中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中考英语逆袭冲刺
书面表达15篇
一、话题作文
1．全世界每年因安全事故导致有数以万计的生命死于非命！面对每一次残酷的事故，面对每一个鲜活的生命的逝去，我们难道就只有感叹、哀伤？其实，只要我们行动起来，做到心中有安全意识，遵守安全规则，就能消除潜在危险。我校即将举行“珍爱生命，心系安全”的征文比赛，特此向你征稿。请你围绕生活中经常存在的安全问题，如：运动安全，交通安全……结合实际就如何减少安全事故的发生谈至少三点建议，并呼吁大家一起携手，珍惜生命，健康成长。
要求：
1.不逐字翻译；
2.文章总词数为80—100；
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。
It is reported that there are thousands of accidents around the world every year.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
It is reported that there are thousands of accidents around the world every year. For example, many people die from car accidents every day. The unsafe food in the market can be seen everywhere. It is harmful to the our health. What’s more, improper exercise can also lead to safety problems.
In order to protect ourselves, we should obey the traffic rules. Don’t allow anyone to produce any unsafe food. We mustn’t sell or buy such unsafe food. When we play sports, we must pay more attention. We are supposed to stop as soon as we feel uncomfortable.
If we do so, every one will be safer.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求围绕常见的安全问题提出至少三点减少安全事故发生的建议，开头已给出，联系实际情况进行写作。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，以第一、三人称为主，提建议时多用情态动词；写作时承接开头，先描述常见的安全问题，在提出具体建议，最后总结收尾。注意主谓一致，做到无语法和标点错误。
二、材料作文
2．人的一生中能够遇到良师益友是非常幸运的事情，遇到一位良师或者益友都会对人的发展和前途产生积极的影响。请你介绍一位你遇到的良师或者益友，内容包括：
1. 你的良师或者益友对你有积极影响的一件事；
2. 你觉得良师或者益友应该是什么样子的。
要求：(1) 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
(2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
To have a good teacher or a good friend is one of the luckiest things in one’s life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
To have a good teacher or a good friend is one of the luckiest things in one’s life.
I’ve met a lot of people in my life. One of them, my Chinese teacher Mr Wu is the person who has influenced me most. Six months ago, I got into a fight with someone over something trivial. To my surprise, Mr Wu did not punish me, but talked to me kindly. He guided me patiently. The most important thing is that this event has a great impact on my later study and life. I also got rid of some bad habits.
I think a good teacher or a good friend should be as patient as Mr Wu and be cautious and conscientious in his position.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的良师或者益友对你有积极影响的一件事；
第二步，介绍你觉得良师或者益友应该是什么样子的。
[亮点词汇]
①to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
②have a great impact on产生很大影响
③get rid of摆脱
[高分句型]
①One of them, my Chinese teacher Mr Wu is the person who has influenced me most.（who引导的定语从句）
②The most important thing is that this event has a great impact on my later study and life.（that引导的表语从句）
3． “研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。
1、要点提示：①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
2、注意事项：①短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
②80词左右；
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip； 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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【答案】例文：
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，点名主题，“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎；
第二步，介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
第三步，表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由；
第四步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句)
4．文明是城市发展的灵魂、文明是城市进步的标志。 “平江是我家, 文明靠大家！”作为中学生，我们应积极参与文明城市（civilized city）的建设。请根据下面给出的提示，写一篇短文。
1.尊敬老师，对人礼貌。
2.帮助他人，友善待人。
3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯。
4.保护环境，人人有责；不乱扔垃圾、不踩草地等。
提示词：respect（尊敬）；be polite to；obey（遵守）；traffic rule；zebra crossing（斑马线）
要求：1.词数80—100（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）；
2.短文应包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥；
3.字迹工整，语句通顺，注意连贯，表达正确，逻辑清晰；
4.文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
5.请把文章写在答题卡相应位置的横线上。
Pingjiang is now making its effort to become a civilized city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文：
Pingjiang is now making its effort to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn’t step on the grass and climb the trees. Litter mustn’t be thrown everywhere.
