读后续写--从争吵冷战到和解相拥，她在家庭中懂得爱 讲义-湖南省益阳市普通高中2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末质量检测英语试题
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As a high school freshman, Emily had always been close to her family. However, as the pressure of schoolwork increased and her social life expanded, she found their family relationship on the rocks. She disliked it when her parents kept asking such questions as“Where are you going”, “Who are you going with”. She felt they were always on her back about something. She just couldn't see eye to eye with them on so many things!
The once harmonious home environment was now filled with heated arguments and cold silences. Emily felt her parents didn't understand her, and they felt she was becoming distant and impatient. It seemed that they were becoming strangers under the same roof!
One afternoon, after a particularly heated argument about her curfew(宵禁令), Emily stormed into her room, slamming the door behind her. She threw herself onto her bed, tears streaming down her face. She couldn't understand why her parents were so unreasonable. She was almost15, after all, and her friends were allowed to stay out later. Why couldn't her parents trust her
As she lay there, her anger slowly gave way to calm. At that time, Emily's phone buzzed. It was a message from her mother, asking if she would go downstairs to have dinner. Buzzing again!It was a message from Dad, which read, “Emily, we love you very much, and we only want what's best for you. We know you' re growing up, and we want to respect your independence, but we also need to know you' re safe.”
Emily hesitated but decided it was time to clear the air. When she entered the dining room,she found her parents sitting at the table, looking as upset as she felt.
Dinner had been served on the table, with a bowl of chocolate cake, her favorite, specially placed in front of her. Emily felt a wave of warmth flooding over her.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为 150 左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts.
第二段：Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly.
文章大意
高中新生艾米丽原本和家人关系亲密，但随着学业压力增加和社交生活的拓展，她与父母的关系逐渐紧张。父母对她的诸多询问，如出行去向和同行人员，让她感到厌烦，家庭中充满争吵和冷战。一次关于宵禁令的激烈争吵后，艾米丽生气地回到房间，却收到父母的信息，母亲叫她下楼吃饭，父亲表达了对她的爱和关心，希望她安全。艾米丽看到桌上的晚餐，还有她最爱的巧克力蛋糕，心中涌起一股暖流。
故事山分析
开端：艾米丽作为高中新生，因学业和社交变化，与父母关系出现问题，家庭氛围变得紧张。
发展：艾米丽和父母就宵禁令发生激烈争吵，她愤怒地回到房间。
高潮：父母给艾米丽发信息关心她，她看到桌上的晚餐和喜爱的蛋糕，情绪有所缓和。
结局（待续写）：艾米丽与父母化解矛盾，家庭关系重归和谐。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
艾米丽与父母关系紧张：在续写中，艾米丽会通过与父母的沟通和自身的改变，逐步修复与父母的关系，回应这一伏笔。
父母的关心信息：表明父母虽与艾米丽有矛盾，但仍关心她，续写中艾米丽会理解父母的苦心，双方进一步沟通，解决矛盾。
艾米丽的情绪转变：从愤怒到犹豫，为她与父母和解埋下伏笔，后续她会主动与父母交流，化解矛盾。
餐桌上的巧克力蛋糕：体现父母对艾米丽的爱，在续写中，这会成为艾米丽理解父母的一个契机，推动家庭关系的改善。
艾米丽决定与父母沟通：预示着矛盾将得到解决，续写中会详细描述沟通的过程和结果，使家庭关系恢复和谐。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：艾米丽意识到自己的问题，主动向父母道歉，表达自己的想法和感受，如理解父母的关心，但希望得到更多信任和独立空间，父母也表达对她的期望和担忧，双方坦诚交流。
第二段：描述接下来几周家庭的变化，艾米丽与父母的关系变得融洽，她会主动和父母分享生活，父母也给予她更多信任和自由，家庭氛围重新变得温馨，最后升华主题，强调沟通和理解对家庭关系的重要性。
情感线
艾米丽一开始对父母充满不满和愤怒，觉得父母不理解自己。收到父母信息和看到蛋糕后，她的情绪有所缓和，决定与父母沟通。在沟通时，她诚恳地表达自己的想法，情绪逐渐变得平和。后续几周，她感受到家庭关系的改善，内心充满喜悦和温暖，明白了沟通和理解在家庭中的重要性。
故事线
艾米丽意识到自己的错误，主动向父母道歉。
艾米丽和父母坦诚交流，表达自己对独立的渴望和对父母关心的理解。
父母倾听艾米丽的想法，表达对她的期望和担忧。
接下来几周，艾米丽主动和父母分享生活，父母给予她更多信任。
家庭氛围变得温馨和谐，艾米丽和父母的关系重归亲密。
艾米丽感悟到沟通和理解对家庭关系的重要性。
主旨升华句
In a family, open communication and mutual understanding are the keys to building a harmonious relationship, for they bridge the generation gap and strengthen the bonds of love. 在家庭中，开放的沟通和相互理解是建立和谐关系的关键，因为它们能够跨越代沟，加强爱的纽带。
True love within a family is not just about affection but also about respecting each other's growth and needs, which can be achieved through sincere communication. 家庭中的真爱不仅仅是情感，还在于尊重彼此的成长和需求，这可以通过真诚的沟通来实现。
