2025届高三英语复习读后续写6 非谓语 +从句 导学案
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英语培优6 学案 长句（非谓语、从句等句型的使用）+培优5跟踪训练讲评
一 场景描写回顾
外部环境与情感，行为紧密相连（寓情于景，烘托气氛）
人（或多人）在特定情境下的表现: 外部环境+人物心理+人物具体行为
（夜里担心自己赚不到钱买金丝雀，担心Mrs. Riley辗转反侧；
我纠结是否要拿走不属于我的20元钱；
风大浪高的水库上，船突然坏了，我恐惧，求救；）
画面定格式群像描写
积累场景描写词汇
be bathed in / be enveloped in
a field dotted with flowers
Flakes were swirling in the sky; drift; ---
Dancing snow whispered a story of ----
The headwind was kicking up and the waves were crashing against the boat.
The wind dropped.
The leaves rustled.
The snow crunched under our boots.
The morning sun flooded in through the window.
The setting sun cast a gentle glow over the park.
The leaves rustled and whispered in the breeze.
Sunlight filtered through the dense branches, creating an air of mystery.
The sun’s rays danced on the sparkling water.
Everywhere you look, there are rolling hills.
二 长句应用（非谓语、从句）
短句 力量爆发
It is a deep night. No noises. No sounds. Just a light shade of the moon is seen. No one expects the drama… 恐惧氛围
It wasn’t fair that Riley had to get sick. How would I buy a canary of my own 内心独白
My breath caught in my throat. I couldn't believe it. Sam. All mine.内心独白 Sam looked at me.He chirped, as if to say,"Well " I considered it. Someday I'd have enough money to buy a canary of my own. 内心独白But Mrs. Riley would never get another one. Plus, if I took Sam, Mrs. Riley would be all alone. 激动，纠结，多种想法快速闪过，群像描写（快节奏）
Could I take him Sam waited. Mrs. Riley waited. “I can't take Sam," I said. "He belongs to you. And I’ll keep working for you. You don’t have to pay me." 直接引语
The next day I ran upstairs with a bag of groceries. Mrs. Riley was still in bed. I emptied the bag, put the milk in the tiny refrigerator, and then began dusting around (动作链). Sam hopped on his swing as I dusted the top of his cage. 推动情节发展
（二）长句 较复杂的含义，节奏舒缓，力量积蓄（描写景色，情感，深刻的道理）
Autumn came without special invitation, coloring the tress in orange, yellow and red, whispering the cold in our ears and hiding the warm sun rays from our eyes.
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage. 展现：辗转反侧的场景，具体想法
I declined her offer, saying I would earn enough money to buy a canary later on and I would continue to work for her without being paid. 间接引语
（三）长短句结合，避免单一结构或句型
Good writing consists of a mixture of short and long sentences. Short sentences have punch力量 and are a great way to emphasize important points. Longer sentences add rhythm to your writing.
Examples:
1-1. The workday ended. She went home. The door was open. Nervous, she looked around. No one was there. Everything seemed safe. Maybe the wind blew it open. She locked the door. The deadbolt门栓 jammed. It needed oil. Damn this house. It always needed upkeep. 短句
1-2. The workday ended, and she went home. The door was open. Nervous, she looked around, but no one was here and everything seemed safe--maybe the wind blew it open. She locked the door but the deadbolt jammed. It needed oil. Damn this house, she thought, it always needed upkeep.
2-1. The girl was terribly upset when her purse was stolen. There wasn’t anything that could get the image out of her mind. The thief was running when he grabbed her purse. The girl didn’t see him coming and was caught off guard. The girl fell down and never got a good look at him.
2-2. Having her purse stolen upset the girl terribly，her mind held onto the image and would not let it go. Unfortunately, she didn’t see him coming and was so caught off guard that she fell down and never got a good look at him. 逻辑关系清楚（衔接与连贯）
Our eyes followed hers. There was Larry! He was perching dangerously on top of the bookshelf, his little claws gripping the edge of the shelf. How could we get it down Miguel, always the quick-witted one, grabbed a small, clear plastic container. "We need to lure him in," he whispered. Imani carefully placed some of his favourite food inside the container. I slowly moved the container towards the bookshelf. Larry, tempted by the treat, cautiously inched into the container. We had done it! Mr. Jones, watching from the doorway, gave us a thumbs up.
长句在具体情境中的应用 （心理描写，场景描写，结尾升华）
The Rule of Threes 三个的法则
Repeating sentences / structures of similar length for effect can be really powerful. But this technique works best when done in threes.
Trees are tall. They're green. They're beautiful. And they're disappearing faster than many of us realize.
Walking out of the coffee shop, I felt my previous desperation, disheartenment and self-blame were gone, which were replaced by a sheer sense of calm and inner peace. I knew, they were rewarded by my invaluable virtue-honesty and integrity.
Janelle drew a deep, shaky breath and gripped her briefcase.
非谓语
分词(或分词独立主格结构)表达情感; 表达原因、伴随动作、补充说明，句子主干表达具体动作等
Caught / Torn between the urge to grab the note and the commitment to honesty, I found myself in a moment of indecision. 复杂情感
Worries about finding another job combined with the ache of parting from the elderly woman who had become like family made me wide awake late into night. In the darkness, however, I clung to the hope that somehow things would work out. 复杂情感
We all let out a collective sigh of relief, the tension that had been building up for hours finally fading away.