Pingjiang is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的提示写一篇短文谈谈作为中学生的我们，在“文明城市的建设”中应该如何做。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时和第一人称来行文。可分为三段行文：第一段点题；第二段详细介绍我们应该怎么做；第三段以号召大家结尾。确保内容全面，行文连贯，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法错误。
5．青蛙公主、天才少女谷爱凌在2022的北京冬奥会走红之后，她的生活方式也备受瞩目。谷爱凌的妈妈谷燕称，爱凌现在18岁了，每天晚上都至少睡十个小时，从小到大都是这样。充足的睡眠是健康的保证，请根据以下要点谈谈青少年如何保障充足的睡眠。
1.提高学习效率，保障睡眠时长；
2.保持舒适环境；
3.减少睡前电子产品使用；
4.……
注意：
1.80字左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总字数。
It’s necessary for everyone to get enough and great sleep. However many students nowadays have trouble in sleeping well. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】[例文]
It’s necessary for everyone to get enough and great sleep. However many students nowadays have trouble in sleeping well. If a student doesn’t sleep well at night, he or she won’t work well. He or she may have trouble listening to the teacher carefully in class. What can we do to improve our quality of sleep
First we should improve our learning efficiency and make sure that we can have enough time to sleep. Second, we should maintain a comfortable environment to make us fall asleep. Third, we should avoid using electronic products before going to bed. Finally, doing some exercise will help us sleep.
Follow the advice above and then we’ll have a good sleep every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点提示，写一篇关于充足睡眠的短文，题目要点必须全部包含，并进行适当拓展。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用现在时。文章应包含所给要点，写作时注意要点分明，可用first、second等序数词分点表达，使文章条理清晰，叙述流畅，单词拼写与语法使用应避免出现错误。
6．一月三十一日，农历除夕，神舟十三号的三名航天员在遥远的太空专门发来视频，向祖国和人民送上祝福。这是中国人首次在距离地球400公里的“中国宫”里过新年。虽然我国的航天事业在发展中经历了许多困难，但是我国航天人不断钻研，将我国航天事业发展到世界领先地位。
作为一名中学生，也应该为祖国的繁荣富强贡献我们的一份力量，那我们应该怎么做呢？请结合下面的要点提示简要谈谈你的看法，可适当发挥。
要点提示：1. 了解中国历史，学习中国文化；2. 学习不同国家的优秀文化和知识；3. 刻苦学习，掌握各种技能……
写作要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
This Spring Festival, I was so excited when I received a blessing from the astronauts in Shenzhou 13. How amazing China is! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
This Spring Festival, I was so excited when I received a blessing from the astronauts in Shenzhou 13. How amazing China is! As middle school students, we should also contribute to the prosperity of our motherland. Then what should we do
First, we should understand Chinese history and learn about Chinese culture. In this way, we can better spread Chinese culture to the world. Second, we should learn about the excellent culture and knowledge of different countries. Understanding different cultures helps to broaden our horizons. Third, we should study hard and master all kinds of skills. When the young are strong, China is strong.
Let us work together to contribute to the prosperity of the country.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，谈谈我们应该如何为祖国的繁荣富强贡献我们的一份力量。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍应该怎么做；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．英语杂志社以“我劳动，我快乐”为主题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点：
（1）分享你最难忘的劳动经历；
（2）谈谈你的劳动感受；
（3）表达你的观点并发出倡议。
要求：
（1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：80左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Last weekend,
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【答案】例文
Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile.
It was the first time for me to cook for them. A little bit tired but happy, I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got a deeper understanding of my parents.
I think it’s our duty to share some housework. Besides, doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the house!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“我劳动，我快乐”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文要以第一人称来行文；时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；本文可分为三段式：第一段分享最难忘的劳动经历。第二段谈谈劳动感受。第三段表达观点并发出倡议。在写作时要保证语言连贯，无语法和单词拼写错误。
8．假定你是李华，学校正举办“我劳动，我快乐”为主题向学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点包括：
（1）分享你的劳动经历；
（2）谈谈你的劳动感受；
（3）表达你的观点并发出倡议。
注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【答案】例文：
Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile.
It was the first time for me to cook for them. A little bit tired but happy, I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got a deeper understanding of my parents.