When family members take the time to listen to one another and express their feelings, the warmth and harmony of the family will be restored, making it a true haven. 当家庭成员花时间倾听彼此并表达自己的感受时，家庭的温暖与和谐将得以恢复，使其成为真正的避风港。
A harmonious family is built on the foundation of understanding, where every member's voice is heard and respected, leading to a stronger and more loving family unit. 和谐的家庭建立在理解的基础上，每个成员的声音都能被倾听和尊重，从而形成一个更强大、更有爱的家庭单元。
Through communication and understanding, family members can break down the barriers between them, and turn the house into a home filled with love and understanding. 通过沟通和理解，家庭成员可以打破彼此之间的障碍，将房子变成一个充满爱与理解的家。
写作示范一
She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts. Taking a deep breath, Emily said, “Mom, Dad, I'm sorry for being so angry and not listening to you. I know you' re just worried about me, but I feel like I'm old enough to make some decisions on my own.” Her parents looked at her with surprise and then relief. Her mother said, “Honey, we know you' re growing up, and we want to give you more freedom. But we can't help worrying about you.” They talked for a long time, sharing their feelings and concerns.
Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly. She would come home and share the interesting things that happened at school with her parents. Her parents, in turn, would listen attentively and offer advice when needed. When she wanted to go out with friends, she would tell her parents in advance and let them know when she would be back. The curfew was no longer a problem. The once - tense atmosphere at home was replaced by laughter and warmth. Emily finally understood that a good family relationship needed the efforts of every member.
写作示范二
She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts. Emily looked at her parents and said sincerely, “I know I've been acting out lately. I appreciate your love and care, but sometimes I feel like you don't trust me.” Her father nodded and replied, “We do trust you, honey. It's just that we worry about your safety. Maybe we can work out a better curfew together.” They discussed and reached an agreement that satisfied both sides.
Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly. She found that her parents were more willing to listen to her opinions. And she also became more understanding of her parents' concerns. One weekend, she even invited her parents to go shopping with her. The family bond grew stronger than ever before. Emily learned that as long as family members communicate with each other sincerely, any problem can be solved.
参考范文
She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts. With a lump in her throat, Emily said softly, “Mom, Dad, I'm really sorry for my outburst. I know you love me and just want to protect me. But I'm growing up and need more space to make my own choices.” Her parents' eyes softened, and her mother reached out to hold her hand. “We understand, sweetie. We just got carried away. Let's talk about how we can make this work.” They spent the dinner time discussing and compromising, with laughter and hugs replacing the previous tension.
Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly. She would come home from school, excited to share the latest news with her parents. In return, her parents would respect her privacy and decisions. When she asked to stay out a bit later on weekends, they would have a calm discussion instead of an argument. The home was filled with warmth and understanding again. Emily finally understood that family love was like a plant, which needed constant care and communication to thrive.