Del nodded willingly, a look of joy spreading across his face. 分词独立主格
Realizing that what they presented me was not only money but also encouragement and recognition of my job, I was moved to tears.
Reflecting on this experience / Looking back on it now, I realized how damaging rumors can be and how important to seek the truth and understand someone's circumstances before passing judgment.回顾式结尾
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage.
The afternoon sunlight lit up his apologetic expression, casting a soft glow on the scene. 场景
（2）过去分词或形容词（常常成对出现）置于句首作状语，表示主语伴随的心理状态
Ashamed and embarrassed, I took a deep breath, approached him inch by inch and sat beside him.
（3）介词+动名词
Upon hearing this, the players were confused for a brief moment but soon figured out what had really happened. On/upon doing 一---- 就---
Worry haunted me at the thought of the scene of Mrs. Riley lying in bed lonely and helplessly. 介词+sb. doing
The distant chatter of families picnicking and the rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away as everyone held their breath for Katie to forgive the boy.
The distant sounds of families enjoying picnics and the gentle rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away, creating a hushed anticipation as everyone awaited Katie's forgiveness of the boy. 对比
Without being paid
（4）现在分词做补充说明的状语
主从句，并列句
（1）非限制性定语从句用于对上文的进一步补充（更深层的阐述）
Deep inside, I knew someone, who might be trapped in a bigger economic dilemma than me, might need this money more. So I refused the note and left the shop with my former self-blame and regret replaced by calm and peace, which I knew was due to my insistence on honesty.
（2）虚拟语气（if主从句， I wish ）表示后悔，自责
No sooner had I blurted out脱口而出 these words than a pain of regret surged through my whole body. If only I said yes, my two weeks of serious situation would be enormously relieved by this flawless lie. After all, the whole world knew I had lost 20 dollars, right here in the coffee shop! However, my inner conscience triumphed over my evil thoughts.
How I wished that I had been careful enough so that the note would not slip out without my notice!
I wish I had not said that.
（3）No sooner --- than ---/ Hardly --- when 两个动作几乎同时发生
No sooner had I blurted out脱口而出 these words than a pain of regret surged through my whole body. If only I said yes, my two weeks of serious situation would be enormously relieved by this flawless lie. After all, the whole world knew I had lost 20 dollars, right here in the coffee shop! However, my inner conscience triumphed over my evil thoughts. 刚说完就后悔
Hardly had I entered the room when all my subscribers said in one voice, “Surprise!”. 刚进去大家就异口同声地喊
Hardly had the words flowed out of his mouth when my jaw dropped. 一听到马上惊掉了下巴
（4）as if ,好像 方式主语从句 / seem that 表语从句 / seem 加表语 ：用于揣测别人或动物心理
Del's eyes widened slightly, and for a moment, he just stared at me, as if trying to process my words.
It was as if a weight had been lifted from our shoulders.
He （the lizard）stretched out his little legs and blinked his eyes, as if to say, "Thank you for finding me!"
The forest, however, seemed determined to play a trick on her.
（5）as,since表示显而易见的原因（回扣上文）
A lump formed in my throat as I realized the depth of her sacrifice.
Since I could no longer work for Mrs. Riley, I had to find another job to earn enough money to buy a canary of my own.
（6）让步状语从句（及其变体）表示异乎寻常的感受，或事态发展
Tired as/though he was, David made up his mind to finish the race.
Kindness did not stop, though.
（7）同位语从句说明名词具体内容（展现）
Despite the fact that I might suffer a tight budget in the following weeks, I felt the warmth out of the kindness. Never before had I believed so firmly that kindness was a ray of light, brightening up the day in the darkest time.
In the darkness, however, I clung to the hope that somehow things would work out.
（8）并列句用于结尾升华，and积蓄力量; but 表对比，反差
A small act of kindness can make a big difference. The 20 pounds was not a fortune. It's certainly not enough to solve all my problems. But it's a decent amount for me to make ends meet in the following two weeks and it was enough to give me the strength to remain optimistic and keep fighting for my dream.
Flakes were still swirling in the sky but the tender flame in my heart had melted the snow surrounding us. 对比
We had found Larry, and in the process, we had discovered something even more important: the power of teamwork, the strength of friendship, and the unwavering belief in ourselves. 三个的法则We had faced a challenge, a real-life mystery, and we had overcome it. We had learned that even in the face of adversity, there was always hope, always a solution, and always the power of a team
Yes, life might be hard for me in a new city. But with the unreserved毫无保留的 generosity and unwavering 坚定的support from my roommate, I knew I could pull through any difficulty and rise to any challenge. Indeed, life is not a bed of roses, but love from my roommates make the world go around. Plus, I am bound to pay forward their kindness by helping more needy people like me.
Words have the power to hurt and heal. I will always keep in mind that they can wound and cause pain, but they also have the ability to soothe, comfort, and heal.