I think it’s our duty to share some housework. Besides, doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the house.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，同时注意用一般过去时叙述自己的劳动经历和感受，用一般现在时谈自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的劳动经历；
第二步：谈谈自己从这次劳动经历中获得的感受；
第三步：表达自己对劳动的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① surprised 惊讶的
② praise 表扬
③ take care of 照顾
④ unforgettable 难以忘记的
⑤ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
① It was the first time for me to cook for them. （it is/was the first time to do sth. 第一次做某事）
② doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. （动名词作主语）
9．双减政策落地，学科类培训全而禁止，你的周末活动有了很大的变化。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。要点：
（1）增加了运动时间，参加球类培训班（篮球、排球、乒乓球、羽毛球、足球……）；
（2）增加了劳动时间，学做各种家务；
（3）接近大自然，和父母的关系变好了；
（4）我认为双减政策……（自主发挥，至少一点）
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
There’s no need for me to go to the of-campus tutoring school（校外学科类培训学校）because of the “Double Reduction Policy”（双减政策）. I fell much more relaxed. On weekends, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
There’s no need for me to go to the off-campus tutoring school because of the “Double Reduction Policy”(双减政策). I feel much more relaxed. On weekends, I have more time to do sports. I take part in volleyball training and has made great progress. It makes me more confident. Besides, labor work time is increased and I take more interest in learning to do chores. What’s more, my parents become more satisfied with me. We often take a walk in the park after dinner or go outing on weekends. In my opinion, this policy makes us more active and closer to family. I support it a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总说由于双减政策自己的整体的改变和感觉；
第二步，介绍自己周末时间安排，包括运动时间，劳动时间等；
第三步，最后是总结并陈述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① do sports做运动
② make great progress取得巨大进步
③ take more interest in对……更感兴趣
[高分句型]
Besides, labor work time is increased and I take more interest in learning to do chores.（and连接的并列句）
10．人，需要不断地改变，不断地进步，才能不断地获得成功。而人生，总会有不期而遇的温暖和生生不息的希望。假如你校英文报开展了主题为“How has COVID-19 changed humans ”的英语征文大赛，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文投稿。
Students Taking online classes;Doing physical exercise;…
Doctors Winning great respect (尊敬);Becoming a more popular future job;…
… …
要求：1. 包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；2. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As an unexpected “visitor” to all human beings, COVID-19 has changed many people’s lives. Here are some examples. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
As an unexpected “visitor” to all human beings, COVID-19 has changed many people’s lives. Here are some examples.
For students, 2022 can be a year to be remembered forever. Because of COVID-19, online classes have become popular. And more students began to do physical exercise to keep themselves healthy and strong. When it comes to doctors, nobody else played a more important role in fighting COVID-19 than them. So they have won great respect and being a doctor has become many students’ dream job. Changes don’t stop there. COVID-19 has also made a difference to family life. In the past, people liked to eat out. But now, for their own safety, they would like to cook food at home and enjoy the time of being together.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求以“How has COVID-19 changed humans ”为主题，根据表格提示内容写一篇英语短文，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用现在完成时和一般过去时为主；介绍新冠病毒对人们的影响时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
11． 2025毕业季如期而至。作为即将毕业的湘郡初三学子，年级组倡导大家 “携手爱校园，为母校献礼”。请写一篇短文，表达你对母校感激之情，介绍作为初三的同学，我们可以做些什么为母校献礼，并祝福母校越来越好！
要求：
1. 字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息，并请适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名；
4. 词数：80词左右。
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【答案】例文
How time flies! As a student who is about to graduate, I’d like to do something special for our school.
First, I will clean up the school with my classmates to make our school look more comfortable. What’s more, I will hold some lectures to give some useful learning methods to younger schoolmates in my spare time. Last but not least, I will call for more people to join us and everyone can play his or her part in these activities.
I hope my school will get better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕如何给母校献礼写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍打算如何为母校献礼；最后一段表达对母校的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
12．最近，你班召开了一次以“How can we use pocket money wisely ”为主题的班会。请综合以下同学的做法，说说你是如何使用零花钱的，并就如何更理智地使用零花钱谈谈你的看法。
要求：
（1）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
How can we use pocket money wisely
Nowadays, many students have their own pocket money.
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【答案】例文
How can we use pocket money wisely
Nowadays, many students have their own pocket money. How can we use pocket money wisely Here is some advice.
First, make a list. We had better start with the thing we want most. We can also write down how much it cost or how important in our life. Second, help others. We can use our pocket money to help others in need. Last but not least, save as much as we can. A wallet sometimes might be the best place to save money because it may make it easier.
