读后续写--当胜利不再是唯一，他领悟成功真谛 讲义-2025届广东省云浮市云城区高三上学期调研模拟测试（一）英语试题

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Once upon a time, there was a young athletic boy who is really hungry for success. For him, winning was everything and success was measured just by winning. He practised hard every day to win every race lying ahead of him.
One day, the boy was preparing himself for a running competition in his small village. A large crowd had gathered to witness the sporting event. A wise old man had travelled far to bear witness also. The race began. The boy with his determination, strength and power took the winning line and came to the first. The crowd were excited, cheering and waving at the boy. However, the wise man remained still and calm, expressing no excitement. The little boy, however, felt proud and important.
A second race was called and two new young fit challengers came forward to run with him. The race was started and sure enough the little boy came through and finished first. Once again the crowd was excited again, and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man remained still and calm again, expressing no excitement. The little boy, however, felt proud and important.
Another race, the wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers, an elderly weak lady and a blind man. “What is this ” the little boy was puzzled. “This is no race!” he claimed. “Race,” said the wise man.
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The race was started and the boy was the only finisher.
“Race again,” replied the wise man, “this time finish together with all three of you.”
文章大意
从前有个极度渴望成功的年轻运动员男孩，他认为胜利就是一切，以赢来衡量成功，每天刻苦训练只为赢得每场比赛。一天，他在小村庄准备跑步比赛，众多人围观，还有一位远道而来的智者。第一场比赛他夺冠，人群激动欢呼，智者却平静无波；第二场比赛他再次夺冠，智者依旧如此，男孩很是骄傲。接着第三场比赛，智者为他安排了一位年老体弱的女士和一位盲人作为对手，男孩十分困惑，认为这不算比赛，但智者仍要求他比赛。
故事山分析
开端：男孩极度渴望成功，以胜利衡量一切，为比赛刻苦训练。
发展：男孩在村庄比赛，连续两场夺冠，人群激动，智者平静，男孩愈发骄傲。
高潮：智者安排特殊对手（老弱女士和盲人）让男孩比赛，男孩不解。
结局（待续写）：男孩在后续比赛中理解成功的真正含义，实现思想转变。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
男孩对成功的片面理解：在续写中，男孩会通过与特殊对手的比赛，逐渐认识到成功并非只是赢得比赛，回应其对成功认知的转变。
智者的平静与无动于衷：暗示智者有更深的见解，在续写中，智者会引导男孩领悟成功的真谛，解释他平静的原因。
人群的激动欢呼：与智者的平静形成对比，在后续故事中，这种对比会促使男孩思考成功的真正意义，不再单纯因人群欢呼而骄傲。
男孩的骄傲：随着比赛发展，他的骄傲会成为他认识自我和成功的阻碍，续写中他会在挫折或反思中克服骄傲，走向成熟。
特殊的比赛对手：这是关键伏笔，在续写中，与他们的比赛会让男孩体验到不同的 “胜利”，明白成功包含帮助他人、关爱他人等更丰富的内涵 。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述男孩和老弱女士、盲人比赛的过程，男孩一开始可能觉得轻松，但看到对手艰难的状态，内心开始产生变化，如犹豫、不忍等，最终他独自完成比赛，却没有了以往的喜悦。
第二段：智者要求再次比赛并一起完成，男孩起初可能不理解，但在比赛中，他开始主动帮助对手，三人共同完成比赛，此时男孩感受到了与以往不同的成就感，智者向他解释成功的真正含义，男孩恍然大悟。
情感线
男孩一开始充满自信与骄傲，享受胜利带来的喜悦和人群的欢呼。当面对特殊对手时，他从困惑不解到比赛时内心产生动摇，独自完成比赛后骄傲感减退，变得疑惑。再次比赛时，他从抗拒到尝试帮助对手，最后共同完成比赛时，他体会到了帮助他人带来的满足，内心充满感动与领悟，对成功有了全新认知。
故事线
男孩与老弱女士、盲人开始比赛，轻松领先。
看到对手艰难，男孩内心犹豫，最终独自冲过终点。
智者要求再次比赛并一起完成，男孩不解。
比赛中男孩开始帮助对手，拉着盲人，扶着老妇人。
三人共同冲过终点，男孩感受到别样的成就感。
智者向男孩解释成功的真正含义，男孩领悟。
主旨升华句
True success is not merely about personal achievements but also about the ability to help and bring out the best in others. 真正的成功不仅仅在于个人成就，还在于有能力帮助他人并激发他人的潜能。
Success, in its truest sense, lies not in leaving others behind but in walking hand in hand with them towards a common goal. 真正意义上的成功，不在于把他人甩在身后，而在于与他们携手朝着共同目标前进。
Victory is not measured by the number of times we cross the finish line alone, but by the moments when we make sure everyone crosses it with us. 胜利不是用我们独自冲过终点线的次数来衡量，而是用我们确保每个人都和我们一起冲过终点的时刻来衡量。
The greatest achievement in life is not the medals we win, but the lives we touch and the positive influence we have on others. 人生最大的成就不是我们赢得的奖牌，而是我们触动的生命以及我们对他人产生的积极影响。
Success is a journey of self - discovery and compassion, where we learn to value the progress of all rather than just our own. 成功是一段自我发现和充满同情心的旅程，在这个旅程中，我们学会重视所有人的进步，而不仅仅是自己的。
写作示范一
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. He dashed forward effortlessly, leaving the elderly lady and the blind man far behind. As he crossed the finish line, he didn't feel the usual pride and excitement. Instead, he looked back at his struggling opponents, a strange feeling welling up inside him. The crowd fell silent, and the wise man just stared at him with a knowing smile.
“Race again,” replied the wise man, “this time finish together with all three of you.” At first, the boy was hesitant, but something in the wise man's voice made him decide to give it a try. As the race began, he slowed down, first offering his arm to the blind man, then reaching out to the elderly lady. Step by step, they moved forward together. When they finally crossed the finish line as a group, the crowd erupted into thunderous applause. The boy felt a warmth in his heart, a sense of achievement like never before. The wise man walked up to him and said, “True success is not just about winning, but about helping others reach the finish line with you.” The boy nodded, finally understanding the true meaning of success.
写作示范二
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. He sped through the track as fast as he could, the wind whistling in his ears. But when he turned around and saw the old lady struggling to take a step and the blind man groping in the air, his heart sank. The cheers of the crowd seemed hollow this time. He stood there, looking at his lonely victory, a sense of emptiness filling his heart.
“Race again,” replied the wise man, “this time finish together with all three of you.” This time, the boy took a deep breath and walked towards his opponents. He gently guided the blind man and supported the elderly lady. As they moved forward, the boy realized that the journey was more important than the destination. When they crossed the finish line together, a huge smile spread across his face. The wise man came over and said, “Success is not measured by how far ahead you are, but by how much you bring others along.” The boy finally understood that true success was about compassion and unity, not just empty victories.
参考答案
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. The other two challengers left standing at the starting line. The little boy was ecstatic, so he raised his arms in delight. The crowd, however, was silent showing no sentiment toward the little boy. "What has happened Why don't the people join in my success " he asked the wise old man.
"Race again," replied the wise man, "this time finish together with all three of you." The little boy thought a little, stood in the middle of the blind and the weak, and then took the two challengers. The little boy walked slowly to the finishing line and crossed it. The crowd were crazy and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man smiled,nodding his head. The little boy felt proud and important. Lost in deep thought for a while, the boy thanked the wise old man for making him realize the real meaning of success. From then on, he could be regarded as a truly successful athletic.