（9）宾语从句用于间接引语中（注意强动词，各种“说”）
随口说：mention , remark , observe , suggest, whisper,
正式说：declare, announce, proclaim,
表达意见：argue, explain, defend,
表达情感：confess, complain, apologise, promise, threaten,
Summoning up my courage, I approached him slowly and explained how I started the rumour and apologized sincerely.
Mr. Gordon led me to the bicycle and said it was a Christmas present for me. He went on to explain that they were grateful that I spared no effort to make sure the papers were delivered regardless of the weather. 间接引语
（10）系表结构+宾语从句 用于具体阐述（展现）情感（说明具体原因）
Looking back on it now, I am grateful that the kindness of the Chicago neighbourhood has stuck in my heart and made me what I am today.
I was glad that I had got the chance to see father’s mantra in action and become a practitioner of it.
（11）感叹句用于宾语从句, 语气更强
Reflecting on this experience, I realized how damaging rumors can be and how important it is to seek the truth and understand someone's circumstances before passing judgment.
（12）主语从句
It dawned on me that what contained in the envelopes was not only money to help me go through the hard time but also their appreciation and recognition of my hard work as well as their encouragement to a little boy to face life bravely.
It dawned on me that the 20 note represented not just a sum of money to ease my frustrating situation, but also a challenge to my moral principles.
其他句型
（1）强调句型
I admitted that it was I who started the rumour. 真诚道歉
（2）倒装句用于场景描写，强调
Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room was a new bicycle with a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar.
Only at that moment did I realize that rumor spread easily, but it hurt someone deeply.
（3）内心独白：用问句表示担忧等
What if she forgot something or couldn’t answer their questions
（4）with复合结构的强大功能
With the four of us enveloped in the fragrance of the flowers and the warm sunshine, I knew I had fully accepted Rosa as one of the closest family members and I was willing to share everything with her.
三 培优5跟踪训练 审题 + 扩句 讲评
审题
Passage9
主题：人在面对困难时的冷静坚韧，陌生人的帮助，人与自然和谐相处
情感描写：沮丧，感激，对自然之美的欣赏
场景描写：迷路时的森林，走出迷宫时的森林
需要解决的问题：迷路后走出森林，寻找松树之王
审题示范
Emily remembered reading about the importance of staying calm when lost.
Question 1：What did she do to stay calm She took a deep breath and sat down to think about her situation.
Question 2：What did she do next She tried several other ways in her attempt to find her way out of the forest but in vain. 展现（具体做了什么，心理情感等）
Question 3：What happened next A local man appeared. 展现（描写the man, Emily听到的， 看到的，感受）
The last sentence of paragraph 1: The man asked her if she needed any help.
Nodding eagerly, Emily explained her situation to the local man.
Question4: The old man’s response He introduced himself and offered to lead her back to the beaten track.
Question5: Did she see the eldest pine tree Yes, with the local man leading the way.
A proper ending: The local man led her out of the forest. Her feelings / Describe the
scene.
Passage10
主题：人与自然和谐相处（爱护动物）；珍惜生活中的美好时刻
需要解决的问题：越野赛中保证蟋蟀安全；蟋蟀回归自然
场景描写：男孩照顾蟋蟀，越野赛，蟋蟀回归自然
审题示范
Little Friend was riding proudly on one finger of my son’s right hand.
Question 1：Describe Little Friend. It was secure and happy.
Question 2：Why did my son finished the race much more slowly He took care of Little Friend while running.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: I accepted his way of dealing with the race.
Smiling, we walked back to the car with Little Friend.
Question4: What did we do before driving back home Set Little Friend free.
Question5: My son’s feelings Unwilling but he knew he had to. / Proud.
A proper ending: Little Friend disappeared into the bushes. 升华？/ Describe the scene.
扩句训练：
Passage 8 父子和解
主题：家庭亲情
视角：第三人称,以 “我”的视角，见证父子“不和”到“和”。(不能让“我”来告诉父亲真相，而要把这个故事最核心的部分留给两个主人公来互动。)
心理情感：怀疑，惊讶，亲情
场景：毕业典礼，父子交流
伏笔：
Jeff and I had many conversations during the year, but I will always remember the time he told me about his family.His father, a successful physician, was cold and strict in Jeff’s words.
The two had not spoken since that conversation.
Later, he was back in the area near where he grew up and he certainly did not want his father to know he was attending college.
She stayed in contact with their father, but Jeff had made her promise that she would not share any information about his life with him.
The day when the graduation ceremony came
“my daughter asked me to meet her at this address.”
By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.
Jeff was the last person to cross the stage
扩句：
Paragraph 1: As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.”
Question1: My thoughts. The name sounded familiar，but I didn’t give it much thought. / I suspected the old man was Jeff’s father.
The name ringing in my mind, I froze on the spot. Jeff Holstrom! Could this be the cold, stern father who demanded his son attend college or never enter his home again 分词独立主格结构表示心理活动，疑问句表示内心独白
Not paying too much attention to the name, I walked away and continued to walk around. However, the name “Holstrom” kept lingering in my mind. It sounded so familiar. 长短句结合
Hearing his words, my jaw dropped in disbelief, my eyes widening in shock. 不要太啰嗦
Curiously I stepped forward and a closer look at the man's appearance confirmed my assumption. He was! 短句力量感较强
Question2: What did I do then I continued to walk around talking to people. / I tried to see if they had some similarities.