Follow these suggestions, we may use pocket money more wisely.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“如何明智地使用零花钱”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段就如何明智地使用零花钱提出自己的建议；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
13．最近教育部发文要求中小学校开展劳动教育必修课，并且规定了中小学每周课外活动和家庭生活中的劳动时间。其中小学1~2年级不少于2小时，其它年级不少于3小时。劳动教育已然成为孩子成长中不可或缺的一门课程。请你写一篇小短文，介绍你做家务劳动的经历及感悟。要点如下：
（1）你最擅长的一种家务及喜欢此家务活的原因；
（2）一次做此项家务的难忘经历；
（3）你的收获或感悟。
注意:
（1）80词左右；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
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【答案】例文
For middle school students, doing housework is a part of life. Most students often help parents sweep the floor every day and some usually take out the rubbish when they leave for school. I am also willing to share housework and I am good at doing the dishes. Because it can give my parents some time to relax after hard work.
At first, I could not do it well, and once I even broke two bowls. Though my parents did not punish me, I felt terrible. So I became more careful when I did the dishes. And now I am able to do the dishes quickly and well.
I’ve learnt from doing housework. My life skills are developed, so I can take care of myself. Besides, it also makes me develop a good habit of loving labor.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要根据题干中的提示介绍你做家务劳动的经历和感悟，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段描述自己最擅长的一种家务及喜欢此家务活的原因；第二段讲述一次做此项家务的难忘经历；第三段描述你的收获或感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚。做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
三、电子邮件
14．假设你是李华，在网上看到中国环境保护协会(China Environmental Protection Association 英文简称“CEPA” )向全国招募800名志愿者进行环境保护的知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自我推荐邮件。
要点提示：
1. 说明写信目的；
2. 简述个人情况和申请优势；
3. 表达自己的期望。
要求：
1.词数在100词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
提示词汇：volunteer, one of the members, air pollution, water pollution, play a part in, be good at, knowledge, online, expect, save the earth, protect the environment...
Dear sir/madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear sir/madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. I learnt that China Environmental Protection Association wants to recruit 1,000 volunteers to protect environment. I can’t wait to write to you, hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for environmental protection.
Firstly, being a student, I am good at biology. I have a good knowledge of air pollution and water pollution. What’s more, nothing can delight me so much as caring for environment that bring us endless comfort and pleasure. Last but not least, I am eager to appeal to more people to protect it. Only if we human beings take effective measures can it be protected.
On the whole, I’m qualified to be your volunteer. I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。根据要点提示内容，写一封自我推荐的邮件，申请成为环境保护知识普及活动的志愿者。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作可分为三段式，第一段表明自己想成为志愿者；第二段具体介绍个人情况和申请优势；第三段表达自己的期望。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
四、书信作文
15．随着中考临近，Tony在努力复习备考，同时他感到紧张而焦虑。请根据他的求助信，以Dr. Know的身份给他写一封回信。
Dear Dr. Know,I feel nervous and worried these days. Because I have made little progress in my study, especially my math. Every day I spend most of time on my lessons and stay up late. I feel sleepy and tired in class. I always keep silent and seldom talk with others. I don’t think I will pass the senior high school entrance examination (中考) successfully. What can I do, Dr. Know Tony Chen
注意：(1) 80词左右；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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【详解】1.题干解读：文章要求根据Tony的求助信，以Dr. Know的身份给他写一封回信。写作中可增加细节，以使行文连贯，但不得出现真实的人名和校名。
2.写作指导：文章针对Tony的求助信给他回信，主要是给他安慰和建议，所以时态主要用一般现在时，行文中注意主谓一致、单复数以及单词书写等问题，确保写出的句子符合英文表达习惯，上下文连贯。
【答案】例文：
Dear Tony Chen,
I’m sorry to hear that you have so many questions. But don’t worry too much. They are very common because many students feel this way.These days you feel nervous and worried because you have made little progress in your study. As for it, you can try to relax yourself: For example, doing sports or listening to the music makes you feel relaxed. If you are not good at math, you can ask your teacher for help.（if 引导的条件状语从句） I think he will give you some advice on how to learn math well.（宾语从句） Besides, you must not stay up late. This is a very unhealthy way to learn. You should go to bed and get up early. Communicating with classmates（动名词作主语） is also a good way to relax. I hope my advice is helpful to you.
Yours,
Dr. Know