As a high school freshman, Emily had always been close to her family. However, as the pressure of schoolwork increased and her social life expanded, she found their family relationship on the rocks. She disliked it when her parents kept asking such questions as“Where are you going”, “Who are you going with”. She felt they were always on her back about something. She just couldn't see eye to eye with them on so many things!
The once harmonious home environment was now filled with heated arguments and cold silences. Emily felt her parents didn't understand her, and they felt she was becoming distant and impatient. It seemed that they were becoming strangers under the same roof!
One afternoon, after a particularly heated argument about her curfew(宵禁令), Emily stormed into her room, slamming the door behind her. She threw herself onto her bed, tears streaming down her face. She couldn't understand why her parents were so unreasonable. She was almost15, after all, and her friends were allowed to stay out later. Why couldn't her parents trust her
As she lay there, her anger slowly gave way to calm. At that time, Emily's phone buzzed. It was a message from her mother, asking if she would go downstairs to have dinner. Buzzing again!It was a message from Dad, which read, “Emily, we love you very much, and we only want what's best for you. We know you' re growing up, and we want to respect your independence, but we also need to know you' re safe.”
Emily hesitated but decided it was time to clear the air. When she entered the dining room,she found her parents sitting at the table, looking as upset as she felt.
Dinner had been served on the table, with a bowl of chocolate cake, her favorite, specially placed in front of her. Emily felt a wave of warmth flooding over her.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为 150 左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts.
第二段：Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly.
文章大意
高中新生艾米丽原本和家人关系亲密，但随着学业压力增加和社交生活的拓展，她与父母的关系逐渐紧张。父母对她的诸多询问，如出行去向和同行人员，让她感到厌烦，家庭中充满争吵和冷战。一次关于宵禁令的激烈争吵后，艾米丽生气地回到房间，却收到父母的信息，母亲叫她下楼吃饭，父亲表达了对她的爱和关心，希望她安全。艾米丽看到桌上的晚餐，还有她最爱的巧克力蛋糕，心中涌起一股暖流。
故事山分析
开端：艾米丽作为高中新生，因学业和社交变化，与父母关系出现问题，家庭氛围变得紧张。
发展：艾米丽和父母就宵禁令发生激烈争吵，她愤怒地回到房间。
高潮：父母给艾米丽发信息关心她，她看到桌上的晚餐和喜爱的蛋糕，情绪有所缓和。
结局（待续写）：艾米丽与父母化解矛盾，家庭关系重归和谐。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
艾米丽与父母关系紧张：在续写中，艾米丽会通过与父母的沟通和自身的改变，逐步修复与父母的关系，回应这一伏笔。
父母的关心信息：表明父母虽与艾米丽有矛盾，但仍关心她，续写中艾米丽会理解父母的苦心，双方进一步沟通，解决矛盾。
艾米丽的情绪转变：从愤怒到犹豫，为她与父母和解埋下伏笔，后续她会主动与父母交流，化解矛盾。
餐桌上的巧克力蛋糕：体现父母对艾米丽的爱，在续写中，这会成为艾米丽理解父母的一个契机，推动家庭关系的改善。
艾米丽决定与父母沟通：预示着矛盾将得到解决，续写中会详细描述沟通的过程和结果，使家庭关系恢复和谐。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：艾米丽意识到自己的问题，主动向父母道歉，表达自己的想法和感受，如理解父母的关心，但希望得到更多信任和独立空间，父母也表达对她的期望和担忧，双方坦诚交流。
第二段：描述接下来几周家庭的变化，艾米丽与父母的关系变得融洽，她会主动和父母分享生活，父母也给予她更多信任和自由，家庭氛围重新变得温馨，最后升华主题，强调沟通和理解对家庭关系的重要性。
情感线
艾米丽一开始对父母充满不满和愤怒，觉得父母不理解自己。收到父母信息和看到蛋糕后，她的情绪有所缓和，决定与父母沟通。在沟通时，她诚恳地表达自己的想法，情绪逐渐变得平和。后续几周，她感受到家庭关系的改善，内心充满喜悦和温暖，明白了沟通和理解在家庭中的重要性。
故事线
艾米丽意识到自己的错误，主动向父母道歉。
艾米丽和父母坦诚交流，表达自己对独立的渴望和对父母关心的理解。
父母倾听艾米丽的想法，表达对她的期望和担忧。
接下来几周，艾米丽主动和父母分享生活，父母给予她更多信任。
家庭氛围变得温馨和谐，艾米丽和父母的关系重归亲密。
艾米丽感悟到沟通和理解对家庭关系的重要性。
主旨升华句
In a family, open communication and mutual understanding are the keys to building a harmonious relationship, for they bridge the generation gap and strengthen the bonds of love. 在家庭中，开放的沟通和相互理解是建立和谐关系的关键，因为它们能够跨越代沟，加强爱的纽带。
True love within a family is not just about affection but also about respecting each other's growth and needs, which can be achieved through sincere communication. 家庭中的真爱不仅仅是情感，还在于尊重彼此的成长和需求，这可以通过真诚的沟通来实现。