Curiosity and doubt bubbling up冒出来, I turned around to get a glimpse of Dr. Holstrom, attempting to find some facial resemblances相似之处（resemble v.） Beaming and scanning, Dr. Holstrom seemed to be looking for his daughter. Soon it was time for the graduation ceremony. 短句推情节
Brushing aside the suspicion, I hurried to the side of the stage, waiting for my turn to walk onto the stage.
Question3: The graduation ceremony began. The graduates began to step onto the stage.
Suddenly, the sound of music filled the air, and the first name was called, followed closely by the next.
Speeches given, the dean began to read the names of the graduates, inviting them onto the stage one by one to receive their diplomas.
Paragraph 2: Jeff was the last person to cross the stage.
Question4: How did Jeff walk onto the stage His feelings (from my perspective)
His name was announced. He stepped onto the stage with a smile/ with his head high / stride
Having received his diploma, he turned toward the audience, radiant / re di nt/ 喜气洋洋的 with joy.
Question5: What happened later He was awarded his diploma.
Question6: Did he recognize his father His reaction His father’s reaction
Suddenly, a long figure popped into his eyes 突然进入他的视野— Dr. Holstrom. I was not sure how Jeff spotted him in the crowd, but I could tell their eyes met. Dr. Holstrom, gazing at Jeff thoughtfully for a few seconds, opened his arms as if to embrace the air around him. For a moment time seemed to stand still. 旁观者视角
I saw a mixture of confusion and surprise on his face as he watched Jeff walk onto the stage. However these emotions quickly transformed into happiness, as I saw an enormous smile on his face. 情感转变
Jeff, as if guided by magic, recognized his father among the large crowd and dashed all the way towards him, who opened his arms to embrace Jeff and offered hearty congratulations.“It's really a surprise!” Dr.Holstrom smiled.
A proper ending: Father and son made up.
Jeff came down, smiling with tears in eyes. “My father is here,” he whispered to me, “I think I’m going home.” 对话式结尾
Jeff came down and opened his arms and hugged his father awkwardly, to which his father responded eagerly. I clicked my camera and recorded the unforgettable moment. 画面定格
Family love and bond could melt away any ice, allowing love to enter each other's hearts. This was powerfully illustrated on that bright, sunny day when I volunteered to take graduation photos for my close friend, Jeff, who held his father in a tight embrace. 升华+画面
段落优化：
As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.” Upon hearing his self-introduction, I came up with Jeff's words. It seemed that he had told me that his father's name is Holstrom. I initiated to combine the man with Jeff. I kept a distance from Dr Holstrom to avoid being found by him and observed him carefully, trying to see if they have some similarities in behaviors，manners, words and so on. When I was keeping guessing the man’s character the speaker announced the beginning of the ceremony and invited all the graduates to step onto the stage.
优化1：
As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.” Dr. Holstrom! Jeff Holstrom! Could this gentleman be the cold and strict father in Jeff’s words I took a closer look and realized that the two looked remarkably alike. They shared not just some physical similarities, such as the same sharp jawline and blue eyes, but also a similar way of carrying themselves in conversation. But Jeff’s father was supposed not to know about his attending college, let alone the graduation ceremony. The the music signaling the beginning of the graduation ceremony broke off my thoughts. The graduates were stepping onto the stage one by one, their faces a mix of emotions as they crossed this important milestone in their lives.
2. Jeff was the last person to cross the stage. Jeff rose his diploma highly and looked through the viewers. All of a sudden, he noticed a familiar face in the crowd. Jeff dropped his jaw, It was Jeff's father. He must never imagine that he would turn out. After confirming his father Jeff couldn’t wait to rush to his father. Surrounded by other parents and students, they hugged each other tightly. People at present burst into thunderous applause.
优化2-1：
Jeff was the last person to cross the stage. He strode onto the stage with his head held high. After receiving his diploma, he turned around, held it high, and beamed at the audience. But then, the smile froze on his face, his eyes locking onto a figure in the crowd—Dr. Holstrom. Dr. Holstrom, gazing at Jeff thoughtfully for a few seconds, opened his arms as if to embrace the air around him. At that moment, time seemed to stand still. A silent understanding seemed to pass between them, bridging the gap of unspoken history and unexpressed emotions. Our skilled skier finally skied across the snow mountain in his and his father's heart and arrived at the destination of understanding.
优化2-2：
Jeff was the last person to cross the stage. He strode onto the stage with his head held high. After receiving his diploma, he turned around, held it high, and beamed at the audience. But then, the smile froze on his face, his eyes locking onto a figure in the crowd—Dr. Holstrom. Dr. Holstrom must have recognized , too, as I could see a mix of surprise and pride sparkling in his eyes. After the ceremony, Jeff made his way to his father. As they embraced, the world around them seemed to fade away, leaving only the echo of their shared history and the promise of a new beginning marked by mutual understanding and love. I reached for my camera and captured the precious moment.
