of relief welling up in my heart and surging through me after my confession.
Question5:Their responses They invited Del to play with them.
Much to my surprise, the players waved to Del, inviting him to join us. Del replied, “Del nodded willingly, a look of joy spreading across his face. Soon the air was filled with laughter and talks.
Whispers of astonishment spread and finally one player shouted, “Alright, Del, do you want to join my team ”
Question6: What happened later Del no longer called me the nickname.
A proper ending:
A smile broke through Del’s gloomy face. “Yes, and I want Jamie on it, too!” He glanced at me shyly, and I could tell his using my real name was his way of making an apology.
Del and I became good friends. Words have the power to hurt and heal. I will always keep in mind that they can wound and cause pain, but they also have the ability to soothe, comfort, and heal.
Reflecting on this experience, I realized how damaging rumors can be and how important to seek the truth and understand someone's circumstances before passing judgment.
Only at that moment did I realize that rumor spread easily, but it hurt someone deeply.
Passage7 丢失的20元钱
主题：成长，诚信；助人，我被别人帮助
情感：绝望，自责，纠结，宁静平和 / 感恩
审题示范
As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it.
Question 1：My thoughts Regretful and upset.
Least expecting a reply from them, I logged off with enormous disheartenment/frustration and continuous self-blame. How I wished I was careful enough so that the note would not slip out without my notice.
Question 2：Their response They responded that they did find a 20 note and asked me to go to pick it up.
I must have sounded over-worried in the post as I was soon flooded with abundant kind reviews. All, acquaintances or strangers, were trying to offer some comfort, advice or even money. I was touched beyond words. Suddenly, one review caught my eye, saying that my note had been found.
However, five minutes later, an alert from Facebook broke off my negative thoughts. “Yes, we indeed found a 20-dollar note. Please come by as soon as possible!” The above words from the coffee shop instantly fueled me with energy.
Question 3：What did I do I rushed there hopefully.
I rushed to the coffee shop in no time, unable to believe my good luck.
Without hesitation, I trotted小跑 back with a rapturous狂喜的 heart.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: The assistant gave me a brand new 20. I realized it was not mine.
Upon my arrival, the shop assistant handed me a brand new 20-pound note, at which I felt a bit surprised.
Hardly had I entered the shop when a sweet-looking assistant handed me a shiny 20-dollar note and asked tentatively试探性地, “Sir, is it yours ”
I said, “Oh ... This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.
Question4: My feelings. I was torn between the desire to take it and to be honest.
No sooner had I blurted out脱口而出 these words than a pain of regret surged through my whole body. If only I said yes, my two weeks of serious situation would be enormously relieved by this flawless lie. After all, the whole world knew I had lost 20 dollars, right here in the coffee shop! However, my inner conscience triumphed over my evil thoughts.内心独白
Question5: What happened later The assistant told me the note was from my roommate. I was moved by their kindness and consideration. I finally accepted their help.
Beaming a most radiant 灿烂的smile, the assistant explained gently that this note was from my most kind-hearted roommates, who, after witnessing my despair, would like to extend a helping hand. Hearing this, I felt a surge of warmth swelled up in my heart and my eyes was wet with grateful eyes.
Unexpectedly, the assistant took out another note, which apparently was still not my lost note. “Actually, we’ve received several more notes from customers.” the assistant explained, spreading even more notes on the desk. I shook my head.
OR: The note belonged to someone else. I did not take the note, but I felt quiet inside because I was honest.
Deep inside, I knew someone, who might be trapped in a bigger economic dilemma than me, might need this money more. So I refused the note and left the shop with my former self-blame and regret replaced by calm and peace, which I knew was due to my insistence on honesty.
A proper ending: I spent the following two weeks with the recovered 20 pounds. 升华？
OR: I pulled through the following two weeks without the 20 pounds. 升华？
The 20 pounds not only alleviated / relieved my financial strain/stress but also served as a beacon 灯塔of hope and support, rescuing me from the depths of adversity and uncertainty.
Yes, life might be hard for me in a new city. But with the unreserved毫无保留的 generosity and unwavering 坚定的support from my roommate, I knew I could pull through any difficulty and rise to any challenge. Indeed, life is not a bed of roses, but love from my roommates make the world go around. Plus, I am bound to pay forward their kindness by helping more needy people like me.
Despite the fact that I might suffer a tight budget in the following weeks, I felt the warmth out of the kindness.Never before had I believed so firmly that kindness was a ray of light, brightening up the day in the darkest time.
Walking out of the coffee shop, I felt my previous desperation, disheartenment and self-blame were gone, which were replaced by a sheer sense of calm and inner peace. I knew, they were rewarded by my invaluable virtue-honesty and integrity.