When family members take the time to listen to one another and express their feelings, the warmth and harmony of the family will be restored, making it a true haven. 当家庭成员花时间倾听彼此并表达自己的感受时，家庭的温暖与和谐将得以恢复，使其成为真正的避风港。
A harmonious family is built on the foundation of understanding, where every member's voice is heard and respected, leading to a stronger and more loving family unit. 和谐的家庭建立在理解的基础上，每个成员的声音都能被倾听和尊重，从而形成一个更强大、更有爱的家庭单元。
Through communication and understanding, family members can break down the barriers between them, and turn the house into a home filled with love and understanding. 通过沟通和理解，家庭成员可以打破彼此之间的障碍，将房子变成一个充满爱与理解的家。
写作示范一
She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts. Taking a deep breath, Emily said, “Mom, Dad, I'm sorry for being so angry and not listening to you. I know you' re just worried about me, but I feel like I'm old enough to make some decisions on my own.” Her parents looked at her with surprise and then relief. Her mother said, “Honey, we know you' re growing up, and we want to give you more freedom. But we can't help worrying about you.” They talked for a long time, sharing their feelings and concerns.
Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly. She would come home and share the interesting things that happened at school with her parents. Her parents, in turn, would listen attentively and offer advice when needed. When she wanted to go out with friends, she would tell her parents in advance and let them know when she would be back. The curfew was no longer a problem. The once - tense atmosphere at home was replaced by laughter and warmth. Emily finally understood that a good family relationship needed the efforts of every member.
写作示范二
She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts. Emily looked at her parents and said sincerely, “I know I've been acting out lately. I appreciate your love and care, but sometimes I feel like you don't trust me.” Her father nodded and replied, “We do trust you, honey. It's just that we worry about your safety. Maybe we can work out a better curfew together.” They discussed and reached an agreement that satisfied both sides.
Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly. She found that her parents were more willing to listen to her opinions. And she also became more understanding of her parents' concerns. One weekend, she even invited her parents to go shopping with her. The family bond grew stronger than ever before. Emily learned that as long as family members communicate with each other sincerely, any problem can be solved.
参考范文
She realized that her parents were trying, and she should also make some efforts. With a lump in her throat, Emily said softly, “Mom, Dad, I'm really sorry for my outburst. I know you love me and just want to protect me. But I'm growing up and need more space to make my own choices.” Her parents' eyes softened, and her mother reached out to hold her hand. “We understand, sweetie. We just got carried away. Let's talk about how we can make this work.” They spent the dinner time discussing and compromising, with laughter and hugs replacing the previous tension.
Over the next few weeks, Emily noticed things changed amazingly. She would come home from school, excited to share the latest news with her parents. In return, her parents would respect her privacy and decisions. When she asked to stay out a bit later on weekends, they would have a calm discussion instead of an argument. The home was filled with warmth and understanding again. Emily finally understood that family love was like a plant, which needed constant care and communication to thrive.
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