一 场景描写回顾
外部环境与情感，行为紧密相连（寓情于景，烘托气氛）
人（或多人）在特定情境下的表现: 外部环境+人物心理+人物具体行为
（夜里担心自己赚不到钱买金丝雀，担心Mrs. Riley辗转反侧；
我纠结是否要拿走不属于我的20元钱；
风大浪高的水库上，船突然坏了，我恐惧，求救；）
画面定格式群像描写
积累场景描写词汇
be bathed in / be enveloped in
a field dotted with flowers
Flakes were swirling in the sky; drift; ---
Dancing snow whispered a story of ----
The headwind was kicking up and the waves were crashing against the boat.
The wind dropped.
The leaves rustled.
The snow crunched under our boots.
The morning sun flooded in through the window.
The setting sun cast a gentle glow over the park.
The leaves rustled and whispered in the breeze.
Sunlight filtered through the dense branches, creating an air of mystery.
The sun’s rays danced on the sparkling water.
Everywhere you look, there are rolling hills.
二 长句应用（非谓语、从句）
短句 力量爆发
It is a deep night. No noises. No sounds. Just a light shade of the moon is seen. No one expects the drama… 恐惧氛围
It wasn’t fair that Riley had to get sick. How would I buy a canary of my own 内心独白
My breath caught in my throat. I couldn't believe it. Sam. All mine.内心独白 Sam looked at me.He chirped, as if to say,"Well " I considered it. Someday I'd have enough money to buy a canary of my own. 内心独白But Mrs. Riley would never get another one. Plus, if I took Sam, Mrs. Riley would be all alone. 激动，纠结，多种想法快速闪过，群像描写（快节奏）
Could I take him Sam waited. Mrs. Riley waited. “I can't take Sam," I said. "He belongs to you. And I’ll keep working for you. You don’t have to pay me." 直接引语
The next day I ran upstairs with a bag of groceries. Mrs. Riley was still in bed. I emptied the bag, put the milk in the tiny refrigerator, and then began dusting around (动作链). Sam hopped on his swing as I dusted the top of his cage. 推动情节发展
（二）长句 较复杂的含义，节奏舒缓，力量积蓄（描写景色，情感，深刻的道理）
Autumn came without special invitation, coloring the tress in orange, yellow and red, whispering the cold in our ears and hiding the warm sun rays from our eyes.
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage. 展现：辗转反侧的场景，具体想法
I declined her offer, saying I would earn enough money to buy a canary later on and I would continue to work for her without being paid. 间接引语
（三）长短句结合，避免单一结构或句型
Good writing consists of a mixture of short and long sentences. Short sentences have punch力量 and are a great way to emphasize important points. Longer sentences add rhythm to your writing.
Examples:
1-1. The workday ended. She went home. The door was open. Nervous, she looked around. No one was there. Everything seemed safe. Maybe the wind blew it open. She locked the door. The deadbolt门栓 jammed. It needed oil. Damn this house. It always needed upkeep. 短句
1-2. The workday ended, and she went home. The door was open. Nervous, she looked around, but no one was here and everything seemed safe--maybe the wind blew it open. She locked the door but the deadbolt jammed. It needed oil. Damn this house, she thought, it always needed upkeep.
2-1. The girl was terribly upset when her purse was stolen. There wasn’t anything that could get the image out of her mind. The thief was running when he grabbed her purse. The girl didn’t see him coming and was caught off guard. The girl fell down and never got a good look at him.
2-2. Having her purse stolen upset the girl terribly，her mind held onto the image and would not let it go. Unfortunately, she didn’t see him coming and was so caught off guard that she fell down and never got a good look at him. 逻辑关系清楚（衔接与连贯）
Our eyes followed hers. There was Larry! He was perching dangerously on top of the bookshelf, his little claws gripping the edge of the shelf. How could we get it down Miguel, always the quick-witted one, grabbed a small, clear plastic container. "We need to lure him in," he whispered. Imani carefully placed some of his favourite food inside the container. I slowly moved the container towards the bookshelf. Larry, tempted by the treat, cautiously inched into the container. We had done it! Mr. Jones, watching from the doorway, gave us a thumbs up.
长句在具体情境中的应用 （心理描写，场景描写，结尾升华）
The Rule of Threes 三个的法则
Repeating sentences / structures of similar length for effect can be really powerful. But this technique works best when done in threes.
Trees are tall. They're green. They're beautiful. And they're disappearing faster than many of us realize.
Walking out of the coffee shop, I felt my previous desperation, disheartenment and self-blame were gone, which were replaced by a sheer sense of calm and inner peace. I knew, they were rewarded by my invaluable virtue-honesty and integrity.
Janelle drew a deep, shaky breath and gripped her briefcase.
非谓语
分词(或分词独立主格结构)表达情感; 表达原因、伴随动作、补充说明，句子主干表达具体动作等
Caught / Torn between the urge to grab the note and the commitment to honesty, I found myself in a moment of indecision. 复杂情感
Worries about finding another job combined with the ache of parting from the elderly woman who had become like family made me wide awake late into night. In the darkness, however, I clung to the hope that somehow things would work out. 复杂情感
We all let out a collective sigh of relief, the tension that had been building up for hours finally fading away.
Del nodded willingly, a look of joy spreading across his face. 分词独立主格
Realizing that what they presented me was not only money but also encouragement and recognition of my job, I was moved to tears.
Reflecting on this experience / Looking back on it now, I realized how damaging rumors can be and how important to seek the truth and understand someone's circumstances before passing judgment.回顾式结尾
I tossed and turned, haunted by the image of Sam chirping alone in his cage.
The afternoon sunlight lit up his apologetic expression, casting a soft glow on the scene. 场景
（2）过去分词或形容词（常常成对出现）置于句首作状语，表示主语伴随的心理状态
Ashamed and embarrassed, I took a deep breath, approached him inch by inch and sat beside him.
（3）介词+动名词
Upon hearing this, the players were confused for a brief moment but soon figured out what had really happened. On/upon doing 一---- 就---
Worry haunted me at the thought of the scene of Mrs. Riley lying in bed lonely and helplessly. 介词+sb. doing
The distant chatter of families picnicking and the rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away as everyone held their breath for Katie to forgive the boy.
The distant sounds of families enjoying picnics and the gentle rustling of leaves in the breeze faded away, creating a hushed anticipation as everyone awaited Katie's forgiveness of the boy. 对比
Without being paid
（4）现在分词做补充说明的状语
主从句，并列句
（1）非限制性定语从句用于对上文的进一步补充（更深层的阐述）
Deep inside, I knew someone, who might be trapped in a bigger economic dilemma than me, might need this money more. So I refused the note and left the shop with my former self-blame and regret replaced by calm and peace, which I knew was due to my insistence on honesty.
（2）虚拟语气（if主从句， I wish ）表示后悔，自责
No sooner had I blurted out脱口而出 these words than a pain of regret surged through my whole body. If only I said yes, my two weeks of serious situation would be enormously relieved by this flawless lie. After all, the whole world knew I had lost 20 dollars, right here in the coffee shop! However, my inner conscience triumphed over my evil thoughts.
How I wished that I had been careful enough so that the note would not slip out without my notice!
I wish I had not said that.
（3）No sooner --- than ---/ Hardly --- when 两个动作几乎同时发生
No sooner had I blurted out脱口而出 these words than a pain of regret surged through my whole body. If only I said yes, my two weeks of serious situation would be enormously relieved by this flawless lie. After all, the whole world knew I had lost 20 dollars, right here in the coffee shop! However, my inner conscience triumphed over my evil thoughts. 刚说完就后悔
Hardly had I entered the room when all my subscribers said in one voice, “Surprise!”. 刚进去大家就异口同声地喊
Hardly had the words flowed out of his mouth when my jaw dropped. 一听到马上惊掉了下巴
（4）as if ,好像 方式主语从句 / seem that 表语从句 / seem 加表语 ：用于揣测别人或动物心理
Del's eyes widened slightly, and for a moment, he just stared at me, as if trying to process my words.
It was as if a weight had been lifted from our shoulders.
He （the lizard）stretched out his little legs and blinked his eyes, as if to say, "Thank you for finding me!"
The forest, however, seemed determined to play a trick on her.
（5）as,since表示显而易见的原因（回扣上文）
A lump formed in my throat as I realized the depth of her sacrifice.
Since I could no longer work for Mrs. Riley, I had to find another job to earn enough money to buy a canary of my own.
（6）让步状语从句（及其变体）表示异乎寻常的感受，或事态发展
Tired as/though he was, David made up his mind to finish the race.
Kindness did not stop, though.
（7）同位语从句说明名词具体内容（展现）
Despite the fact that I might suffer a tight budget in the following weeks, I felt the warmth out of the kindness. Never before had I believed so firmly that kindness was a ray of light, brightening up the day in the darkest time.
In the darkness, however, I clung to the hope that somehow things would work out.
（8）并列句用于结尾升华，and积蓄力量; but 表对比，反差
A small act of kindness can make a big difference. The 20 pounds was not a fortune. It's certainly not enough to solve all my problems. But it's a decent amount for me to make ends meet in the following two weeks and it was enough to give me the strength to remain optimistic and keep fighting for my dream.
Flakes were still swirling in the sky but the tender flame in my heart had melted the snow surrounding us. 对比
We had found Larry, and in the process, we had discovered something even more important: the power of teamwork, the strength of friendship, and the unwavering belief in ourselves. 三个的法则We had faced a challenge, a real-life mystery, and we had overcome it. We had learned that even in the face of adversity, there was always hope, always a solution, and always the power of a team
Yes, life might be hard for me in a new city. But with the unreserved毫无保留的 generosity and unwavering 坚定的support from my roommate, I knew I could pull through any difficulty and rise to any challenge. Indeed, life is not a bed of roses, but love from my roommates make the world go around. Plus, I am bound to pay forward their kindness by helping more needy people like me.
Words have the power to hurt and heal. I will always keep in mind that they can wound and cause pain, but they also have the ability to soothe, comfort, and heal.
（9）宾语从句用于间接引语中（注意强动词，各种“说”）
随口说：mention , remark , observe , suggest, whisper,
正式说：declare, announce, proclaim,
表达意见：argue, explain, defend,
表达情感：confess, complain, apologise, promise, threaten,
Summoning up my courage, I approached him slowly and explained how I started the rumour and apologized sincerely.
Mr. Gordon led me to the bicycle and said it was a Christmas present for me. He went on to explain that they were grateful that I spared no effort to make sure the papers were delivered regardless of the weather. 间接引语
（10）系表结构+宾语从句 用于具体阐述（展现）情感（说明具体原因）
Looking back on it now, I am grateful that the kindness of the Chicago neighbourhood has stuck in my heart and made me what I am today.
I was glad that I had got the chance to see father’s mantra in action and become a practitioner of it.
（11）感叹句用于宾语从句, 语气更强
Reflecting on this experience, I realized how damaging rumors can be and how important it is to seek the truth and understand someone's circumstances before passing judgment.
（12）主语从句
It dawned on me that what contained in the envelopes was not only money to help me go through the hard time but also their appreciation and recognition of my hard work as well as their encouragement to a little boy to face life bravely.
It dawned on me that the 20 note represented not just a sum of money to ease my frustrating situation, but also a challenge to my moral principles.
其他句型
（1）强调句型
I admitted that it was I who started the rumour. 真诚道歉
（2）倒装句用于场景描写，强调
Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room was a new bicycle with a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar.
Only at that moment did I realize that rumor spread easily, but it hurt someone deeply.
（3）内心独白：用问句表示担忧等
What if she forgot something or couldn’t answer their questions
（4）with复合结构的强大功能
With the four of us enveloped in the fragrance of the flowers and the warm sunshine, I knew I had fully accepted Rosa as one of the closest family members and I was willing to share everything with her.
三 培优5跟踪训练 审题 + 扩句 讲评
审题
Passage9
主题：人在面对困难时的冷静坚韧，陌生人的帮助，人与自然和谐相处
情感描写：沮丧，感激，对自然之美的欣赏
场景描写：迷路时的森林，走出迷宫时的森林
需要解决的问题：迷路后走出森林，寻找松树之王
审题示范
Emily remembered reading about the importance of staying calm when lost.
Question 1：What did she do to stay calm She took a deep breath and sat down to think about her situation.
Question 2：What did she do next She tried several other ways in her attempt to find her way out of the forest but in vain. 展现（具体做了什么，心理情感等）
Question 3：What happened next A local man appeared. 展现（描写the man, Emily听到的， 看到的，感受）
The last sentence of paragraph 1: The man asked her if she needed any help.
Nodding eagerly, Emily explained her situation to the local man.
Question4: The old man’s response He introduced himself and offered to lead her back to the beaten track.
Question5: Did she see the eldest pine tree Yes, with the local man leading the way.
A proper ending: The local man led her out of the forest. Her feelings / Describe the
scene.
Passage10
主题：人与自然和谐相处（爱护动物）；珍惜生活中的美好时刻
需要解决的问题：越野赛中保证蟋蟀安全；蟋蟀回归自然
场景描写：男孩照顾蟋蟀，越野赛，蟋蟀回归自然
审题示范
Little Friend was riding proudly on one finger of my son’s right hand.
Question 1：Describe Little Friend. It was secure and happy.
Question 2：Why did my son finished the race much more slowly He took care of Little Friend while running.
The last sentence of paragraph 1: I accepted his way of dealing with the race.
Smiling, we walked back to the car with Little Friend.
Question4: What did we do before driving back home Set Little Friend free.
Question5: My son’s feelings Unwilling but he knew he had to. / Proud.
A proper ending: Little Friend disappeared into the bushes. 升华？/ Describe the scene.
扩句训练：
Passage 8 父子和解
主题：家庭亲情
视角：第三人称,以 “我”的视角，见证父子“不和”到“和”。(不能让“我”来告诉父亲真相，而要把这个故事最核心的部分留给两个主人公来互动。)
心理情感：怀疑，惊讶，亲情
场景：毕业典礼，父子交流
伏笔：
Jeff and I had many conversations during the year, but I will always remember the time he told me about his family.His father, a successful physician, was cold and strict in Jeff’s words.
The two had not spoken since that conversation.
Later, he was back in the area near where he grew up and he certainly did not want his father to know he was attending college.
She stayed in contact with their father, but Jeff had made her promise that she would not share any information about his life with him.
The day when the graduation ceremony came
“my daughter asked me to meet her at this address.”
By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.
Jeff was the last person to cross the stage
扩句：
Paragraph 1: As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.”
Question1: My thoughts. The name sounded familiar，but I didn’t give it much thought. / I suspected the old man was Jeff’s father.
The name ringing in my mind, I froze on the spot. Jeff Holstrom! Could this be the cold, stern father who demanded his son attend college or never enter his home again 分词独立主格结构表示心理活动，疑问句表示内心独白
Not paying too much attention to the name, I walked away and continued to walk around. However, the name “Holstrom” kept lingering in my mind. It sounded so familiar. 长短句结合
Hearing his words, my jaw dropped in disbelief, my eyes widening in shock. 不要太啰嗦
Curiously I stepped forward and a closer look at the man's appearance confirmed my assumption. He was! 短句力量感较强
Question2: What did I do then I continued to walk around talking to people. / I tried to see if they had some similarities.
Curiosity and doubt bubbling up冒出来, I turned around to get a glimpse of Dr. Holstrom, attempting to find some facial resemblances相似之处（resemble v.） Beaming and scanning, Dr. Holstrom seemed to be looking for his daughter. Soon it was time for the graduation ceremony. 短句推情节
Brushing aside the suspicion, I hurried to the side of the stage, waiting for my turn to walk onto the stage.
Question3: The graduation ceremony began. The graduates began to step onto the stage.
Suddenly, the sound of music filled the air, and the first name was called, followed closely by the next.
Speeches given, the dean began to read the names of the graduates, inviting them onto the stage one by one to receive their diplomas.
Paragraph 2: Jeff was the last person to cross the stage.
Question4: How did Jeff walk onto the stage His feelings (from my perspective)
His name was announced. He stepped onto the stage with a smile/ with his head high / stride
Having received his diploma, he turned toward the audience, radiant / re di nt/ 喜气洋洋的 with joy.
Question5: What happened later He was awarded his diploma.
Question6: Did he recognize his father His reaction His father’s reaction
Suddenly, a long figure popped into his eyes 突然进入他的视野— Dr. Holstrom. I was not sure how Jeff spotted him in the crowd, but I could tell their eyes met. Dr. Holstrom, gazing at Jeff thoughtfully for a few seconds, opened his arms as if to embrace the air around him. For a moment time seemed to stand still. 旁观者视角
I saw a mixture of confusion and surprise on his face as he watched Jeff walk onto the stage. However these emotions quickly transformed into happiness, as I saw an enormous smile on his face. 情感转变
Jeff, as if guided by magic, recognized his father among the large crowd and dashed all the way towards him, who opened his arms to embrace Jeff and offered hearty congratulations.“It's really a surprise!” Dr.Holstrom smiled.
A proper ending: Father and son made up.
Jeff came down, smiling with tears in eyes. “My father is here,” he whispered to me, “I think I’m going home.” 对话式结尾
Jeff came down and opened his arms and hugged his father awkwardly, to which his father responded eagerly. I clicked my camera and recorded the unforgettable moment. 画面定格
Family love and bond could melt away any ice, allowing love to enter each other's hearts. This was powerfully illustrated on that bright, sunny day when I volunteered to take graduation photos for my close friend, Jeff, who held his father in a tight embrace. 升华+画面
段落优化：
As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.” Upon hearing his self-introduction, I came up with Jeff's words. It seemed that he had told me that his father's name is Holstrom. I initiated to combine the man with Jeff. I kept a distance from Dr Holstrom to avoid being found by him and observed him carefully, trying to see if they have some similarities in behaviors，manners, words and so on. When I was keeping guessing the man’s character the speaker announced the beginning of the ceremony and invited all the graduates to step onto the stage.
优化1：
As I left him, he said, “Thank you. By the way, my name’s Dr. Holstrom.” Dr. Holstrom! Jeff Holstrom! Could this gentleman be the cold and strict father in Jeff’s words I took a closer look and realized that the two looked remarkably alike. They shared not just some physical similarities, such as the same sharp jawline and blue eyes, but also a similar way of carrying themselves in conversation. But Jeff’s father was supposed not to know about his attending college, let alone the graduation ceremony. The the music signaling the beginning of the graduation ceremony broke off my thoughts. The graduates were stepping onto the stage one by one, their faces a mix of emotions as they crossed this important milestone in their lives.
2. Jeff was the last person to cross the stage. Jeff rose his diploma highly and looked through the viewers. All of a sudden, he noticed a familiar face in the crowd. Jeff dropped his jaw, It was Jeff's father. He must never imagine that he would turn out. After confirming his father Jeff couldn’t wait to rush to his father. Surrounded by other parents and students, they hugged each other tightly. People at present burst into thunderous applause.
优化2-1：
Jeff was the last person to cross the stage. He strode onto the stage with his head held high. After receiving his diploma, he turned around, held it high, and beamed at the audience. But then, the smile froze on his face, his eyes locking onto a figure in the crowd—Dr. Holstrom. Dr. Holstrom, gazing at Jeff thoughtfully for a few seconds, opened his arms as if to embrace the air around him. At that moment, time seemed to stand still. A silent understanding seemed to pass between them, bridging the gap of unspoken history and unexpressed emotions. Our skilled skier finally skied across the snow mountain in his and his father's heart and arrived at the destination of understanding.
优化2-2：
Jeff was the last person to cross the stage. He strode onto the stage with his head held high. After receiving his diploma, he turned around, held it high, and beamed at the audience. But then, the smile froze on his face, his eyes locking onto a figure in the crowd—Dr. Holstrom. Dr. Holstrom must have recognized , too, as I could see a mix of surprise and pride sparkling in his eyes. After the ceremony, Jeff made his way to his father. As they embraced, the world around them seemed to fade away, leaving only the echo of their shared history and the promise of a new beginning marked by mutual understanding and love. I reached for my camera and captured the precious moment.